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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...waiting for the update
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awesome...
plz update next part cant wait 4 next...
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Payal saw Khushi I wonder if she would think Ansh is Arnav's child
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nice update,
give some moment between arhi

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PART TWENTY

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Payal saw khushi but khushi was walking with vasu and la,, but she was a little far form them so she couldn't understand if she was with them or not, and also it was a Sunday the mall was little crowded too,, and payal stood where she was,, and maami came to her,,

Maami: Payal bahu what are you doing here?? Why you stopped??

Payal: Wo maa ji I saw,,

Maami: What you saw payal bahu,, we have many works at home and you here, come,

Payal: But ma ji I saw,,

Maami: You saw but any one else doesn't saw, what you really saw,,

Payal: Maa ji I,,

Maami: Shut up payal and come with me,, saasu ma is waiting for us,,

Maami made payal shut up her mouth, and when payal looked again back to see khushi she didn't see anyone there,, and she disappointedly walked with maami,,

When maami and payal reached daadi,,

Daadi: What happened payal bitiya,,

Payal: Wo daadi I,,

Maami: Nothing saasu ma, she saw some relative there,,

Daadi: Ok,, come let's go,,

Payal: Ok daadi,,

On the other hand khushi didn't noticed that payal was seeing her,, but when she looked back hearing maami's voice she saw maami and payal,, then khushi walked forward to hide herself from payal but payal along with maami were went from there already and khushi sighed in relief,,

After shopping, when they returned RM payal went to akash to tell him about khushi,,

Payal: Akash ji,,

Akash: Yes payal,,

Payal: Akash ji did you know about khushi's where abouts??

Akash: What?? why??

Akash taken back by payal's sudden questioning about khushi,, as khushi doesn't want anyone to know about her how come she knew this and how can e tell this payal,,

Akash: No,, no payal why??

Payal: Wo akash ji, you know I met khushi in the mall today but couldn't talk to her or see her properly,, but I know its khushi,,

Akash: How can it be khushi payal?? You know she was sin Mumbai and then left India,,

Payal: Akash ji what if she came back from abroad and is here,,

Akash: But payal,,

Payal: And you know akash ji she was walking out from the mall,, but I saw clearly that she was khushi,,

Akash: but how can that possible payal,, may be you saw someone else,,

Payal: no akash ji she was,,

Akash: I don't know but Bhabhi is not here and I am sure of that,,

Payal: akash ji but,,

Akash: payal if I will get any news of her I will tell you ok,,

Payal: ok akash ji,,

After payal left,,

Akash: I am sorry payal I can't tell you anything about bhabhi as I promised her,, I will tell you when the time comes,,

Khushi,,

After the tiring shopping khushi la vasu and ansh were returned and khushi was making ansh sleep,,, and then la came there with her I pod,,

La: Hey khush did kiddo slept,,

Khushi: La, he is sleeping,,

La: Ok,,

Khushi: Why what happened to you,, you look disturbed,,

La: No khush nothing like that,,

Khushi: Hmm, ok la what's your opinion about Nanheji,,

La: What nk?? That cartoon,,

Khushi: La,, please tell me na,,

La: He is a full time chatterbox a funny man of without brain,, and always smiling and laughing,,

Khushi: Yes he is always smiles and makes others smile also,, and he is nice la,,

La: Wow khush you became his fan now,,

Khushi: No la,, I really likes him and respects him,, because of his personality,, because everyone can't make others smile,, it's a gift form god and he has got that,,

La: Khush,,

Khushi: Yes la,, he is really nice and lucky and the person whom he will marry will be the luckiest person in the world,,

Saying khushi left for kitchen to help vasu with the house hold after tucking a sleeping ansh,, and la were in her deep thoughts of nk,,

After some days,,

AR

Nk were at AR for the shooting works and he cane to khushi's cabin for asking about la,,

Nk: Hello khushi,,

Khushi: Nanheji, I really missed you,, when will your shoot gets over???

