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Read the whole ff in one go!!
Loved each and every chapter😃
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Nice Update ...
Do update the nxt part soon and TY for the PM...
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Awesome update simran...luved the rutha hua swayam n usse mananewali uski sharon...u have beautifully described their romance scenes n when they r disturbed by d phone calls...thnx for pm...continue soon.
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(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 18

Guys hope u'll like this update and thnkx for your comment on my previous updates''please guys keep commenting ''and liking my updated''.so ENJOY!!!

Chapter18:

Sharon 's and Rey's phone convo ends.
Sharon: (smiles)
Swayam: (does'nt smile)
Sharon: kya hua??
Swayam: mera aaj tumare saath time spend karne ka mood nahu hai'. (teasing)
Sharon: (angry) Aaahhh matlab ab tume mere saath time spend karnekeliye acha mood mein hona padega.
Swayam: haan'.par ajj meine kisi aur ladki ko promise kiya hai .
Sharon: waattt???aur konn hai woh ladki jo mere BF ke saath time spend karengi?? (angry)
Swayam: Kriya'.
Sharon: watt?? Par kriya toh rey ki'( still nagry)
Swayam: har par issse uska kya conncetion.
Sharon: matlab?? (confused)
Swayam: meine kal Kriya ko promise kiya tha ki mein Rehersals nahi karunga.(laughs)
Sharon: (her anger dissapers and big smile on her face) tume pata tha ki mein tume manalungi aur aaj rehersals nahi jaungi.
Swayam: haan'.aur waise mein tumse koi naraz nahi tha aaj subah par mujhe yeh saara tumara planning dekhna tha.
Sharon: (smiles and hugs him and Swayam hugs her back)
Sharon: acha toh pehle coffee pee kar ate hai.
Swayam: kyun romance karne ke liye pehle warmup coffee se karna hai. (laughs)
Sharon: (hits him playfully)
Swayam: acha chalo coffee lee kar ate hai.
Sharon: leker??
Swayam: hum yaha hi lekar ate hai'
Sharon: ok (smiles)
They go to the canteen and they see Rinni amar sitting and enjoying their exclusive time.
Swayam and Sharon: (smiles)
Sharon: iska matlab aaj koyi bhi rehersals nahi kar raha hai'
Swayam: chalo hum coffee lete hai.
Amar was busy with his GF so Swayam asked another waiter.
Swayam: can we have 2 coffees please.
Waiter: yaa sure sir'
Sharon: no no'
Swayam: kya hua??
Sharon: 1 coffee please.
Waiter: sure maam?
Sharon:yaa
Waiter goes to bring the coffee.
Swayam: (dramctically) kya hua paise bacha rahi ho kya?? (laughs)
Sharon: nahi aaj hum coffee share karenge'.(smiles)
Swayam: (smiles too)
The waiter bring the coffee.
Waiter: here you go maam your coffee.
Sharon: thnkx you.
Swayam pays for the coffe and they take the coffee to fire exit. They both sit and start drinking their coffee, the coffee had become more sweet because they were drinking it in turns.
Sharon: coffee bohot sweet thi na'..
Swayam: aur tumare inn meethe meethe otho ki wajese yeh aur sweet ho gayi.
Sharon: (blushes)
Swayam: mujhe to darrr lagne laga hai..
Sharon: kyun??
Swayam: mujhe daarr lagta hai ki kahi mujhe diabetics na hojaye itne sweetness ke wajese( laughs)
Sharon: (smiles).darro maat agar itni sweet hu toh mein hi diabetics hone se baccha lungi, itni kadus banugi ki diabetics hone ke koyi chances hi nahi honge.
Swayam: nahi mujhe meri sweet si Sharon hi pasand hai.
Sharon: (laughs)
Swayam: haas kyun rahi ho??
Sharon: mein aur kisi keliye kadus ban sakti hoon'..lekhin mere Swayam ke liye nahi.( messing his hair)
Swayam: oyyeee mere balo ko kya rahi ho'..mere balo ko mess karne ka kisiko hakk nahi hai.
Sharon: mujhe bhi nahi'( baby smile)
Swayam: mein na ek din mar hi jauga tumari iss smile ke waje se. (smiles)
They both hug each other.
Swayam phone starts to ring.
They break the hug and Sharon glares at him in anger.
Swayam: ek last call??
Sharon: Swayam this is your last call aur bad mein phone switch off karneka'.
Swayam: ok
He receives the call.
Swayam: hey dude.
Rey: hey kaha hai tu yar??
Swayam: busy hoon dude par kyun??
Rey: meri baatcutter naraz hai yaar mujse ab mein kya karu.
Swayam: arrey ladkiyon ko kis cheez se kushi milti who mujhe kya pata'
Rey: toh Sharon hai kya waha par??
Swayam: haan lo usise puchlo.
Rey: haan please use phone dedo.
Swayam gives the phone to Sharon.
Sharon: haan Rey bolo.
Rey: haan Sharon mujhe help kar na.
Sharon: haan Rey toh use uske favourite flower boquet aur favourite chocolates ya phir use koyi bhi gift dedo.
Rey: sure
Sharon: haan haan sure sure bye.( cuts the call)
phone convo ends:

Swayam: ( chuckles)
Sharon: itna has kyun kar rahe ho.
Swayam: tumhe dekh ke.
Sharon: kyun kuch hai kya mere face par.( tries to see her face if something is on.)
Swayam: nahi tumhe jaise Rey ka phone kaat liya'.bohot funny tha uss bichare ki puri baat bhi nahi suni.
Sharon: haan toh mujhe apna time waste nahi karna tha.
Swayam: ok ok (smiles)
Sharon: Swayammm
Swayam:haannn
Sharon: tum mujhe kabhi nahi chodoge na'.
Swayam: nahi baba kabhi nahi par tum aisa kyun puch rahi ho.
Sharon: kyunki mujhe koi pasand nahi karta.
Swayam: aisa kyun bol rahi tum itni sweet ho tume koyi kaise nahi pasand kar sakta.
Sharon: (tears escaped from her eyes)
Swayam: ( hugged her tightly and wiped her tears off)
Sharon: tumhe pata hai sab mujhe chodke jaate hai, meri mom mujhe chodke chali gayi'..aur mere dad mujhse pyaar karte hai lekhin who humesha business party's mein busy hote hai'..usne mere saath kabhi time hi spend nahi kiya.
Swayam: ( became sad hearing al this)
Sharon: (sobbing)
Swayam: Sharon please stop crying ( he makes her stop and tries to make her laugh) dekho Sharon shayad who sab bhi meri tarah daar gaye hoge ki itni sweet Sharon ke saath kayi une diabetics and naa ho jaaye.
Sharon: (laughs) par tum toh mujhe sodke nahi jao ge na??
Swayam: kabhi nahi I promise.
Sharon: (gives him a peck on his lips)
they both hug each other tightly.
Swayam: ek baat bolu.
Sharon: haan bolo.
Swayam: agar mujhe ho gaya toh tum kya karungi??
Sharon: shut up Swayam, phirse aisa kabhi maat bolna.
Swayam: arrey nahi agar mujhe kuch'.(sharon keeps her figure on his lips)
Sharon: mein toh apni life tumare bina imagine bhi nahi karsakti.
Swayam: (kisses her on her forehead) ok phirse aisa nahi bolunga.
Sharon: (smiles)
Swayam: mera phone kaha hai'
Sharon: tume tumara phone kyun chahiye??
Swayam: nahi puch raha hoon'..
Sharon: mere saath hain'..aur meine band kiya hai.
Swayam: ok baba tere paas hi rakho.
Sharon: wais eek minute
She breaks the hug and sits on the stairs and Swayam sits with her aswell, she takes Swayam's phone out and switches it on.
Swayam: kya kar rahi ho?
Sharon: tumari messages check kar rahi hoon.
Swayam: kyun??
Sharon: ab tumari GF hoon toh itna toh hakk banta hi hai na.
Swayam: haan'..watt? noo
Sharon: SWAYAMMM
Swayam: tikhe par bad mein datna maat.
Sharon: ok baba nahi datungi.
Sharon sees the messages.

