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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Mom is gussa between fights of kids.
She doesn't want family name to cum
Out. N is tired to see one another taking
Revenge.
The convo between Mom n Maan was gud.
Dad is guilty. Maan is being stubborn not
To bring Geet back. Maan is also right
according to his POV.


Geet shocked to see whole Khuranas over there.
N quite shocked to see Mom sweetly talking wid
Her instead of outburst
Sje is confused by turn of events. N thinking
Wat to do or not.
Maan giving her nice attitude. Nice going. I m
Wid Maan.
Geet ki toh entry ho gayi but Maan usse bhaV
Nahi dena chahiye.

Loving the flow of story. Go as u have
Envisioned. Its entertaining.

Continue soon.

Thanks for your analysis dear...

\itst not tit for tat story...

lets see how things turn up in Km

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Wow, i wasnt expecting this.Rather interesting turn. Tho i felt hurt for Maan that "she always had her way coz Maan's parents always supported her".

But still its a much needed change,loved it.

Thanks for your comment dear...
i will love reading your analysis
t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet coming back home

now how will he manage to stay away from her
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Wonderful part.. Now Maan's parents had step into make the decision to bring Geet back home. Yes, in the midst of fighting they had forget their family reputation.

Maan is such a gem. Thou he isn't liking Geet to be back home, yet he always remain the good son to his parents.

Now Maaneet will be under the same roof. This going to be a tough game.

Looking forward for next part... 😃

yes dear.. Parents have to step in when in anger and ego kids go on doing anything and not realizing the result...
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross


wow
the story took an unexpected and interesting and exciting turn!
i loved the update!
amazing superb too good fantabulous
i think i have run out of superlatives and adjectives right now to describe the update
really awesome!


just one request
can we have them sharing a room please
it would be fun and intriguing to see how they tackle the situation
as to according to the past till what you have updated till date they hadn't shared a room before
see it would be really interesting to see them in a totally different turf

waiting eagerly for more
continue soonnn

Thank you thank you so much for you wonderful wrods always dear...

it is so encouraging...

well for room sharing, you have to wait a little as She is in house just as DIL not his wife...

hope you like it ahead too

tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

i jus loved the turn of eventsdiii
though they are more like shock 😛
nw rootna manana ka session can be for 24/7 😉
and the precap is umm interesting
pata nhi wat both my di's r upto
update soon

Thank you so much dear for your beautiful words...

hope you like the story ahead too..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

u don't need to be afraid at all

bcs u r doing a wonderful job here and I am loving the way it is progressing
cant wait for the next one
I wonder what muskan has demanded
hehehe
but I am totally with her;)

Thank you so much word...

you have no idea how much your words encourage me...

and for Muskan's request... i will try my best

don't want to let her down. my fingers crossed

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Posted: 12 years ago
di when will be the next update can u tell😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

shocked!!!

now geet will be available to him 24*7, so can taunt her more...
can get all pay back from her...haina...because maan keliye pyaar is nothing but TIT FOR TAT...
its not that i am supporting geet...but the way maan does all things as a tit for tat..that i don't like.. after maan through sidharth out also,i can't even forget that party thing...

and i too agree dear he didn't do anything for his love in past..

loved the update dear
nicely written

Lets see what happens in Km...
dear everyone here have theri own POV and I respect everyones view dear.
Maan was never allowed to stop her from dancing... she in front of danced in arms of other...
being a man these things have gonedeep within his heart and all he knows that he never had any right to stop her from dancing with anyone then why today...how does he suddenly get right today and why should he take this right...
he never allured her for job and he is doing everything to make her go away from him not as tit for tat...
she herself does not expect a warm welcome from Maan after what happened between them in past...
there is more to what happened between them in past
Still dear i respect yours and everyones view coz everyone has their own way of thinking and justifying situation...
i will only say both were wrong to some extent... kuch jyada kuch kam
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 25

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Thanks again to Shruthe for this awesome banner
Thanks to all of you for your love and encouragement.🤗
I have replied to few of you. Please check from pg 34-36.
This update is dedicated to Muskan as its as per her request. I just hope dear that I am somewhere upto your expectation.
At this point of their relation this much is all I could show.
Thanks Shruthe for pics dear.

Maan and Geet reached KM. Geet quietly just followed Maan, everything was so confusing and in between who wants to play with fire.

At the door Savitri stopped Geet, she was standing with Aarti Thal. Maan was so irked and he progressed to go in his room but "Maan wait, You both should enter in the house together, yeh subh hota hai. Bahu ke kadam subh tareh se parne chahiye"

"Maa please, now don't make me do all this"

"Whatever is problem between you both, I will not interfere but I want good and peaceful omen for this house, so just stand for a while and then do whatever you feel. I will not interfere between you two."

So Geet entered house with Aarti done by Savitri. Geet was undergoing thru a completely different sensation, coming back to her husband's house. No no it was her house too, this is where she belongs.

A different level of confidence surrounded her. It's her house, everything here is hers, including her husbands Maan. Yes he is hers ' kewal roothe hain, mana parega. A small smile crept her face as she felt this whole new sensation.

So different it was, staying away form her house and trying to believe he is hers and now it felt all so natural. She just bent down and touched Maa-bauji's legs for blessing while Maan immediately left for his room.

She looked at Maan's going figure and made a small face "Maa he is very upset with me"

Savitri caressed her cheek "tou mana le'bohut pyar kerta hai tujhse, isliye narazgee bhi jyada hai"

Savitri took Geet to her room, which was just next to Maan's. While Geet setteled

"Geet, I want to ask you something beta" "Ji Maa" she made Geet sit down on bed.