Nk: It will take time khushi,,

Khushi: Ok,, Nanheji,,

Nk: Khushi did you talk to la about me,,

Khushi: Yes Nanheji but doesn't have any nice opinion about you,,

Nk: Oh no,,

Khushi: Its ok Nanheji may be she is thinking about you to do the next,,

Nk: I am also wish,,

Khushi: And let her take some more time Nanheji,, it's about her life she have all the right to think about her future hai na,,

Nk: Yes khushi,,

Khushi: Ok Nanheji then,,

Nk thought something and asked,,

Nk: Khushi when we met last time you were pregnant na??
khushi shocked,, yes she knew he knew about the baby matter she prayed hardly that he won't ask about the baby,,

Khushi: Yes Nanheji,,

Nk: So you had a baby now,, that's really fantastic khushi,, is a boy or a girl??

Khushi: Nanheji please dheere boliye please,,

Nk: But khushi,,

Khushi: Nanheji I have a baby boy,,

Nk: A baby boy, congrats khushi,,

Khushi: Thanks Nanheji,, but please don't tell anyone about my baby please,,

Nk: But why khushi??

Khushi: Nanheji I don't want to make my baby a,,

Khushi couldn't complete her sentence,,

Khushi: Its ok khushi,, don't worry I wont tell anyone,, but I will surely visit you guys,,

Khushi: Ok Nanheji you are always welcome,,

Nk: Thanks khushi,, will surely come to see your baby,, and what's his name,,

Khushi: I named him ansh,,

Nk: Ansh cute name,, so tell ansh his uncle is coming to see him,,

Khushi: Ok Nanheji,,

Khushi smiled hearing nk's talks,, and then he left,,

But akash who was coming to khushi's cabin heard everything they said,,

He became shocked to hear khushi having baby, a baby boy,, which his nephew and his bhai's blood,,

Akash came in khushi's cabin,,

Akash: Bhabhi,,

Khushi looked back and saw a shocked akash there,,

Khushi: Akash bhai you here,, what happened any problem,,

Akash: Bhabhi how could you??

Khushi: Akash bhai what are you talking about??
Akash: Bhabhi you very well know what I am talking about,, I heard what you and nk bhai were talking,,

Khushi: Akash bhai'

Akash: Yes bhabhi tell me why?? Why you hide such an important thing from us,, why??

Khushi looked down,,

Akash: Please bhabhi,, did we don't have nay right to know about you and your baby anymore,,

Khushi: Akash bhai please,,

Akash: Yes I know what bhai did was wrong but you could have told him about your pregnancy,,

Khushi: Why akash bhai,, what the need of telling him,,???

Akash: Bhabhi,,

Khushi: The husband whom I divorced, did he have the right,, we were separated at that time akash bhai,, and I don't think my baby needs him,, we two are happy in our world,, we don't need anyone,,

Akash: Bhabhi,, you don't need anyone,, but what about bhai?? Doesn't he needed someone to be his side,,

Khushi: Akash bhai,,

Akash: Bhabhi, bhai is regretting his mistake of divorcing you and he even tried to search you also,, but couldn't find him,, when I found out about you being with Lavanya,, I sad to him that don't search you,, but even after that he wasn't happy,, he was restless for you,, he was waiting for you,,

Khushi: For what?? For saying sorry?? Is the word sorry is enough to heal my wounds akash bhai,,

Akash: Bhabhi please,,

Khushi: Akash bhai meri kasam apko kisi ko mat batana about my baby,,

Akash: Bhabhi all of us have the right,,

Khushi: No,, no one have the right,, I don't want my baby to suffer what I suffer so please akash bhai,, if you ever consider me as your sister then please,,

Akash: Ok bhabhi,, I won't tell anyone but please let me meet my bhai's son,,

Khushi: You can see him whenever you want but,,

Akash: No bhabhi I won't tell or let know about your baby,,

Khushi: Thanks akash bhai,,

Akash: Ok bhabhi,,

Saying akash left he didn't even care about the work for which he came,,

On the other hand arnav was watching khushi for the past an hour and he saw she talking to nk and akash watching them, then akash khushi were saying something,, khushi showed her anger on akash and then pleaded something,, seeing all this he got confused and came down to talk to akash,,

Arnav: Akash,,

Akash: Bhai,,

Arnav: What happened to khushi??

