*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER pt 11 pg 118 28/2/2013 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon...😉😉
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congratulation for new MG FF
nice tittle and interesting also
awesome start
nice CS
loved it
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Gr8 concept,I always love wen Maaneet are backed up by family.

Cont. soon.
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wow lovely pro.. congratzz for te new ss
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congrats...

CS
interesting...
cont soon dear...

PS - plz update ur main page with this new FF too...
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congrast on new story...
loved prologue n cs...itresting
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Congrats dear 4 d new story on our fav couple Maaneet...

Would b lukng fwd 4 u 2 update soon...


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nice concept dear... cont soon
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Trying to update as soon as possible :D
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PART - 1

TODAY'S day must b d most happiest day of hs life,if d grl waiting inside ws hs beloved. Whole KM ws dazzled like a bride with lights, musical fountains and flowers. Evry face is smiling in happiness,except d 2,who was d main reason of this happiness. Gauri,elder DIL of Khurana send her BIN in2 hs room,after performing all d rituals,as his bride is waiting 4 him. He obeyed hr and moved 2wrd hs room wid heavy hearted. Hs mind is filled wid turmoil,heart is struggling wid emotions flowing inside nd made him restless. Hs eyes r blank almost only show glimpse of pain in btwen. He reachd 2 hs room nd raised hs arm 2 opn d lock of door,bt hs hand need permission of hs heart who is nt ready 2 accept,whatevr is going on. He collect sm courage nd go inside hs room. He entrd and found strange. He feels dat it was nt is room,may b he entrd in wrong room. Dis decoration of room wid flowers and candles made hs heart bleeds more. The aroma of her mixed wid d frgnance of roses disturbs him alot. He wants 2 ran away frm hr,ran away frm all dis,ran away frm evry1,ran away frm himslf 2,coz his conciuos mind reminds him wat he want and wat he got. He just glimpsed her 4 once,coz he went 2 bed 2 pick his pillow. A girl having a sharp features,like,bright angelic face,sharp white nose looks mor beautiful wid nose pin,baby pink lips,sylendrical nd deligate neck coverd heavy golden neck piece,dressed up in a pink coloured bridal lehnga,is sleeping on his bed,decorated wid rose petals on a white satin sheet. He step 4wrd 2 a couch in a corner. He adjust d pillow nd falls limp on it. He closd hs eyes nd tryng 2 catch sm pieceful sleep momnts whch is nt possible,seeing his body's restless momnts. He tossing on a couch lossing himslf in his past memories.

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a bright shine day of collage. All students were busy according 2 their shedule. A boy having a sharp cuts of faces,dark brown eyes,sharp nose,hysterical antics,fitted in black shirt nd black denim walking like a king in corridor. From where he passed all girls's eyes float in dat way. All girl's breath gt harder evrytime day saw d most hottest and desirable hunk of Delhi,except 1 and she is d only 1 who talk confidently while looking in his eyes. His dark eyes made numb all other girls and dey 4got wat she wants 2 say him,and he really enjoys this. He walked in his own tune wen a soft arm encircled his arm. He stop at sudden and sw d girl having anger in her eyes. She is glaring him and he gulped his sliva saw her temper.

'now wat?y u glaring me like dis?',he askd in a low voice.

'tell me 1 thing who i am?', she que him in return.

'silly u r my best frnd,itna b yaad nai hai tujhe?',he said innocently.

'u kno smthing i feeled i m ur bounded labour',she said in a taunting way and made him more confuse.

'can u pls talk in a lang,whch i undrstand easily',he cant undrstand wat happns 2 hr.

She start beating hm wid hr accounts book. He cant get wat going on but it is very necessary 2 stop her. He snatch book frm hr small soft hands and clenched her both arms nd tied beshind hr. She wriggle continosly 2 free herslf and beat him more.

'shant mishti shant,hua kya hai? Dekh 1 tu hi hai jo mujhe is tarah se maar skti hai lekin iska matlab ye nai hai ki tu sabke samne apne haq ka galat istemal kare.yaar meri image ka swal hai',he whisperd softly in hr ears.

Some how she ables 2 free herslef ad slapped hs cheek softly and come out of his grip. She pointed her soft sylendrical finger on hm.

'tumari image,o yes wrna ye sari ladkia tum pe drool kaise karengi hai na?(he nodded wid a smile and she slapped on his arm)tkisi kaam k nahi ho tum. Collage aane k liye roz mujhe tumhe uthana padta hai,tumhari gym classes k liye b mujhe tume yaad dilana padta hai. Tumhare sare proj b main complete kar k deti hu. Yaha tak ki roz tumhare kapde b main hi select karti hu. Tumhare liye sari shopping b main hi karti hu or badle me tumne kya kiya?she showerd her anger on him in 1 go and fumed badly.

'dekh mujhe yaad nai hai.pls bata na hua kya hai?',he said in apolozising way,but she turnd 2 another side. He com in frnt of her and sw here and dere. He kept hs both ears in hs fingers.'ok i m sorry now tell me what happnd?',he apolozise finally and she melts.

'aaj kya hai?',she askd again?

'What?',he enquired having no idea.

'o god kya karu main tumhara?tumhi ne kaha tha ki tumhe Sam se baat karni hai.aaj tum use propse karne wale ho.kal se main preprations me lagi hu or tum help krna to dur,kam se kam time pe aa to jaya karo.',she said angrily.

'wat do u mean she is come finaly? Where is she?',he akes excitedly and his eyes sparkled.

She smiled wide teasingly.'ya wo aayi thi finaly or chali b gai finaly.' she again turn aggressive and her cheek turned crimosn red in anger.

'wat she gone away but y?'he felt low,coz he loves her alot and wants her in his life forevr.

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