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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb work..
I am falling in love with this FF...😆
Amazing and fantastic way of writing...👍🏼
Love you for this FF...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor arnav but i guess this was needed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tamannausa

Aww Ria, as I said you are awesome, talented, excellent etc. etc.👏..your writing is great n unquestionably wonderful. I admire your thought process. Please make the story whichever way you feel like, I am sure ..I will love that.❤️❤️

Thank you so much Tamanna di 😳
Hope I can live up to your expectations 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lareefab

i'm in tears Ria, it's so beautiful.

how can Kushi do this i know she is hurt herself, but please let her love take over her hurt and accept Kushi. I also loved the way how innocent Kirthi is and the way she ran into the arms of her father it's just awesome. i'm visualising it all. Great work Ria, i can keep on writing but i'm still pondering.
simply superb👏

Thank you so much, La di.. Haaw, it wasn't that good to make you cry 😳

Awww your comment is so beautiful.. I have read it at least 3-4 times now 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Keenal

Okay, so let me start with honesty here 😆

i had 9 PM's of you of this FF that i hadn't open until now but finally i got little time today and did so 😉
and omg i read the whole chapters from 1-9 in half an hour cuz i was waiting to know what happened next, and truly, your FF is great 👏 from khushi to arnav to kirthi to australia to india to flashbacks to allen's industries to YOU!! everything's awesome!!! I loved it! ⭐️ and your also doing an awesome job keeping up with these 👍🏼 Do continue, keep posting, don't forget to PM me, and your so amazing that i don't even have any other words to describe YOU!! ILY ❤️ 🤗

Hi Keenal! It seems like we haven't spoken in forever, we need to catch up soon 🤗
I'm really happy you read and enjoyed my FF 😊
Thank you so much.. You put me on Cloud 9 after reading this comment
Pms will always be sent, and thank you again 😳
Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bambi003

Oh this post is sooo beautiful Ria!...when are we getting chptr10 sweety😳????????
cant wait to see arnav n khushi back...👏

Thank you so much, Diksha di! You will be getting Chapter 10 tomorrow 😃
They will be together soon, I promise 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for l these wonderful comments!

You have no idea how good it feels to be reading them.. It is not humanely possible for me to reply to each and every one individually, but I try 😛

I am working on Chapter 10, and will be posting it tomorrow as I also have a bunch of other work on the forum as well..

Thanks again and love you all 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update...but feel bad for arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 10

No. Arnav Singh Raizada never has and never will take no for an answer. That very moment, after leaving the ward, Arnav made his mind that he would work to get back his Khushi and Kirthi. His mind was set on his goal, and he would do anything to achieve it. Anything.

He saw Muskaan and Kirthi approach him, concerned. Arnav gave a light smile with a nod, insinuating that Khushi was fine now. Muskaan ran into the ward with Kirthi. Khushi wiped her tears as Kirthi ran towards her and pulled her into a hug. She sobbed into her arms, "Mama, where did you go? I missed you." She broke apart and caressed Khushi's wounds like a mother. "Mama, how are you so hurt? Dammnit, can't you cross the street with care? What if something happened?" She cried and hugged her mother back. Khushi also cried, seeing the effect that Arnav had on their daughter. She was a carbon copy of her father. He really would never leave her. Muskaan smile, and she also hugged Khushi.

"Khushi, I think you should forgive Arnav. He really is sorry. I have seen him without you. His yearn to see you well. The pain and anguish he went through during this dilemma. The sincere repentance he statured. Please, just go. It's the best for you and Kirthi right now." Muskaan said, putting an arm on her shoulder.

Khushi closed her eyes, and her eyes, now brimming with tears, gave up. They couldn't hold them anymore. She freed them, and said, "Muskaan, I know he is sorry. I love him as much as he does too. But, it's just that, so much has happened in these four years. I need time, to find myself. To be the Khushi he wants to be with. Time has molded our relationships in a tight bond. I need time, I need time." She cried into Muskaan's hands, while Kirthi quietly left and tapped Arnav, who was sitting outside, on the shoulder.

"So what's the plan?" Kirthi asked. Arnav looked puzzled, "Plan?" Kirthi lightly slapped her forehead, "Hai Devi Maiyya, my mother said no to you. And you're just going to sit there. Mama says I am a copy of you, but I never take no for an answer.

Arnav smiled, and embraced Kirthi. "I love you, papa." Tears of joy left Arnav's eyes as he hugged his daughter. He had his biggest strength with him, so he would be able to defend the whole world. Khushi's ego was nothing.

Time has passed. Khushi was well enough to join work, but when she joined, it was a total different atmosphere.

