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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Sorry, I just caught up -.-so, chapter one.A clause? A clause which stands between Arnav and some property? Lemme guess? Marriage?

I liked how you described black and Arnav, the parallels were something new and nice.

I hate being cliched and cheesy, because that is not how Vee rolls 😎, but I'll make an exception just now and tell you that I am intrigued.

Aman is not a secretary but a member from another organisation? Or is he Arnav's PA?

Whats to bet that its Khushi Arnav has to marry?

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

I am so sorry for such a late editing. I pakka promise, it won't happen again 😊

The complete air of the chapter is filled with mystery, confusion and curiosity. There're clauses I'd like to make guess at and feelings I can only guess at the moment and there are too many clauses! And for a moment there I am disappointed that Arnav doesn't notice Khushi but in an objective if the sister is Khushi at all.. I like how he is possessive of his Land Rover because he has earned it. And no doubt a devout business-man. A wonderful chapter and one which makes me want a lot more. Can I ask when is the next one due?😃

Edited by -Dee- - 13 years ago

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

chupake dikhana, dikhake chupana...andazzz apka nirala hai...waiting and watching..

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

awesome update
arnav is forced to marry khusi bitya for party and will reasons too his nanaji has written his will with a clause that he will inherit only when he marries is it or have i taken it wrong

he will harm khushi mentally and emotionally hmm

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

14 years to just listen to the mention of his marriage without blowing his top off...implies serious issues the man has faced in the past...and the fact that he still struggles to come away from it.

Also...I LOVED the way you described Arnav using things he used...and not by directly describing him.That was very well done.👏

And all I'm thinking of right now is how exactly Arnav plans on moulding the situation to his benefit.

Great Chapter.

Edited by raomedhz - 13 years ago

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Priyasha890

@Priyasha890

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Thank you Rasgulla_sp for recommending this brilliant story. Fell in love with the story after just reading the prologue.

Sj_arhi: I love the way you reveal only what you intend to, at the same time keeping us hooked to know more. The story is gripping and there's a sense of mystery in every sentence, which makes me want more and only more of what you write. Looking forward to your next update :)

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

hi..i just found this story!

its really interesting n intriguing!

makes me really curious to know more n i wud love to follow it!

can u plz add me to ur pm list?

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Game will start now. Last sentence prove what ASR up to... Well start. He is tension will how he will change situation. He made descion . Waiting for update soon. Thanks for pm .

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

is his dissision making khushi the crap goat?? hope not

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: russelskhushi
is his dissision making khushi the crap goat?? hope not

There is this line which reflects that he knows a lot of factors are involved out here; like relations, personal as well as business, family ; he is not going to risk them. Khushi Gupta, naah, you just have to wait for her to come.

Edited by sj_arhi - 13 years ago