MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#3 Link thread 4/pg154 - Page 40

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Part 27

Ohhh, all of you, I am so overwhelmed by your response and comments. You all have no idea; I love my FF just because of your response. The way you all have put your heart in comments, for me, this is your FF, readers are making it special for me and I am just a writer of this FF. A BIG THNAK YOU To ALL OF YOU.

Welcome @mishtiritu, @neha5058 and all new readers of this FF.

Pulvi16 ' I completely understand your anger on Maan, the way he is ignoring what Geet is going thru now. He actually is not able to believe that she has fallen in love with him. When they were together she never expressed her love, we have yet to see some past dear.

Now, when he see's her eyes he see true love and to not let himself fall in trap he snaps back.

But see the positive side, He atlast confessed his pain to her, which he has not done with anyone. Her continous being with him has forced him to share his pain with her.

You must have noticed ' Maan did not give proper try, saving himself from pain, Geet is giving her everything for their relation thus she is going thru pain.

Maan's pain is her pain. He is free of pain, she is automatically free of pain' they are one. Hamsfar hain.. gam aur dard batna hoga'its tough phase of their life and one have to stand strong when other one is weak. It's just sharing of pain and they are one.

Also theory from Annie's FF ' Dear, if he has pain he can only give her pain. (Annie, me holding ears for this choti see chori.But this line was so apt to explain readers.)

Please All, watch this VM on Maaneet suggested by @had2bu. It exactly suits the FF situation for Maan.

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Geet had been cying whole night, Maan was is such a big pain and she considered her the major part of it, major cause of it.

She felt so helpless, she wanted to take him in her arms, cocoon him, say him ' I am your Mishti, she will do everything for you, your happiness and dream. But she knew no way how to do it, what to do.

Chali thi roothe piya ko manane

Khoye huye pyaar ko fir jagane...

Socha tha roothe to hai sirf mujhse

mana lungi unhe unki mishti ke pyaar se...

Unki kadvi baatein taklif to de rahi thi

Itni aasani se nahi manenge wo mein jaanti thi...

In saalo main unhone khud ko bahaut badal daala

yuh kaho meine unke andar ke maasumiyat ko maar daala...

Mishti ko apne khayalo me usne aise sajaya hoga

nahi socha tha meine aisa khawb unhone dekha hoga...

Meine apni harkato se yuh juda kiya unhe khawbo se

Ke Darte hai wo ab apni hi mishti ke khawb dekhne se...

Itne gehra dard meine unhe diya hai

Patthar se bhi patthar dil unhe banaya hai...

Aaj jab mujhe pyaar ka ehsaas ho raha hai

Dard se unke ab mera saamna ho raha hai...

Unke dard ko dekhne se meri ruh kaap uthi hai

Is kadar toda hai meine unhe ye soch ke nafrat hoti hai...

Ab to wo mera saath bhi gawara nahi samajhte

Mishti ban na chaaha to use bhi saath nahi rakhna chahte...

Geet se mishti ban to gayi mein

par unke khayalo ki mishti se koso dur hu mein

Pyaar aur khawb ko maan ke geet ne aisa toda hai

Mishti ne manana chaha to maan ko hi dafna diya hai...

Kaisa ye mod hai kaise hai uljhan hai

meri galti ki saza unhe kyu di gayi hai...

Unke dard ke saamne mera dard kuch bhi nahi hai

Taklif is baat se hai wo apna dard bhi mujhse chupate hai...

Kya hoga humara is rishte ka anjaam

Kya tanha hi guzregi meri har shaam...

By @mishtiritu

Only thing that came to her mind everytime was, she was his Mishti, she lived for him, to give him love and she has to be there for him.

She slept when, on the ground near bedpost, she didn't knew. But in morning when she opened eyes, she saw bright sunshine in her room. Everything looked so fresh and her mind felt fresh too. All her night she had reached to one conclusion as that is what the only solution.

She hit her head "Buddhu, this is what you have to do, this is what he want." She smiled, and got up to get fresh.

Geet wore a beutifull and colourful suit, smiled and place bindi on her forehead and now she was struggling to decide which bangle should go with dress and which one would gain his attention..

She made face at last "Maan has so correctly imagined his Mishti, abb dekho sachi mein I can't decide which one he will like most"

She wore one set and moving her hands to hear their dingling sound.

There was knock on the door.Geet opened the door "Maam, I am chandu, works here"

"Ok" "Maam sir has send these dresses for you."

