Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm
merry christmas
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm
merry christmas
Originally posted by: Deshian4lyf
Beginning was awesome! Love it! Continue(:
Kiran 🤗
Part 2 is awesome :D
Lallu , G3 and then G3 Prem convo were interesting. It shows how much they care for each other - you did a good job explaining it all.
Lallu with his manager was hilarious lol
Aww I loved how you made Heer so cute with just one line.
You are so good at writing Kiran, wish you would have time to give regular updates. I really love your sense of humour - the comic timing you give to characters are always fab.
So Prem's parents noticed that he's unhappy since he was back from Delhi after finishing college. We saw briefly Prem thinking about a girl fitting Heer's description. It makes us think if he is already acquainted with Heer or just some random college mate.
Precap with Prem getting shocked to see Heer is interesting :D can't wait to read next part :D pretty please update.
Thank you so much.
Part-3
Heer turned around to face them and Prem become shocked
Heer smilingly looked at Prem and politely greeted him
Heer:- Good Morining Sir!!!
But Prem was not in his sense to greet her back. He was shocked moreover he was happy to see his lady love in front of his eyes after so many years. Few years back he had loosed his hope that he'll able to see his love in future or not. But now she is standing right here in front of his eyes.
Seeing Prem's confusion Lalit got suspicious and he shook him.
Lalit:- Prem!!! Heer tumhe Good Morning wish kar rahi hai. Greet her back. Prem!!! Prem!!!
Lalit's voice brought him to his senses
Prem:- huh'han'umm'goo'good morning!!!
Lalit:- Prem aj se Heer tumhari secretay hai. I hope that ki tum dono ek doorse ke sath ache cooperate karoge hmm.
Heer:- Yes Sir
Lalit:- Good, so now get back to work. Prem tum Heer ko sab kuch samjha dena ki use kya kab kese karna. Ok.
Prem:- Ji bauji!!!
Left from there leaving Prem and Heer alone
Heer:- Sir!!! Lalit sir ne muje yeh files study karne ko kaha hai. Yeh un projects ki file hai jo ap handle kar rahe hai. To mae yeh files baad mae study kar lungi agar koi important kaam hai to'
Prem:- umm nahi tum yeh files study karlo. Abhi koi or important kaam nahi hai. Agar hoga to I'll let you know.
Heer:- ok sir
Heer started reading the files sitting on the couch. And Prem took his seat continuously looking at Heer
Prem (confusingly thinking):- Lekin Heer yahan Mumbai mein kya kar rahi hai? Jahan tak muje yaad hai Heer ki to shaadi hone wali thi Rajveer se. or Heer ko dekhke lagta bhi nahi ki uski shadi ho gai hai. Na mangalsutra pehna hai na hi sindor or engagement ring bhi nahi. Or Heer un lardkiyon mae se bhi nahi hai ki shadi shuda hoke bhi yeh sab cheese na pehne. To iska matlab Heer ki shadi nahi hui.
Prem becomes happy thinking about the fact that Heer is not married
Prem (thinks):- to phir us din college mae'..
---Flashback---
Prem Juneja the handsome hunk of the college is preparing himself to purpose the girl whom he is in madly in love with
Prem (nervously practicing):- Umm Heer mae tumhe bohot pasand karta hun. Mujhse shadi karogi'..tsk tsk nahi yaar''.umm Heer I love you a lot. Please marry me'..oh god kya karun mae.
Karan (Prem's best friend):- hahahaha Prem to itna nervous kyn ho raha. Heer ko I love you hi to bolna hai.
Prem:- han han tu to aese bol raha hai jaise ek lardki ko I love you nahi balki ek bache ko chocolate deni hai huh!!! Itna asan hai kya ek lardki ko purpose karna jisse ap sacha pyar karte ho huh!!!
Karan laughed
Karan:- Prem tu bhi na bus pagal hi hai. Ek saal ho gaya hai hume college se pass out hue. Aj Heer ki convocation ceremony hai. Tune apni life ka saal barbaad kiya or yahan par ruka jab tak Heer ne apni graduation complete nahi ki. Pichle ek saal se roz subha tu Heer ke ghar ke bahar kharda hoker use college jate hue dekhta or phir poora raaste uska picha karta college ke gate sirf yeh dekhne ke liye ki Heer thik se college or college se ghar pohochi hai ya nahi.
