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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

arey chalta hai di...


i can understand...

first comment karne mein bas maza aata hai... 😃

May be tera hi ho first comment...never know na!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
arey chalta hai di...

main toh zara sa melodramatic effect daal rhi thi 😎

anyways i can understand...

first comment karne mein bas maza aata hai... 😃

P.S: i won't deny ki jabse aapne mereko scraps pe thide insights diye hai tab se aur curiosity badh gayi... ganda dimag u see... 😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

May be tera hi ho first comment...never know na!!😉


koi nhi di...

jab sochke rakho nah... tab pakka grahan lagte hain first comment pe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
lolz...insight!!!😆😆
Ab toh I have to keep that in mind while writing..😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

lolz...insight!!!😆😆

Ab toh I have to keep that in mind while writing..😉


ooohhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

do keep that in mind...

aajkal mereko sexy KR padhne aur likhne ki badi khujli chalti hai... 😆
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: kriyansh24


ooohhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

do keep that in mind...

aajkal mereko sexy KR padhne aur likhne ki badi khujli chalti hai... 😆

☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
bas issi expression ke saath ek mast sa scene likh do...

aapko meri, shaffs and yogi di extra duayein milengi apart from which u will get to send the pms... 😉 😆

main aur yogi di toh intezaar mein baithe rehte hai ki ek accha sa pm aaye and hum padhne jaaye... 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Thanks a lot friends for your reviews, likes and wishes for new thread. I am lucky one to get readers like you all. Keep showering your love. That's my only motivation. Love ya all always🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-33


Days were passing, Rey was healing. Mr. Singhania and Rey was living in same mansion but unspoken. That day too, Mr. Singhania just passed by his room and saw the window open. Rey was sleeping and cold wind was entering his room. Mr. Singhania closed the window! Rey was sleeping by folding his legs near his chest. He was cold. Mr. Singhania covered him under blanket and stroked his forehead. He was looking the same to Mr. Singhania as he used to look in childhood. No pain or lines of annoy on his face, it soothed Mr. Singhania. Rey moved a little to turn over. Mr. Singhania rapidly left the room. The fear in him to face Rey was still the same.

Morning started with fragrance of roses for Rey. Early riser like Rey seemed to wake up bit too early. Sound of water and fragrance of roses made him wake up. He opened big window in his room and saw his father watering the garden. There were a lot of roses of different colors. He took his sweater and walked towards Garden. He stopped a little away from garden and smile was floating on his lips. In this season, there used to be roses all over in garden when he was small. His mother's favorite flowers grew in garden. The beautiful rosy garden was reminding him of his childhood. His father looked at him. Rey's smile disappeared and he turned back to leave. Mr. Singhania called him to join him in gardening. He didn't want to but couldn't refuse. Next few minutes, both gardened the roses with equal care. A rose plant was bending and Mr. Singhania was putting soil on his root. It wasn't getting right. Rey with his indifferent voice told him "Mom wouldn't make that plant right in this way! Mr. Singhania asked with softness in his voice "then how would she?" Rey took the plant from him and make it alright. He was leaving the garden next moment. Mr. Singhania stopped him and said "Things are same son! You just need to give them same care!" Rey didn't face him and said "I always did dad! But you didn't! He left with those words.

Kria's morning was filled with love from her mother. Her breakfast was serving with her favorite dishes and Mom's love. Sanjana never behaved indifferent to Kria after knowing about Rey. It was Kria's exam today. Sanjana asked her about her preparation. Kria just behaved so casual about exams. It wasn't some expectation from Sanjana but a trait of Kria, who always takes her exams seriously. Kria answered "Mom! Who cares about topping the exam? I am just prepared to get satisfactory marks. It wasn't first time in last few days when Sanjana noticed change in her dedication towards things she loved. Kria left for college.

Sanjana with web of thought went to clean Kria's room! Her dancing shoes were finding dust. Her anklets for which she fought a lot, were residing in drawer like orphan. Sanjana wasn't tried to draw meaning intentionally but her mind was compelling her to blame Rey for all this.

