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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update
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Chapter 16: Intezaar


Kr: Hum dono couple hai?????

Rey was shocked at that question he was practically

speechless

The only question in his mind was what the hell were they

until now……….

Rey: Kriya trust me bahot bura joke tha

Kr: Par Rey mai mazak nahi kar rahi

Rey was mad and trying to analyze what all the moment

between them meant did they really have no meaning at

What the hell……………………………………..

Rey: Kriya yeh tum kya kehe rahi

Tumhara matlab ab tak humare beech job hi hua who jhoot

tha

Tum mujh se pyaar nahi karti


Kr: Aisa maine kab kaha


Rey was now completely confused as to what this girl was

up. Her sentences made no sense at all.


Rey: Kriya clearly batao mujhe seriously kuch samajme

nahi aaraha

Kr: What I mean ki aapne toh mujhe officially propose bhi

nahi kiya toh hum couple kaise ban sakte hai


Rey for a moment was speechless and the next moment he

burst into laughfter at her silly reasoning

Rey: Kriya you are joking right

Kr: Aap hass kyu rahe ho rey, aap ko yeh joke lagta hoga

par mere liye important hai


Kriya said that with a really serious face and Rey gulped

hard because till today he just assumed that they were a

couple and she was his girlfriend. Leaving aside that they

behaved like they were he never really considered actually

proposing her.

He started thinking to himself as too how big a fool he

was. The first relationship for any girl was special infact

even Sharon dreamt as to how her first boyfriend would

ask her out. Here he was trying to make everything

romantic and perfect in their lives but he forgot the most

important thing CONFESSION.


Kriya kept staring at Rey with kiddish wide watery green

eyes and Rey kept trying to avoid looking in those

questioning eyes.

Suddenly Kriya burst out laughing at Rey's expression fact

is she had been giggling to herself but now she just

couldn't control herself anymore.


Now it was Rey's turn to question her


Kr:(still trying to control her laughter) Rey aap kitne cute

lag rahe aapko pata


Rey: Cute ……………mai tumhe cute lagraha hu(sarcastically)


Kr: Aur nahi toh kya aapko apna cehera dekhna chahiye

tha awww

Saying so she pulls his cheek

Rey: yaha mujhe tension ho raha tha aur tumhe mazak

sujh raha hai

Mujhe irritate karna bahot aacha lag raha hai


Kr: Rey mai apko ek baat bolu


Rey: kya(irritated)


Kr: Aaap aise bacho ki tarah hi acche lagte ho

Mature hona aapko suit nahi karta

Rey give her a sarcastic smile


Rey: Tumhe pata hai mujhe actually kitna bura lag raha tha

Seriously aarrrhh

Leave mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni


He left the room and Kriya couldn't stop giggling even

during the class while steeling glances at Rey who sat there looking straight at the board pretending to concentrate in the class with a stern face.And there Swayam pleading forgiveness for probably all sins he had committed in his life and Sharon being Sharon didn't care to turn back.

