Fiza' OS Gallery... RahGuzar Pg42 21/3/2014 - Page 10

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API

loved it lodsss

Beautifully written

loved it to d coreee

By God!!! Pehli dafa i m liking Nupur more than Mayank here...hayeee

she is the JAAN i mean soul of this story...

loved d way she is always pushing him towards life...😳

lol..yeah kamal hai ..yeah tu kamal hai history hogi yeah tu k tum ko nupur zayda achi lagi...wah wah... wasy i think for the first time mein ny mayank ko kam nupur ko zayda dekhaya hai...
she is so livily n full on masti... n tht is sumthing he respects n love the most

n OMG!!! the YashRaj part was hilarious!!! 🤣🤣🤣

i mean God!!!! woh white n then Rain wala thing waise i love those moments alwaysss in n love to see spcly! on YR's movies n of course KJO's too n then hayeee Dil toh Pagal hain wala part was just FAV

n hayeee...mera Shahrukh Khan...

white mera favt hai tu tum soch lo k yash rak meray kitny favt hongy ...uper se kjo n YRF aj kal poary deemgh per chahy hoy hain
tu yeah tu hona tha nah
hay asa humary sath kyun nhi hota... kal hi cake k order place kerti hoon😉

i know...i know hamara FAV...😉 bt ya for sure for me he is like SRK...😳

hay hay..he has many thinks in comon like SRK ... as he say.. he enter in acting with army show... both are same zodiac... and both are

n Gosh!!! i m dying to see when Mayank too will open up...Sigh!

i mean Nupur in a way always shows what is in her heart bt Mayank...Sigh!!!!!!

i think mayank in way do also show his part too... he always do.. he can be rude can make her not to interfer but he does tht all

n god!! i hate his Parents...:P

n hayeee...he is BIG time BRO pura ka pura 😆 Bechara Samrat...

n Hayeee...again My caring Mayank Sarma n possessive too...😉😆 Sigh!!!

loved it lodsss

i hope Samrat will understand n want to know Mayank''s side of love story i mean atleast kuch toh nazar aye i mean Iskq wala LOVE toh nazar ana chahiye ki nhi...😉

ishq wala love... mera bara dil hai is per kuch likhny k ...i love this line...
oky samrat will not do anything mayank will do himself...
han mayank hai jo nupur ko us k khuda k faida nhi uthny dayta behan k sath kya keray ga socho

waiting eagerly!!!

loved it lodsss

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot jani
love ya

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

Superb...ese mayur kbi nahi dkhne ko mile :p

Originally posted by: Humayra

Superb update. This is surely a unique mayUr. Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

nupur is very funny. loved it

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

yye MAYUR K chakkar samajh nahi aya yar .

y cant nupur TIE RAKHI on mayank n ye maank k reply MERE NASIB ...

confusion hai .

Originally posted by: Maria.

Nice:)

conntinue son.

Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: kirti123

loved it

nupur is so cute

beautiful part 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Update !!

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Cute story! ❤️ :)

Originally posted by: tasnim.

Apiii
beautiful part
Very nice

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

nice...:):)

Originally posted by: shafyyy

superb part...

awsome...

Originally posted by: Ria..

Wonderful part

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

😊

👏

👍🏼

🤗

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww...nyc update fiza!😳
quite an unique MN! <3

PS: pmed u the vm links.. yes u wr rite.. i 4got 2 make the linqs public!sorry😆

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Awesome..

Originally posted by: Irum.

Nice update.😊

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

As usual nupur is very funny! Nice update.

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

awesome update

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice update..
Cont. Soon..:)

Part: 4

Mayank: yeah Samrat do ghante tumhary ghar per kya ker rahi tha

Nupur: kya baat hai ..tum waqt nap rahy thy…

Mayank: yeah bolo us ny kya kaha..

Nupur: nhi na bolo nah pehly tum kab se gari dekh dekh ker yeah scoh rahy hoo

Mayank: Nupur… are u speaking or not

Nupur: phely promise tum agay bhi meri help kero gay

Mayank: asa kya… asa kya kaha hai us ny….bhag ker shadi k tu plan nhi hai… nupur asa kuch kiya tu nah

Nupur: han mera us k sath bhagny k plan hai… had hai yaar…

Mayank: acha bolo…

Nupur: kya baat hai aj kal tum meri baatein bari asani se maan rahy hoo…

Mayank: I have learn this a better way limit our meetings..

Nupur: not to worry… operation gunjan k last step hai ..us k bad tum free free ur free..

Mayank: matlab..he knitted his eyebrows…

Nupur: Samrat se baat hogai n to our surprise banda tu gunjan se bhi zayda filmi uar romantic nikla…

Flash back mein chalo..

Samrat: matlab tum kahna kya chati hoo

Nupur: samrat gunjan wohi larki hai jis ko dekhny aj tumhain jana tha..