Rey was going to workshop today after his accident. His leg is almost alright and he was permitted to walk a little. Vicky was driving the car and Rey was busy on his cell. Message alert tone was ringing constantly. Vicky as according his nature asked Rey about message scene. Rey told him to drive car and stop poking nose.

Her text arrived "Thank you Rey". Rey smiled and typed another message "Do well and repeat what you do best". Waiting for you in workshop" and a heart in end in his text.

Rey was happy being after coming to workshop after such long. Everything was perfect. Not an inched move or removed. His cabin awaited him with mug of coffee as Reyansh Singhania have every morning. Ali welcomed him and other crew just wished him with same respect which grew from his punctual and professional approach towards this work. Rey settled in his cabin and laughed alone for a while. People still fear me! He was surprised. From the glass window, he could see the fancy cars of him standing gracefully. The old feel that how Rey used to fear people and Kria's preachy speeches to him, he was feeling amazing today.

Ali took him to engineering shop where he was customizing a new car for him. Rey was all ears. Rey inquired about his Ford mustang status. Ali immediately answered "sorry Rey!! I didn't get time to repair her. I will but!! He was justifying too much. It made Rey laugh! He controlled his laughter and continued his stern look. Ali went back to work and Rey was enjoying his old being. He figured that how much he has changed.

Rey went to Ali and told him not to repair mustang. Ali with apologizing face answered, "I will repair it Rey!! Rey intervened him and said "nope! Tell Kria to repair it! Ali's face filled with smile and teasing expression. Rey gave him "what?" look and turn back!

Rey surely had something in his mind.

Time moved to a little chilly evening. Rey got her text "on my way". He smiled and then a naughty smirk covered his face. Rey drove the mustang from garage to Hydraulic car lift.

Ali was busy working on new car in engineering shop. Crew already left for home. Vicky was busy on phone with Neha. He never actually cared about what is happening in workshop!

Rey went back to his cabin and sat quietly in her wait. In few moments, she was there. Heartbeats could tell Rey that she has arrived. He wonders sometimes that how his intuition becomes so strong about Kria. In the pool of anxiety, heart always succeeds in finding out peak which brings her name with it.

Rey could see her from glass window. She was as glorious and radiant as always. A positive wave which she always carries with her, can reach Rey. Vicky was torturing Kria with his stupid talks. Kria face was enough to convey Rey what she is feeling. Rey today wanted to dismiss everyone for home but he hadn't. Vicky after few minutes of talk with Kria walked out. Kria walked towards Rey's cabin with those love-filled eyes. How can someone hold thousands of expressions in her eyes at the same moment? Rey could only wonder.

She just stopped and looked towards engineering shop. Rey got it that Ali called her. She directly walked towards shop. Rey couldn't get more gaga over her. She is in herself a moving poetry. On every move of her, Poetry itself covers the mind.

World starts looking poetic and in romantic frame to Rey. First time in his life, he knew what he wants. He just wants to live with her every second of his life.

Ali told Kria to repair mustang. Kria with her confused face told Ali, she will but let her meet Rey! Ali stopped her by saying "he is in his old annoying avatar today!! He told me to convey you this. Kria wondered on this notion of Ali. She repelled "He must be joking Ali". Ali answered "I don't think so! He looked stern.

Kria sighed and said "tell me!! Where is it?? Let me handle it first and then Rey!!

Ali said "It's on Hydraulic. She went straight to repair it. Rey was smiling in mischief. Since morning, he was enjoying being his old self. He knew that how Kria used to repel old Rey. He was missing his talkative Kria who has a super-fighter in her and her arguments with Rey on everything, Rey was missing her cute and Jhalli Kria.

Kria threw her bag on Bugatti who was resting there too. She kicked on mustang tire in anger and hurt herself. Let me finish you first mustang!! Then I will take a class of your boss. Rey was standing behind pole and ended up laughing. She pushed the hydraulics' button to lift the car.

