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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...awesome update!!!
la thinks khushi is missing, NK is there & khushi is inside arnav's bedroom...haa haa haa!! could the situation get messier than this for him... 😆 😆
cant wait to read ahead...
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
When will we get the next update please ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
For those who are waiting the update is coming soonish 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Soniii... update already !

I'm so excited :D

Wanna read the whole thing :D
Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 9

-------------------------------Flashback-----------------------------------

''Open the door, Raizada, NOW!!!! I..I don't ha..have all day, Open it already..''

''I'll count to *hick* threee..eee..., before I ...ahahahahaha...three is soo funny...such a funny n..number that it rh rhymes with bee... buzzz...'' she started to jump up and down and clapped her hands all enthusiastically like a little child and totally forgot what her plan was.

After tiring herself out with all the over enthusiasm about the number three, Khushi leaned her whole body against his glossy white door and gently closed her eyes and started to hum some lullaby that her mother used to sing to her when she was feeling low.

Suddenly the next thing she knew, she fell flat on her face.

''You're a clever baby, aren't you?, You managed to open the door, You sexy wild BEAST'' she slurred, while trying to push herself off the cream carpeted floor, but managed to fall back on her face.

She peeped open her eyes and saw a black cat staring back at her.. Her mouth opened up into a 'O' shape and She jumped up, screaming like a red fox at night. She looked around.

Finally.. It hit her ...

She realised she wasn't at his house.

She just made a fool of herself in a complete strangers house.

She ran out as fast as her leg could carry her and ended up at another door.. she looked up and realised she was at the right destination. She Banged on the door and shouted for Raizada to open the door.

When there was no reply, she shouted 'FINE' and gave a hard kick on the door.

She slowly turned around and was about to leave, When suddenly she felt like she was flying.

****

Arnav heart skipped a beat when he heard her voice, but brushed it off thinking it was his imagination.

She isn't here, Arnav..Get a Grip on yourself ..

When he heard the door kick.

He casually got off his chair and made his way towards the door.

Looking through the peephole, he realised he wasn't imagining her... she was ACTUALLY outside his door in the early hours.

He opened the door without making a sound and grabbed hold of her waist and lifted her into the air and took her inside.

''I'm Flying like a bird, whoosh... Can you fly too? '' enquired Khushi.

Arnav's Lips curved into a half hearted smile and calmly said ''No, khushi.. I can't Fly''. ..

She is crazy,but cute..Just one of a kind.

He gently placed her on his bed and asked her to relax.

''I'll be back in a second, let me get you some water and aspirin'' Arnav said in a soothing tone.

Once he came back.. He was Shocked at the sight before him...

There in front of him Stood a creamy, smooth, curvy, delectable body that was completely naked, which was inviting him to do soo many naughty things that he dreamed about. Today was the first time he stared at her body and let it wander around each and every curve on that divine body of hers. She defiantly was one of a kind..She was a goddess...

****

Khushi was stumped.

She had no clue why Arnav was just standing there, rooted to the spot with his mouth wide open. In her intoxicated state, she moved closer and she decide to whisper out

''Are you a dog? hahaha.. You know dogs, they are soo adorable when they have their mouth wide open and when they dribble everywhere while their head is hanging out of a car, it looks like your dribbling too, You remind me of a puppy; a cute, cuddly one that doesn't bite ''; while delicately placing her soft hands on his scabrous cheek. She looked up, straight into his eyes.

What is wrong with him .. why isn't he responding? she thought .. Khushi moved her hand and place it on his heart. Her pupils dilated as she felt his heart for the first time.. ''Wow'' she sighed. It's amazing; it's beating as fast as mine. Her eyes became clouded and tears threatened to fall.

As soon as the tears streamed down her ever so perfect face, Arnav was snapped out of his trance.

-------------------------------End of Flashback----------------------------------------

****

''What?!?! Khushi's missing?!? Since when?!?'' NK yelled with worry as he pushed Arnav away.

''I don't .. I don't know, NK!!! sighed La.

''She was with us last night when we were watching and then by the time we left the theatre, we realised that she wasn't with us, I rang her mobile but it went straight to voicemail. I thought she went home and promised myself that I would check in on her, early in the morning but I went and she wasn't there. I'm soo worried about her ; I don't know what to do''. WE NEED TO FIND KHUSHI, QUICKLY, BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE. La's eyes that were brimming with tears, started to fall on their own accord.

NK went towards La and pulled her into a tight hug.

''Okay, fine. Calm down, Relax. Breath In and Breath out.. She is probably safe around here somewhere, We need to think where she could be''. NK said in a soothing voice, while holding her protectively.

''I have looked everywhere, NK.. That is why I'm Here..'' she sobbed into his scented neck.

But wait a second, Why would she be here at nana.. I mean Professor Raizada's house.? Why are you asking him? Why would he know? '' NK asked in a intriguing tone, he pulled her out of the hug and looked at her with his left eyebrow raised up.

La Looked him in the eyes and said '' I could ask the same question too'' she sniffed.

''Well, I'm .. I'm ..err how do I say this.. well .. err.. let's just say ..erm .. that we are... errr..''

''OH SPIT IT OUT ALREADY.. JHEEZE, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD .. LA, IM HIS COUSIN''. Shouted Arnav who was stressed on what his next plan would be and how he will get out of this situation. If La or NK find out.. His career could be on the line.

