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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...gd ni8 API 🤗🤗🤗
love u lodsss 🤗🤗🤗
waise ap kal kya Prichey n OS dono update karogi ek sath???

n han...jaha tak Nupur ka Gunjan ke in-laws ke samne jane ki baat hain...plzzz yaar alteast ap toh asi batein na karo...i hate it!!! ke kisi ko dekhne aye n then usko chor kar uski sis ya frnd jo bhi uske sath dikhai de unko like karein..yaar i mean yeh kya hain!!! Disgusting!!! n asa hain toh LAdki also can like jo ladka dekhne aya uska bhai ya frnd then uss gadhe ladke ko kesa feel hoga??? hmph! mujhe toh yeh bilkul nhi pasand!!!! 😳
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed




thansk alot dear
glad ur enjoying it...

lolzz.. yaar bachy pata hai mein thora biase hoon mayank k lay ker... tu us ko bura bana muskil hojata hai MY k kafi tha... woh bhi bura nhi tha real tha...


abt ur PS... thanks alot dear ... kafi din po*na hai i think almost an year.. aur arsy se WC per kcuh likha nhi. tu band tu hona tha...
thanks alot dear... for going back n loving n finding meanings in it...



han..just like mai nupur ke liye bias hu😆😆
about WC..why don't u write something...I love ur writings other than MN..they all use to be so meaningful..ab dekho kal mera kuch acha padne ka man tha to maine aapke WC wale sare OS's pad dale😆 coz I love them😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



oky on serious note...
MY doesnt have a vamp... they both r responsible for wht evr hppen to there relation

n yaha bhi koi vamp nhi hai i tell u


aur yeah kaun sa gana hai hmm hmm tells tells


TM= Tum miley ...title track😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Ok...gd ni8 API 🤗🤗🤗

love u lodsss 🤗🤗🤗
waise ap kal kya Prichey n OS dono update karogi ek sath???

n han...jaha tak Nupur ka Gunjan ke in-laws ke samne jane ki baat hain...plzzz yaar alteast ap toh asi batein na karo...i hate it!!! ke kisi ko dekhne aye n then usko chor kar uski sis ya frnd jo bhi uske sath dikhai de unko like karein..yaar i mean yeh kya hain!!! Disgusting!!! n asa hain toh LAdki also can like jo ladka dekhne aya uska bhai ya frnd then uss gadhe ladke ko kesa feel hoga??? hmph! mujhe toh yeh bilkul nhi pasand!!!! 😳




the ans for OS now u know... i thought so yet. sum unplanned came..

yaar i do agree with tht.. but im telling u she is behaving as all moms n adults do ...

this was exactly i said ,,, when sumthing like this happend with a cousin n her mom said no to the guy obivouly for saying ji humain yeah wali nhi woh wali pasand hai... so there was debate going on near my time ... tu us per mein ny yeahi kaha tha mjhy larky k dosra bhai pasnad agay tu kya hoga😆... yet mostly adults to this not to make them confused rather to safe the girl from geting dishearten...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--


han..just like mai nupur ke liye bias hu😆😆
about WC..why don't u write something...I love ur writings other than MN..they all use to be so meaningful..ab dekho kal mera kuch acha padne ka man tha to maine aapke WC wale sare OS's pad dale😆 coz I love them😳




writing on WC means u need a soild inpritation for saying sumthing... i tired last night ..yet didnt happen... i m just not in tht touch to write sumthing like tht maybe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.





My mistake janni its MY.
Aj kal na jane q mere dimagh pr TM hi sawar rehta hai.My fav song hai.😳



oky on serious note...
MY doesnt have a vamp... they both r responsible for wht evr hppen to there relation

n yaha bhi koi vamp nhi hai i tell u


aur yeah kaun sa gana hai hmm hmm tells tells

TM= Tum miley ...title track😳


oho tu koi mil gaya 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update aj bhi nhi milega kya???
kitne dino se waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ya kinda.,..

kal doongi paka...
sorry i being too late these days..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Rplyed to u all… thanks all for liking this ss so much…

Part 5

Mayank: wht…

As he came inside the terrace to look for her.. he saw sumthing beautiful … it was all dark ..just the lights they have placed around the railing ….the reflection of those light on her face made her glow like gold…. Her face graced with slight smile, and her hands touching the flowers…. She was looking like an angel.. yet more than that She was actually looking at all the things with smile…. It seems she was weaving sum dreams or was just trying to weave… he couldn't hold.. he really want to know… does tht dream anywhere have him with her…. Though his wht was soft yet she can hear the slight smile n curiosity in it..

