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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaron9113


well it's a great idea.
I also thought abt it from past some days.
Btw thnks for encouragement.


Actually I dont rite...m nt dat gud at writing ffs or ss...so I feel atleast I can encourage people 2 write...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Promo

Guys the update will be soon updated so here's the promo of chapter 23😊

In the car:
Sharon: hum kaha jaa rahe hai??
Swayam: surprise My love.
Sharon: ok (smiles)
They reached to the place.
Swayam blindfolds Sharon and takes her in:
after he opens the blindfold and sight Sharon saw was amazing.

*valentine*
Guys chapter 3 will be updated in about 3 - 4 hours.😊
Next chapter page 46...


Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww lovely promo:-):-) cant wait...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! SO excited for the update now!!!
pleas update it asap.!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me too waiting like suhail bhai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

<font size="7" color="#cc0066" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">Promo</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">Guys the update will be soon updated so here's the promo of chapter 23😊</font>

<font size="4"><font color="#006600">In the car:</font>
<font color="#006600">
Sharon: hum kaha jaa rahe hai??</font>
<font color="#006600">
Swayam: surprise My love.</font>
<font color="#006600">
Sharon: ok (smiles)</font>
<font color="#006600">
They reached to the place.</font>
<font color="#006600">
Swayam blindfolds Sharon and takes her in:</font>
<font color="#006600">
after he opens the blindfold and sight Sharon saw was amazing.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc">*valentine*
</font></font><font size="4" color="#cc00cc">Guys chapter 3 will be updated in about 3 - 4 hours</font>.😊


superb
fablous promo dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

me waiting for it eagerly


me too egarly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 23

Guys I hope you guys like this chapter I was thinking of ending this FF very soon maybe at chapter 25, And hope you like this chapter and thnkx for your comments and likes for all the last 22 chapters.😊

Chapter 23:😊

Swayam: hum direct shaadi nahi kar sakte kya'yeh tumare dad se milna zaruri hai?? (cute)
Sharon: (smiling at his cute question) kyun agar dad se nahi mile toh mujhse shaadi nahi hogi.
Swayam: nahi nahi yeh afford nahi kar sakta mein'..tumare dad se toh milna hi padega afterall tum uski beti ho'.. I mean princess ho toh agar kisiko princess chahiye toh itna toh karna padega na.
Sharon: (Smiles) I love you'.
Swayam: I love you too'

Finally it was valentine day and Swayam's hand was now normal'..Sharon and Swayam both were wearing red.
Swayam comes to Sharon's house to receive her.
Swayam calls Sharon:
Phone convo:
Swayam: Sharon m waiting for you downstairs come soon.
Sharon: ok I'll be there.
Sharon comes downstairs, Swayam and Sharon both go towards the car and Swayam drove off.
In the car:
Sharon: hum kaha jaa rahe hai??
Swayam: surprise My love.
Sharon: ok (smiles)
They reached to the place.
Swayam blindfolds Sharon and takes her in:
after he opens the blindfold and sight sharon saw was amazing.

This is what she saw:


Sharon saw the arrangements and just crashed into Swayam's arms.
Swayam: (smiles)
Sharon had tears in her eyes.
Swayam: (noticed the tears) Kya hua Sharon why are you crying??
Sharon: I love you Swayam I love you more then anything you are the best thing that ever happened to me. You know no one made me feel so special before.
Swayam: arrey ab itni special person ho toh special toh feel karvana hi padega na'.. (making her cheerup)
Sharon: I love you Swayam!!
Swayam: I love you too Sharon!!
Swayam moves back and forwards his hand and asks Sharon:
Swayam: DANCE??
Sharon: (placing her hand on his)
They both start dancing on ishq wala love Sharon places her head on Swayam chest and she could hear his heartbeats which were beating for her.


Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


Swayam kissed her on her shoulder and neck. They moment was so perfect, they wished that the moment would never end.