And that moment she realized that she forgot to ask Ali that what to repair in mustang. She went searching for him but didn't find him. Rey was there watching her lost and irritated. Teasing her was a cute experience for Rey. Kria walked towards Rey office. Rey was nowhere near his cabin. He just got out of shed of pole and asked "Kria"!! Kria turned around to see him and saw her monster standing with his hands in pockets with stern face. He was pretending hard to not get caught. What are you doing there behind pole? She inquired. Rey answered "nothing! I was just wandering. You were wandering behind poles!! She taunted! Rey with his smirk said "Kria! I was just coming to check my mustang. Kria made an angry face "your mustang??!! She self talked "yeah!! Mustang is more beautiful than me! Kria Ghai! You just got the wrong guy to expect romance. His cars are more romantic than this monster. She just walked toward mustang blabbering all this. Rey was trying hard to control his laughter. He followed "burning" Kria to workshop.

She took the tool and was trying to pretend as she is busy. Rey asked "what are you repairing by the way??" She came out of her mad land and covered by saying "I am checking for defects!! Rey told her "you can ask me that what is defect!! She banged the tool on earth and said "no thanks!!

Rey was enjoying teasing her to extent. She was checking all the parts one by one. Both had an eye on each other to capture the reactions.

Kria after thorough check up of mustang, sat with sad and disappointed face. She didn't find a single fault in car. Rey cleared his throat and gave him a hint that she can ask. Kria with her sad face asked "okay!! Tell me what to repair! Rey smirked and answered "check the fuel tank".

She smiled. They had a funny memory with fuel tank. She walked towards Rey and tried to read mischief in eyes. He looked at her with same sternness and indifference. She asked in her husky voice "you sure!!" Rey's senses were making him fall for her husky voice and surrender his mischief. He tried hard to sustain himself and answered in dim voice "yeah!

Kria came more near to him and asked "and what is the fault?" Rey was facing her warm breath in cold weather. He was melting to core but trying hard to act disciplined. Rey couldn't answer for some moments and then answered in low voice "Find yourself". Kria sighed in disappointment and nodded her head. She backed off and went to car. She was trying to open fuel tank and giving angry looks to Rey at the same time. And in few moments, fuel tank was opened and fuel was on her face and there Rey took off mask of mischief and laughed hard. Kria was stunned and rooted to her place. Rey was laughing nonstop. She didn't know what to react on his prank.

She came to him banging her steps towards earth and hit him chest "you did it deliberately!" Her crying face with black fuel on it, was "awe" for Rey. He controlled his horses of laughter and answered "you look cute like this" and again giggled. Kria walked away towards bugatti by knocking his shoulder. She was stroking out oil from her cloths and face. And Rey came with a cotton cloth still laughing. He applied the cloth on her face to wipe the oil but she repelled. Rey said "Arrey!! That much anger! She didn't say a word but kept on pouting. Rey said "Okay baba! Sorry! She pushed him and tried to leave but he held her wrist. Rey pulled her back towards him. His arm was tightly wrapped around her belly and lips were just next to her ears. I am sorry Kria! But if I haven't done that then how come I can see my cute Kria back in her old avatar. Your taunts, your pouts, your cute arguments, your killer eyes and your innocence, today I got them back after so long. I missed my Kria. My Kria who became so mature, responsible and understanding after my accident, I ought to bring the real one back. She was listening to him all ears. Her ear was about to melt with heat of his breath. Her belly was trembling with warmth of his skin. She couldn't say a word.

After few moments of comforting herself with his touch, she uttered "making a girl quiet with Man's charm is not done Rey!! Rey smiled with a blush. Kria caught him with that smile and asked "Reyansh Sighania! The stern is blushing! Hmm!!

Rey reached her ear more close and put his lips on it and words could just find a place to come out "now who is blushing?" Kria just managed to catch her breath and red face covered in black oil. She turned around to face Rey and stroked her cheek against his cheek. Oil was the color and Kria's cheek was paint brush to draw the portrait of their love on Rey's face. Both his cheeks were black now with fuel. He was amazed with her bold display. Kria teased him "close your open mouth Monster! You still get to know me better. She walked out by saying that. Kria was wiping her face with cloth and Rey was just grasping her luring aura.

Oil was so stubborn to remove with simple stroke of cloth. Kria was trying hard to wipe it by seeing in mirror of Bugatti. Rey could figure out her trouble and what could be a better chance to romance with your girl! Kria was asking him for help and he was nowhere. He was gone to take solution of her troubling oil. Ice!! As cold as the weather outside, the cube was melting in his fingers with warmth. He shall help his girl. And the drop touched her cheek, flowing down and giving her chills. She could see him holding ice and couldn't choose between herself and Ice, who was melting better. His breaths were coming out as white fog indicating the temperature out but melting ice cube in his hand was telling the story other side.

Rey stroked the ice cube on her face to remove the fuel! She just pretended to be damsel in distress whose knight has just arrived to wipe out her troubles. Ambience seemed poetic. Kria was unable to figure out if Ice is melting due to her heat or his desire. Black got wiped away and rolled down from cheeks and so as his burning palm which was supporting her elbow. Kria's slightly opened lips were making her look tempting. Rey's spare arm covered her waist and then moved up to her nape. He never touched her like this before. Hands were dancing across her spine. She was just standing with closed eyes trembling a little. Rey asked if it's too! She murmured "it never felt that warm". Rey was ought to smile and think of her trembling throat. And finally cloth with which she was trying to wipe the fuel, succeed in make her bright. Her face was as clear as her mind. She was thoughtless and still at time.

Only gesture she could make to this ecstasy was a hug to him". She rested her head on his shoulder and wanted him to take all the weight. Rey could sense her plead. He lifted her in arms and took to the car. She was holding on to him tight with her eyes closed. He made her sit in car and kissed his eyes. She opened them to see his face. He never seemed that familiar to her.

Rey drove her to home. Before leaving, she just exchanged a kiss near his lips. Rey bid her good night.

Night proved sleepless for Kria! She was never that relaxed before but didn't want to sleep. Tonight what she felt was something new to her. They discovered something new in them. The love which was spoken and conveyed just got to know that there are some languages beyond words. She didn't want it to end when he touched her and nor she wanted to take it further. What kind of state was that! Apparently she just wants to live what she felt! He touched her soul today.

Next morning, Rey was all ready to meet Mrs. Ghai. He dresses up in best manner and has all the points to put in case she denies their love.

Kria was already to stand by him when her mother will judge their love.

Sanjana was trying to neutralize her mind before meeting Reyansh.

Note: Guys, sorry for not including meeting of Rey with Sanjana as update already is so long.😳

I hope you have liked this one too!!😳

Do leave your feedback..😳

Love🤗

Aditi

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so pehle Merry Christmas...

then sorry... woh kal i wrote the comment.. and then stupid wise window close kar di... so sorry for such a late unres...

haan so coming to the update...

rey and his dad part was so sweet... i mean when the stry started i never expected that rey's dad is actually like this... poor father... all he want is the old times back... but thats not easy..

kria mein changes... pyaar mein everything changes... yahan bhi yahi ho rha hai...

rey returns to workshop... that was so fun and well threaded...

his acting... his seeing everything from a different view... kidding around... then teasing kria... how he was smiling and luaghing whole heartedly...

the mustand part was so fun.. reminding the old days...

then the part how he helped her to clean her face off was so very lovely and cute and sweet... literally awww moment...

near the lip kiss... on the lip nhi ho sakta tha kya????😆 koi nhi will be waiting for it...

but the way u described the whole process was beautiful... just loved it...

ek request thi... aap vaaps se apni purani wali font and colors pe aao nah... yeh font mereko pasand nhi hai...😳
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago

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