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lehr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

congrats for the new story dear.

awesome concept.

continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

CONGRATS for starting new FF...

thanx for pm...

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fatema_007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

nice concept..
loved the introduction part very much
plz continue soon 😊

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awesome start dear...

loved it..

waiting for update...

continue soon pls..

moni..

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7
congrats for the new ff Add me in ur pm list

waiting for updates

added you...
thanx dear...😃

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet
Hey Congo Dear..!!! You kept your promise...

So the new FF... Yipppeee...!!!

Lvd the quoted intro...

CS ne aadi story batadi...

College romance hunn... I guess it will be fun reading...

Waiting 4 1st part... Thnx 4 d PM...

thank you so much...😃
am nt good at writing poems and all...
thats why all quotes...😆

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
hwww my maanu ko book worm bna diya😆😆
nice yaar waiting

arrey i have still put a decent pic...
i wanted a pic in which he s wearing specs...
but didn't get that...🤣
anyways...thanx...😃

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maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Mdworld

arrey i have still put a decent pic...
i wanted a pic in which he s wearing specs...
but didn't get that...🤣
anyways...thanx...😃

mee waiting

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

FOR ALL THOSE WHO WANT TO ABOUT THE STORY...ITS SORT OF CINDERELLA MALE VERSION...🤣

**PART 1**

Maan beta have some juice...will make you fresh...
sawitri khuranna aka dadi spoke giving him a glass of juice...
while she took the book from his hand and kept it aside...
he smiled looking at his daadi...
maan beta why do you tend study so much ?? daadi asked caressing his head lovingly...
what else should i do dadi...he spoke finishing the juice in one go...
no one at home has time for me...they don't even feel like talking to me...
my existence doesn't matter for them...
do they even bother to see if am home or not...
do my existence matter for them...
DO THEY EVEN KNOW IF AM ALIVE OR NOT????? maan spoke in a painful voice...
MAAN...dare you utter another word like that!!!!

i know they are busy in their own life but beta they are earning for you only...
she tried making him ubderstand...
whats the use of such money dadi...
if they don't have time for me....maan spoke getting frustrated...
but beta then you also don't respect your mom...you should give her respect then
only you will...
but before she could complete he cut her in between...
maa...doe she even know what does that mean...
my mom s dead when i was 5...dad brought this lady home
just after my mom left her...and see the irony she had a 2 year old child...
and what am i told...
Maan this is your younger brother Rishabh...
when i said i wont accept them...instead of making me understand
what i get is a slap....he asked holding her shoulders...

what is my fault dadi...if i loved my mom so much...
she left me...
when i needed my dad most he was busy in earning ...
but beta pami itni buri nahin hai...she always talks to you nicely
but you only reply her back...
daadi...she only loves money...thats why she married dad...
i toh even think rishabh is his real son...
he would have been cheating my mom...
Maan....and he got a tight slap on his cheek...
dadi...he was shocked...
ap bhi.....he spoke as tears came out...

maan you crossed all your limits now...
when you don't know the entire truth you should not assume it yourself...
so dadi tell me the truth...am waiting...he asked confronting her...
no maan...its not the right time...
when you will accept pami whole heartedly that day i will tell you the truth...
when you don't respect her then what the use of telling you the truth
when at the end you wont understand her...

acha...then why does she always pampers Rishabh and not me??? he asked...
whenever i come down i always see her running behind Rishabh oh sorry RK...
now what will you say...

(meet RK aka Rishabh Khuranna)😆

maan you are just not ready to accept the truth that someone else can take
your mother's place...
just for once try to be nice to her...and see if she loves you back or not...
all your favourite food is cooked by her...and don't forget RK is her own child...
you never gave her importance ...so its bound to happen...
its quite natural she will love him more...
i accept your dad doesn't gives you time...
beta but he loves you like anything...
you are studying hard so that you can take KC to its new height...
so that you can make Mamta(maan's first mom) proud of you...

but there s a life outside also...
get out from books beta....dadi please!!!
beta but one question...if you hate pammi so much...
then why do you love Rishabh so much...
daadi because when i used to cry alone...he used to come and cheer me up...
he was not at fault at whatever happened....he spoke...
but pami aunty has spoiled her a lot!!!he complained
Maan she s your mom...
Maan get one thing very clear learn to repect Pammi as a women...
she has gone through a lot...
learn to love then only you will get love...
love??? i don't even know what it is??? he asked feeling amused...

beta you know what love is but just don't know how to show it...
she smiled and got up taking the now empty glass of juice...
whatever...he spoke looking in other direction...
now get ready you are getting late...
hmm....and he saw the time...
oh no...am late again....and rushed to the washroom...

sawitri came out and saw pammi standing at the door with tears in her eyes...
ye lo peela diya juice tumhare bete ko....she spoke handling her the empty glass...
pammi nodded and moved from their...
when sawitri spoke...
he will accept you one day beta...
and will love you like his mother....pammi turned and hugged her...
when will this happen maa...i can't see him like that...
lets just pray...some one soon make his realise importance of love...
sawitri smiled partying her...
she wiped her tears...he will soon realise that his feelings for you are love and not hatred..very soon beta...very soon...

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oho...geet beta utho...
its already 10:00...college nahi jana??? rano shook geet for the nth time...
just 2 more minutes...
oh god geet grow up...you are already in college...abi
bhi iss ladki se subah time se nahi utha jata...
pta nahin shaadi ke bad iska kya hoga....geet completed smiling...
rano shook her head...geet kissed rano's cheek...and wished...
good morning...
10 o'clock kis ki good morning hoti hai geet!!!!
ab don't waste time and get ready for college...
oye teri...10 bj gae...why didn't you wake me up....geet complained...

he babajee...mai iss ladki ko subah 8:00 bje se utha rai hoon...
madam toh alarm mere liye lgati hai...hai na...
so that i come to know that its your time to get up and i should start with my
mission to wake you up!!!!! Rano scolded...
arrey mumma...gussa kyun hoti ho...after all am your only daughter...
see your brother...he has already left for his work and you...
mumma he s elder than me...how can you compare him with me....geet complained...
geet ...no more argument...and according to me you were getting late for your college...
arre haan...geet just rushed to her washroom...

maa mere kapde nikal dijiye mere wardrobe se....geet spoke from the washroom...
dekha...iss ladki ka saara kaam mujhe krna padta hai!!!!
uff...

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arrey geet breakfast to krti jaa...
ni maa am already late...
she was about leave when she remembered something...
she just rushed back...
and kissed her father's pic that was hanging on wall...
and rushed out...
bye maa...she shouted...
bye beta...rano spoke with tears in her eyes...

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ok now...
difference between my maan and ghsp msk...🤪
1.)my ff's maan starts studying when he s angry while msk does tai-chi...
2.)he wears specs🤓 while msk wears aviators😎...🤣
while other difference i want you guys to tell me...

PRECAP: mai pareshan...pareashan pareshan...

NEXT:PART 2
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Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago