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Posted: 12 years ago
good.. hope this brings Maan out of his guilt trip..
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting teaser
waiting for the update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pregnancy ke baad yeh dono humesha aise bhehes kyu kar rahe hai😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
update ghar jaane ke baad..
its ready.. but just need to do editing.. and than i will give you after 7pm..
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

update ghar jaane ke baad..

its ready.. but just need to do editing.. and than i will give you after 7pm..

waiting diii😳
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Part 48

Pari entered a lavish restaurant that she knew would be empty after all the younger Khuranna would be proposing her. She was shocked and surprised to see tat the whole pathway was covered with rose petals that led her to the main hall. she looked around to see Vicky but she was more shocked to see tat the hall was beautifully decorated with her favorite red balloons with white curtains flowing. It was dimply lit for giving a romantic essence while the lights changed its color within seconds. She was so lost in the dcor tat she feared with a hand on her waist inside the saree touching her bare skin. She was about to scream when she heard him say..

Vicky: You look gorgeous Pari..Pata nahi how will I handle myself for the rest of the time.

Pari sighed hearing him and softly moaned his name when she felt him playing with her skin.

Pari: Vicky…

Vicky: Hmm.. aisa na karo.. I swear.. I wont be responsible if anything.

Pari blushed with his unsaid words while her hands reached his trying to stop him from teasing her senses.

Pari: Please Vicky…

Vicky pulled her making her almost visible back to touch his chest, which was just covered with a thin cotton rich shirt. She gasped as she felt him and closed her eyes tight in order to have control on her urges.

Vicky: I know m late but still I know m not. I don't know wats a real romantic proposal or say your fairy tale version but this is wat I could do for the one girl whom my heart beats and want to love her for eternity.

Vicky comes in front and kneels down at once surprising Pari. He held her hand in his and said.

Vicky: Its been ages tat I felt my first love for you. The day when I realized tat I love Pari Shikawat it was sealed inside my soul tat I would spend all my lives with this girl. I know I was never good in expressing myself and always landed in making fun of you and troubling you but tat was my way to express my love for my Pari. I know you have those unknown fears of losing your loved ones but I know tat you can overcome them and I want to be with you when you do..

Pari looked at Vicky while her eyes shed tears which she had held for long.

Vicky: Oyye cry baby.. ishe jyada main emotional nahi ban saktha tere saath. Its just tat I love ever you since I felt tat I, you were just not Pari – my friend but the time when I realized tat Pari was my love and will be with me until I get old and die. Its simple Vicky Singh Khuranna loves one and only Pari Shikawat.

Pari looked at him while he said those three magical words and before she could say anything she felt a ring in her ring finger. She looked at Vicky who was slipping the ruby diamond ring in her finger while Vicky saw her pouting.

Vicky: I don't need my answer from you as my heart knows tat my Pari can never deny me or waise bhi Vicky Singh Khuranna ko na sunne ki aadad nahi hain and now you are officially mine..

Pari: Ohh really and wat if I say no..

Vicky: Chal dekhte hain ki how can my crybaby say no to her Vicky.

Pari: m not cry baby..

Vicky: Ya I can see.. kitni muskhil se I practiced for saying these words and here goes my cry baby with tears.

Pari hit him on his chest (Vicky was now standing) while Vicky let her hit him. she made cute faces while Vicky was having hard time to hold himself and next moment he pulled her into him and pressed her lips with his. The moment Pari felt his lips she was numb while her eyes looked into his which were smiling and smirking on his victory. She tried to pull herself away but he pulled her more into him and softly lingered his lips on hers while waiting for her response. Pari was still looking at him, his eyes made a spell on her, and she too responded into the kiss making him smile. The kiss that was slow just for saying tat he loved her turned into a passionate kiss while they lost the count of kisses. Pari was flushed with the way he kissed her while her lips were swollen with his desire but still he was not ready to leave her. She moaned into the kiss while he left her seeing her eyes. Pari instantly hid into his chest and Vicky hugs her.

Vicky: How was it.. I mean our first kiss na.

Pari blushed and pushed herself more into him while Vicky let her calm down by softly patting her back.

Vicky: Say na.. Pari.. do you regret me kissing you…

Pari instantly closed his mouth with her hand and looked up into his eyes.

Pari: Its your right Vicky. Pari was always yours and will be yours until her last breadth. I know I made you to wait. I know tat I was never near you when you needed me but trust my soul and heart longed for you. I was scared Vicky.. feared tat I would loose you.

Vicky: phir se shuru.. how many times I have to tell you tat its nothing like tat. I swear Pari.. agar aise hi chalta raha na than I will get married today itself and prove tat there's nothing such.

Pari was too emotional and to express her love for him she placed her lips on his and kissed him with all her love while Vicky let her do wat she wanted.

