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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

mayank apna feelings bol do



boly ga bolay ga


Originally posted by: Maria.

Aww Cute part:)

loved it
continue soon



thanks dear


Originally posted by: Faria.

Its fantastic update

Very Nice

The whole thing was beautifully arranged

Mayur part was sooo nice-loved their moment'

Nupur was dramy,shy and nautanki as usual...

awww mayank was admiring our Nupur-so cute...

So Sajan r going to engaged soon-hmm now its mayur's turn

waiting for mayors confession




thanksa lot dear glad u liked it
thnku so much
mayur turn it is


Originally posted by: raginisharma

NIce Story loved this nupur ...


Mujhe aisa kun lag raha ki mayank apni... pareshan hai...



thanksa lot dear

tum ko bulkil thik lagraha hai

yeah story zaroorat se zayda obivous nhi hai yaar


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

this is awesome i loved this story



thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Humayra

Awww, it was sweet like super sweet's jalebi..

Is Mayank gonna propose her? Oh, I'm so excited!
Please continue soon..




thaksa lot dear
lolzz
will cont soon

Originally posted by: shafyyy

that was really cute and nice part..

loved it...
awsome...


So finally Gunjan's engagement is fixed..
i am so happy for her..
Here Mayank and Nupur...indeed have feelings for each other
yet they are not able to felt themselves




thanks alot dear
glad u lilked it

yup its fixed
they know tht.. there is knowing hiden here.. its all clear n simple


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

loving this mayank and nupur

beautiful part
continue soon



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it



Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

cute update!😳
ab itne raat ko q aaya h mayank nupur ke ghar pe?😲
update asap!😛



thanksa lot dear

gues guess😉

woh tu mein ny nhi kiya
sorry


Originally posted by: crazymayurian

osum am loving it muwah api




thnks alot dear




thnks alot


Originally posted by: gopi06

cute & sweet updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm



thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Update soon yaa Fiza... aise situations pe, why do u stop??? whyyy?????


Btw, Lovely update 😊




i will try to

yeah tu kerna perta hai bus kya kerain
thnks dear




thanks alot




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Posted: 12 years ago
thanku so much for liking..rplyed to u all

per mjhy nhi pata yeah update kasa hai... the most awaited one

Part 6:

Life was going on with full swing, a week n engagement and gunjan was having anxiety attacks due to the kinda of arrangement she want, and nupur was having depression as she need to clam her down every now or than…

But for someone life was completely stagnant .. he just donot know wht to do and what not to.. trying 200 times, figuring 1000 ways… he was feeling like complete dam… a he was feeling like pulled in all this.. between Nupur n gunjan… whom to handle… pitty on Nupur and God help for gunjan…

But than he was seeking help for himself more…. Things are going to end soon.. and still he has no plans nothing in his mind.. doesn't know wht he is gonna do and how to do.. so in all in all he was the one who was in soup much more thn anyone else

Mayank: mayank Sharma tumhara kuch nhi hosakta.. nupur sahi kahti hai…. Itna kyun soch rahy ho… just hit the bell and get inside… say it.. sab set hojay ga… ..he look up to God fro help… I hope so…

It was mid night and nupur was working ..the bell rung and she was scared, this hr, who it can be… she slowly went to the door finding sumthing around to bang the head of person but than thought frst to look ..she look to find mayank.. she was more shocked,…hope everything is fine..she opened the door

Nupur: kya hua mayank sab thik tu haina nah … he tried to say sumthing… gunjan thik hai..ghar mein ki msala hua hai…

Evrytime he tied to say she wasn't letting him, it was getting on his nerves…already he was finding ways to say it all and now she.. she is making him forget all he has plan

Mayank: nupur meri baat suno

Nupur: han tu wohi sun tu rahi hoon….per tum kuch bol kyun nhi rahy ho hua kya hai…

Mayank: chup… shut up…

She got scared..as he made her asidet opened the door close it ..locked it… and turned to her… she was just looking at him with wide eyes they he was doing all.. and than he turn to her and she gulp

Nupur: kya baat hai asay ghusa kyun ker rahy ho

Mayank: mjhy tum se bat kertni hai…

Nupur: han wohi tu poch rahi hoon k ghar per sab thik hai .. gunjan Samrat ki lari hoagie kiya

Mayank: nupur khamsohi se meri baat nhi sun sakti..