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein band kar ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love



Sharon then hugged swayam and Swayam kissed her on her forehead. Sharon felt so safe and secure in Swayam's arms.

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


Swayam then kissed Sharon on her shoulder, then neck and her jawline then he moved back to the top he kissed her both eyes. Sharon just had her eyes close'..She had given herself all to Swayam.

Jo aise hota
Jo milte tum ho jaate gum sath mere
Hote hote hoga samjhaye hum tham jaaye tum
O dil mere
Toota zyada zyada tara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada maangu dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maane na dil ye sarphira
Ishq wala love

Sharon was now lost in the dark chocolate brown eyes, Swayam was also lost in Sharon eyes. Just at that moment Swayam felt Sharon's rosy lips on his. Swayam started to repond in the same intensity and passion the kiss turned to a very passionate one.

Bada ye dil nadaan tha, par aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Jo khine ka tha dar tujhe pata nahi kyu zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Swayam and Sharon broke apart and started breathing heavily'.. Sharon was drowning again in her eyes and Sharon was blushing very hard.

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


Sharon and Swayam were still swinging in sync, they were enjoying each and every moment'.. they were soo close they could feel each other's hot breath.

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hote hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love


Swayam: I love you Sharon
Sharon: I love you too

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hote hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love


Swayam: promise me you will always love me and never leave me.
Sharon: I promise.
Swayam: waise Sharon after marriage who do want.
Sharon: watt do you mean??
Swayam: Girl or a boy??
Sharon: (blushing)
Swayam: itna blush maat karo bataona'
Sharon: boy
Swayam: I want girl.
Sharon: no Swayam boy please.
Swayam: how about twins 1 boy 1 girl.
Sharon: awesome idea
They both started to laugh. The song ended
Swayam: come Sharon lets have dinner.
Sharon: sure

They both sat for the candle light diner.
Sharon and Swayam were feeding each other they both were lost in each other's eyes'..they enjoyed the dinner'..
Sharon: pata hai Swayam this was the 2nd best day of my life.
Swayam: and what was first??
Sharon: first best day of my life was when we both confessed our feelings for each other.
Swayam smiles and kissed Sharon on her cheek and forehead.
Swayam: If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you.
Sharon: I want to live in your arms and die in your arms Swayam'' I can't live without you we will live together and take our last breaths together.
Swayam: (hugs Sharon passionately)
Sharon: ( hugs him back with the same passion)

Sharon: Swayam its 11:59 the valentine is going to end in a minute I guess we should leave for home.
Swayam: ok


They both ahd reached Sharon's house:
Sharon: Swayam thnkx for making the day so special.
Swayam: anything for you my love.
Sharon: ( gives a peck on his lips and leaves)
Swayam: (smiles)
And he drove back to his home.

Next day in college RH, all of them were gathered.
Sharon: (blushing reminding the moments they spend last night)
Swayam: (smiled looking at her)
Rey: guys hum boys ko RDX sir ke office me bulaya hai.
Boys: ok lets go
The boys leave.

Neha: boys ko kuch special karna hi nahi ata hai. (angry)
Simmi: exactly'..tume pata hai Sharon kal jab hum valentine celebrate karne gaye toh mujhe nil ek coffee shop pe lekhar gaya aur waha kitne saare log the aise koyi valentine manta hai kya?? (angry)
Rinni: Neha tum kyun naraz ho??
Neha: Vicky mujhe movie dekhne le gaya waha mujhe pop corn de diye yeh bhi koyi valentine hai?? uhhh
Simmi: waise Sharon tumara valentine kaisa tha??
Neha: aur kaisa hoga saare boys ne ek jaisa hi planbanya hoga.
Simmi: haan inn boys se kuch expect karna hi galati hai.
Sharon: no guys saare boys ek jaise nahi hote hai'. (blushing)
Rinni: yeh blush kar rahi hai matlab iska valentine bohot special tha.
Simmi: really Sharon??
Sharon: haan mera yeh life ka best valentine tha.
Simmi: batao na Sharon kya hua??
Sharon: no guys'
Simmi: ok fine itna toh bata hi sakti ho na kaha peg aye the'
Sharon: humne beach pe candle light dinner ki.
Girls: wow how romantic'.
Simmi: tum kitni lucky ho Sharon ki tume Swayam jaisa BF mila aur who ek hai Nil yeh mera worse valentine tha without date atleast mein apne friends ke saath valentine ache se enjoy karti thi.
Sharon: ok ok guys calm down'..lets go to the canteen and see if the boys are there.

