Jyo.ArShi.Ipk:SS Mistress Ext 8/93 9th july 2013 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Wat?? Shyam rapd Khushi !!!
Oh... Noo...I thought she was bein rapd by arnav...
Nice story...Lovd it
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Lovelyy SS ... Thnxx jyo fr giving the link to this wonderful piece of writing... 😊
nd the writer... kudos to yuu ... freakingg awwsumm workk !! 👏
luvingg itt too BitzZ...😊
shyam as olwayzz... the bloody creepwa... along wid dt bloody money-digger lavanya... 😡 hate 'em to the core... 😡
feeling vryy sorry fr khushi... poor girl... hw mch vl she suffer...😒
arnav on the other hand again the angry young man... bt cn undstnd his angst... aftrol hez married to dt bitch... who wnts nothing bt money.. 😒
wondering hw vl arshi meet...
Precap soundz damn Xcitinggg... luking forward 2 c who gives the offer to whom...
nxt chap ASAP PlzZ.!
Nd Plzz Accpt my Buddy req. ...wanting to read more of yur workzZ.! 😉

LOves and Hugs,
Megha.! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
ok so first of all the chapter was mind blowing.
parents selling their children are not rare in india,its common but we cant do anything about that.
arnav is married and he hates his wife,then why is hhe married to her?
will no about when the story progress i think.
loved the update,will kushi acept the offer?
do tell me how to get pm from u.?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
omg that was awesome wow yaar really amazing too good poor khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Just read the teaser and the first chp.Poor Khushi! I feel really bad for her.Hope that Shyam get's punished for his disgusting deeds.Looking forward to the next chp and update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96




X-----------------------------------------------------X

BAM

shit ! did I just hit someone !
Thought Arnav to himself while getting out of his Car .
He ran to the body which was lifeless .

Beautiful ...
was the only word which came out of Arnav's mouth when he saw the girl lying infront of his car .
She had something different in her , coz Arnav Singh Raizada never found any girl beautiful rather than his Di , Girls came and went in his life but No One means No one had attracted him towards them , Even if they Practically Jumped on him ,
But
This girl did it in just one look ...

Arnav Saw the girl in Red , blood coming out of her body and making a pool around her , not thinking anything else He Picked her in his Arms and settled her on the back seat of his car and drove away .

X------------------------------------------------------X

Arnav Again took her in his arms and entered his Real Home . Home where He and His Di had lived happily , pulled pranked and did all kind of Fun , Home where He and His Di found peace , Far away from the Real and disgusting World was his " Smile MANSION" !


Smile Mansion sounds odd isn't but this name kept because his mom,dad and sis wanted that who so ever came here felt like home .

not thinking about the ugly past Arnav made his way inside the Mansion .
xxx

Arnav made the beauty lie on the bed


This was the first Time that after the horrible incidence , which changed his life , came into HIS room .

X-----------------------------------------------------X

Arnav was pacing outside his room , it has been more than an hour and the Doctor was still inside his room , checking the girl.
His brain was only chanting one thing
"plz don't let her be in pain "

His chant finally broke when he Saw the doc coming out of the Room .

How's she now ?
she is Fine ASR ! but I need to talk to you !
Yes , I'm listing !
ASR , The girl inside ! I know her !
What !
said a Arnav totally in Shock !
Yes ! She is Khushi Kumari Gupta , 24 year old girl , Adopted by Mr & Mrs. Shashi Gupta . I know her coz I'm her Family Doc , Like I'm your's , Mr & Mrs. Gupta never loved her , they only kept her with them coz she bought Income in their house , They treated her like animals but she never complaint , Mr and Mrs Gupta were Animals and they Proved it by Selling her 1 month before to some Man , Just for money! and seeing her condition Today I can say , the Man was no less then a beast.
And coming to her condition I'll Advice her proper rest , healthy food with soups and juice , These are some Medicine I'm prescribing few are Gel and few are tablets make sure she get them on time and she has many bites and injures on her body so I'll advice that she wears sarees , As it won't clutch on her body and the injures will be open to air which will help her to cure faster . And Now I should take Leave .
saying so the doctor left .
Arnav slowly entered the room , to find The Girl SoRrY CorReCtIoN Khushi peacefully sleeping on the bed .

Arnav not disturbing her , left the house to get the medicines and extra servants !

X-----------------------------------------------------X

Arnav was shocked to find the bed empty , He remembers well that , when he left the House she was sleeping , when he came back with the medicines and servants , he found it Empty .
Fear Started to take over him of losing her , He started to search the whole house .

Not able to find her fustrted Arnav Again came back to the room , when he saw something running behind the wardrobe . He made his way towards the Mirror..

Arnav finally found her , Behind the wardrobe in closed eyes and folded hands praying to god ! But his heart felt a stab when he saw the tears rolling down her cheeks. Arnav knew what he has to do .
Nothing Much but Only to be His original self !

X-----------------------------------------------------X

I know I had something else in the Precap But I wanted To make a update on Arnav's Feeling that's why its an additional part , it wasn't in my mind till I heard my fav song . and Then suddenly This feeling and Emotions came into me and I wanted to express it . And I think that I'm somewhere successful in it and I'll bring the first precap in next chapter ! thank you !

Precap 2 : Let me help you in putting this gel !
No I can do it
Don't Argue ! just turn back !

The Touch between them made Them go through Heaven !

Love
Diva
Edited by babydevil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Nice update, I like it!! do continue soon and thanks for the PM

PS The house is soo cool, where did you find the pic?
Edited by ArHiLover-x - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Awesome update continue soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: ArHiLover-x

Nice update, I like it!! do continue soon and thanks for the PM

PS The house is soo cool, where did you find the pic?


One and only OUR GOOGLE 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...Thx for the PM

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