*SWAYAM'S INBOX*
From Sharon: hii baby
From Sharon: Baby I love you!!
From Sharon: mein bas tumare bare mein soch rahi thi.
From Sharon: love you too
From Sharon: hey Sweetu
From Sonia: hey darling'
Fron Natasha: hey baby my sweetu kya kar rahe ho?
From Natasha: baby tum mere saath shopping pe chalo na please.
From Tina: hi Sweetheart.
From Alisha: hey dear my Darling tum mujhe kab mil rahe hoo.
From Sneha: hey Swayu'..
From Jia: hey Sammm

Sharon gets angry looking at all this messages.
Sharon: Swayam yeh sab kya hai?? (angry)
Swayam: arrey baba yeh purane messages hai dekho'.dates deko 1 month pehle ki hai.
Sharon: (Angry) par yeh sab konn hai??
Swayam: dekho Sharon tumne kaha tha tum datogi nahi'..aur yeh sab aise bejte rehte teh. (scared)
Sharon: matlab mein bhi tumare liye bas unme se ek hu na?
Swayam: nahi yaar Sharon aise kyun keh rahi ho.
Sharon: Aur kya kahu Swayam'.ek minute mein tumara outbox check karti hoon.
Swayam: watt??
Sharon: haan'.
*SWAYAM'S OUTBOX*
To Sharon: hii babes kya kar rahi ho??
To Sharon: hii Sweety'.
To Sharon: I LOVE YOU!!!
To Sharon: Hey Jaan
To Sharon:Hey Sweets'.
To Sharon: Babes Kya kar rahi ho??
To Sharon: Sweets Love you soo much.

Sharon: (smiles) tum sirf mujhe message karte ho aur kisiko nahi.
Swayam: haan baba mein kisi aur ko message nahi karta woh log toh mujhe bejte rehte hai par mein reply nahi karta tha.
Sharon: pakka??
Swayam: pakka'
Sharon: Par agar tumnhe who messages delete ki hai toh."
Swayam: Arrey Tumnhe sach mein lagta hai?? (sad)
Sharon: (smiles) nahi Baby I trust you!!
Swayam: (smiles) really??
Sharon: kyun koyi shakk??
Swayam: nahi (smiles)
Sharon hugs Swayam and he hugs her back.

Swayam: Acha toh Sharon ek baat bata tumara koyi Ex- BF Tha??
Sharon: tum gussa ho jao ge'
Swayam: I promise mein gussa nahi karunga.
Sharon: pakka??
Swayam: pakka.
Sharon: Mera koyi BF nahi tha.
Swayam: (Shocked) watt?? Really??
Sharon: haan kyun??
Swayam: I mean tum toh college ki diva hai aur tumara koyi BF nahi tha I'm impressed.
Sharon: (Smiles) aur tumari??
Swayam: meri'.
Sharon: haan tumari'
Swayam: haan meri'
Sharon: Swayam bolo na'
Swayam: ok fine meri ek GF thi'
Sharon: (angry look) aur woh konn hai??
Swayam: Tina'
Sharon: Tina??
Swayam: haan Tina'.
Sharon: matlab woh chudail Tina..
Swayam: (Laughs)
Sharon: hass kyun rahe ho?? (angry)
Swayam: tumhe sach mein lagan a Tina meri GF hai.. (still laughing)
Sharon: matlab?
Swayam: matlab Sharon woh meri GF nahi hai'
Sharon: toh konn hai.
Swayam: tum??
Sharon: EX???
Swayam: meri koyi EX nahi thi.
Sharon: (smiles) saaaccch?
Swayam: muucch'..
Sharon: ok Swayam ab yeh class ka time hai lets leave.
Swayam: aaj bunk karte hai na?
Sharon: watt? Noo noo Swayam please
Swayam: please shar'
Sharon: chalooo (drags Swayam to the class)
Swayam: tum bhi na ab yeh boring professor ki boring lecture sune padenge hume.
Sharon: (chuckles)
Swayam: hass kyun rahi ho'
Sharon: woh aa gayi tumari GF'
Swayam: konn?
Sharon: Tina'.
There were six girls were standing were Sharon was pointing.
Swayam: inme se Tina konn hai.
Sharon: (laughing) Swayam seriously tumhe Tina konn hai yeh nahi pata aur tum keh rae the ki tumari GF Tina hai.
Swayam: arrey Tina common name hai isliye mein bol diya'.emin jaanta tha ki koyi na koyi ladki Tina naam ki hogi.
Sharon: (laughs) ok ok
Swayam: (irritated) Itna bhi maat haso sehat ke liye thik nahi hai'.
Sharon: Chinta maat karo'agar mujhe kuch hogaya to tum hona mujhe hospital le jaane ke liye.
Swayam: (Smiles)
Just then the lecture Starts no one was listening to the professor but everyone was staring at each other Barkha/ Viha/ Rimar/ Kriyaansh/ Swaron/ Nimmi.
Just then the class was over everyone was heading to their home.
Swayam: Sharon mein tumhe ghar drop kar du??
Sharon: Tum nahi bhi puchte na toh mein akar tumare ghadi mein bhet ti.
Swayam: (Smiles) tikhe chalo.
Sharon: Mujhe ghadi mein tumare saath akhele betna kitna acha lagta hai pata hai. koyi nahi hota hai bas tum aur mein akhele.
Swayam: u mean HUM
Sharon: (smiles) haa hum
Neha: Swayam'.(calls out from the back)
Swayam: ( turns to see who it is) Haan Neha bolo.
Neha: Swayam tum mujhe please ghar drop kar doge'
Swayam: ok par Vicky??
Neha: Mein Vicky se baat nahi kar rahi'
Sharon: kyun Neha??
Neha: Vicky thinking ki Neha Dumb.
Sharon: yeh Vicky ko aaj hi use batana tha ki who use dumb samajta hai... (Irritated)
Neha: Par tum logo ko koyi problem toh nahi hai na?
Swayam: no Neha'
Sharon: no Neha not at all'..( In mind: problem bohot badi problem mere aur Swayam ke bich aarahi hai)
Swayam: chalo girls lets go'
Sharon: Hann
Neha sits at the back and they drive off The drive was not silent because Neha was continuously talking to Swayam And she was getting on Sharon's nerves, but Swayam was also talking to Neha . finally they had reached Neha's house.
Neha: ok bye Sharon bye Swayam.
Swayam and Sharon: byee
Neha went and now they were driving to Sharon's house.
Sharon: finally
Swayam: kya finally??
Sharon: Kuch nahi
the rest of the journey was silent and they had reched Sharon's house.
Swayam: bye Sweets.
Sharon: (angry) bye (about to get off the car)
Swayam: ( holds her wrist and stops her)
Sharon: kya hai?? (Shouts)
Swayam: arrey tum mujhse gussa kyun ho??
Sharon: nahi nahi mein tumse gussa kyun hogi. (Sarcastically)
Swayam: SHAROONNN
Sharon: ok fine sorry
Swayam: haan toh mujhe ab toh proper wala gud nite milega??
Sharon: (smiles) Gud nite baby (gives him a peck on his cheek)
Swayam: (Smiles) Gud nite'.
Then Sharon leaves from there.


