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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Dear,as u r intoducing characters,my interest in it is increasing😊 pls,continue soon !!!!

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Lazy_Beanss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Update soon. . .

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

The star cast is fabulous...but where is Khushi...obviously arnav'a soul mate????

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

chapter two:
Angry with their mothers they had no option
left other than to follow their mothers' decision.
Well if there is a law there
are loopholes in the law too.
There was no mention whether they can own any
other business other than their fathers' business. So according to their
mothers' wish they remained partners but...they had their own business too.

Arnav was adopted by his bua who had child
called Anjali and Aradhana. Anjali was not that attached to Aradhana as she was
attached to Arnav. Anjali and Arnav were cousins but their bonding was like
siblings.

There were other members in the Raizada Mansion. Akash, Arnav's best friend and partner
in AR Designs. He was son of Manorama.

Manorama was the elder daughter-in-law of
Devyani Raizada.



Arjun like Arnav started his own business
with his cousins. Arjun loved Arnav but the accusation made him hate Arnav. He
respected Arnav earlier and in childhood he was like twin of Arnav. But time
passed by and the circumstances made every possible change except his
character.(similar like Arnav). There were very few things where Arjun and
Arnav differed. One of them was attitude and outlook towards WOMEN. Arjun
didn't believed in marriage, commitments or relationships like Arnav, but
unlike Arnav he kept a great distance from Women. Arnav had no inhibitions to
sleep around. Well Arjun was not a flawless person. Arjun was impulsive,
hard-hitting which was again not found in Arnav's character. Arnav was a
workaholic Arjun wasn't. Strikingly their food habits were quite similar
although Arnav was a diabetic and Arjun wasn't.

Arjun started his business with his cousin
from his mother's family, the Maheswaris. He had two cousins Payal and Mohit.
Both of the cousins were very attached to Arjun. Arjun joined his maternal
uncle's company JM Fabrics. Payal and Akash liked each other and they were in a
relationship. Arjun as well as Arnav never had any problem regarding the
thought of Payal being the cousin of Arjun and Akash being the cousin of Arnav
were in a relationship. Their enmity was at a very personal level and neither
of them didn't want others to suffer for their problems. Both Akash and Payal
had tried to conciliate between Arjun and Arnav but till date the results were
futile.

Another interesting thing was the relation
between the Maliks-Raizadas-Maheswaris was hale and hearty. Only Arjun and
Arnav were friends turned foes. All of them wished that someday when they will
get suitable match they might realise that LIFE AND DEATH ARE IN THE HANDS OF
THE ALMIGHTY.

But when that day will come?

All were hoping to see the end of this cold
war between Arjun and Arnav.



Two years have passed and still things were
the same. Akash and Payal's engagement is in next month and the preparations
are in full swing. Their marriage will be held six months after their
engagement.



Our story will start now...

HEY...😉
scroll down to get introduced with Mohit,Payal,Akash,Anjali and Aradhana...

and before that don't forget to hit LIKE here...😊

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

So Arohi has to bend the strong willed Arjun...

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

chapter three:
A day at AR Designs,

ASR: Akash we will have the meeting at 2
p.m. call Jennifer now and ask her to make Lavanya ready for the photo-shoot. It
will be from 4 p.m.

Akash: ok Bhai. But I need to be free by 5.
I need to go somewhere.

ASR: not somewhere. Your somewhere is
Payal.

Akash: whatever. Yeah. Ok. I don't want to
be late like the last time. She will kill me.

ASR: how funny you have become Akash.
Earlier you used to be my mighty brave Bro who has now become a small kid
afraid of his mother types.

Akash: once you fall in love and when you
are supposed to get marry you will understand my situation.

ASR: that is the reason why I am not
interested in such commitments. I never go for such commitments where I will be
the loser.

Akash: Bhai, you are wrong, in LOVE there
is no win or loss. Once you fall in love you will realise its value. The only
problem with LOVE is you cannot understand it unless you fall in it. And once
you have fallen in LOVE you can't make one understand it.

ASR: well then I must say I am not going to
know about it.

Akash: upon you how you want to take it.'

ASR: ok, let's go else you will be
late(smirks)

Akash hurriedly picks up the file and
reaches the door.

Lavanya enters.

Akash: hey La. Get ready for the photo-shoot. You have
2 hours 15 mins.

ASR: Akash you go. I will follow you in 15
minutes.

Akash left. He knew why Arnav will be late
for 15 mins and what he will be doing.



In Arnav's cabin'..



La: thanks for giving me the scope. I am
really grateful to you. I don't know how will I return your favour.

ASR: you know it better than me, so come to
the point directly.

La bit her lower lip and walked towards
Arnav's chair.