Both of them turned around and faced a angry Arnav.

Suddenly a phone started ringing.

****

Khushi thought to herself, wondering why on earth was NK at Arnav's house, especially over the weekend.. And was also trying to recollect the memories on what had happened the night before between her and Arnav.

But Instead of thinking about the night before, like a normal person would do, she was more curious on why NK was here, especially this early.

She quickly put two and two together and created a massive mess in her idiotic, over imaginative, Hung-over brain of hers. She concluded that maybe Arnav was sleeping with NK and that he was ... GAY!!

That's the reason he didn't want to sleep with me. I can't believe it, Arnav is Gay! Why didn't I think of this before.. Duurh.. I'm such a idiot .. Why didn't I think of this before.. I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM!! she thought to herself.. But her thoughts were soon interrupted when she heard La's panicking and determined voice from downstairs. 'WE NEED TO FIND KHUSHI''..

''WHAT THE ****?!?! Sh**, Sh** , Sh**.. What do I do now.. ? My poor mate is soo worried about me, and what a I doing..I'm Sitting in Arnav's bed, wondering if he's gay.

GUPTA YOUR SUCH A IDIOT. YOU NEED TO PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER. YOU CAN'T LET THE PAST RUIN YOUR FUTURE her inner self told her.

She got up. Looked everywhere.. frantically searching for her clothes that were no where to be found. ''dammit, where did he put my clothes?'' I need to calm La down, before she does or says something silly .

She Slumped back into bed with a annoyed look on her face.. feeling hopeless. Khushi felt something poking into her thighs, she moved the covers and saw her phone. 'YES' she yelled.. she jumped up and switched her phone on .

She looked at the many missed calls that La gave her, She felt soo guilty for not telling anyone where she was. ''I'm such a terrible friend'' she looked up trying to hold the tears.. ''Come on khushi, be strong, you will stort this mess, Just explain to La and say that you're safe and that you will see her later''

Khushi held the phone in her trembling hands and began to dial.

****

''Who's phone is ringing?!? Hurry up and answer will you .. '' Arnav asked.

Both NK and La searched their phones and pulled it out.

''Oh, It's mine.'' La said quietly.

She looked at the caller I.D and started to jump and down with a huge smile on her face.

Arnav and NK were puzzled by her reaction. One minuet she was depressed, the next she was happy.

La answered the call ..

''KHUSSSHIII !! WHERE ARE YOU? Are you SAFE ?!?!'' ...

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Hey Guys.. Sorry for updating late.. True be told.. I'm Not a writer and never will be,Writing is not my strongest point.. the ones who know me.. Know I Only Write Weird/Silly posts.
.. BUT because of all the Lovely friends of mine, they with soo much pressure made me 😆..
and you can't really get out of it .. LOL ..
Sorry, If this not up to scratch/make sense.. Please, Don't eat me alive!!! .. Peace x :) ..😆
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
r

Soni you dont have to be a writer to write but to be a genius to write.

Who would have thought that the story will take such a turn? :-D

You came up with such a smart idea. Arnav being gay :-D That was the highlight of the update. I cant stop laughing about that

Since La now knows how is NK related to Arnav and she also knows what is between Khushi and him I feel things will change Wait they might not!

Fari i.e. farah53 when are you updating the next part?


Soni id not for you we would never have got this twist in the story :-)


Tu raapchik hai :-P


Love you and you gotta write some more. Itne mein hamara kya hoga? ;-)


Loved loved loved it :-)
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited:

Soni this is easily the funniest update of The Mistake so far.

Dare you call it a filler.

As I was reading I had all the most exaggerated expressions on my face. More than twice I told my sis ke yeh Soni ne kya likha hain. Mein toh hil gayi 😛

She called a random stranger sexy, wild beast and stood completely naked in front of him!

She stands like this and wonders why he is drooling like a dog! Paagal hain par cute hain 😉

NK tried to soothe La by hugging her tightly? 😉 Am I reading too much into this?

So, it is finally out that he is NK's cousin and not just a professor.

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA AND GAY??? 😲 😲 😲 I will excuse Khushi this thought only because I know she was dazed because of all the alcohol she drank and for being on the same bed as him.

Soni you are very smart. You yourself didn't reveal from La's update if they did it or not and have left the question hanging open for Fari 😆
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Soni I don't have to tell you again how excited I was for this update and I'm not lying when I say it was very very good !

Honestly I laughed out loud so many times from the beginning, from when she actually knocked at somebody else's house !😲
She called him a dog 😲
Deduced he was GAY ??? 😲Who in their right mind would ever think hottie to be gay ???😲 Only Khushi would !
I have already told you how creative you are with your ideas !
And this was such a hilarious update !

when I ended the last part, I actually felt sorry for creating a mess and letting you solve it but you made it so funny and engaging without actually sorting out anything ! Too good !

SO they now know NK is Arnav's cousin and NK must be sure there's something between Arnav and Khushi... And since now Khushi called La they could actually escape without NK and La knowing her presence there !

I can't wait for Farah's update now !
Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Soni!!!

That was one hell of an update

I loved it

ha ha

you should write more often hun... you are a natural

best part for me was when Khushi was banging the door and it was not even Arnav's apartment😆

ha ha she again became nude infront of him

did they do i or not????

you avoided the question 😆... you sly girl

I LOVED THE UPDATE 🤗
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is a gay really... Well khushi thinks everything
fantastic update

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