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Hi Guys,

This FF is especially for our page Geet Beginning Of new Era




Part 17

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I need a walk to remember...

To remember our togetherness...

To remember our togetherness forever...

The love is not about physical desire

Yet it is desire to be irresistibly desire...

If love would be a flower I would kiss it

And make garland to fill your lovely hands with it ...

Yet it is a fragrance, that u can feel it and smell it ...

You can smell it with in your ownself and

Feel it in your own heart

You can touch it with your emotions

and love it the way I love you...

Beyond any imagination...

Beyond any expectations...

Yes love is always what u feel for another is

Much more stronger than that u feel for urself...

You want to get it...

Yet Love is free bird out of cage...

Flying in the whole sky...

Yes I want a fly to remember...

I want a walk to remember ...

To remember our togetherness forever and ever

(Eza)

They both were walking on wet sand, the wet sand under their feet and their hand which were interwined with each other, and the gloomy on couples face were showing their internal happiness...

And was stunned with his preparation, in spite of dining table of chair and table of wooden log or glass it was of sand, the sanded area of the floor was digged out and it bcomes chair, she ws stunned with all this preparation it ws something beyond her imagination but fr maan it ws height of just a level of perfection...


(pic credit: Sobi 😊)

She was walking behind his... capturing his footprints on sand under her foots...

Maano uske qadmo ka sajda apni aankho se kar rahi ho...

she ws walking behind him in her own thoughts, blushing, smiling on her ownself nd then looking here nd there as if somebody is watching her nd she has been caught in her own act...

In life we alwYs wanted to walk.parallel to the the person with whome we are in love but sometimes it feels so nice yet strange to walk behind him, to secretely see his broad shoulder and love to nihaarofy that long tall handsome man who is in our posession...

(Haaye Im in love wd my this creative line😳)

suddenly maan stopped and she who ws in her own thought hit softly and in swift moment she ws in his emberace...

geet we are on date sweetheart... i know im looking smoking hot but u have full life to admire ur own posession ...

uff his whispering husky words were creating havoc in her... she closed eyes on anticipation of future momentz...

he kissed her forehead and smiled on her mesmerizing state...

They both sat on that sand chair...

Whn he came infront of her and took her soft hands in his strong manly handz...

"geet , how much this relation matters to you?"

he asked her... she felt bit hurted does she still need to prove it...

How many times he wants assurance...

If he wanted she could do anything which he wanted her to do... least she knew its just a beginning of their relation yet beginning of new journey whose path full of thorns nd pain nd suffering yet incredibly amazing nd beautiful...

maan, more thn my own life,more thn my own.existence...

she said it looking deeply into his eyes... as if willingly drowning in his deep eyes... aur agar uski aankho me khonaa ussey paana haii toh soda (deal) itna bhi bura nahi...

aur woh toh waise bhi doob jaana chahti thi...

uskey pyaar me...

uski aankho me...

usski baaho ke shikanjo me...

uske dil me...

maano uski rago me utR kar uske ek ek ang me sama jaana chahti thi...

aaap kisi ko chahatey ho aur jis shhiddat se aap ki mohabbat aapko uski taraf khichti haii uss se zyada wo dor ussey aap ki taraf khinchti hai...

agar pyaar sachaa ho toh ...

sahi galat koi maaney nahi rakhta ...

dooriya koi maaney nahi rakhti...

usskaa door honaa aapkey paas hone se zyada khoobsoorat lagta hai...

uski khaamoshi lafzo se zyada maaney rakhti haii...

uskey dil ki dhadkaney aap ko apne dil me sunaayi deti hai...

pyaar boht khoobsurat hota haii uss sey zyada khoobsurat chahey jaane kaa ahsaas hotaa haii... subah uthne parr yeh mehsoos karna ke koi poori raat aapke paas na hotey hue bhi saath thaa...

kisi ki soch me you were alive...

somebody was missing with each turn in their sleep...

