Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#4,Thrd 5 link added - Page 71

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part 50 B
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Amazing part!!!
Loved their kissing session :-P:-P:-P:-P waiting 4 next part..

Awesome update.maaneet scene was to hot geet getting bold and maan blushing
Waiting for the party and the twist

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Ok, , some of you don't know about the Hori festiv, , so I thought to extend this Hoyi part little so that you'll get to know…. And if you doesn't know much then you can ask to Ritzy di also… she kept fast for her son……

Every time I tried to give you twist but every time I failed…. For giving the twist I have to pace up the story little bit but if I pace up then some are complaining about the pace, , they can't enjoy the updates… so I thought to bring the twist slowly-2 and show you maaneet bonding and how they cope up with each other…..

Now tell me after reading the part, , should I give 50(D) or reach to part-51, ,

And you know what yest night, I was going through the prev parts then I get to know that 2 parts got 195, 196 likes…. I was so happy… 5,4 likes more to those parts then the will reach to 200 likes….

Now tell me, is my writing that bad, that I can't get much likes, , around 160 likes I get, , sometimes I get less comments also…. Silent readers, if you don't to show ur presence then you can press like button at least….

The part contains 2,433 words,,,,, long na than my usual updates…..

Thanks for the likes and comments……

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Part-50(C)

Hoyi is a festival, , in this day ladies who are mother used to keep fast for their child well being and long life…. Those mothers who are having son can fast otherwise they can't…. that is main thing of this festival, , mothers keep fast for their son and pray to Hoyi mata for their son's well being & long life…

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Today maan didn't denied geet, , she is very happy that she is fasting for Vedanta and maan too…. Maan and dadi were touched with her decision, , she is so sweet, , she have inner & outer beauty both…. No one fast without any reason, , some doesn't fast for their own child and here , Vedanta is not her own child but still she is fasting for him, , geet has a really big heart and have so much love also in her heart

it was evening and geet is waiting for maan, , she is in her room and pacing here & there…. Muttering something or may be cursing him but how can she curse him…..??

"ye maan bhi na, , he knew that today he should come home early but how can he? I told him but still , dekha kitna late ho gaya hai, , aur, aur mera call bhi nahi le rahe hai, , kya karu mai?" she is pacing up and down, , some times sit on bed then sometimes stood near the window seeing outside, , it's been half an hour she is waiting for him….

"he knows that I am waiting for him, , I told him in morning that we both break the fast together, , abhi to dekho starts bhi nikal aaye but where is my star?" she sulked just then she heard a whisper in her hear…..

"seems, , someone is waiting for her star?" she knew who it can be, , she turned to him and show him her angry face, , pouted lips and looking down, , she knew that she can't fight with him , , it would be better she will give him her silence treatment….. she get to know about this silence treatment from her tanya bhabhi, , whenever tej used to come late at home then she doesn't said any word to him only gave him her silence….

"sorry geet, , I was stuck somewhere, , " he held his ear in front of her…. He was waiting for her reaction but no reaction on her face…. Dam she is so much angry he thought….

"ok geet, at least listen to me where I was held up?" he tried to make her understand then he got a little confirmation from her side when he saw her soft gesture that is continue your story…. He sghed and remove his waist coat….

"you know geet, I used to brought a gift for dadi maa on this fest, , and today also I went to brought a gift for her…." He looked at her face which is now calmed little bit that the reason behind his late coming that is dadi maa not his business meetings….

"don't you want to know that what I brought for her?" he asked to her, , hoping that he will get to hear her sweet voice… she stood up and went near him helping him removing his tie and gave him towel, ,

"maan, , I know that aapne best hi choose kiya hoga dadi maa ke liye…" she smiled at him…. And maan too smiled in return….

"I'll show you when I'll give it to dadi, , now let me freshen up then we both will break the fast…ok…" he said placing his palm against her cheek caressing it little bit showing to her that he care for her…. , , she held his hand then she pushed him inside the washroom and placed his clothes on the bed….