All the girls enter the canteen and saw the boys sitting in the canteen. But Swayam was no where.
Sharon: Guys Swayam kaha hai??
Rey: ohh shit Sharon sorry sorry.
Sharon: kya hua??
Rey: Swayam tumara pparking lot mein intezaar kar raha hai'.
Sharon: watt?? Aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi..
Rey; who mein bhul gaya.
Sharon: usne phone kyun nahi kiya??
Rey: who tumara phone lag nahi raha tha.
Sharon checks her phone:
Sharon: battery low.
Rey: sorry yaar Sharon
Sharon: kk m leaving guys bye.
Sharon runs towards the parking lot.
Swayam was waiting for her impatiently.
Sharon: Swayamm'
Swayam: kaha reh gayi thi tum Sharon kitni dher se mein tumara intezaar kar raha hoon.
Sharon: sorry mujhe rey ne bataya nahi'.
Swayam: aur tumara phone kyun nahi lag raha tha??
Sharon: battery low'.lekhin hua kya??
Swayam: see we have to rush to your house.
Sharon: why??
Swayam: who tumare dad mujhse milna chahte hai.
Sharon: ok cool lets go.
Swayam: kya cool mein theek toh lag raha hoon na mujhe kuch karidna nahi mila kyunki tumare dad ne achanak se plan banadiya.
Sharon: don't worry baby tum bohot hot lag rahe ho'. (messing his hair)
Swayam: tumare dad mujhe hot lagne se todi except karenge.
Sharon: ok ok relax come lets go.
Swayam: yaa lets go.
They both sit in the car and and drive off.

They finally reached at Sharon's place.
Swayam: goddd tu hi bachalena aaj.
Sharon: relax baby ( hugs him)
Swayam: (hugs her back)
Swayam breaking the hug.
Swayam: agar tumare dad ne mujhe aise tume beech raste mein hug karte hue dekh liya na toh who mera madar kar denga
Sharon: (smiles)

They both enter the house:


Guys hope you all enjoyed it and I know it was really really small but I did'nt get much time to write it. I know now u guys will say that I always do that'.jo bhi mujpe fekna hai feko joothe chapal sab welcome hai''please do comment and hit like tab guys.😊
Guys the next chapter will be updated on page 65 hopefully because as per now I m ending the FF very soon on chapter 25 I want the thread to atleast finish on page 100. So pleaseee and thnkx to those people who spammed the last time and complete up to page 44. Specially
swaron9113 and d3fan4eva thnkz a lot guys.😊
Spamming is allowed.😊
Next chapter page 60...


Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
Unres..
Yipiee..! Me da frst one 2 cmnt aftr so long...
😊
So cmng 2 da update...
It was awesome. ..u wrote it beautifully Simi.
Ishq wala luv suits dem da most...
Bechari girls...unka valentine ws boring..haww...
N lucky Sharon dat she has such a romantic BF...akhir jaha swayam hoga waha romance to hoga hi...
N swayam ki tension ka level is so high...hehe...
N u r gonna end dis ff... 😭 ...not fair...but pls promise dat u vl start another one...because I luv da way u rite...
Demand bahot jaldi cmplt ho jaayegi...so b ready wid da update...! 😉
Edited by d3fan4eva - 13 years ago
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Awww such a Beautiful update dear:-):-):-) Loved Swaron's sweet and lovely moments:-):-):-)

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