The feeling itself strange yet incridioubly amazing & beautiful...

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

google ji thnk u fr d wonderful poem 😆

that was enough fr him... sometimes we just need a single fractn of monent to realize wht you are ...

wht u meant in someones life...

fr maan it ws d same moment whn he realized no matter wht geet will be gonna same fr him forever

no matter wht she will be always his "BAHISHT" ... his priceless possession ...

beautiful gem of his luck's crown...

his heaven , his paradise ...

his centre of solace and peace...

he came near both were just mere inches away frm each other... somewhere geet ws bit nervous wd ds much closeness yet she ws enjoying it...

he kissed her forehead nd she closed d eyes in anticipatn...

he kissed her both the eyes...

than nose nd came near the lips whn she put hands on his lips...

it ws more thn a plead compare to request in her eyes...

fr the frst time she was praying god to make him understand... nd yes he understood...

he kissed corner of her lips nd dn chin...

geet pata hai the frst time whn i seen ur picture...i ws in love wd u since dt time...

aur me ne toh aapke naam se hi pyaar karna shuru kar diyaaa thaa binaa aapko dekhe aapko chahne laghi...

apne dil me aapki moorat saja li aur phir ussey poojne laghi... pata nhi thaa aap kaise dikhtey honghey... lekin ek baat jaanti thi aap wohi ho jiske sapne ladakpan me dekhe... jab ladkiyaa apne boyfrnds ke saath ghoomti thi me aapko humaarey future ko imagine karti ...

she ws going on nd on on... the intenting gaze of maan realuzed her she ws the only one who ws talking all the while...

she blushed hard nd looked down whereas maan chuckled on her innocence...

yes his mishty, his bahisht cn be only one in ds whole universe...

he chuckled on.her innocence...

indeed she ws bahisht of him...

a cool breeze in his life...

maano shaaam me utri hui dhoop...

maano sehra me girti hui pehli boond.. apne aap me muskuraati ithlati aur registaan ki rait me samaati hui...

ithlaati sharmaati hasti muskuraati huuii...

mujhe nahi pTa tha geet im d lucky one for whome u made for...

geet me tumhe apnana chahta uss tariqe se jaise ab tak kisi ne kisi ko nahi apnaya...

hRr tarah se ...

har dharam se...

har saans se...

har bhagwaan ke saamne...

allah ke saamne...

infront of God...

would u like to be mine forever...

would u like to be in my arms every day nd night...

you were alive in my thoughts geet...

i know its love it cant be infatuation...

infatuation can be so long yet love can be...

Because love itself an eternal feeling...

its long lasting or should i say never ending...

God somebody tell him that his wrds weee drugging her...

effecting her like anything...

drawning in his ocean of love...nd she ws more than willing to surrender in ths volcano of love...

she wanted to mould herself in his love...

sometimes we just want to loose our self to find the another...

geet kya tum mujh se shaadi karoghi...

OMG...

OMG...

OMG...

was she dreaming again...

was its another dream of hers...

nop dream cant be that beautiful...

nd if the dream is dat beautifull she would love to live ds dream again nd again...

she smiled nd nodded wd tears brimming eyes...

nd he hugged her full heartedly...

more thn happiness it ws feel of togetherness in hug...

it ws feel of happiness in hug...

it was feel of love in hug...

it ws feel of desiring passion in hug...

it ws feel of love to be loved by someone in the hug...

geet reciprocated hug fr the frst time...

snaking her fragile arms around him as if feeling him...

as if proving herself it isnt just a mere dream...

as if accepting his love wd same passion and same fervour...

after eternity they broke the hug nd maan kissed her forehead...

she ws his possession...

his priceless possession nd he has full right to claim over hers...

after their sweet nd cute memorable moments of togetherness shying geet nd aroused maan (chhi chii babaji do i need to describe their private moments publicly lollz😉). came towards the dining area...

well everything there ws as perfect as their relation...