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Later maan & geet , dadi, Vedanta went to temple which is in the mansion…. They prayed and then dadi & geet did some important things which is really important in the puja…. Then they took water in separate glassed and went to terrace…. Then after seeing the star(in this vrat, , star is important no moon, , ladies can break fast after seeing the star), they gave the water to star and the come down… maan brought his gift and gave it to dadi…

"dadi maa, , like every year, this year too I brought a gift for you, hope aapko pasand aaye?" said maan giving the gift to dadi….

"maan, , I like every gift from you and I know this year too you would bring something really special like every year…." Said dadi caressing his head with so much love…. She opened the knot and the gift was breathtaking for dadi….

"hows it dadi?" asked maan… dadi had tears in her eyes seeing the gift…

"maan, ye aapko kaha se mili?" asked dadi..

"dadi, I was having it, , first tell me aapko pasand aaya?" again asked maan….

"maan, nothing can be better than this… thank you bete" said dadi…. Maan kissed her hand while dadi also kissed on his forehead…. All were happy seeing the bond between these two and the gift was really amazing…. It was a little collage , , so many pics are there…..

"dadi, , please tell me na ye pics kab ki hai?" asked excited geet, , she wants to know everything….

Dadi smiled and start narrating everything while everyone start having their dinner….. "the first one when I got married with your dada ji, then this one is when I was pregnant

(dadi shied a little bit),

aur ye tab ki hai when maan's dad came in this world, , aur ye, ye hai maan ki pic, , when he was only 2 months , he was really a cry baby, so I trying to calming him….

(maan glared at dadi for telling him cry baby but dadi smiled and geet giggled , , now everyone is around dadi and listening the stories behind the pics…) ,

this one is, when maan took his first step, , aur ye, , maan was pulling annie's hairs

(dadi start laughing while annie's cheeks puffed hearing that, , maan also smiled and geet was also giggling, , suddenly two hands pulled annie's hairs… that is one hand maan's and another one is reyhansh, , annie screamed while maan & rey rolled on floor laughing their stomach, , annie screamed and then she took 2 glass of water and poured on maan and rey's head, , their laugh at once stopped and the geet & annie, Vedanta start laughing at them…)"

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Maan eyed to Vedanta that give geet's gift to her which he brought for her , , Vedanta nodded and ran in his room….. he bring the gift and stood near geet…

"mama, , ye aapke liye., aapka gift meri taraf se" he gave to geet… and kissed her cheek….. all were surprised …. Geet happily accepted the gift and kissed his both cheeks , ,

"thank you vedu… aur aapko gift kisne khareed kar diya?" asked geet yet she knew who it can be….

He happily replied…. "papa ne" and went to maan ,kissed his cheek… geet thanked him via their eye connection….. she opened it and it was the first pic of maaneet together, , it was when geet was dancing at janmashtmi and maan came there, , geet fell down in maan's arms then who were clicking the pics, they clicked it also… it was really awesome pic….. geet ran in her room and hang the big portrait on the wall and looked at the photo lovingly and maan also stood near her looking at geet lovingly….

She looked at maan, , he held her by her shoulder and brought her close to his chest, she placed her head on his chest and held his shirt in her fist, , lost in the photo so maan also….

"thanks maan for the gift… this is reaally specail for me…" said geet to maan…. Maan ighed knowing the reason behind it…

"I know geet, , this is first pic of ours together… hai na…" asked maan to her…. She nodded and hugged him and he too reciprocate back….

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It was two days before diwali, , Now geet's injuries healed properly and she is fine now, , it was a week after that Diwali is on it's way, , we all were sitting in hall and discussing about the diwali party , , about the guests and meals, ,

It was night, , all were sleeping but maan and geet are awake, , but Vedanta is again sleeping with them on their bed, , actually tomorrow is Diwali and Vedanta's birthday too, , so maan and geet were planning to throw a party along with Diwali party….