Arnav was indifferent. La started opening
his coat, waistcoat and shirt meanwhile kissing him.

Arnav shared a lustful relation with
Lavanya. Lavanya too was not that sort of girl who would love. She too has
reasons to be in a physical relationship with Arnav. She was ambitious but did
not have such talent to reach the level. She was using Arnav as her ladder.
What she didn't know about Arnav that it is Arnav who was using her as a bait.

ASR believed money and women can get any
man in to his knees. When an important deal slipped from his hands and his
money or power were of no use he used Lavanya and he bagged everything what he
wanted.



He bit her lip and ravished her tongue.



Lavanya responded in moans.



She wanted to dug her finger nails on his
back or to give him a hickey''but she remembered the last time she did Arnav
pushed her away and had given a tight slap. He was not only wild but an
unleashed monster in bed. He would torture, but he did not want a single pain
or a single mark on his body. He was no less than a beast with women during
such intimate moments. But still women fell for him for him. After all he was
the biggest icon in India
when it came to fashion designers.



He threw her on the couch and went inside
the washroom. He didn't want to waste time or reputation. He took the
precaution and came back. When he went inside Lavanya stripped off into nudity.

He came back and went over her.

He thrusted hard into her and sucked her
br***ts till it swelled. He continued his act of in and out and he saw his watch.
Just seven minutes left. He gave a hard hit into her and squeezed and squashed
her br***ts until she cried out. He kissed her hard and pull out himself from
her and stood and kicked her dress which was lying in front of him and went
inside the washroom.

Lavanya wore the dress. She knew it was his
frustration on her. He didn't want her in this modelling campaign.

But it wasn't so. The real reason was
something else. Yesterday Aradhana came with a gang of friends in the house and
Anjali was very much indulged into matchmaking for Arnav. A stupid girl called
Arohi was their choice. She was a stupid so called Indian and traditional type
girl.

He liked none of them specifically; still
some were hopefully be in good in bed. But that girl; no way. He had a fight
with Aradhana this morning when she tried to make him understand that she and
Anjali would be married off soon and he needs someone to take care of. So they
are planning to get him married soon.

He went to attend the meeting. He bagged
the deal with ease. The photo-shoot was about to start.

So...how was it?? don't forget to hit a like before you scroll down to see who Arohi is and also Lavanya.
will finally Arnav have to give up his wishes and marry??
Will Arohi be the one to marry Arnav ?
stay tuned to see what happens next...
and please don't forget to comment whether you liked this chapter or not...

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

well obviously he wont marry arohi other wise where will khushi come from anyways loved it and thanks for the pm and plzzz update soon

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Fleur_de_Lis

@Fleur_de_Lis

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

My exams are still not over yet I am here…..because I am addicted to it !!!

Well Madhu di, Appy di, tia di, lazyleaves and sraddha I know how one feels when your pms are opened yet no comments or a like is not used !!!

Sorry if I missed any other writers….

But I wish that you all know that more than a writer myself I am a regular reader. And I religiously read, like and comment.(no offence silent readers…….!!!)

You all must be thinking that this girl told us that she will not be back before December Then??? Seeing me writing an update please don't think that I am ignoring or trying to prove that my so-called ff's are more important than reading and commenting...actually I have written two chapters before I took the leave……and many of them are PMing me to give at least a mini update…and you all being prolific writers know it better than me…how readers are worth for!!!

Appy di...remember…some of your readers made you discontinue your ff's….

Seeing this…I thought of giving at least one update and not testing their patience…and get bashing and something that discourages me

A very very sorry for not attending you all buddies and giving importance to all my readers…….after all my readers had the capacity to bash me and made my writings futile !!!

Well I know you all are also among the readers…so…won't you like to read a chapter more???

Please reply to this else I will think that you all are seriously thinking ill of me…

Thanks

Fleur_de_Lis

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago

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Fleur_de_Lis

@Fleur_de_Lis

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

A note for my dear readers….

Thank you for taking out your time in midst of busy schedules and works for reading my works….

A rose is not complete without its fragrance and colour

Likewise, a writer is not complete without its reader

Thanks to all my readers individually for reading my story…thanks to all who had been by my side and read and commented and interacted with me so far…I wish our journey will continue like this…and wish that you all will be at my side till the end of the story…

Nichuss…this chapter is dedicated to you and also those readers whom I had not mentioned…

for you all and your Arjun Malik(Karan Kundra)

And also to my dear readers who were eagerly waiting and very much excited for Khushi's entry…I will bring her in the next update…

till then check out the interaction between siblings and Arjun's encounter with….you have to read to get to know…

Thanks

Fleur_de_Lis

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago

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Fleur_de_Lis

@Fleur_de_Lis

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

a filler update before I announce my comeback officially

chapter four:

She tolerated it. But like the other girls she also wanted to see who will be that girl who will marry this beast someday.