Pari: I Love you.. Vicky and I cant stay without you.

Vicky: I love you too sweetheart.

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Geet had been observing Maan since last four days tat he was very much disturbed. Though he tried to be normal but there was something bothering thim. He would stay awake till night nad once h9me would be on continuous calls. Geet tried to ask him but he said tat it wasnothing and today she knew wat it was. Geet stared at Maan who was busy in his laptop in his study. He was so engrossed and on top of it the repeated calls were making him angrier. She was angry on him ever since she had received his phone tat was from Mr. Mehta who was working at London on some very important project. She could not believe tat Maan would ever ignore KC and its reputation like this and tat to for her.Geet waited for him to see her but he was too engrossed and she getting restless threw the file on him in anger.

Maan: Wat the hell..

Maan looked up to see his Jaan fuming in anger while his eyes caught the sight of the file and he somewhere felt tat she knew wat he was hiding.

Maan: Jaan.. abhi nahi m busy.

Geet: Aren't you too busy Maan tat you neglect this file.

Maan: M not.. its just tat I kept it away to work later.

Geet: Work later.. when.. don't you feel tat the file needs u right now.

Maan: Jaan.. can we talk later.

Geet: No.. I need to talk now.

Maan: Fine..

Geet: Wat the hell is wrong with you Maan.. why don't you just listen wat Mr. Mehta has to say.

Maan: I did and I cant do want he wants.

Geet: Even if it means a loss to KC.. a loss which will take years to make up.

Maan: I don't care.. but m not going tats final. Now you can leave.

Geet: Than fine than m ready to leave KM and go to HH.

Maan: geeettt..

Geet: No.. Maan..as its your final decision so is mine. m leaving right now.

Geet turned to leave but Maan jerked her back into him.

Maan: Wat did you say.. you will leave KM and go. Don't forget tat you are my wife and you belong to Maan Singh Khuranna..

Geet: I never did but you did forget tat KC needs you now.

Maan: why don't you just understand tat I simply cant go for a month or may be more.

Geet: Why cant you..

Maan: Jaan.. please.. try to understand, how can I.

Geet: Maan.. the project needs you Maan.. it will destroy KC if you don't go to London Maan.. its needs its MD right now. Please do as Mr. Mehta says Maan.. please.. don't let KC to suffer due to your fear Maan.. don't do this.

Maan turned giving her his back and said in a firm voice.

Maan: Its final tat m not going and don't worry about KC it can never be destroyed and as far as you talking to Mr. Mehta I don't care wat he says. The project is closed now. get back to the room and rest.. go..

Geet: You are scared Mr. Khuranna.. Afraid tat I would run away like before with the baby..You are scared with your own thoughts tat how can I love you with all your sins.. Scared tat I will leave.. Haina na Maan…scared tat I will die taking your baby with me.

Maan: Geettt

Geet: Kyu… kya yeh sach nahi hain..isnt it true Maan. You fear thinking tat m here to take revenge for wat you did and for this you don't want to leave me even for a second

Maan raised his hand in anger but stops before it reached her cheeks. He closes his eyes in pain and guilt.

Geet: Kyu.. aren't you scared tat I may die.. you fear tat I will run away with the baby to take revenge hain na.

Maan was angry with her words. It pierced his heart and he held her shoulder digging his nails into her.

Maan: Haan.. hoon main darpok.. do you get. I fear to lose you. scared tat I will lose the baby. Fear tat I will not be able to give you your happiness back. I fear tat god will punish me by punishing you for my deeds. do you get … MAAN SINGH KHURANNA is scared..scared for his own deeds and sins aur yeh darr zindagi bhar ka hain. no one can get this fear out from me.. not even you.

Geet stood listening to wat he said. She knew tat this fear was there in him but so deep, she did not knew yet.

Maan: Do you get.. I m scared.. Maan Singh Khuranna is scared of his own sins which he committed. Sins which led to your destruction, sins tat made me a murderer by killing my own child. Sins which will never leave me in my dreams or even after I die.. but you know wat.. god is so cruel tat he never punished me for it but punished you for my sins and I know he will do it again. Ish bache ki zarurat tumhse jyada mujhe hain. I want the baby to be sure tat I m forgiven. Do you get.. Forgiven by god and you for my sins.. forgiven to be the sole reason for killing my own baby.

Geet was numb with his words. Wat could she say when she knew tat his fear was something which she would never take away but she could not let KC to suffer coz of them.

Geet: It does not matter.. agar aisa hi hain than its better I abort the baby…

Maan: Geeettt..

Geet: Why not Maan.. you fear tat I or the baby may not make through na than its better I will kill one of us but I cant let the whole family to suffer coz of me and the baby. This family means a lot to me Maan and KC is just not a company but the dream which Dad, You and Vicky has seen. I cant let it suffer just coz m pregnant and our baby is breathing inside me. So ish sab ka ek hi solution hain I will abort Maan.