They were discussing about the menu, theme of the party, venue, invitations, invitation card and the main things, there will be twp partied held at the same time, diwali party and another one is Vedanta's b'day party, , so it will be in separate hall but in the same venue….

Just then geet saw that Vedanta is disturbing with their voice…. She whispered slowly to maan ..

"maan, , Vedanta will wake up because of noise, so we should move to study" suggested geet, , maan nodded and collect their belongings, their cell, laptop, notepad, pen and so many other things and moved to study without disturbing Vedanta….

they started their discussion just then geet's cell buzzed with the sms tone , , she opened the sms and that was a joke, , she laughed, maan narrowed his brows and asked what is that with his facial expressions but she denied with shaking her neck and suppressing her laugh….

"geet, what is so funny in the sms? Tell me, , I'll join you in your laughing session" told maan irritatingly when geet didn't tell him…. Geet stop her laugh "nothing maan", , she knew that she can't tell anything about the sms to maan knowing about the sms….

Maan nodded but the thought something and in a fraction of second geet's cell was in maan's hand where geet's mouth was wide open in a big O shape and eyes were also big…. She was dumb stuck at once with the sudden act of his where maan was smirking at her with his this step….

He was about to read the msg "maan, no please, , aap sms read nahi karoge…" she said firmly but she was so helpless….

"why geet? Why can't i? I also want to laugh…" he made innocent face and then showed her cell to her which is in his hand , saying to her which his expressions that he is going to read it…. He touched his fingers on the screen of cell and reached in Inbox, , was about to open the msg, , just then geet ran behind him…

"no maan, please… ye galat baat hai…" she whined like a small baby but maan was also behaving like a small baby who got excited after snatching the chocolates form his sister/brother's hand……

"no way geet, aaj to mai padhkar hi rahunga…" saying so he ran taking cell with him and geet ran after him, , both were running round & round to the bed which is in study, , maan ahead while geet is behind… she was calling him continuously , saying him not to read, , while running maan is not able to read the sms, ,

Just then she held his vest but tripped between the carpet fell on bed taking him along with her and both crashed down on the bed, , geet was underneath maan, while her eyes were shut due to fear and her clutch over his vest so tight, , he was looking at her , his one is below her head , assuring that not hurt her head while his another hand on her waist and the cell was somewhere else on the bed….

They were panting like anything, like they come out after swimming from the ocean, , maan was lost in her face, her face was covered with her curly hairs, , he slowly took out his hand from her waist and caressed the soft skin of her face with the tip of his fingers, removing the hairs from her face which is hiding the most innocent & beautiful view from his eyes….

With the feel of his fingers on her skin, the lining of fear on her face vanished at once knowing that she is safe now… her soft petals curved in a smile and slowly-2 she opened her almond eyes reminding maan of those almonds which comes in dreams….. maan was all over her covering her petite body with his manly structure, , his warm breath was fanning on her face making her shiver, jitters were in tummy, ,

Her heart beats raised in a fraction of second while maan's heart was also pumping against his chest, , he traced her face with his fingers sending shivers , , he brought his lips so near her ears almost touching her ear lobe with his lips, ,

"geet, , kuch puchhu tumse??" asked maan, , he wants to know the secret behind it…. Geet brought back to reality hearing his manly voice against her ear, ,

"haan maan" replied geet in back…. Maan take in and out the breath, ,

"geet, , every time when I see in your eyes, , I felt that I have seen these eyes of yours before, like I have some kind of unknown connection with these almonds, I don't know where I have seen? I don't know I am asking right or wrong? But I thought to ask you once , please tell me kya hum pehle miley hai? I am not able to regain anything, , your eyes remind me something, , you know your eyes remind of that girl once I have saved her but couldn't able to saw her face…. I don't know why I am joining those eyes with your face" he paused for a min seeing her reaction where he saw a little happiness on her face….

"geet , I know you are thinking me insane but I am really restless , I felt like I have an unknown bond with you before our marriage", , he caressed her face again pecking her forehead,,,,

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Neha

nice update

loved wat maan gave dadi and vedanta to geet