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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
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chavvi16

Oh teri yeah kya teaser de diya
Man now I so wish you would update it soon
So they meet again huh
And all thanx to his daughter interesting
Cheers for pm


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thank youuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
interesting teaser...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Edited by love2_soma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Great update loved it alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Khamoshi………….Lakin kab tak………….

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Part 3

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She sits on bench….. & feel the fresh air.

Kitne log hai yha………
fir bhi tanhai hai…

ek waqt tha hum tanhai mein bhi khushi ko mahssos krte the…..


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She: beta itni jaldi tujhe kis cheez ki hai

Geet: abbu ammi ko smjhaiye na……aaj hmara phla din hai college ka……
aur hum late nhi hona chahta

Abbu: geet bina breakfast kiye aap khi nhi jayengi……

Geet: abbu……

Abbu: aap jaldi se chliye juice pijiye……….

Aaj khud hum aapko college chodenge……..

Geet: thank you abbu…..

She drinks juice in one sip.

Chliye abbu ab…….

Abbu: hmm

Hum apni rajkumari ko chodke aate hai…..

Ammi: ji

Geet: Zaira kha hai yaar

Ammi hold her ear.

Geet: ammi dard ho rha hai

Ammi: kitni baar tujhe kha hai……..

Wo ab teri bhabhi hai…….

Geet: pr bhabhi se phle wo meri sbse pakki dost hai

Right abbu

Abbu: bilkul thik kh rhi hai

Ammi: is ghar meri koi sunta kha hai

Abbu: ya allah

Itna bda jhoot

Hum to hamesha se aapki hi sunte hai

Ammi: dono milke mujhe pareshan krte hai

Abbu: begam

Geet: abbu…..baki ka romance baad mein kr lena

Abbu: badmaash

Zaira: geet chle

Geet: hmm

Zaira: ammi hum chalte hai…..

Ammi: apna aur iska dhyan rakhna

Zaira: ji

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One more tear slip down from her eyes.

.

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Sia: papa hume icecream khani hai

Maan: tum yhi rukna…….khi mat jana….aur chup chap tb tak ball se khelo

Sia: yes papa

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Suddenly one ball hit on her back.

One cute girl came near to her and said sorry to her.

Geet: aap mujhe sorry kyun kh rhi ho

Sia: wo meri ball aapko lag gyi na…..isliye

Sachi……maine jaan buzkar nhi maari

Geet: it's ok beta.

She kissed on her cheek and said you are so cute.

Sia: thanks

Geet: aap kiske sath yha aayi ho

Sia: apne papa ke sath

Geet: chlo mein tumhe unke pass chod deti hu……..

Geet: kha hai aapke papa

She pointed towards ice-cream seller.

Geet: aapke papa ice cream bechte hai

Sia: oh ho

Wo mere papa nhi hai

Mere papa wha mere liye ice cream lene gye hai

.

papa aa gye….

Geet: kha …..

She tries to locate his father, but her phone buzzed.

.

He: hey sweety

Kha hai tu

Mein park ke Main gate pe khda hu

Geet: tum andher aa jayo

He: phle to tu mujhe airport pe leni nhi aayi….

Ab bahar be nhi aa sakti

Geet: sorry

He: hmm

Aa rha hu

.

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maan: sia bte

He not noticed her and bent on his knees…she run and hugged him.

Maan: kha chli gyi thi meri beti

Sia: papa wo meri ball un aunty ko lag gyi thi

She pointed the finger towards her…

Maan: apne sorry bola unhe

Sia: yes papa

He faced her back…….

Maan: excuse me…

Geet:

She turns. Now both face each other.

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Maan: geet

Geet: maan

………..

Bhut kuch khena chahte the dono……

Bhut kuch sunana baki tha …….abhi darmiyaa………

Par hotho se nikla bhi to…bs tera naam……

He want to hug her….scold her….how she leave him…….without saying any word……

Ek baar bhi kuch nhi kaha

Kyun?

She also want hug him……..monofying him.

Wo janti thi…..wo naraz hai usse………

Manna chahti usse

Pr kyun?

Precap:

tere liye…….hum hai jiye……..har aansoo piye….

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And suggest song for this situation………… I choose this "tere liye…….hum hai jiye……..har aansoo piye…."

But not sure this is good for this ….if you have or know better song…….so please give suggestion.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
superb teaser...
waiitng fr maneet to meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67




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...dear
...4 Pm me dear..😳..
this updates r just
as...😃
...,
n
i just
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.👍🏼.n
...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏
just ..really
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...😃😃😃
tons of 4 u dear...🤗🤗🤗
lov,❤️
Tama


NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
lovely dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Nice part...
So finally maneet meet each other...good...
Ab indono ka kya relation hain yeh toh jaanna hain...were they both friends before...in the past???
Continue soon...Waiting ...

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