FAKE IT ! rishbala SS- last part pg 85

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Adeeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

loved it. madhu is sooo cute.

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

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NOTE

If you all were expecting for update then all i have is big sad face with a sorry ...

well some problem with my computer so can't access Net ( smart brains i m posting this from phone😆 )

so update may be late by a couple of days ( hopefully😳)

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 11

I m way too nervous than excited coz for the first time i m planning for a date for a girl ... not just a girl but special girl ... it was always very easy for me to get a girl actually they them themselves on me ... but madhu is different ... she is very special and must be treated one ...i m planning from past week for making everything worth for her ...

" bittu ji i told orchids not roses " i shouted

roses ? they are old fashioned and i know madhu hates it ... she loves blue orchids ...Today is the big day ... it ought to be good coz i have worked hard here ...i went to check the dress that i have specially designed for her ...

" the dress is ready ? " i asked the designer

" yup RK ... its perfectly ready " she said

I examined the dress ...umm ... it was fine ...nooo... it wasn't fine ...damn the neck is too low ... she will kill me ...

" Shenaya what the hell is this ???!! the neck is low ... correct it before the after noon " i warned before walking away

I sat in the car and my phone buzzed ... muffin , the name flashed

" hey muffin " i told with a smile

" where are u ? ... i m hell bored sitting here alone ? ... when will your shooting be over ? ... why aren't you taking me with you .?.,... are you cheating me with that new heroine of u " she bombarded with questions

one thing i learned having a serious gf ... girls will bombard you with questions and you need to store it in ur mind with care and answer to everything convincingly ...

" muffin relax ... i m on the way to house ... i was in shoot ... my shoot is almost over ... you can relax in house preparing for semester ...and finally NO i m not cheating on you ... the heroine sucks " i m good , ain't i ?

I didn't tell madhu that i m planning something for her ... duh!! its a surprise ... i want to see her big almond eyes grow wide seeing everything i planned for her ... if i had worked as hard for my exams as i worked for this date i would have passed with distinction ...

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I was hiding behind the window looking at madhu as she came out from the bath room and look at the gift box that i had placed on the bed with a note that says...

Dear Muffin ,

You know i m bad with words ... all i want to say is i m dieing to see you in this dress ... i want to just for me ...

Love'

RK.

A wide smile adorned her face reading that ... i saw her taking her phone to call me but oopz my phone is switched off ...

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I saw madhu get out from the car looking like an angel in the dress i was just staring at her forgetting everything until she called my name ...

" rishu ? "

" gorgeous " i said

" thanks " she told with a blush

i put my hands around her and pulled towards me ...

" for the first time i feel like telling i m lucky " i said

" you look handsome " she said

" all for u baby " i said with a wink

We both walked into the hall i have booked exclusively for us ... but the sight there killed me ... the hall wasn't decorated as i ordered it to be ... the hall was filled with pink baloons ... Omg am i in any child's b'day party ... i looked at madhu whose face reflected amusement and supressing a laugh ... of course why won't she ... it looked anything but romantic ... now i could not even blame anyone as i don't want to return to my angry and arrogant mood on our first official date ...

I maintained a smiling face and took madhu to the table ... i pulled a chair for her and she sat ...

" its good " she said

i just smiled ... what else to reply ...

At least the table was good with good table cloth and fragrance candle ... i held madhu's hand and caressed it with my thumb ... that was different but felt good ... i turned to the waiter and ordered to serve food ... the bought the food and placed the plates before us ... Madhu opened with excitement ...i know how much she loves food so this is the best way to win her heart ...

My expression turned as if i saw a ghost when madhu opened the plate covering the food ... For christ sake it was a Lobster and madhu is alergic to it ... she jerked up with a shriek ...