"Ok, keep them on the side and leave" servent left. Geet looked at the dresses, they were all western dresses.

"Yeh Maan bhi na.. uff" and she placed the whole hanger on the corner of the room and went back to dresser to select her jhumka.

After getting ready, she went down. As she got down from stairs jham jhum' her payal, bangle and jhumka made musical sound to Maan's ears. He closed his eyes, took deep breath and got back onto his cell to check his emails.

"You are looking so pretty today, nazar na lage" said savitri and took a small kajal from her eyes and place behind Geet's ears.

Maan's eyes were getting so tempted to look back but instead he bore himself more into emails which has nothing important left.

"Maa, is everyone ready for break fast. Should I serve it now" she looked at Maan, Savitri smiled to see how she was trying to gain her ladla's attention.

"Come let's serve, maan come to dining table" savitri said.

On dinning table Maan could not escape from seeing Geet who was romaning all around the dinning table to serve food' His eyes could not stop taking break from roaming the moment it fell on her.. how sweet and pretty she looked.

It took lots of effort from Maan from taking his eyes away as their eyes met and she gave her sweet soothing smile'

This was all like a dream but all he knew was this was only the dream she is trying to show him

my dreams are broken
they are shattered
here lay the remnants
the remnants of me
the remnants of my past
they cry out to me
they were crushed
they were smothered
they were murdered
here lay the corpse
the corpse of my dreams
the corpse of me
whom nobody understood
the past
misjudged
misinterpreted
misunderstood
unloved
unwanted
underestimated me
here lay his dead body
my buried dreams and me
now why does everyone want it back?
why despair
why such hue and cry to bring the past back
when the present stands at its shining best
ironic!
thats my irony

@doublecross

Geet served paratha to Maan's father , Mother and then with her jingle dingle sound went to Maan. She was about to put it on his plate when he pulled her hand down the table and sqweezed it tight

"What's this new drama" he whispered in anger. Geet smiled as he looked at her..

He sqweezed her hand more "let me see how thick skinned you are" he said in low yet angry voice to make only Gee hear. Now it was hurting Geet, his nails were almost digging in her skin.

"Geet beta, just pass the veggie" asked his father

Geet smiled at Maan "how do I pass bauji, your son is holding my hand below the table"

Maan immediately let her hand "Maa-aan" Savitri scolded him with smile while Geet served his plate when he was all confused with his parents smile.

"I am not hungry" he was about to leave when Savitri said "Maan, from when have you learnt to disrespect food." Maan angrily looked at Geet, who signaled him to sit.

Maan was having breakfast along with his parents and Geet was standing behind him like a very dutiful wife, obviously irritating Maan

"Why don't you have your breakfast, rather than standing at the top of my head"

"I will wait, if any of you need something" "Dramabaz.." he gritted and then again tried to ignore her but she was not letting him ignore her. She would keep asking to serve this or that to him.

"Maa you look little too more happy with sudden arrival of your DIL" he said irritated at last

"I sure am happy." Geet again stood behind him, fixing her hair letting her bangle make the sounds, Maan closed his eyes to divert, which was not happening.

He had confessed all his pain to keep her away from trying but the effect was opposite

"How stubborn she is" he thought but the truth was after telling his own secret of pain he himself felt kind of naked infront of her. She knew everything she should not. He felt a different kind of closeness after confessing his pain, the closeness which he was trying hard to deny.

"Geet, now sit down beta, nobody needs anything now." Geet sat down exactly beside Maan

"Did I not send you the dresses, why are you wearing this unprofessional dress for office." He said in low voice for only her to hear.

"You don't have to announce me as your wife, I am fine this way." She replied in low voice and then

Then loudly "Maa am I not looking good to go to office this way" "you look very pretty"

"This is unprofessional" "My work will decide my professionalism not my dress"

"Your Boss will not approve this" "My boss is too professional, he looks for my work not dress"

"And Bauji, you know, my Boss is very Khadoos" they laughed "Gee-eet"

"Sacchi Maan, he just find ways to trouble me and get me out of job"

He got up from his seat "so you better hurry up, may be if you are late today he may fire you for being late"

Geet saw the time and immediately got up "Beta, breakfast to ker le"

"No Maa I am fine, need to rush"

Geet and Maan almost left at same time but in different car.

