Ariya ff:Dil se Dil tak (SHORT STORY PG 21)

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nivanthi2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

lovely ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

last part par kun kitna cute ff tha yaar...i wish ki show bhi tumhare ff ke jaisa hi ho...i wish...

hey arjun really so desperate to see riya or priya in ETF/...5.00 baje hi aa gaya office mein...😆

she is so happy to see ETF office and see herself as a ETF member...

wow she remember the Ganesha murti and that scene of pooja ...how cute...

everyone is trying to remember all her old memories...and finally they succeed in it...riya got her memories back...party time

wow arjun kitna pyara confess hai...tum to ek puri kitab likh sakate ho ki confess kaise kare...😆

awesome update...but feeling bad ki ye ff khatam ho gaya

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
last part par kun kitna cute ff tha yaar...i wish ki show bhi tumhare ff ke jaisa hi ho...i wish...

hey arjun really so desperate to see riya or priya in ETF/...5.00 baje hi aa gaya office mein...😆

she is so happy to see ETF office and see herself as a ETF member...

wow she remember the Ganesha murti and that scene of pooja ...how cute...

everyone is trying to remember all her old memories...and finally they succeed in it...riya got her memories back...party time

wow arjun kitna pyara confess hai...tum to ek puri kitab likh sakate ho ki confess kaise kare...😆

awesome update...but feeling bad ki ye ff khatam ho gaya

first thankyou so much for liking this ff pata hai jab mene isska ehd likha i also got tear's in eyes😭...

but isse acha end mere mind mein aaya hi nahi so yehi likh diya😆.

but it's ok jab start hota hai toh end bhi hota hai...

but i'm happy ke mera ye ff sab se zyada points ka tha😃

Edited by saba.ali81 - 13 years ago

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: saba.ali81

first thankyou so much for liking this ff pata hai jab mene isska ehd likha i also got tear's in eyes😭...
but isse acha end mere mind mein aaya hi nahi so yehi likh diya😆.
but it's ok jab start hota hai toh end bhi hota hai...
but i'm happy ke mera ye ff mere baaqi sab ss,ff,os se zyada points ka tha😃

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: saba.ali81

are kamal ka tha...end to mera fav. huva i'm so happy...

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

omg i read your entire FF in one go😉
beautiful concept dear👏
the way riya confessed her feelings for arjun to her friend and arjun over heard it was fantastic😃
their confrontation was so emotional😊
and the way they brought her memory back was excellent👏
i felt that last chapter was a bit in a rush so why dont you do an epilogue for us
that would be great😃
thanks for a beautiful story⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

sorry for late reply😳

Lovely ending dear, Priya finally remembered her past as Riya, and Arjun's love confession was so sweet...😳

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sana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

sorry rami-saba for late comment

but kya end tha

love it but sad that your most beautifull ff is ended😭

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Epilogue but in a short story from start to end

Arjun suryakant rawte

a boy named arjun suryakant rawte who lives in mumbai . arjun was broked after her wife's death named roshni .He had only one goal of his life and that was to finish his wife's killer his heart became a stone no feeling was left in him.he was a good cop bt after his wife he left the duty of a cop.bt bcoz of sikandar he join etf (emergency task force) which can help him to reach sikandar.

Riya mukharjee

riya is a soft heart cute girl.she loved guns and want to finish criminals from roots and want to be a big cop one day.her life want a boy who touch her heart who love her forever.she was in etf (emergency task force) who can fulfill her dream to ba a big cop.

one day they meet in etf office and got some feelings of love. like the time was going their hear's was sticking together.after sometime riya feel that she love arjun but her goodness arjun come to know about her feeling and he broked her heart.riya was living with her broken heart.but one day she fell down from a small mountainous and lost her memory.on that time arjun confess his feeling for riya but it was late now.suddenly arjun meet riya again and bring her memory back and in last bt not least they both get marry and live a happy life.

Love is the greatest refreshment in life...

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