Nupur: maynk kya hua hai..

She was just watching his steps tht were cuming towards her.. and she was feeling to move back automatically

Mayank: kuch nhi .. I said mjhy kuch batna hai tum ko

Nupur: han tu door se bhi tu bata sakt y ho asa kyun chal rahy ho

Mayank: lo tum hi tu kahti thi k mein rudely baat kerta hoon ab pyar se ker raha hoon tu bhag kyun rahi hoo..

He was enjoying.. his smirk was growing and she was giving him al the confidence he needs to have… she was giving him much more thn tht…

Nupur: dekho mayank mazak tak thik hai tum itna serious kyun horahy ho

Mayank: ab tu hogaya ho so seriously sigh aj sab kuch ker hi jao

Nupur: sab kuch se kay murad hai tumahri hain.. she hit her self with the wall and looked back to see she is caught… she gulp and looked at him.. who was cuming dangerously close to her.. mayank… she closed her eyes tightly… mein ny kya kya kiya maar ny kyun arahy ho..

Mayank: What…. He looked at her and bust in to laughter .mein tum ko marany aay hoon…. Really.. ,mein tu marny aya tha… I mean mein tum ko marny aya hoon.. oky… Aur asa kyun

She opened her eyes to see him laughing…. And frown

Nupur: tu itni intensity se tum pass aao gay tu pakka kuch garbar hai.. aur kya kero gay mar hi sakty ho…. Mjhy se tu wasy hi dushmni hai

He hold his laugh and breath stabling himself… it ws utterly cute when it cums to flirt she scares him and when it cums to reality she got herself scared ..it has always been such… one look, slight touch.. closeness all made her weak on her knees and he actually always enjoyed that part of her.. when she actually behaves like a innocent swet girl…

Mayank: dhusham se scoh raha hoon aj badla lay ker hi jao

She has pout on her face and she was looking through her lashe to him, captivating sight it was, innocent and cute she was looking… so much… he smiled at her and placed his both hands on either side of her face..her eyes went wide and she was bout to say sumhing when he stoped him from his eyes….and she kept it shut… wao mayank that's going great.. u can actually do tht… making her obey wht u want..

He leaned towards her and she was feeling her heart going out of her chest.. he isn't planning to do wht her heart is thinking… it cant be… he will never…but she was seeing so much in his eyes.. tht she always wanted to see.. she wants to hold it… they want to hold it… but than she doesn't know is it for real… yet she was slowly getting lost in the intensity was his eyes…. When his closeness was hard to take … she closed her eyes giving her more n more time to pounder over her…he leaned more close and whispered in her ears ..making her shiver with his closeness

Mayank: I love u

With that he move abit away and she has her eyes still closed…she still cant imagine wht she heard… maybe it's a dream..nah she wasn't sleeping.. is he making fun of her… she is gonna kill him…

She opened her eyes with a shocked..and found him casually leaning on her…a dn raising his eyes brows in wht

Nupur: tum mera mazak ura rahy ho

Mayank: KYA

Nupur: han… tumhary sath mein filrt kerti hoon tu aj tum asa ker k meray mazak kbana rahy hoo.. hai nah…

Mayank: tumahra deemgh karab hogaya hai kya

Nupur: mera koi deemgh karab nhi hua

Mayank: nupur ek tu mein itni muskil se yeah sab kiya uper se tum ajeeb kism ki baatein ker rahi hoon…

Nupur: ji nhi… mjhy pata hai tumhara asa koi irada nhi hai… tum ko pata hai mjhy ajeeb lagta hi jab tum asa kuch kerty ho…islyn tum ny socha k tit for tat keray..