Khushi walked inside Allen's Industries fifteen minutes late. The day had been hectic, as Khushi was finally back to her normal schedule. She was set for the worst punishment and scolding for her boss. Instead, she saw the laid back atmosphere in the office as she walked in. The ASR was sitting on a round table, surrounded by his employees and sipping coffee, while they enjoyed the breakfast, specially ordered for them Arnav had been waiting for Khushi. He wanted her to see how he had changed. That she did matter to him, and he was ready to do anything that would make her his. Khushi was confused, and went up to Arnav and started, "Sir, I'm so sorry I was late. It was just that so many days, I was out of the norm.." Arnav put his hand up and cut off, "Khu.. Erm Ms. Gupta, no explanations are needed. I can totally understand. Have a cup of tea, and relax. We're all in the lay mood today." With that, he winked and got up, leaving to his cabin. Khushi stood shocked at two things- Arnav Singh Raizada didn't scold her for being late, he said he understood. But he called her "Ms. Gupta". She wanted to be called Khushi by his now warm, husky voice. Muskaan laid a hand on her shoulder, and said, "He's a changed man."

Khushi walked in her cabin to see a rose pathway, leading to her desk. It reminded her of the time when Arnav had delicately designed the walkway for her, when he was supposed to go to Agra for a meeting and left her alone in the dark. She smiled, thinking of the way she thought he was a robber and was ater him with his own clay pot full of soil. In the dustbin, there was a jalebi box. Their favorite confectionary shop. Arnav would always take Khushi there, whenever they were out together. She picked it up and smiled again. Under the box, there were plates of banana leaves. She remembered how Arnav had order a thousand banana leave plates at one wish of hers. Her wish was truly always his command.

She walked on the soft, rose petals. She had wanted to be in Arnav's arms right now more than anything else in the world right now. She walked up to her desk, to see their marriage album. She opened it, and tears teemed her eyes. He had worn a sherwani for her that day. He was the most dashing husband ever. She sat down on the chair, and looked through their marriage album. They used to be a big, happy family. Nani was chirpy and Di was jubilant. Payal jiji was joyful, and Akash was glad to see colors fill his brother's dark life. What all had happened in these four years? Would everything ever go back? Even if they did, things would never be the same. I would be gluing back a broken vase, with the cracks still evident and it being able to fail on them anytime.

Suddenly, the radio started to play Teri Meri Prem Kahani. This brought back memories of New York. Their sensuous night full of passionate love. Their dance at Payal and Akash's wedding. How he had lifted her so delicately and made her feel like the only girl in the world. In his world. No. She was melting. She couldn't melt. She was always expected to be of stone. But sometimes she couldn't. Her emotions sometimes did control her and have the dominant side. She cried at her misery. Muskaan walked in on her, and understood what exactly had happened. She went to support her friend.

Khushi cried, "Why is he making this more difficult than it already is? Does he think I'm enjoying it? Why? Why is it always me? Why?" She cried, and her friend comforted her, "Shh, its okay. Just calm down." Inside her, she knew that everything would be fine one day in her friend's life. And that day was not far. Destiny would win, and play its game. It would show its magic and unite the two epic lovers.

Khushi suddenly wiped her tears, and trashed the memoirs in her hand. She felt rejuvenated. She left the room, with vigor, and went towards Arnav's cabin. He was in the middle of a meeting. However, with the hope of his shattered life being pieced together, he dismissed his clients. She waited till they were gone, and started,

"Arnav ji, why are you making this so difficult? I told you I needed time. Why does everything have to go by Arnav Singh Raizada's time? Why are you hell bent on distressing me? Has hatred conquered our love so strong?" She cried.

Arnav clenched his fists. He couldn't believe it. She had thought of his love as hatred. She had misunderstood him again. Why was their love always leaning on a dependent thread of misunderstandings? Why?


Arnav couldn't handle it anymore. He angrily held her shoulders, and pushed her against the wall. She winced in pain. But secretly missed this aggression. "Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, you think this is hatred talking? You of all people? I used to be of stone. I never believed in love. These rose petals, cute gifts, antics, love, affection- they were all nonsense to me. But then you came. You turned my whole life around. You taught me to love. To care for others. To love someone more than your own life. I committed mistakes, and you left. Four years, I suffered. Four hard years of struggle and depression. And then, I found you and our Kirthi. Now, I want to make everything right, and you are thinking it's my hatred. Well, Mrs. Raizada, you are wrong. I just wanted to hold our relationship together. Its falling off a cliff, and I want to save. But I can't save it myself. I need support on the other end too. And you? You're just not cooperating. Am I making it difficult or are you? Anyways, I guess it's the denouement of our relationship. It's disintegrating in our very own eyes, and we won't be able to do anything about it. So shall I consider this the end?"

Khushi let out a tear, and looked at Arnav with eyes full of guilt and pain. He let her go. She covered her mouth and ran out of the office, trying to hid her tears, but miserably failing to do so.

No, Arnav Singh Raizada still had not given up. He had played the first step of his next move, and his daughter would conduct the rest. The rest was in destiny's hands. And he was sure that Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada would be his by the end of today. And it was a real ASR promise.."


Edited by Arshi-licious01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 10 posted 😃

This update might actually be the second to last 😳

But is anyone actually interested in me writing more? I shall write if my readers want me to. I do have a continuation, but it will be light-hearted, not as intense as this one. 😳

Ok, enjoy this update, and hope you all like it.. Its a trail back to Rabba Ve's.. 😉

Please do comment and like 😳

Love you all, my readers 🤗


Edited by Arshi-licious01 - 12 years ago

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