CUT! - Rishbala FF UPDT: Part 19 - Page 124 (END) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
very well written and thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Really nice update.

Thanx for PM.

PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: PrittB


Aww thanks so much! Don't worry, I won't be adding her into my FF this time! No Sikky, Kuku, still considering Radha (since she's RK's mom)!


Yayyy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Woow!! This is amazing <3 plz plz plz continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Rishabh watched as Madhu walked into the studio. He went to talk to her.

"Ready for today!?"

She smiled, "More than you Rish...well actually I have to go change and get makeup done. So if you'd excuse me."

Rishabh stepped out of the way and let her go.

In twenty minutes, she walked out in Madhubala's clothes and makeup. She got on set, as did Rishabh. They both placed themselves in the same position they were in when they had last stopped shooting.

"ACTION!"

RK suddenly pushed away from the kiss. Madhu, who was suddenly feeling every emotion possible called his name quietly.

"RK..."

His back was towards her and he raised his hand to tell her to be quiet.

"This isn't right," he said with clear pain in his voice.

She looked down, hurt. "But..." she couldn't speak anymore. She was holding in tears and she knew, the minute she spoke again, they'd be let out.

RK turned to face her and saw her upset; he placed his finger under her chin and raised her face to face him. "Why are you upset?"

Madhu swallowed deeply, "I...I...lo..." she couldn't speak anymore. She didn't want her tears to flow.

"You?"

Madhu nodded her head.

"You wh..."

"CUT!"

Rishabh and Madhu turned to look at Karan.

"What'd we do this time? Too intense again Karan?" Rishabh joked.

"Very funny. Rishabh, you forgot a line." Karan explained himself.

"No I didn't."

"I know you didn't. I actually added a line in my head and now you're going to say it."

Karan told Rishabh the line he wanted added into the scene.

"ACTION!"

RK turned to face her and saw her upset; he placed his finger under her chin and raised her face to face him. "Why are you upset? I'm an animal, I know. I didn't mean that."

Madhu swallowed deeply, "No, I...I...lo..." she couldn't speak anymore. She didn't want her tears to flow.

"You?"

Madhu nodded her head.

"You what?"

Madhu looked deep into his eyes and saw her feelings reciprocated. She knew he wanted it and she did to. So she did what she never thought in a million years she would. She pushed herself into him. RK was caught off guard and fell onto their bed. Suddenly Madhu's lips were on his once again.

RK hadn't known she felt the same way. He decided to follow her movements. He gently parted his lips, as their kiss got more intense.

"CUT!"

Madhu pulled her lips off of Rishabh but remained on top of him. Rishabh turned his head to stare at Karan.

"KARAN! WHAT NOW?!" Rishabh yelled.

"Nothing actually. Neither of you move! Just wanted to remind you that in the upcoming scene, think of your family."

"What?" Madhu asked confused.

"Just put this in your head, "If my parents were to watch this, what would they think?' alright? Now Madhu place your lips on Rishabh again."

Rishabh turned his face to stare at Madhu and Madhu began to come close. She whispered into his lips, "Karan's crazy."

Rishabh laughed just as her lips touched his again.

"ACTION!"

RK began moving back into his bed with Madhu. He moved their wall of pillows with one hand as Madhu and him remained in their deep kiss. He laid his head down on a pillow and then turned himself over to be on top of Madhu. He continued to kiss her. His lips began moving down her jaw towards her chin and down her neck. Madhu put her head back as RK kissed her just below the chin. He sat up and began taking off his shirt...

"CUT!"

Rishabh and Madhu turned their heads to stare at Karan again.

"If you keep yelling cut Karan, I'll get out of the mood." Rishabh told Karan.

"Actually, you're not allowed to take off your shirt."

"You're getting so specific! Then get me something else to put under this shirt."

"No, I mean, Rishbala haven't gotten to that stage yet. Taking off clothes is still far from now. So just lay back down on your onscreen biwi. Lips on her neck, now."

Rishabh laid back on top of Madhu. She put her head back as Rishabh placed his lips back onto her neck.

"ACTION!"

RK's lips moved down from her neck to her chest. His lips met the neckline of her anarkali suit. He began following her neckline and went back up to her lips.

Suddenly he sat up.

Rishabh looked towards Karan, "I can't do this," he said out of breath.

"CUT! What? Why?! You were doing so well!"

"Too intense don't you think?" Rishabh looked down at Madhu who was looking at him with confused eyes.

"And you were going to take off your shirt..." Karan laughed. He continued, "Fine, just kiss her again on her lips, pull yourself off of her but keep one of your arms around her, then start the next scene. Places everyone!"

Just before Rishabh's lips touched Madhu's, she asked him a question, "What was that?"

Rishabh didn't answer her; he placed his lips on top of hers.

"ACTION!"

RK kissed Madhu's lips one last time before he pulled off her. He was out of breath. He sat up and leaned against his headboard. Madhu sat as well.

RK put his arm around her and just stared at her.

Madhu looked up at him and smiled. RK kissed her forehead.

"CUT!"


Note to readers: There was a lot of "cutting" in this part. If anyone couldn't keep up with it or didn't like it, please do let me know so that i don't do that again (even though that's the concept I was aiming for, I could try to make it a bit easier to read)! Also, please keep in mind that the serial in my FF has progressed much further ahead than the serial in real life, hence the kissing!

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
they kissed...?? they actually kissed even though in serial...

omg..that was too soon to get it...hahaha..

short n sweet update..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Shruti21

they kissed...?? they actually kissed even though in serial...

omg..that was too soon to get it...hahaha..

short n sweet update..continue soon


Ahaha in the serial which is in my FF, they've gotten far ahead with filming. That's why they've begun to get close. I'm not following the present situation in real life where they're still at Karva Chauth. But thanks!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Very Nice Update Pritt


Thank you!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
lol...hehehe

serial is running wid such a slow pace..that i doubt whether they will show diwali celebration or not...

its highly irritating...:\
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Wow Wow Wow...they kissed!! On the lips!! Even if it was just a scene they were shooting :P

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