Sameer (prem's another friend):- exactly or yaad hai wo rishab jisne Heer ke saath misbehave kiya tha. Us time to tune use kuch nahi kaha tha lekin usi din raat ko tu akele rishab ke ghar jaake tune uski jo dhulai kit hi that was awesome bro!!!! maza agaya tha. Or rishab ka chehra dekhne layak tha jab agle din wo Heer se poore college ke samne ro ro ke mafi mang raha tha.hahaha
Prem was blushing uncontrollably
Karan:-hahaha han right or aese hi tune Heer ki bohot baar madad ki lekin use kabhi bhi pata nahi chale diya. Aj tak tu kabhi bhi Heer ke samne nahi gaya. Kabhi use nahi bataya ki tu use kitna pyar karta hai. Itna pyar tune kaise kar liya yaar.
Prem (smiled):- pata nahi yaar kab hua kaise hua. Bus itna pata hai ki ho gaya or is had tak hua haina ki mae shayad kabhi kisi or se aesa pyar na kar paoun. Mujhe nahi pata ki aj Heer mere pyar ko apnayegi ya nahi. Muje bus itna pata ki jo jagha mere dil mae Heer ke liye hai wo jagha mae kabhi kisi or ko nahi de paounga.
Karan:-don't worry Prem wo jagha kisi or ko dene ki nobat hi nahi ayegi. Heer tere pyar ko zaror accept karegi. Dekh liyo.
Prem (nervously smiled):- I hope so!!!
Rahul (prem's friend):- Prem wo dekh sare students auditorium ke bahar arhe hai. Lagta hai convocation ceremony khatam ho gai hai..
Then Prem saw Heer coming out of the auditorium with her friends happily. He started admiring her.
But soon he was interrupted by his friend
Karan:- Prem ab kharde kharde dekh kya raha hai. Jana Heer ke pas jaa
Prem:- arre jaa raha huna
Prem started taking small small steps towards Heer and he continuously admiring the way she is laughing, the way she is talking to her friends, the way she is playing with her dupatta
Shit!!! I love her alot''.thought prem
But soon he stopped in his track when he heard what Heer and Her friends are talking about
Ria (heer's friend):- kya Baat kar rahi hai Heer, rajveer ne tujhe purpose kiya wow!!! Kash mae teri jagha hoti
Heer blushed
Maya (Heer's friend):- Han yaar tu kitni lucky hai ki tujhe Rajveer mila. Tu to bohot khush hogi haina
Heer (blushingly):- Haan maya mae bohot khush'.Rajveer sach mae bohot acha insaan hai. Usne kitni bar meri madad bhi ki hai. Sach mein mae bohot lucky hun ki muje Rajveer mila. Pata hai aj Rajveer ke parents mere ghar ane wale hain humare rishte ke liye baat karne.
Ria:- wow yaar congrats!!!
Maya and Ria was continuously teasing Heer
And here our poor Prem was completely hurt. He slowly starts taking his steps back.
Karan came forward to console Prem
Karan:- Prem tu chinta mat kar. Heer sirf teri hai. Us rajveer ke bache ko hum sabak sikhayenge. Hum use chordege nahi.
Prem (in tears):- nahi!!! Tum log aesa kuch nahi karoge.
Karan:- Lekin kyun Prem? Tu Heer se pyar karta hai or'
Prem:- Lekin mera pyar sirf ek tarfa hai. Heer bhi Rajveer ko pasand karti hai. Aur mae un dono ke beech nahi aounga. Un dono ko ek sath khush rehne ka poora haq hai.
Karan (angrily):- Lekin tujhe bhi to khush rehne ka haq haina. To phir tu kyun apni pyar ki qurbani de raha hai.
Prem:- agar meri qurbani se Heer ko khushi milti hai to mae haste haste qurban ho jaounga. Heer ki khushi mere liye meri apni khushi se zyada important hai.
Bus maine faisla kar liya hai mae aj hi Mumbai chala jaounga hamesha ke liye, is jagha se door, heer se door. Mae isi ehsas ke sath apni poori zindagi bita lunga ki Heer khush hai.
Karan:- Lekin Prem'
Prem:- Nahi karan, mae ne faisla kar liya hai. Mae jar aha hun
Prem turned back and glanced at Heer for the last time
Prem (in his mind):- Bye Heer. I love u a lot and will always do!!!
And Prem left from there
---Flashback end---
Prem (think):- muje to laga tha ki us din ke baad mae shayad hi kabhi mere Heer ko dekh paoun. Lekin aj Heer mere samne baithi hai, I still can't believe it. But mae abhi bhi sure nahi hun ki Heer abhi bhi rajveer ke sath hai ya nahi. Pata lagana pardega.
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Here is the 3rd part and the next part is also ready
and i'll that part only when i'll get your comments asap..😈
Thank you so much😃
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