Nupur: kitna ajeeb hai nah… ek dam se koi kasay itna sab kuch janta ho..ya nah bhi janta ho tu itni fikar kerny lagy… k jasa usy pasand hai sab kuch wasa hi hoo.. the smallest to the largest things… itni fikar tu reishtdar nhi kertay… bahar wala kasay ker sakta hai…

Wht she was questioning he doesn't know… him them or life… yet he knew the answer for sure…

Mayank: feelings…

Nupur: ya feelings….

Mayank: they change things more than u thought

Nupur: ya… Tu yaha sab set hai.. aur waha koi upset hai..

Mayank: woh bhi set hojay gai… I have to go down check kero..

Nupur: hmm aur mein gunjan k pass jao…

Mayank: ek min yeah kya hai

Nupur: mayank is ko bahr maat nikalo…

Mayank: yeah cell phone kya ker raha hai

Nupur: tu tumhary kamray se chup ker jab hum un ki baatein dekhny waly hain..tu sirf picture ati… pata tu chaly k Samrat bol kya raha hai

Oky now Nupur n mayank were officially back .. he look at her in waoo…

Mayank: nupur yeah un ki privacy hai

Nupur: shadi nhi hoi hi unki jo mein un ko privacy do… aur tum ankehin band kerly nah.. mein tu sunay walo hoo…

Mayank: ankehin band kerny se soni nhi day ga..he said chewing his words

Nupur: acha tu kaan bhi band kerlya nah

Mayank: aur tum suno gi kasay

Nupur: simple… is per call mila do gi way back.. yaha se attend kerdo gi.. intelligence

Mayank: mein yaha honga hi nhi… better… sahi jaga tu tum intelligence k istaml kergi nhi nah…

Nupur: ji ni..anty apko gunjan k sath zaroor behjhy gi… likh lo meri baat.. aur kam tu tum bhi nhi ho. Suny tu tum ko bhi

………..

MM: mayank

Mayank: ji…

MM: jao woh log agay hain un ko receive kero…

Mayank: sure… hey..

Samrat: hey mayank.. he shook hands with him

And mayank has the family to cum in…after few moments of chating..the strt looking here n there for gunjan

S'Mom: gunjan kaha hai nazar nhi arahi

MM: mein bolti hoon…

Samrat: anty if u donot mind .. can I meet her first…

MM: han beta sure u can…. Woh uper apny kmaray mein hai… mayank beta will u guide him

Mayank: kya baat hai maa.. ek dam se itna sab he whispered under his breath.. sure..cum Samrat..

Moving into hall.. samrat actually corrected his collar , made his hair.. and mayank couldn't hold to shock his head..

Samrat: what.. im nervous yaar..tumahri behan ko koi behroosa nhi hai… usko style pasand nhi aya tub hi mein reject hojao ga…

Mayank: tum meri behan ki abhi se bori ker rahy hoo

Samrat: wasy I didn't knew tum itny cool bhi hosaktay hoo…

Mayank: matlab

Samrat: matlab tum humain help kero gay

Mayank: jab tak meri behan ki khushi hai is mein im helping u… nhi hogi tu I can threw u out….dude.. so

Samrat: bolty nupur ki language mein kaha jay tu ..tum waqi sadu or cool k ajeeb combination ho..

Mayank: nupur ki language per maat jao meray liya.. us mein aur buhat kuch hojao ga..

Samrat: ya ya.. I can see that.. khass loog tu khass hi hongay …

Mayank: what do u mean….

Samrat: I mean .. u all know each other differently nah.. except me… phew Samrat need to watch it

Mayank: hmm… tum waha terrace mein jao.. I will ask gunjan…

Samrat: yeah gunjan k room nhi hosakta…

Mayank: mera hai… koi problem

Gunjan.. he wants to meet u jao… koi baat ho just call me okay..

