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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Great update ...

I'm so happy that riya got back her memory...
But hate sikander to the core ...
I just want to see the way riya will save her team and esp Arjun ...
Thnx for the pm ... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

wow!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rockz.diva

it waz awsome loved itt

riya's gun point waz on arjun.. 😕

uhmm waitng for d nxt part huggiee tnx for d pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku321

pls continue soon dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee mar gaye riya gun point on arjun no...no...never😭...
do cont soon😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update
Well i didnt like that Riya helpd that Sikander, but poor girl she didnt remember anything😭
But finally she remembered everything, and now she's gonna try her best to save them
Please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for such a late comment saba 😕 but it is brilliant update 👏
full on dhamaka,toh sia isunknowingly working for Sikandar haan??
but I guess now she knows the truth &doing for this to help Arjun 😳
update ASAP dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: haruhi26

wonderful update

Well i didnt like that Riya helpd that Sikander, but poor girl she didnt remember anything😭
But finally she remembered everything, and now she's gonna try her best to save them
Please continue😊

thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KiSha13

sorry for such a late comment saba 😕 but it is brilliant update 👏
full on dhamaka,toh sia isunknowingly working for Sikandar haan??
but I guess now she knows the truth &doing for this to help Arjun 😳
update ASAP dear 😊

thanks 😃and ya she was working for sikandar unknowingly😡
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 8

riya open the gun and see there was only 2 bullets .
riya : hmm...so arjun sir iss gun mein sirf 2 goliyaan hain ab to aap ko aap ki qismat hi bachaye.she point gun on arjun and shoot but the bullet go to a man who was standing Arjun's right.riya : ohh...nishana chook gaya.she was going to shoot again suddenly she move the gun point on sikandar.sikandar get shocked and ask sia ye tum kya kar rahi ho???shoot arjun not me.
riya : kyun jab mot apne sarr mandlati huyi dikhayi di to dar gaye.
sikandar : dekho plz mujhe mat maaro plz ...

issi tarha tum ne roshni g ko maara tha na tab issi tarha roshni g ne bhi tumhari minatein ki hongi.tab to tumhe un pe taras nahi aaya tha .toh ab aapne aap pe kyun aaraha hai. sikandar's man's point their guns on riya but she tell them to put their guns down otherwise she will shoot him.sikandar immidiatly say them to put guns down .riya arre wah sikandar tum to itne bade darpok nikle mujhe to pata hi nahi tha she was going to shoot and everyone was shocked that was is happening.suddenly she put gun down and say nahi tum ne mera to kuch nahi bigada iss liye mujhe tumhe maarne ka koyi haqq nahi hai.and through gun to arjun and say arjun sir catch and move away .

arjun come closer to him poining gun on sikandar and take off the strip which he wears every time.and say dekh ye wohi nishaan hai jo tuney roshni ko marte waqt usske naam pe khencha tha.us waqt se le ke ab tak mein kaise ghut ghut ke jiya hoon wo mujhe hi pata hai lekin ab meri zindagi ka maqsad pura hojaye ga and he shoot sikandar . shree , chottu and rathore also took guns that no one can attack.rathore come to arjun and say rawte come on ab chalo yahaan se warna koyi bhi hamla kar sakta hai arjjun was too emotional that time remembring how he kill roshni rathore grab his hand and take him out they was going to sit in car suddenly a man pick the gun and shoot and the bullet go to riya's arm arjun immidiatly make her sit in car and take her to nearest hospital.

nandini (riya's best friend)also come to hospital they all was waiting outside suddenly doctor come out and tell them that don't worry she is alright ye acha hua ke goli unhe chooke guzar gayi.arjun wish to meet her doctor say him to wait till we shift her in icu.in icu riya was laying in bed .they all come inside nandini come and hug her . everyone was happy after that mission.arjun site on bed and hold her hand and say riya pata hai jab wo x ora 2 tumhare sharir mein gaya tha hum sab bohat ghabra gaye the aur jab tumne apni aankhein band ki thin uss waqt mene socha mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakunga.par sia ban kar tumne phir mujhe jeene ka sahara diya . and he take out a small pox from his pocket and open .it was a eautifull gold ring he stand up and sit down on his knees and say riya will you marry me ???
riya got tear's in her eyes and she move her hand to him and he put ring in riya's finger all other clap for them.

shree hit his sholder to chottu's sholder.chottu see to him and say kya hai shree
shree : wo dekh chottu arjun sir aur riya ki chemisty to hamare saamne hai but rathore sir aur nandini ki chemistry hum se chupi huyi hai chottu laugh slowly .
shree : uhu uhu rathore sir arjun sir ne to riya ko perpose kar diya ab aap bhi nandini ko perpose kar lein aise chup chup kar haath pakadne se kuch nahi hoga . they all laugh rathore ake flower from vase and come in center and sit down on knees and say nandini will you marry me ???
she say yes and take flower from him. they all laugh again and clap for them too...

somedays was been left after ariya and samni's marriage
in etf hearquarter nandini bring coffee and give to everyone and sit with rathore . he took a sip and say coffee bohat chi bani hai she was blushing and start stairing on eachother's eyes .on the other side riya remove flowers maala from her photo suddenly arjun come and hug her from back and say hmmm...so mrs.riya sryakant ratwe g kya ho raha hai
riya turn and say kuch nahi mr.arjun suyrakant rawte g pulling his nose slowly.

suddenly shree and chottu come and say arre chottu i think hum ghalat jaga ghalat time pe aagaye hain ye to hamara etf office lag hi ahi raha.suddenly ariya and samni move far and come normal
riya : nahi mr.shreeand chottu ye hamara etf office hi hai chalo ab kaam shuroo kaein.
shree : ri tu arjun sir se shaadi kar ke na hamari wo ri rahi nahi balke arjun sir ki gusse wali mrs riya rawte hogi hai .
chottu : haan shree hum bohat dukhi hain aoni ri ko kho ke
riya come and hit her hand on both of their sholders and say mein wohi ri hoon tum logon ki and hug them together...

____THE END____

so guys how was the whole story hope you may like the last chapter plz leave your feed back and tell me how was the end.

Note : sorry guys if i hurt someone or anyone feel bad by my concept love you all and thanks for your support from start to end😊

Saba-Ramisa😃


Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago

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