Geet's cheek sting with the pain from the slap she just got from Maan. He looked at her with pain and anger.

Maan: Abort.. haan kyu nahi..after all you can prove me murderer again. After all everyone can blame me again and hate me.. Go Geet jao.. kar lo Abortion.. but trust me the moment you step out you will find me dead.

Geet was shocked with his words.

Geet: Waise bhi jee kaha rahe ho aap.. this fear is taking you away Maan.. its taking you away from all of us. You say you want to stay here for us and let KC suffer. Kabhi socha hain agar KC barbaad hua than wat will you give your child Maan. how will you fulfill each and every demand of your baby. Kaha se puri karonge uski khwahishein. Wat will you give Dad in return who handed you this KC with pride, wat will you give Vicky when he will be able to handle the business.. Jawab dijiye..

Maan: You don't need to worry for tat..

Geet: Haan.. why not.. whom m I to you to question you why did you invest everything into the London project. Why did you invest everything knowing tat the project will need you at its end, why do I need to know tat the project which is almost finished and just needs you for a month is getting destroyed because Maan Singh Khuranna fears tat his sins will punish his wife and the baby.

Maan; Haan.. I fear.. is tat reason not enough for not going.

Geet: No its not.. its not enough coz Maan Singh Khuranna is never scared. No fear can scare him. do you get..

Maan: its enough Geet.

Geet: Tats wat m saying Maan its enough..and I don't want anything else.. you are going and tats final… I have booked you flight which is day after and you are no one to deny it.

Maan: Don't dare to boss me Geet as you very well know tat I will not go.

Geet: and I know Maan tat you will go.. agar chahte ho ki main ish ghar mein raho than you will go. I don't want the world to say tat Maan Singh Khuranna fears. I don't want the world to say to my baby tat his Dadda failed in his profession. Don't want the world to say tat Geet is responsible for the KC loss.

Maan: I don't care wat the world says and m not ashamed to say tat I fear.. I fear and will always fear for my sins punishing you. do you get.

Geet: Lets see Maan.. Get ready for the flight Maan.. you just have a day and you will be in London.. or rahi meri.. than I have my whole family to see tat I and the baby is fine.

Maan: Family is not Maan.. and I know tat My Geet and the baby needs their Maan..

Geet: Tats where you are right Maan.. we need you.. but not by doing all this.. Baby is not happy seeing his Dadda fearing for Mumma and him so much. Its pains us Maan.. it pains to see the fear on your face. Pains to see tat you are not the same Maan who I loved. Pains to see tat My Maan is neglecting his passion of getting KC on top all over the world. It pains Maan.. it pains.. and I cant take this pain anymore.. I cant.. I want my Maan back who just was not my lover but the best business tycoon in India for who worshiped his business as he did his love. I need my Business Tycoon Maan Singh Khuranna back to me and the baby. I want our Baby to be proud while saying tat he is Maan Singh Khuranna's son and want to be another Maan Singh Khuranna who is fearless..

Maan: This Maan is not fearless.. he fears for his Jaan and baby.. Geet..his sins made him to fear for every single thing.

Geet: I know you better than yourself Maan.. My fearless Maan is just hidden behind this fearful Maan and I know he will get back. Get ready Maan.. you are going to London and tats final from Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khuranna.. The official owner of KC.. and you cant say no to me Maan Singh Khuranna. you can never.

Maan: Do want you can Geet, but its final tat I wont.

Geet left the room without a word. Both firm on their decisions. One feared for his love and baby due to his sins the other wanted to get this fear away from their life so tat she can get back her Maan Singh Khuranna.. the fearless Maan Singh Khuranna whom she fell in love.

Precap:Tension continues

Will Geet succeed in sending Maan or will his fear destroy KC once and for all.

Hi all.. me not happy with less likes for last update.. but anyways.. leave tat. m here back with the update. Don't get me mad. I have used this track so tat Geet can get Maan out of fear which he still has. And here Maan can let KC and the family business to suffer for his fear but Geet cant let this happen. So she will use this opportunity for making sure tat Maan is out of his constant fear of losing her and the baby. Lets see how it will happen. Will Geet succeed or will Maan be firm on his decision.

Finish off this thread….. for next update….

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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first yipppeee
Loved it
Its maan fear
It should be out of his fear
His fear destroying geet happiness ahain
Now geet must show dat she is gmsk
Bot hogya maan ka fear
Waiting for the next
Update soon
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet understanding maan fear and try to make him free from fear but is really fearing for geet and baby



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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
hope maan comes out from fear of losing geet & baby...geet's plan should
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
di i dont want maan to go to london

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