Mayank: exactly mein yeahi soch raha hoon k tit fro tat kero

Nupur: dekho… tum mera mazak ur rahy ho nah… she pouted.. mein tu asay hi kerti thi.. per tum tu kaha tak lay gay…

He doesn't he should smile at the cuteness or should hit his head ..wht this girl is … wao… he was scared tht what kinda of flirting he is gonna face today yet yaha tu ulti ganag bahrahi hai

Mayank: tum sach woh sab asy hi kerti thi..

Nupur: era mm… m.. haan.. haaan..

Mayank: nupur I am serious

Nupur: kaun sa serious…

Mayank: KYA>.. he cant control his laugh… her expressions are dam funny

Nupur: han matlab kis baat per serious

Mayank: sigh.. tht I love u.. mazak nhi ker raha hoon… I am serious…

Nupur: serious?

Mayank: haan… kyaaa.. asay bol rahi ho jasay tumhain tu pata hi nhi tha…

She nodded in yes and than no…he hit his head with his hand and laughed…

Mayank: wht has gone into u…. kya hua…

Nupur: pata nhi… it weird..

Mayank: what… is se zayda kuch do u expect from me…..

Nupur: mein ny tu yeah bhi expect nhi kiya tha.. mjhy laaga tha yeah kam bhi mjhy hi kerna paray ga…

Mayank: really … tu phely batna tha nah ..bekar mein itny dino se tension mein soch raha hon kya bolo…

Nupur: ya..

Mayank: hmm…

They were standing in the same position looking around.. with his one hand on the wall still…and she leaning to the wall

Nupur: now wht

Mayank: mjhy kya pata… mera tu first time hai

Nupur: acha mein tu 55 k sath ghoom chuki hoon nah.. aur tumahra first time hai jhotay… tumahri skool mein thi nah kya naam tha us k riyaa…

Mayank: excuse me… woh meri GF nhi thi samjhi…

Nupur: wht ever… riya k piya

Mayank: nupur stop calling me tht…

Nupur: na kero tu kya kerlo ga…aur haan hato samany se… kal tumahri behan ny ghar bolaya hai decor dekhny ko… mjhy suna hai… good nite…

She broke the chain of his arms and was moving out…though she want to do sumthing else but than she doesn't know it was ritgh or worng…..

he can feel her little discomfort or not knowing wht next the should be expecting form each other… she always does.. whenever he is really close to her… he can se her going slightly paniced .. and than she escape from there…but even he doesn't know she will be oky with it or not…. But than why he is thinking so much….. . He griped her hand and she turn to look at him… he smirk and she raised her eyes…and than he pulled her in his arms.. embracing her tightly…

That was exactly she wanted to have… him close to her… but she didn't want to make it first knowing how reluctant he is about all this…

It was best having her where she belongs.. having certain peace now.. he is fedup of running away, doing wht he doesn't want to, having what he never desire.. he always wanted things simple… that always have her n gunjan in it… and even now he doent want her to go away … she always gave him the strength he wants, the motivations, the warmth he crave for..

But today all of a sudden why he is feeling her weak, she was holding him so tightly.. not that he minds yet this inst her.. sumthing is running in her mind…defo running in her mind…

He slight rubed her back to make her a bit clam… and than broke and hold her face to make her look …

Mayank: he had a frown on his face.. what cooking…

Nupur: it's a bad idea

Mayank: what..

Nupur: sigh… tumhri mom khabi nhi many gi…

He chukled…

Mayank: as if I care… woh mera masala hai

Nupur: MAYANK..