Gunjan: don't worry bhai is k liyan tu mein hi kafi hoo

Nupur: thts the spirit…achay se band bajana ..thik hai.. go.. hum as paas hi hongay…

Gunjan went towards his room and she proceed to behind her…

Mayank: tu baz nhi aao gi nah

Nupur: nhi… she reached behind the curtain .so can have clear view from the glass door….

Gunjan enter the terrace and was amzed to see it like this, decor with few lights, it was looking so romantic n pleasant. And the way he was standing there was not less than looking like a hero.. but sigh kash samrat hota.. but why bhai's room terrace is like tht..

With the step of her he turned around with smile.. and she was shocked..

Gunjan: TUM..

Nupur moved her Bluetooth a little away

Nupur: kitni zoor se chilti hai..

Mayank: chilai kyun… kya kaha us ny

Nupur: suna tu tum ko bhi hai… bolna maat.. rukho speaker per dalti hoo..volume kam kerny do warna dono sochoy ga bhai ny echo effect k bhi intezam kiya tha…

Mayank came n stod behind nupru..watching them and listening to… they both were pretty excited to know how she feels, to see her happiness.. n finally watching her having what she always wish for..

Samrat: han mein hoon… pehly meri baat suno pls…phir kuch bhi react kerna….

He went on his knees

Nupur: why the boy always went on his knees… sedha seedh bolny mein kya masla hai…

Mayank: donot wory tumhara wala soli per charh ker propose keray ga.. nupur tum se pyar kerna aur phir sath rehna.. ufff.. islayn mein yaha soli parh garay hoker bol raha hoon… I love u.. n next he is dead.. yani much more peaceful place… RIP poor soul

Nupur: her jaw droped..and than she frowned.. itni bhi bori nhi hoon mein

Mayank: han bus.. Idiotic ho stupid ho..irritating hoo… aur kuch ajeeb hi hooo… aur ankhein k size bhi kuch uper neechy hain

Nupur: KYA.. she touched her eyes…koi nhi

Mayank: nhi im serious…dekho…

Nupur: mayank bekar ki baatein maat kero

Ahh he love that pout with anger…

Mayank: mein bulkily serious hoon….. he touched her one eye brow …yeah uper hai… and touched her other eyes.. or yeah side per.. She shuddered under his touch.. as he softly rub his thumb on her lashes… completely lost in the reaction she was giving he was mesmerized with the innocence at time he see in her….

It was always fun, really fun to see her like that… but more than fun it always give him so much inside that he even cant explain…. It was strange a moment she is jhasi ki rani and the other just mere closeness of his and she will be a blushing hesitant shying bride.. but he loves it.. she look azming like this… he smiled slightly still his fingers linger near her eyes… if once he would have followed his heart he would have ended up claiming her.. hold it dude she wil faint right there… he chukled at himself

She hates it …when he do this to her… she feels like so numb, neither she can speak nor she can moves, and above all she even cant enjoy it.. its hard at once she feel he knew wht he is doing and what it cause to her… and other he behave as nothing is new… ya she knew tht there is nothing new… but still… cant he just make her sure of things..

All of this passionate gaze, holding her closes at time possessiveness, and more over his touch wch he knew shuddered her, make her so weak and make things awakard to between them and the thing that she doesn't want to to happen is the any discomfort between them

Samrat: gunjan I know maybe this way made u abit worried… yet the surprise and that beautiful smile was all worth it..

The voice of Samrat made them cum out… mayank moved away abruptly and she hold herself… and came back to her ways

Nupur: khabi apny wali k baray mein socha hai.. forget it..tumahri wajah se mera confession mis hojay ga.. shut up..

Mayank was sumwhere still there.. he wasn't listening to the confession he was watching her chainging expressions.. the smile… the nervousness.. biting her lips… at times giggling… at time frown… all of it.. he has so much pending to do .. but than he never felt like going out of the way to do so… isn't it so obvious…

Samrat: the moment I saw u in the party I was all into u… and the more I was getting to know u the more I felt ur made for me.. and so I certainly donot want to loss u.. Ms gunjan sharam I love u …will u marry me….

Gunjan smiled fully.. it was as if one of her dream confession was cuming true..she placed her hand on his hand and he kissed her hand..

He stood up…and gunjan hugged him.. and Nupur suddenly cut the call n moved form there ..mayank cant hold to his smile… he wants to tease her…. He cant tease her for blushing on his touch but atleast now he can

Mayank: tum kyun blush ker rhai hoo.. tumhain thori bola tha… wasy yeah tu kamal hai tum blush bhi kerti hoo

Nupur: mein koi blush nhi ker rahi hoo… aur jitna dekhna tha dekha liya.. now thts there moment…. Mein jarahi hoo..chupkay se… u guys have fun..

Mayank: tu ruk jao dinner k baad chali jana ..ab tu sab set hai

Nupur: nhi its okay… thanks.. n BTW… congrats ..

Mayank: thanks for helping…

Nupur: tumahry liyan nhi kiya.., bye..

Samrat told gunjan everything about her friend n brothers work..and she was so overwhelmed with it.. she moved in room to find her brother reading a book..

Gunjan : bhaiii.. she shouted and he stood up smilingly.. and she hugged him tightly…. Thankuuu.. I love o much

Mayannk: ya ya.. really..

Gunjan: bhaiii….. nupur kaha hai…

Mayank: she left….

Samrat: lo.. I need to thank her aur woh asay hi bhag gai….yeah kya baat hoi…. Wasy woh aksar asa kerti hai..

Mayank: she had sumwork….chalein neechy… everyone must be waiting kafi lambiii chat hogai..

Samrat: ya sure… please… he asked gunjan to move in fornt..and join her..

Reaching down they have dinner and inbetween Samrat tell his parent to say yes.. and so everything was finalized… families were dam happy.. it was the breaking news… deciding the engagement to be ASAP.. the fixed the date of next weekend…

………….

Nupur: aay haay… koi tu mjhy pinch kero… koi tu

Mayank: uff.. if u donot stop it in second mein phone rekh raha hoon

Nupur: chukled… aray tu tum ny meray phone ko tumahra naam flash kerny ki izaat di… ab mein itna bhi na celebrate kero…. Kya baat hai ji.. raaat k is pahar apko humari yaad kyun aii

Mayank: deemgh karab tha mera jo musbiat ko khud galay dala… bulkily chup.. ek lafz aur nhi… suno.. gunjan ki engagement next wekedn per finalize hogai hai

Nupur: oh waoo that's so great…

Mayank: thanks tum us din yeah sab plan nhi kerti tu woh aj itna khush nhi hoti

Nupur: zara dekho tu us ko .. us ny mjhy nhi bataya yaqeenan samrat k sath lagi hogi..

Mayank: probably…. Hmm.. ok.. bus mein ny yeah batana tha…

Nupur: thik hai..thanks… abhi tumahri behan ki class layti hoon… good nite

Mayank: good nite…..

Gosh why simple things are so difficult.. tera kuch nhi hosakta Mayank Sharma.. Good nite…

…………

Nupur: kya musbiat hai…. Is waqt kaun hai.. arahi hoo nah..

She opened the door and her jaw droped….

Nupur: what the.. tum is waqt kya ker rahy hoo… yaha meray ghar per.. .. gunjan thik hai …mayank bolo gay…

Mayank: nupur woh

Nupur: ab kiya… gosh…

mayank: shut up nupur ..let me speak

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
lolzz...yeh Nupurtoh 😆 bhttt mst hain..By God!!
n yeh Mayank total bhai hain...😆
loved Samrat teasing Mayank..
n God!! Nupur blushing n Mayank teasing her was really cute..
n woh chali kyun gayi yaar rukna tha na
pata nhi Mayank kab apne mom dad ko samjhayega..Sigh!
lolzzz...i loved her ay haye koi toh pinch karo wala line it reminded me of koi toh rok lo line from ready 😆
loved it lodsss
OMG!!! Mayank woh bhi itni raat ko...
are we gonna witness our most awaited confession...hayeee koi toh mujhe sambhalo..😆🤣
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API 🤗>:D<]🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago

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