As perfect as their love...

yet their togetherness is the most perfect thing in ths whole universe...

The romantic dinner ws as tasty and lavishing as their nok jhok and love...

Sometime in mid of it maan would grab her hand and ask her to feed him ...

sometimes he just took spoon infront of her mouth and ask her to have it and as soon as she would open the mouth, he would keep the spoon in his mouth, smiling evilly yet geet pouting her lips with wrinkled forehead...

sometime he would put some pressure on her left hand which ws resting on table...

sometime he would kiss her hand and wink on her...

nd their our geet will became chhooi mooi wd his passionate touch nd demanding eyes ...

she ws avoiding eye contact as his demanding and talking tom eyes were drowning her in some another world...

making her heartbeat raise like anything...

missing some heartbeats in d race of gush of blood through the heart ...

mind ws nt accepting all ds still arguing its all a dream nd heart defending

NO ... dreams always meant to come true. . nd after her books it ws his togetherness sge always dreamt off...

She was smiling, her eyes were showing her happiness, the glowing face showing her internal glee of heart..

maan took her hand in his, entangled his fingers in hers and press her a bit, his talking eyes ufff mano apni aankho se saari daastaane sunana chahtey ho, maano lafzo me apne dil kaa haal naa batane par apne aap se naraz hokar aankho se kehnaa chahti ho ...

after their romantic dinner they both were chatting ...

geet was feeling sad, the time of being apart was near...

hearts were crying wanted to stay in eachothers emberace forever...

sepration is unbearable, the most paining phase of love, lovers meant to be together and the thought of separation itself a heartwrenching, its like somebody clutching their soul in and throwing ou of the body painfully...

Chale...

Geet said with lots of hope in her eyes...

Say maan, No, we will stay here , we can stay here like this forever...

I would love to be in ur arms till eternity, Kaash yeh pal yahi ruk jaatey yahi tham jaatey... (Geet ST)

Maan pulled her towards him and clutched her in his emberace, trying to fill the gap, if it was exist between them...

Itni jaldi bhi kyaa hai Geet, Tum se kaha tha tumhe apnana chahta hu, Uski shuruwaat aaj , abhi issi pal se hoghi...

He kissed her neck, and soon his soft kisses replaced with passionate and desiring hot wet kisses, she tighetened the grip around him,

she wanted to stop him, they were heading towards the wrong way, it isn't right, its wrong, it's sin, No matter how much closed she wanted to be with maan, still it was sin for her being physical with him...

but soon their passionate moments disturbed with crucial ringtone of Maan's cell,

irritating he ruffled his hair, trying to come out of those moments... it was his legal advisor ,

Hello Mr. Khurana..

Yes Mr. Shah,

Your documents are ready and with me ... M outside the place you messaged me ...

Hmm Okhh M coming out, you be there...

(Why advocate there?? Any guesses 😉)

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Okhh so M back Finally after my exams and its First update Exact after One week of my exams Kyaa karu bachi damn busyy 😕

but still typed somehow hey Good news 😃

M going Pune tomorrow morning yuppieee huhaaa wanna dance jump and laugh like anything Its my favourite place because of some favourite people😊

So will be back after two days (i seriously wanted to stay for a week or month or should I say forever😆 greedy me 😉)

Hey a Big Welcome to my New friend Kiran_Rati..

and one more silent reader 😉 and haa this update is solely dedicated to my only devil bacha who really worked hard to complete the quota👏

Edited by Eza_analyst - 12 years ago
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update maneet showing their love for each other and romance geet hesitation lawyer entry



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
s0 finaIIy they had their date
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awesome update yar,amazingly written👏👏👏
so going on vication😃have a blast😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eza_analyst



de rahi hu update specially for you mera Devlil bachaa 😊




Wahhh mere liye itna romantic shomanic update dedicate kia ahh <3 huggss to u

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