Maan while driving, scenes of all morning happening flashed in front of his eyes'This simple family life was one of his dream, every thing kept coming infront of his eyes and at last there was a small smile on his face as he was driving but soon as the driver stopped the car on the red light Maan came back to senses

He was irritated for himself at getting lost in whatever Geet was trying to create'

"What exactly does this girl want? Whatever she wants, let her do things her way, the more I oppose the more she does. But dare she harm or break heart of my parents after this. At least they are happy now"

Maan got busy with work immediately and got held with meeting.

None in office knew yet that Geet was Maan's wife or she have moved to KM, they neither declare nor were hiding it.

Maan was on 4^th floor fro some meeting when he was crossing Geet's cabin where Shasha was there. After knowing Geet was Geet Handa, Shasha was leaving no stone unturned to impress her.

Geet was wondering what Shasha will do once she knew that she was Maan's wife.

While Maanw as crossing he heard Shasha talking to Geet

"Geet what's this marks on your hand" Geet immediately hid it "No No its nothing, just some scratch"

"No but it looks like nail marks" "Shahsa please don't go in deep investigation, its nothing just a scratch"

The scene of Maan holding Geet's hand tight in morning, almost digging his nails to her flesh came back to his mind'..

Geet was busy with her work when some one opened her door without even a knock' this rarely happened from last 2 days since ppl came to know she is Geet Handa, though her sign board said Geet Khurana

Geet looked up to see Maan with first aid box "Get that wound fixed, I don't want my whole office wasting time in showing sympathy to you"

Geet could not believe, he brought First Aid box for her. She kept looking at him in awe but soon she wanted to tease Maan within him'

"wow.. Yesterday you accepted me as your wife and today itself so much care. I am so lucky"

But Maan did not change his stern look "Listen, get one thing clear.. whatever act you are putting at home, my parents are happy with it. Do whatever you want, I can't waste my time thinking about your silly acts but remember one thing - After taking my parents to this dreamland don't even dare to break their heart. This time if you hurt them, you have no idea what I will do with you, I will cross all my decency limit in all ways"

And he left.

Geet sadly smiled to herself "I will just wait for the day Maan when you will be so possessive and caring about your Geet in similar way. The day when you will believe your Geet also has heart which is delicate and you will do all to protect her heart too' I will wait for that day."

A tears escaped her eyes and smile on her lips when she saw the first aid box he had brought.

Next: Geet's project Success party.

@Gcs-Girl and @neha5058 ' Thanks for your poems dear. I will use them in future updates.

Neha ' Dear I will defo use that song you suggested too. It suits perfectly well.

wow, just now i just realized that i was first...😆
will edit it.

edited...

thanks a lot di for welcoming me...
loved the poems... and thanks for considering my wish here in this wish.. will be wait for accomplishing it...

loved the part a lot di...
maan's frustration over geet and geet's try to be his mishti... it was great fun that how she was trying to impress him and the breakfast table scene...
the office scene, how he cared for her but still shows his fake anger...
everyone trying to woo geet handa...
and maan's parents very happy now... only maan wants one thing that she will not break thier heart now...
hope everything will be fine soon...

Hi dear...
i am extreamly sorry for my irregular comments these days...
don't no when will i come back with regular comments...
sometimes not getting time and when i get time there will be no net..
i tried to comment from mobile from so many days...
but don't no y ,now it shows some error when i click "Post reply"...
and sometimes when i write comment ... IF shows some error and it gets deleted while posting...
and now i don't want to go through this daily...
i will try to post comment occasionally...
sorry if i hurt u in any way...
but please understand its just getting difficult to me...

i just wanted to let u know the reason for my irregular comments .,,...

R 😊

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lovely update 😊

finally GEET understand how much her action in the past had caused pain to MAAN n also she come to know wht she had to do inorder to get her old loving n caring MAAN back who used to loved her unconditionally

well well now GEET is trying to woo back MAAN by becoming his MISHTI in all sense, dressing the way MAAN like 😊

loving the way how GEET is trying to manofy is roothe hue piya

love this line when MAAN said to GEET on breakfast table - "Why don't you have your breakfast, rather than standing at the top of my head"

Poor GEET cant have the breakfast 😭 n rush to office in order not to be late

like the way how MAAN take care of GEET instead of behaving rude with her 😊

waiting eagerly for the next update

m happy very very happy tat she is mishti nw

and maan hw wiII u save urseIf nw

fantastic update dear:)

i love this ff dear ... i hope sab jaldi se thik ho jaye :)

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