Akash: What??

Arnav: She was tensed and,,

Akash: Oh so you were really worried for her,,

Arnav: Akash I asked you something,, tall me what happen to her?? Is she ok?? Arnav: Did nk say anything to her??

Akash: Nk bhai what he did??

Arnav: I don't know dammit,, tell me what's the matter??

Akash got irritated that khushi hide something big form everyone and that too because of the man in front of him,, and he asking him about what happened to khushi,,

Akash: Bhai everything happened,, and that too because of you,, only you,,

Arnav: What me,, what happened because of me,,

Akash: Why don't ask yourself bhai,,

Arnav: Akash I,,

Akash: If you don't know,, then ask your wife,, no ex-wife she will tell you,, you don't know bhai,, your one big mistake caused a void which you can never fill,,

Arnav: Akash I,, really didn't,

Akash: Your that one mistake changed your life bhai,, you would have been happy with bhabhi,, but you,, you,,

Akash choked his voice and then left from there,,

Arnav: What did akash told,, she suffered everything because of me,, and my one mistake made my life changed,, what's the meaning of that,,

Arnav: I should ask khushi ,,

Saying this left to her cabin,, as he entered her cabin he locked the door form inside,, khushi who's back was facing the door thought it was Lavanya as she was called her and told will come soon and she have something important to tell,,

Khushi: Hey la what happened??

Arnav: Khushi it's me not la,,

Khushi turned suddenly and saw arnav standing there and then her eyes fell on the locked door,,

Khushi: What are you doing here sir?? and why did you lock the door??

Arnav: Khushi first of all I don't like when you call me sir,, ok second I want to talk to you that too now,,

Khushi: Sir I don't know then what should I call you,, as far as I know you are my boss,,

Arnav: Khushi you always called me arnav ji,,

Khushi: Sir that was before we,,

Khushi stopped as she had a flash back of the fate full moments,,

Khushi: Sir I can only call you that,, and I don't think we need o talk anything and please open the door I don't anyone to think that we are,,

Arnav: Let whatever they want to think khushi,,

Khushi: Sir I know you don't have nay problem but I have,,

Arnav: Why khushi we are a couple you,,

Khushi: Not is,, we were couple but now we had a divorce and we are separated,,

Arnav: Khushi what ever it is I still care for you and I was worried are you ok??

Khushi: I am perfectly fine till when you came inside the cabin but not anymore fine sir,, if you go form here then I will be again fine,, and I think you shouldn't think about me no more you should think about your family and life,, in which I don't have any space,, ok,,

Arnav: No,, khushi you still,,

Khushi: No sir I have already moved on in my life,, and I have someone to love me and,,

Arnav: I know who is that someone,,

Khushi: What???

Arnav: Yes I know and I wont let that person to be with you,, I wont let you two to be together,,

Khushi: What are you,,

Arnav: You very well know what I can do and what's my owner is,, so tell him to be away from you,, other wise he would face the ASR not arnav,, ok,,

Khushi: Are you,,

Arnav: And you too khushi,, if I saw you with him anymore I wont able to control myself,, so keep my words in your mind,, I still can you what ever I want,,

Saying arnav left leaving a shocked and confused khushi behind,,

What was he talking about to be away from his baby,, don't talk to her ansh,, and when did he saw ansh,, did he know about her baby,, did akash bhai told him about ansh or he thinking about someone else,, or is he gone mad?????????????????????????????????


Edited by Maithly - 12 years ago
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Waitng fr de next part update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
YAR PLEASE LET ASR MEET ANSH & LET HIM REGRET FULLY...

& KHUSHI BINGO GIRL, DNT FORGV HIM EASILY ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow supeb dear
so asr thinking nk loves khushi
and he is feeling J also
waiitng fr the next part dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha this update was funny... Another MU lol

I love this story plz plz update soon
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago

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