"You never liked Maan, how did you fall in love with him beta. I mean you both were never together after that"

This was the question lingering in Savitri's mind. Geet looked down "Its Ok if you don't want to share, its between you both."

"Nahi Maa, you should know. Only I am feeling little shy to confess all" her cheeks became little red.

"Koi nahi, but tell Maan soon. This must be going in his mind too."

"Nahi Maa, you are our mother, I want to say everything to you." And then Geet narrated everything as how her feeling changed how and how it increased and how the feeling went deep within her'

{Gals you will know later'}

Savitri got up, caressed Geet's head "I wish you both too be happy together always."

Will walking away

"Always remember you are his wife and its your right to make sure he is all yours" she gave a smile and left.

"Maa" Savitri turned "I have a question too"

Savitri came calmly and sat beside Geet "ask, whatever you want to ask"

"Ji woo, Maan" "hmm bolo beta" "Maan confessed his love to me on first night, after that too he confessed his love twice or thrice. But after that he never expressed his love to me by anyways. Did his love for me truly fade away as he claims."

"No, not at all. He will claim so but I know, he always loved you and still love you. But he was and is scared. He was scared later that his love would be insulted by you or broken in harsher way' he did not had guts to take it and unlike you, to save himself and his heart, he took the easy way to keep himself away from you"

"But beta, you are a women, a strong women. You should not get scared like him and take easy path that he took."

Geet came closer, placed her head on Savitri's shoulder "No Maa, I will not. I will get his fear away, trust me."

Maan was in his room and knew very well Geet was in next room and to stay here forever. His parents wished her stay here and thus he will never ever ask her out or will let her out.

By the knowledge of Geet staying here, it was her house too, she was part of this family a different kind of unknown feeling surrounded Maan too. But his anger and narazgee did not let him feel what he was actually feeling.

That whole day Maan and Geet stayed in there own world, Maan trying to shove away the new feel, just wanting to be as usual while Geet was absorbing the feeling. A different confidence glew on Geet's face.

Next morning, Geet woke, got freshen up and after bath, with hair still wet, left for kitchen, she wanted to see Maa early morning.

"you are already awake" she said welcoming her, Geet smiled.

"Its time for Maan to wake up too, do you want to take tea to his room" Geet eagerly nodded yes.

As Geet entered Maan's room with tea

She was feeling nervous like a newly wed bride. It was not office where you bring tea or coffee for your boss. Here she was with morning tea to wake up her darling husband. Lost Geet did not realize she was shivering a little with cold and water droplets from her wet hair have already made thin material of her kurti wet and it was sticking to her skin.

As Geet came near Maan in her slow step, her eyes got stuck on his sleeping figure of Maan. He looked as peaceful and innocent as her real Maan.

As Geet placed the tea on table, she got to see her image on the mirror, it was then she realized how wet her hair was She got bundle of her hair to move it but as she did so, water droplets from her hair fell directly on Maan's face. Maan in sleep, made his face a little with wet sensation, rubbed his cheeks and turned to other side.

Geet could not move her gaze from him and something naughty came to her mind, she again jerked water on his face. This time Maan got irritated "who is it" Geet moved away a little but Maan in anger pulled her making her fall on him, her lips slightly touching his cheeks

An entirely different sensation took over them' Maan for a while got lost in her fresh fragrance and feel of wet hair that were slightly touching his face while Geet's heart started beating fast by this closeness. To calm her heart she placed her head softly on his chest' Maan closed his eyes to feel everything. His body responses to her were openly ditching his mind. His heart started beating at abnormal rate too. His hands in response to this closeness went to her back, not even realizing she was all wet.

This burned Geet completely, she shakingly placed her other hand around his neck

"Your feel is burning me Maan' you could burn me with your one deep look, this touch will turn me into ashes"

Maan himself did not know what he was going thru, he pulled her closer to take her fragrance "lie.. everything you say is lie. You don't feel anything for me" and with that he pulled her harsher towards him

"Its only me who have desired you, not you."

"I have, I have Maan in so many ways but to save me, I only went on hurting you"

She looked up, shifting a little to sit, bringing her beautiful fresh raw face in front of him'

He got lost in her beautiful face so close to him "many a times in past too this hand has desired to touch you, to be in your arm, away from this world to entire different world of my desire for you but when my mind realized it got so upset every time that it ended hurting you more'"

With this Maan jerked her away, realizing the harsh truth, he got back in his control and looked angrily towards her

"And now your mind has no problem coz I am Maan Singh Khurana"

With that he got up to leave "I will make you trust I love you in all ways and there is no reason behind it. Only that I love you form my soul body and mind"

"I will appreciate if you try better ways to prove what you are claiming, rather than just throwing yourself at me. Though I will suggest not trying coz I will never believe your stories." Geet had slight tears in her eyes, but she looked down to hide it

"Your tea" she forwarded her hand, he took the tea and left out to get newspaper.

Geet stood alone in his room "you will Maan, you will trust me. Your heart will compel you to trust me. "

She was lost in her thought again when a voice came form behind "Mam" She turned to a servant standing there

"Mam I am Nakul, I am here to fix Sir's room"

"I will do it myself" "Ok Mam' "and yes don't say anything about this to your sir. He don't need to be bothered for such small things."

Nakul went away all confused. First the knowledge that their Sir was already married has stirred whole day sensational gossip among servants and then he was perplexed'

"If she is so nice to him, why were they separate'" he went to share news with his colleagues.

Next - Every one laughing at Maan... Maan irked why?

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago

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