Kriya thought to herself: Sab kuch, kuch pehele ki tarah

lag raha hai

Sharon ka attitude bhi bohot samay baad dekhne ko mil

raha hai

Bechara mera bestii, jisse Sharon ke sivay aur koi dekhti

hi nahi

Mere mahan friends jinko shayad yeh pata hi nahi konse

subject ki class chal rahi hai

Rey ka choti choti stupid baato par gussa hona

Pehele bhi jhagade hote the par mujhe irritating lagte the

par aaj bolana toh nahi chhiye ki Rey ko gussa dilake

mujhe actual meh maza aaraha hai

I'm actually enjoying this fight

After class Kriya approaches Rey, since she decides to

end the matter


Kr: Rey its ok aapko guilty feel karne ki koi zarurat nahi

hai

Rey: Mai aur guilty

Kyu mai guilty feel kyu karu


Kr: Galati aapki thi

Samaj sakti hu guilty ho bura lag raha hoga


Rey: oh hello bura tumhe lagna chahiye

Meri waise bhi koi galti nahi hai


Kr: Rey aapko yaad nahi hai galti aapki hai


Rey: Ya right mai kya kar sakta hu

Tumne propose karne ka mauka kaha diya tha


Kr: Ab mai aapko instruct karuggi ki aap mujhe kaise propose karengge


Rey: Excuse me mai tumhe nahi tum mujhe chodh kar gayi

thi ok

So you are guilty not me


Kr: Accha ab sari galti meri aap bilkul nahi badle na

Bade mature hone ki bate kar rahe the


Kr: Hu mai mature par aisi tum jaisi immature ladhaki se

pala padhega toh mai kya kar sakta hu


Kr: Agar aap mature ho toh

Chila kyu rahe ho


Rey: Mai chila raha hu

Look who is talking


Kr: Nahi nahi chila toh mai rahi hu na


Rey: Jab pata hai toh puch kyu rahi ho


Kr: Ha duniya jitni galtiya hai who maine hi ki hogi


Rey: kya kiya ja sakta

Galti, galti nahi karegi toh aur kya karegi


Kr: Tumne mujhe Galti bulaya

mera matlab aap

Mai aap ko galti lagti


Rey: Yeh tumhare universeji ki sabse badhi galti


Kr: Ab kaha gayi aapki so called maturity


Rey: Ghaass charne

Kyuki tumhare sath its impossible


Both of them left the class room leaving everyone

speechless this was the first time they had a public fight

more like its normal for them just that for others it was

not.

Swayam and Sharon exchanged glances realizing how much

attention they draw when they fight and also were

surprised. Well to see kriya fight it was fine but Rey, it

was hard to imagine, especially a fight like this since it

was honestly nothing but a childish couple fight.

It was like the new hot topic of the college.

The d3ians walked in the corridor towards the canteen.


Nil:dude aaj peheli baar rey aur kriya ko jhagada karte

hue dekha you know as in couple fight


Sw: Mujhe jhagade thoughtline samaj meh nahi aaya


Am:malab


Sw: pehele guilt se shuru hua

Phir proposal

Phir kriya ke jane ki baat aayi

Phir maturity

In sare topic meh koi relation hi nahi dikh raha


Neha:Saying right you are fight meaningless it was


Vic: par ek baat toh hai guys

Unlike swayam aur Sharon ke fights jo bahot serious ho jate hai

Kriya aur Rey ka fight mai enjoy kar raha tha


Neha; what saying you are


Vish: ya dude

What are you saying man

Yaha par humare dost ladhayi kar rahe hai

And tum enjoy kar rahe ho


Vic: nahi waise mera matlab kuch aur tha


Rimmi: jo b hi tha hum logo ko samajme nahi aaya right guy


Sw: Mai explain karta hu

He means to say it was a light hearted fight you know like

kids fight something like that kuch serious nahi tha

Well atleast that's what I know


Sh: par jaha tak mai undono ko janti hu

Dono gussa hai

Dono mafi magne se rehe

Aur dono ki zid well lets not even try to compare that


Sw: you are right baat abhi serious nahi hai par in dono ke

attitude ki wajah se serious ban sakti hai


Sh: Tumhara opinion nahi pucha maine

Waise bhi hum logo ko yeh mathematical analysis karke kuch

milega nahi so let's stop

In the canteen Rey and Kriya were sitting on different

tables. Sharon walked toward rey and joined him and the

rest went and joined Kriya.


Nil: (whispering in vicky's ears): Dude I guess Swayam aur

Sharon ke beech bhi koi ladhai chal rahi hai

Vic: ha mujhe lag raha aisa

Kriya on the other hand trying to gain swayam's attention

who was looking at Sharon. Finally she elbowed him and

then they started whisper talking as well.


Kr: Swayam Sharon se baat hui

Sw: Nahi

Kr: Its ok don't worry sab thik ho jayega

Sw: I hope

Sw: oh btw kriya Rey se ussi baat ko leke jhagada hua

jiske bare meh tum meri advise maagrahi thi

Kriya hit her head

Sw: kya hua

Kr: uske bare meh mai toh rey se baat karna bhul gayi

Sw: toh jake kar lo

Kr: Kyu mai kyu karu woh mujh se aake baat nahi kar sakte

Sw: Par kriya woh kya baat karega

Puchna toh tumhe tha na ussko

Kr: Ha point toh hai

Thik hai jab tak woh mujhse aake baat nahi kar lete mai

kuch nahi puchunggi


Sw: thik hai tumhari jo marzi

Tumhe samjhana sach much impossible hai

Kr: tumhe bhi mai impossible aur irritating lagti hu

Sw: nahi mera matlab woh nahi tha

Acha chalo Sharon aur meri already ladai chal rahi hai ab

mai apni best friend ke sath nahi ladhna chahata

Kr: ok

Pata nahi mera order abhi tak kyu nahi aaya

Sw: mai dekhke aata hu

Kr: anhi mai jati hu na tum yaha baithke soocho kit um

Sharon ko kaise manaoge


Kriya winks at Swayam and goes to the couter to check

her order which happens to be right next to where Rey

and Sharon were sitting and she overhears their

conversation.

Sh: so aunty ne kya kaha

Rey: She was reluctant par she said yes

Sh: Did you tell her the reason

Rey: No, I told her to trust me and I'm glad she did

Honestly, speaking I really didn't know how to tell her the

reason

Sh: Well, whatever our work is done and her not knowing

the reason is for the best

Rey: I guess, things are getting really complicated

This all I hope it gets settled quietly I don't want angel to

know anything

Sh: It will rey, trust me

Rey sees Kriya looking at them and turning away. When he

sees her doing so he call her and she reluctantly goes to

him.

Kr: What

Rey: Bend I have something for you

Kr: a apology gift obviously you should

Rey: whatever you want to call it

Say aaa

Kr: why should I say AA

When kriya opened her mouth to say AA Rey stuffed in

her mouth a spoon of tasty chocholate pastry

Kriya loved the taste and licked her lips.

Kr: wow, so tasty it is not from the canteen I know where

is it from

Rey: You like it

Kr: yes ofcourse it is amazing

Rey gave her the pastry before him and the the whole box

Rey: well you can have them provided you share

Saying so he left followed by Sharon

Kr:Just because I loved the pastries doesn't mean you are

forgiven


To this comment Rey waves his and leaves and a also

leaves his love a with a wide smile and twinkling eyes

which couldn't wait to open the box and have another of

those amazing pastries.


Kriya then took the pastries and went to her friends.


When they entered the class for the next session they

realized Rey was not there however Sharon was. Kriya

went up to Sharon.


Kr: Sharon aap ko pata hai Rey kaha hai

Sh: Court

Kr: court kis liye

Sh: pooch toh aise rahiho jaise kuch nahi pata


The lecturer came in and everyone had to settle down

Kriya thought to herself why had Sharon said something

like that and what would Rey be doing at the court


Kr( still thinking to herself): Kahi yeh sab Alisha ki custody

ke liye toh nahi………………..

Par Sharon ko kaise pata ki mujhe iske bare meh pata hai

Just then she receives a message and it happens to be

Sharon who wants to meet her alone in the fire exit.


After class


Location: Fire exit

Kriya meets Sharon at the fire exit. Her head is filled

with hell lots of questions but could she ask Sharon.

Sharon looks at her confused sister


Sh: Kriya mai janti ho kit um soch rahi ho ki maine tumhe

kyu bulaya hai

Isse pehele ki mai kuch bolu

Par mai janna chahati hu kit um kitna janti ho


Kr: mai kitna janti hu kiske bare meh

Sh: Kriya plz stop acting

Uss din jab mai Rey se yatch par baat karne gayi thi tab

tum thi waha par

Kriya turns pale, she had been caught. She tries to

defend herself

Kr: Sharon sach meh mai jan pooch kar aapki baate nahi

sun rahi thi, kya rey ko bata hai, kya who mujh se gussa

hai isliye wapas nahi aaye, does he hate me ( completely

hyper)


Sharon trying to calm her down


Sh: Nahi kriya calm down aisaa kuch nahi hai aur maine

Rey ko kuch nahi bataya

Plz tell me how much you know kriya

Mai nahi chahati ki tum apni half knowledge par koi ajeeb

assumption karo

Jo kit um karne meh mahir ho( to herself)


Kr: kya

Aap ne last meh kuch kaha mujhe sunai nahi diya


Sh: that is immaterial pehele mere sawal ka jawab do


Kr: Well ok

Mai janti hu ki Ankita aunty Rey aur Alisha ki asli mom

nahi hai..

Aur ki Rey, Alisha ki custody chahata hai

Par kyu pata nahi


Sh: ok aur yeh baat tum ne kisiko batayi

Kr: nahi bilkul nahi

Sh: Swayam ko bhi nahi right..

Kr: nahi


Sh: k ab meri baat dhyaan se suno

Kriya yeh baat aur kisiko pata nahi chalni chahiye

Alisha ko bhi nahi k


Kr: ek you mean Alisha ko kuch bhi nahi pata


Sh: nahi

Aur hum chahate bhi nahi hai ki pata chale k


Kr:par yeh toh galat hai

Usse pata hona chahiye

Uski life …….(cut off by Sharon)


Sh: Plz kriya don't use your own logic

Tum kuch nahi janti

There is a reason for all this

Tumhe kya lagta hai

We are mad or something for taking so much of trouble

for keeping this whole thing a secret

Plz co-operate with us Kriya

Don't make things more difficult than there are plz


Kr: Thik hai par ek condition par

Sh: what?(surprised because Sharon knew Kriya was not so

heartless, she expected that kriya would understand her)


Kr: Plz tell me everything, I want to know, mai janna

chahati hu ki kya hua tha

Jisne aap sab ki life ko itna badal diya


Sh:Sorry kriya,( sharon was relieved) I can't not because I don't want to tell you

Because this is not my story to tell


Kr: So mujhe kisse puchna padhega


Sh: Rey se, this one is Rey's story aur I'm sure who

tumhe kabhi nakabhi zaroor batayega

Kr: aap itna sure kaise ho sakti hai


Sh: Because you are important to him

Trust me

Rey ki life meh tumhari jagah is irreplaceable

So I m sure he will someday share his past with you k

So I guess ab tum sirf

INTAZAAR hi kar sakti ho

Sharon begin to leave and Kriya voice stops her

Kr: Sharon, your part of the story

Sh: you want to hear

Kr: yes I do but I gez someone deserves it more than

me

Sh: Yes he does, but not now

Kr: Then when

Sh: at the right time

Kr: you will tell swayam won't you?

Sh: yes I will for sure someday tell him

Saying so she left.


Kriya stayed there she felt a something very weird today,

don't know what maybe fear and sadness

Fear as to what was the thing that kept her from knowing

the people she loved and would she lose them because of

this thing

Sadness because she knew one thing for sure whatever

happened had brought everyone misery

Everything felt so supernatural, then she decided to do as

Sharon said because considering the situation keeping quite

seemed the best advice to follow.



As she walked to the rehearsal where everyone were

supposed to meet for their daily routine practice she saw

everyone standing in a circle around someone.

She walked in closer just to see her beat friend sitting

there speechless, pale and in tears

Kriya immediately made her way to him and tried to make

him speak after the others had given up trying so hard.

Finally he reacted to Kriya's plea


Sw: Dad

Kr: Dad, Shekhawat uncle right what happened to him Swayam?

(wiping his tears)

Sw: He …….

Kr: He what swayam, batao

Sw: Acccide..

Ser……………..( unable to utter words)

Kr: accident …..

serious ………….

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Will Mr. Shekhawat be alright?

What will happen to Swayam?

Will Kriya ever find out Rey's past?

Will Sharon ever tell swayam her part of the story?

janne ke liye stay tuned in kkk

Okie guys finally finished

Hope you like 😊

Do like and comment

Sorry for the slow updates

But i promise that at least i will give you weekly updates k

Love you all😳😳😳

And about the ff, os, ss

extremely sorry for not being able to comment

I will try my best to do it soon plz don't get angry plzzz😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yuppiee. . . . . . . .
Me first,
me first,
me first. . . . . .
I knw,
u dnt knw me,
bt let me introduce u,me. . . .
Hi,
M madhu,
i love reading ff/ss/os and
i just love this ff of urs. . . . . . . . . . . . .
And i love kriyaansh a lott. . . . . . . . . .
Ok cuming to the update,
i just ur update. . . . . .
It was superb. . . . .
Yuppieee our old kriyaansh are back. . .
I just loved their cute fight. . . .
And,wat is rey's past??
I realy dnt have any idea about it. . . . ..
And,swayum's dad accident. . . .
Ohh godd. . . .
Bt how and wen did tat happen??.
Hope evrythng goes well wit him. . . . . .
Thanks 4 such an awsome update. . . .
Nxt part update realy very soon. . . . .
And,
pls pls pls pls pls pm me wen u update the nxt part. . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...wow kriyaansh cute fight luv it...thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omggg shona🤗🤗
such an awesomeee update...

Totally loved it...

Their fight was so amazing...ekdum mast thi...

Even the classroom and canteen scenes were fabulous

oho kria pakdi gayi...

And what's with Mr. Shekhawat uncle?

No plz ek aur nayi story...mummma..pehle purane toh complete karo..kitna suspense badhaogi...ahh m dying to read...

I mean rey kria alisha ki custody wala suspense n now this...
Shona kitna tadpaogi yaar


Thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...kriyansh fight was soo cute..swayam ke dad ka accident :o... Update the next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved kriyansh cute si fight..:p.
Sharon kria convo was really nice.Sharon n rey both have something big problem n side of story which they don't want to share with anyone.Its really confusing.Swayam's dad accident.A new turn in story.
Waiting for next part n Waiting for some "mysteries" to be revealed too
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!!! 😃
Loved itt 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...loved it very much

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