i too Had a Love Story.LAST PART..page 13 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yupzzz do continue...itz my favrt book...wanted to see ur version of story...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yess...
plzzz
continue soon...
eager to know whar happened further...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what a silly que??? continue soon... plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue Continue continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
yes yes y u stoped continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes off couce annaya we all want to know what had happen to RaYa how they confesses their love n them sepreted... so do update soon waiting to read it... btw this was nice part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey my computer isnt working proprly ..so will have sme problem on givng further updates.. plz excuse...


Some love stories stay incomplete,, but they became the treasures of the world...My and hers was one of them...

Now let me state a day before our engagement...We planned for our first date...

Sitting on a round table...waiting for my love...looking at the time again and again... i made my mind to call her...

'' where r u jaan ?? i m waiting for u ''

'' m nt feeling well ''

'' kyun kya hua ?? r u ok ''

'' no m not ''

'' arrey... priya hua kya hain tumhe ... Have u gone to the doctor ''

'' Haan ... ''

''so what he said... everythings fine na ''

''he said ..i m not fine ''

'' priya ..tell me the truth kya hua hain... ''

'' doctor ne kahan hain ki ...''

'' batao na kya kahan hain ??''

''he said i'll be fine..if ...''

'' why the hell u stoppd at IF ??? age bolo bhi ..''

''If aap mere gharpe aao... aur candle lights ke saamne baithke mere haato ki banayi hui Rajma chawal mere haato se khaaoo '' and she started smiling...

'' tumhe pata hain..Tumne dara dia tha mujhe kitna... ??? '' and i cut the phone...


Soon i reached her place..before i could ring the bell she opened the door..without uttering any word i went inside the room..without a talking a little... It was not a new place for me...my own house,,, But so well decorated with candles and all...I melted but why would i miss an oppurtunity to tease her ?? ... I stopped my lips..

'' Kya hua ??'' she asked in a mischvs soft voice...

I stayed quiet...

'' waise punjabio ko..itna shant a6a nahin lagta...''

I was controlling my lil smile...

''waise itna naraazgi bhi jaachti nahin aapko ''

as usual ... no answer from my side...

'' mujhe samaj nahin ataa...ki ...''

i ddnt rply..but was eager to hear more from her...

She dragged again ''ki...''

My mind was saying '' ki kya >??'' but i was not the man to open my mouth..

''arrey puchho bhi ...mein kya bolna chahati hun ''

now she came in front of me...

''arrey puchhona... ''

I turned opposite to her again...

she said '' ki ..Koi vala aapne jaan se hi gussa kaise rahe sakta hain ''

I melted cmpletely with that swt word and before i could say anything she again came in front of me looked at me.. gently hold her ears and said softly... ''M sorry''
and i smiled and said '' bas bas aab aur maska marne ki zaroorat nahin hain '' and i hugged her ...


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Tumse juda hone ki chah na thi...Tumse dur hone ki khwahish na thi...
Hum jeete rahe par Tum na ho... tumhe khone ki guzaarish na thi...

''Priya kafi dino se bohot bimar hain...uski haato pe raashes dikhai de rahe hain... I think use aab doctor dikha lena chahie...'' soumya showed her concern

''haan to..paar maane tab na... I mean wo to aapne kaam se uth hi nahin rahi... Kuch kahene jaau to kaheti hain... Bimaari hi to hain... Thik ho jaayegi ... doctor ke paas jaana hi nahin chahati ''

''Achha agar use koi problem nahin ho rahi hain, to tum bhi pressure maat do...''

''aur waise bhi kuch hi dino mein sagai hain donoki... naraz hoke chaali na jaaye '' ...rishab made fun...

'' i guess u right '' i relaxed

''aur waise bhi bimaari thik tin din dawai do to thik hojata hain ya fir tin din dawai naado ...to bhi thik ho jata hain '' Priya joined our conversation...

'' God...kahan se tapaq pari ?? '' i investigated ...
'' jab aap mere burai kar rahe the '' she said with a naughty smile..
'' nahin nahin . he was shwing his love and concern '' somya said
'' aanchhiii '' she made a sound
''dekha ..kahe raha hun doctor ko dikhao...doctor ko dikhaao...
saardi ho gayi hain..haato pe rashes ... chahera fika paar gaya hain tumhaara... Y cant u check it up ?? ''
'' aapko saardi nahin hui kya kabhi,,, ??''
''hua hain..paar aisi wali sardi nahin...''
'' Mr.Kapoor... dnt be so xcited ...zukham hi hain... Maar thorei naa jaungi... ''
''Just will u plz shut up...thappar khaaogi mujhse... aaur marne dharne wali baat kahan se aagayii ?? dnt say so yaar ''

'' m sorry baba ''
''stop it yaar ''
''arrrey baba... kahan chhodke jaaungi mein aapko ?? waise bhi mein jaanti hu..bhale hi aap punjaabi sher ho... lekin biwi ke pallu ke bagair jee nahn sakte ''
''u spoiled my mde... mujh kuch sunna nahin hain ''
'' a6a baba... okay..i'll go with u to the doctor okay ??''
''sure??''
''haan baba ..ofcourse ''
''cme give me a hug ''
and she rolled on my arms...
with rishab and somya sayiiing...wooo...and teasing us lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute update dear.. by y d they separate?? :( :(... itz k i l wait n c... continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
yaar every thing fine with priya😕😕😕 update i love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME story yaar how RaYa got separate this is getting so emotional is Priya is all right???? is anything got wrong with her health... do update soon waiting for next... 😊

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