Mayank: moving his fingers slightly in her hairs he hold her faced and pecked her forehead softly…. Go n sleep.. mein bhi ghar jaraha hoon… see ya 2morow… Good nite…

He moved away leaving a dumb fold nupur, he never go against his family .. now the question is from her side…whats cooking… but what made her shocked was mayank Sharma expressive… she touched her forehead …did he kissed her… freak.. she was so lost in the moment that she forget to pull his leg… cumon she cant do tht at the moment of her life… the moment she thought she has to make things work.. never she thought he will cum to her and say that to her… and than will hug her n kiss her… wah yeah tu kamal hogaya…

She moved forward and locked the door… and turned around… she smiled that changed itn to grin..and than she junped and shouted loud…. YUpiii.. she laughed and went straight to her room…almost dancing … she has to share this with her best friend who care if she is his sister..

But before that her cell rung and to her surprise it was mayank

Nupur: kya baat hai… abhi se meri yaad saata rahi hai..

Aha his all worries tht she is may not be feeling oky or not good or a bit worried went away..Nupur is back officially

Mayank: ji nhi… tum ny agar gunjan ko abhi yeah bataya nah tu tum dekho…

Nupur: kay matalb hai… mein apni best frnd ko nhi batao gi

Mayank: tumahri best frnd meri behan hai..jis k bait mein koi baat nhi rehti… aur agar ghar mein asay pata chala na tu aur ajeeb hi hojay gay… so keep ur mouth shut

Nupur: oye nobody ask me to shut up..

Mayank: nupurrr…

Nupur: oky swami…

Mayank: tum so jao better hai…

Nupur: haay… ab mjhy neend kaha aay gi…

Mayank: God tum nhi badal sakti …..

Nupur: tum actually mein chahty ho mein badlo

Mayank: nhi…

Nupur: aay haay…. Mayank tum tu hindi film k hero lag rahy ho

He actually smiled

Aur sharam bhi rahy hoo….

Mayank: im not blushing

Nupur: sweet our…

Mayank: nupurrr..

Nupur: phir se kaho nah… acha lagta hai

Mayank: acha soch raha hoon tumahry hi ghar ajay… phir bolo..tmahra naam aur wasy bhi hum dono ko hi neend nhi arahi wht say

Nupur: good nite…

Mayank: he chuckled …goodnite…

Gosh i loves her, the stupid idiot intelligent shy and bold…. All together.. do any when in this world has such piece….. Sharma u have really lost it .. I know tht


Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



yes just wait few mins

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so cute confession fiza .loved it!!!!

total mayurish confession n nupur to by gawd .
aur ye mayank bhi jabhi my heartbeat is increasing n m being heated wo nupurpe haske pani dal deraha tha

by d way ,so i was r8 na!!!!!
though dey never confessd but knew dat dey love eachoder .
i wanna knoe deir past .
how d feelings grew ...plzzz
Edited by kheya-mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fizaaa ths is it most simpe yet romantic confession
finally Mayank Sharma cmng in his elements thanx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lodsss
Beaitofully written
loved it to d coreee
hayee...Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayank proposed Nupur...
God!!!! that was soo simple yet cute n Adorable...😆😳
loved it lodsss
n hayeee...yeh Nupur bhi na uff!! 😆🤣
weird n all han...🤣 bt i think asa hota hain..jyada tease jo kar rahi thi madam 😆
bt really loved this Mayank actually i really loved it when Mayank came out of his shell in front of him n in that moment we can see a different Mayank n a different Nupur...😉😆
loved it sooo much!!!!!!
n hayee...this time m waiting for Mayank's parents reaction n his take!! 😉😆
n lolzzz yeh ladki bhi na chali hain apne to-be sister-in-law aka apne best frnd ko bolne control hi nhi hota na...😉😆😛
accha hua Mayank ne mana kar diya 😆
n Gosh!! again i loved their teasing session
loved it lodsss
continue soon
love u lodsss API.🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god mayank said it. so cute and lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was most awesome
yet sober
cute yet romantic...love confession..

loved it..
too good..

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