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Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago
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AWESOME chapter dear 👏👏👏
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awosm update cute sweet n funny 😆😆😆😆
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sweet and simple update
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*SWAYAM'S INBOX*
From Sharon: hii baby
From Sharon: Baby I love you!!
From Sharon: mein bas tumare bare mein soch rahi thi.
From Sharon: love you too
From Sharon: hey Sweetu
From Sonia: hey darling…
Fron Natasha: hey baby my sweetu kya kar rahe ho?
From Natasha: baby tum mere saath shopping pe chalo na please.
From Tina: hi Sweetheart.
From Alisha: hey dear my Darling tum mujhe kab mil rahe hoo.
From Sneha: hey Swayu…..
From Jia: hey Sammm

😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆bachara gaya kam say😆😆
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Sharon: Aur kya kahu Swayam….ek minute mein tumara outbox check karti hoon.
Swayam: watt??
Sharon: haan….
*SWAYAM'S OUTBOX*
To Sharon: hii babes kya kar rahi ho??
To Sharon: hii Sweety….
To Sharon: I LOVE YOU!!!
To Sharon: Hey Jaan
To Sharon:Hey Sweets….
To Sharon: Babes Kya kar rahi ho??
To Sharon: Sweets Love you soo much.


😆😆uf bach gaye 😉

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Sharon: Mujhe ghadi mein tumare saath akhele betna kitna acha lagta hai pata hai. koyi nahi hota hai bas tum aur mein akhele.
Swayam: u mean HUM
Sharon: (smiles) haa hum
Neha: Swayam….(calls out from the back)
Swayam: ( turns to see who it is) Haan Neha bolo.
Neha: Swayam tum mujhe please ghar drop kar doge…
Swayam: ok par Vicky??
Neha: Mein Vicky se baat nahi kar rahi…
Sharon: kyun Neha??
Neha: Vicky thinking ki Neha Dumb.
Sharon: yeh Vicky ko aaj hi use batana tha ki who use dumb samajta hai... (Irritated)
Neha: Par tum logo ko koyi problem toh nahi hai na?
Swayam: no Neha…
Sharon: no Neha not at all…..( In mind: problem bohot badi problem mere aur Swayam ke bich aarahi hai)

really cute..😉

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