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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz update dear
eagerly waiting:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello sweets

so finally am here after reading your FF till date

it started wit ha dark story like maan being kinda negative character and

poor geet can't talk am..😲. at this

but he really fell in love with her and wanted her by him.. so sweet

dadima was really selfish in getting geet there at mansion ...

maan never tried to cross a particular line in his love..

dev and sam... hmm

sam is ... well you can understand right 😉

she did lie to geet that maan wanted to kill her... 😲 and made geet hate him and fear from him even more ...

dev .. hmm.. a love sick guy.. he was also kinda mean he didn't got geet's love approval and decided himself that she loved him...

ahh !! plz wake up dev ...

dev's mom ..she did perfect thing as she called maan and told geet's whereabouts ...

well we are maaneet lovers ... 😉

all in all awesome going ...

i want you to pm me .. sweets for further parts

but mark it i might get late with comments and likes ...

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...sorry my like button is not working... and congrats dear...
Edited by RajeevGurtiFan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




Present




Geet went to the the car...and sat on the seats...placing her head backward she slowly started to weep.




What was her fault...?



She was frustrated cause here...in this whole mess...she was innocent. She had done nothing...still she is the one paying for everybody's sins...




What did she get in her life...no family...no relatives...no simple happy life.




She somewhere was grateful to god for making her nice looking...but today she regrets it...she regrets for being beautiful.




This beauty is not a Boon...




...it's a Curse...




She suddenly startled with the car's break...she looked out seeing the car had reached home.




She slowly went out of the car and stood in front of the House.




This is her address now.



''Khurana paradise...''




is it really a paradise...??




Well...she will try to make it a home...




But paradise...??




That depends on their relationship...




She took a long breath and entered the house.




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Past



Geet slowly adjusted the simple red vail over her head...she was looking very beautiful in that simple lahenga choli...she had no ornaments...in one word, she was in a neel bridal attaire.



As the marriage will be downstairs in dev's house and it was being done secretly, dev's parent didn't bother to spend their money on her bridal attire.


It was planned...geet and dev's marriage will be done privately and after that they will throw a reception party as well as the press conference to show the world how 'kind-hearted' they are..as some business friends already knew geet.



And dev agreed to the secret marriage as he was afraid of the publicity before marriage.




When she adjusted her vail over her head...for the first time she felt like a blessed person.she smiled slowly at the mirror...and it made her more bright.




She just applied kajal in her eyes...and the dark shadow with the hazel made her a seductive goddess.



She was done...she now started to look for the chappal...but which seems to be not in this room.



She tried to open the door...but it did not open. she jerked the door and realized that the door is locked from outside.



She became a little shocked...why would somebody lock the door.



She went to the veranda...but it was grilled.



That means she is locked in this room and though she can't make any any loud noise,she is helpless now.



She was looking for any cell phone from which she can text dev...But no...there wasn't any.



Geet was now terrified...something is very wrong here.



She turned to her door and just then the door opened and Maan Singh Khurana came in...toally loosing control over her body , she fell down on the floor...sitting.



But he without looking at geet locked the room again with a key (this time from inside) and straightly went to the veranda throwing the keys outside...where one of his person caught it from the streets.



Maan inhaled sharply and turned around calmly leaning on the veranda railing...folding his hands over his chest...and hummed a song in a low tone...



Which made her slide back a few steps...



''...Hum tum...ek kamre mein bandh ho...



...Aur chabi kho jaye...''




he sang the last line looking directly at her eyes.



She immediately stood up and rushed...and started to bang the door and tried to unlock the lock with her hair pin...she has to try.



And here maan was looking at her being relaxed...he was thinking about this morning...when he got up alone in the bed...


He looked for geet in the whole pent house and then rushed to the security to sure himself that previous night was not a dream.



And when the security footage showed that geet ran out of the hotel ,this left Maan shivering with rage...she left him...again.



And this time...intentionally.



As he didn't get her clear picture...he searched for Dev Singhania.




And the news made Maan shook with horror.



''Dev was going to marry geet this evening...secretly''


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And here geet was banging door for help desperately...she was crying with hiccups and was terrified of the situation she's in right now...but her whole body stiffed when she fely two palms on her back...slowly descending and making their way to her flat tummy...she was breathing heavily out of fear and pressed her eyes tight for the worst...Maan was having a tough time to control himself after seeing her like this in front of him...she...in a Back-cut lagenga-choli...looking amazingly beautiful...and stunning.



that was the least he expected...but seeing her beautiful white marble smooth back...and her face...he walked towards her like an addicted to his drug...


Maan placed her lips on her nape...and lightly kissed her there...



geet turned around in a snap and pressed her back on the door...looking back at him...being horrified about his action...while he looked at her with passion...and caressed her face with so much love.



geet suddenly moved sideways to go out from his embrace but he swiftly put his hands on the door...caging her with the door and his arms...He smiled mildly at her and moved the loose stands from her face...



geet stared at his fingers with terror while he was moving those strands...Tears were all over her face while maan kept looking at her face...



Maan was about to say something but suddenly...there was some hustling sound on the other side of the door...as if some one was coming to the door running...the person banged with the door...not being able to control his speed and dropped down before the closed door...


Screaming with ragged breathing...



"...Geet...Geeet...it's me dev...please open the door...Sameera told me that Maan had found out about our wedding...We have get out of here now...warna...we won't make it..."



Geet Swiftly turned to the door again...and tried to make a sound...to tell dev to help her...


But Maan did not move an inch...He was on that same position...but her facial expression changed into a horridly dangerous lion...



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Love,

Zahran

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Hemlock

Officially Continued


Part-4


Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Again Me First😆

Fantastic update

Present
Awww!!!! Geet was weeping silently that was so painful, i hope she gets deserving happiness...!!

Past
OMG!!! Geet was marrying with Dev(il) but thank God!!! Maan settle everything but why Geet is so stubburn...!!!

Waiting for next part
Edited by GurtiArti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

geet is so helpless yaar

but last past u showed tat geet was with maan na when dev was abt to kiss her

than tis marriage again
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved it
here i'm dying to know past
n u r giving it in bits n pieces nt fair
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!!!!!
Bechari geet ..now she has resigned to accepting whatever is happening in her life...she at present has nobody who can understand her state and give her a shoulder to cry upon...
Toh geet and dev were getting married and maan got to know it...and the way he locked her in the room and threw the chhabhi...haha...hum tum kamre main band aur chhabhi khojaaye...😆 par geet ko toh paseena chhoth rahe hain usse wahan dekh kar...
Ek baat samajh main nahin aaya...does she love dev or not??? If no then why is she marrying him???
Abbb kya hoga??? biting my nails...
Continue soon...Waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
but it was chotu
when past will come to end
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum part
feeling bad for geet
she is played between this 2 persons..
but somewhere i like this maans cool attitude
he threw the keys out locking them in..lol

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