" what the f**** " she swore

" where is the b**** manager " i shouted ... a man in late 30's ran towards us

I gave him a piece of mind when he apologised for the mistake ... Madhu asked me to calm down and i followed the same ... for a better start i ordered french wine ... The most unexpected happened ... when i tossed the cork of the bottle the B***** drink showered out everywhere specially on my Coat ...

i looked at madhu's calm expression change to a anger filled hurricane ... i spoiled our first date and officially i m doomed ... madhu walked out without gving me a look ... i could have killed the whole staff but i had something better to do i.e. to run behind my gf ...

madhu was standing leaning on the car turning her back to me ...i stood behind her ...

" madhu before you storm at me i want to tell you that whatever happened was very bad and i m terrribly sorry ... trust me muffin i wanted to do everything spl but everything ruined ... its not my day i guess ... plzzz don't get angry ... i swear i ll make things better time ..." i stopped my lines seeing her turn to see me

i was trying to read her expressions when she suddenly started to laugh and hugged me ...

" u r so cute " she said ... does that mean i look like a clown ?

Anyways i guess she is not angry anymore ... that means i m still alive ./... yipeee ...

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I looked at the surroundings wierdly ... i can't believe The super star RK is sitting in a road side shop having dinner ...When madhu told me this idea of first date in her favorite Chat Shop near her college i wanted to refuse ... but i can't get myself to say a no seeing her hopeful face specially after how well i spiled the so planned date due o those SOBs in restaurant ...

Madu was wearing a black fur coat covering the top of her dress ( which i actually found better than the actual dress ) ... i had a cap and big glasses hiding half my face ... i don't want tmr's headlines to be " RK caught with his Gf in road side shop " ...

A boy in late teens came to take our orders ... madhu ordered half of it which i didn't understand ... then she said something in the boy's ear and he went smiling ...i looked at her curiously she just shrugged her shoulders ... ...

Later the boy returned with candle and matches ... madhu lighted it and placed on the table ...

" isn't perfect candle light dinner ? " she asked looking at me with those big brown eyes sparkling with joy ...

The food was served in one plate and knowing madhu now i don't want to question ... we shared our food , plate , words , feel , love and silence ...

after dinner i went near the car when madhu held my hand ... i looked at her
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" lets walk " she said

We began to walk and she bought two kulfi for HERSELF ( i m not complaining but i love kulfi ) ... we were walking long time in silence ... this all felt awkward ...

" rishab " she said

" ummm "

" this is not we " she said

" pardon "

" this slow slow shy types hawa hawa look look ... this doesn't suit us " she said

i stopped and looked at her

" so what is us ? " i asked

" we are ourselves ... not fake we fight ,we share things , we are spontaneous ... we can't just walk like this ... i m not made for this " she said with such a cute look that i wanted to eat her

I pulled her towards me and put my arms around her ...

" so is this us ? " i asked

Sh nodded no ... i looked questioningly ... Her hands crawled in my hair and she pulled me towards her until our lips met ... That moment was soothing ... i won't lie that i haven't kissed before but it was never like this ...this was something not just the demand of body but it was something beyond that ...i felt my heart beat for the first time ... it felt like my first kiss ... The blissful moment ended few seconds later ... she looked into my eyes ...

" this is us ..." she said before running to the car

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In a hurry

hope u all like

This SS is probably over ... i guess !!!! ummm not sure ...
anyways there will not be any update till 22 of this month ( if world don't end on 21 ) 😆 coz of my exams ...

After that it will either be epilogue or one chapter of full romance before the epilogue ... depends on my mood

so thank u all ... wish me luck 4 exams

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Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

awesome update

atleast rishbala ne yahan toh kiss kiya

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Wow !!! That was a beautiful update :) and don't worry the world isn't ending on 21st :P

Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago

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840216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

gr8 update yaar, but very short. plz don't end it so soon. I love this ff so much. Pl update soon and a long update

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Tina Saigal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Loved the first kiss of Rishab.. Loved the update.. Pls PM me the next update.. Thank you

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Simple-Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Awesome update..👏 All the best for your exams..Plzz give us one part filled with cute & romantic RK & Madhu scenes before prologue.😳.Continue soon..😊.