There were two options.

Either ASR will no more be a beast

Or that girl will really be unlucky.

The second option was more likely.

Lavanya completed her photo-shoot and went away.

Arnav let Akash go and meet Payal.

He had some important phone calls to attend. He needed to go Shimla by next week. After that he needs to talk to that girl whom Anna had fixed for him. Anna is Aradhana's nick name given by Arnav. The rest of the family called her Anu.

Raizada Mansion

Arnav enters.

He takes the cup of black coffee from Anjali.

Arnav: di. Where is Anna?

Anjali: why?

Arnav: I need to talk about my marriage.

Anjali (shocked): are you serious Chotte?

Arnav: hmm.

Anjali doesn't say anything but she could understand something is cooking up in her bro's mind.

But what was cooking up was hard to tell.

She herself had no more trust on the institution of marriage anymore. And if Arnav weigh against her condition with his, she will have no answer. But every person is not like Shyam. Arohi is a good girl. But Arnav is adamant and her engagement and the disaster after that had made him bitterer about relations than earlier. But how could she make him understand that it had been three years about that matter and things have changed after Arnav came in her life and she is happy with her new sibling and family like old times and is not planning to get engaged or married with anyone soon until and unless she gets the right person.

Arnav enters Aradhana's room and saw her working on laptop.

Aradhana(looks at Arnav): wassup Chotte? (she winks)

Arnav: shut up and stop calling me in that name.

Aradhana: why only di (Anjali) can call you "chotte" ?

and then she throws a pillow at him and he saves himself from her attack and spilling of coffee.

Arnav: Anna listen yaar. What is this? Stop this.

He finishes his coffee and keeps the mug on the table.

Aradhana: not until you agree for marriage.

Arnav: with whom?

He picks up the pillow

Aradhana: a girl of course. I know you are not a gay.

Arnav: and what if I am really!

And he throws the pillow back to her.

Aradhana: bhaiyya'.

Arnav: ok I had come to tell you that I will marry any girl of your choice but in two conditions.

Aradhana: conditions !! uff'''what conditions?? Marriage is also a business for you.

Arnav: Don't have a doubt in that. 1^st, I need to talk to her before you all start planning the rituals and all. And 2^nd,I will terminate the marriage after six months if I am not happy with that girl or her performance as my wife.

Aradhana: what !!! how could you tell this?? No way. No girl would ever marry you on such terms. No way, I am going to inform Arohi about it. Remain single and flirt with all women in your office.

Arnav: I want to. But you only forced me about that matter. Believe me the contract is ready also. I just want a girl with guts.

Aradhana: you are simply crazy. One day you will cry for making such contracts and polluting the idea of marriage with such contracts.

Arnav: okay okay'enough'lectures'.so am I free??

Aradhana: of course. I can't get myself insulted for you. Disgusting bhaiyya'.

Aradhana was saying to herself: You need someone who can reply back your actions and words. Hope there could be some girl who can say "I will terminate Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada from my life as you had performed poorly"

Arnav was leaving the room but her self-talk was quite loud for Arnav.

He stopped at the door.

Arnav: I am waiting for that day Anna. Pray to your Devi Maiyya that I can meet her soon.

He left after that.

Devi Maiyya had some plans for him.

DM smiled quietly up in the heavens and said "TATHASTU"

(The idea of including DM in storyline is inspired from tia di. Sorry tia di for not taking permission beforehand.)

A week passed by. He has completed his Shimla trip and was in high hopes to bag the deal.

But he heard that this time the deal will be given to some SG group and not AR group.

"What !!" he said to himself. This was not an important deal like the Mallory's of Australia. But he has been working with Style of Shimla for three years or more and they always had given opportunity to newcomers. But after his entry he had been always praised and his ideas were always as fresh as a newcomer so there had been no replacement.

"who the hell is the designer of SG group? I need to meet him"

"SG replaced me?? ASR. Impossible"

His ego was hurt. He can't digest that his ideas can become old. He felt he is becoming like an old man and is no more important. A wave of insecurity touched him. But he became ASR again.

"why does it matter?"

"I am famous worldwide'so I don't need to think or worry about my fashion sense and creativity. It is that my designs has matured and not old".

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Arjun entered into the hospital to collect the reports of his mother and aunt's monthly medical check-up.

A girl bumped onto him. She was in a great hurry.

Girl: uff'.can't you see and walk.

Arjun: excuse me'.

Girl: what! Yes, excuse me

And then she left.

Arjun went straight towards the doctor's cabin. He saw the cabin closed. He went to the enquiry.

Arjun: Excuse me.

Receptionist: Yes.