**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
edited my comment on page 33😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Zainab Awesome fantastic and beautiful update...Uday-Piya first date, first dance, and first kiss wow all the scene were wonderfull...Like Uday-Piya conversation next day especially Uday where he himself said YEDA...haha amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome zina great work👏👏👏

i loved this update it was beautifully written⭐️⭐️
the best part was the emotion feel and dialogues 👏
the kiss was super duper 😉
i loved the descriptiveness 👏
the song and the rain dance was so awww😳☺️
the pictures were awesome
loved the dress and uday was looking super duper hot as usual ☺️
the update was short 😔
but i know part 2 is coming up 🥳
please update soon
i am waiting eagerly
thanks so much for the pm
u rock
i love your writing 👏



thanks a lot saira baby, 😊
a big hug 🤗 for such a amazing comment it motivates me to write more and more...love u soo much.. 😃
uday is always looking hot! ☺️ 😆
ya i am writing part 2 its in the way...! 😃 😉
once again thanks a lot..! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

Hey Zainab Awesome fantastic and beautiful update...Uday-Piya first date, first dance, and first kiss wow all the scene were wonderfull...Like Uday-Piya conversation next day especially Uday where he himself said YEDA...haha amazing


thanks a lot pooja!
ya that yeda scene was 😆 akhir piya k sath rehnay ka koi to side effect hoga uday par!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
as chapter 3 was too short i am amending it by giving 3.2, i hope u like it!! will wait for ur replies!!


**Chapter 3.2**
uday= will u join me for a coffee? 😃
piya=glared at him and both burst out laughing 🤣
uday=trust me nothing will happen this time...!
piya=okk😊
uday=but i wont guarantee it...what if something comes over me again and...u see u r so hot😉
piya=😡
uday= ok sorry i was just trying to cheer u!
piya=ohh really?
uday=yes don't u trust me
piya=in this case a no😉
uday=😲
they headed towards the coffee shop in the hotel...uday ordered coffee for them...
piya=sir u have a meeting at 2 pm...its already 1 pm i think we shall go i even have to complete some file work!!
uday=come on u still didn't get who am i? 😳
piya= who r u? 😉
uday= 😡 i am the yuvraj udayveer singh ok i do what i like..!
piya= (constantly annoying him) wow i didn't knew it thanks for telling me i will write it in my diary...😉 so what were u telling me u do what u like well sir i have not told u anything to do...u see i am ur PA and its my duty to remind u of ur work...i am not here to entertain u!!
uday= extremely pissed of by her attitude some how controls his anger and says a bit seriously cancel it i am not going! its my order!
piya=😊 ok
uday= entertain me!
piya=😲 waa...whatt?
uday= i said entertain me...!
piya= i think i must go...i have a lot work to do...bye she said and ran away!
uday= watched at her slender figure disappearing and said with that evil smirk it would be fun working with u miss!! 😉
he was about to leave when he saw that piya left her cell phone on the table...!
he picked it up and began walking, but stopped and said let me check what name has she saved my number with...!
he called at her number...and when the name flashed his eyes popped out of shock 😲
"HALKAT VEDA "
he was hella shocked to see his new name...he didn't knew how to react!
uday=what the hell halkat veda ye kia cheez hai ruko miss tumhe to ma abi btata hu...!
HE went to his office room and found piya working...he went forward to her and handed her cell to her...
uday=u forgot it on the table...
piya= ohh thanks ! 😊
he sat in front of her...
she looked at him with a expression on her face now-what?
piya= do u want anything sir?
uday=yes i want an answer!
piya= answer for? 😕
uday= what does this halkat veda means he asked raising his eye brows...?? 😳
piya= to herself aj to teri watt lag gai beta is kaminay nay apna nam parh lia meray phone ma...oohh shit ab kia kru.. halkat veda ammm... what do i know! 😕
uday= so who changed my name from udayveer to halkat veda in your phone!
piya= 😃 flashing her 32 teeth i didn't!! 😳😳
uday= stop lying piya now tell me?
piya= thats bad to check someones phone without permission 😔
uday= ahan?
piya= han han! 😃
uday= why r u smiling am i a joker?
piya= 🤣 yes!!
uday= what? 😲
piya= i mean no no u r not a joker, did i say u r a joker...well who will call u a joker no u r not a joker 😆
uday= tumhe bht hasi a rahi hai na...okk has lo but u have to pay for it!
piya= i am sorry plzz says makin a puppy face 😒
uday= no dear there is a penalty for u! 😉
piya= ok but what will i have to do?
uday= (evil smirks) 😉😉 ENTERTAIN ME!!
piya=😲 how?
uday= u know how...or u want me to elaborate? 😉
piya= do u want me u dance for u? 😕
uday= 😆 no more than that!!
piya= kahan phas gai tu ye halkat pta nai kia mang raha hai she said to herself!
uday= i am waiting for u in my room! come soon! don"t be late penalty will increase! 😉
he said and left the room and piya was too tensed
piya= haaww what does he mean ab kia kru...! aisa krti hu apnay bag ma chaku rakh leti hu agr is halkat na kuch kia to wahi saley ko urra du gi...chal piya tje kiska dar hai tu to sherni hai kia tu bhi is yede vede say dar rahi hai...ma a rahi hu udayveer teri waatt lagane ab tu bach mujsay! 😉
she went to his room stood in front of the door and thought piya tu chaku lai hai sath hahaha agr kisi ko pta chal gya to ma to jail gai... 🤣
she knocked the door but no one opened...
piya= kahi ye mje bula kr khud soo to nai gya...! she moved the knob and found it open she went in side and alll of the sudden someone pulled her hard and moved her behind the door and locked it...it was dark in the room she couldn't see who pulled her...!
piya=koo...nn??
the person is none other than uday...
uday=shhh...said and turned on the light still holding her by waist...!
piya= 😲 was shocked to see a shirtless uday in front of her and that to holding her so so close!
uday= shall we?? 😉
piya= pushed him with all her might and said hat parry kameny and got the knife ot!!
to be continued!

Edited by zinayrules - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm zainiii love it muuuaahhh
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
super duper
i loved it
please update soon
this part was lovely
manveer in one room
uday shirtless wow
i cant wait anymore
i loved the dialogues
great update
thanks for this other mini update
please please update spoon
u did a great job as usual 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very "entertaining " update Zainab😉. Loved it!
Pia pinned by a shirtless Uday 😳 ... lekin ye knife beech mein kyun he???😡
Continue soon😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya update hai
UV-M ek kamre me bandh
aur chaku nikle 😆😉
plz plz plz post de complete update soon

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