Samrat: wht

Nupur: I m amuse that k tum ny us larki k baray mein kuch nhi pcoha warna naam aur specially gunjan k surname se tu u should have recognized it..

Gunjan asa shadi nhi kerna chahti thi.. she wants to know the person than…aur us k parents asa kerny nhi dayty… tu woh tumhain bhi reject ker dayti..aur bina jany hum nhi chaty thy k asa hoo…

Samrat: HUM?/

Nupur: mayank aur mein…. So hum gunjan ko us party mein lay aur tum se baat ker ai.. luckily tum dono get along very well…

Samrat: aur tum mjhy yeah sab ab kyun bata rhai hoon

Nupur: a) mein tum se jhot nhhi bolna chahti as woh tum dono k relationship ko baad mein effect kersata hai ..plus hum tumhara opinion nhi jnaty n I certainly don't want k gunjan hurt ho.. humari wajah se..n I m feeling she is falling for u…

Samrat: wao what friend ur … mjhy samhj nhi araha hai is per mein haso ko ghusa kero… I mean tum logo ny mil ker mjhy bakra banaya.. I felt like use..

Mayank interruption

Mayank: WHAT yani Samrat ny mana kerdiya

Nupur: mayank pori baat sun lo pehly

Nupur: dekho samrat asi baat nhi hai.. I m sorry agar tumhain asa laga .. bus we want to help her to make right decision …agar tumhain use kerna hota tu mein tumko shadi k baad bhi nhi batati…

Samrat: I donot know nupur.. per .. I should thank u n mayank.. cause mein gunjan ko reject hi kerta.. as mein gunjan se agree kerta hoo..asay shadi nhi hoti.. it doesn't make u feel

Nupur: WHAT REALLY… thank god,…so u like her..( gosh u donot know mayank how much relieved I am to hear it)

Mayank: ajeeb filmi log hain…. Just so ridiculous…

Nupur: what is so ridiculous… han…its so romantic

Mayank: really.. waoo… oky continue

Nupur: kya telling u whts romantic .. or u being that

Mayank: sweat heart ( pretty softly) if once ….if acted u are in soup…

He literally felt the phone dropped from nupurs hand.. and it got cut ..and mayank was rofling on his bed… he just can imagine her face… nupur was shocked was not even the true word to define the horrifying expression on her face….she was looking at the cell droped on floor.. with a perfect O forming her mouth…. Did he said.. no no..ur hallucinating .. he cant… he is incapable of tht… she hold heart and control her breath of shock… and reassemble her cell… and just she did it ring flashing mayank…gulping down the lump she said hello

Mayank: han tu kaha thy hum

Nupur: han Samrat ny gaya kya kahao suno….

Mayank was trying hard to suppress his laugh tht was cuming… and she knew it… as her words were trying to cum out

Flash back

Nupur: so u like her

Samrat: nah… I think I love her…

Nupur: teen mulkaqatoon(meetings) mein…

Samrat: khbai khabi kisi ko jany k liyan ek umer bhi km per jati hai aur khabi ek hi mulaqat hi kafi hoti hai…

Nupur: oh noo… not hum tum k dialogue… by god mein gunjna se kahti thi asa koi nhi hosakta n here u are… that is great… so gunjan ko batao aur is arrange marriage ki tarha handle kero

Samrat: I have a different plan… per I need ur help in that…

Nupur: aur woh kiya..

Samrat: mein us k ghar aao ga arrange marriage ki tarha.. aur jab akely mein baat kerny ki baat agay gi tu I will propose her… maagr u have to make sure k us ko pata na chaly k mein aya hoon.. ur getting me

Nupur: ya I am.. per is k liyan mayank can help u.. n I certainly cant promise to u on this….

Samrat: oky per tum baat kertu sakti hoo… I know he wont say no to u

Nupur: han I think I can do it… tu thik hai..phir tum se ab engagement per milty hain

Samrat: yeah kya baat hoi…. Tu confession per nhi hogi…not fair..

Nupur: nah .. I cant be at home.. anyways see ya soon

Mayank: per ab yeah kasay hoga..

Nupur: kya kasay hoga

Mayank: gunjan se jhoot kasy bolo gay.. k samrat nhi koi aur araha hai

Nupur: simple hai us ko boloay ga.. k koi dekhny araha hai n she has to reject..or taky us ko buhat bora laga islyn tum neechy hi nhi ana us k samany.. simple

Mayank: Samrat k parents ko bora laga tu…

Nupur: woh Samrat k masala hai he said he will handle it

Mayank: okay

Nupur: acha suno.. terrace ko kuch flowers walers laga dayna.. make it a bit romantic

Mayank: mera deemgh nhi karab hai k asa kuch bhi mein kero…. No way don't even think… or tum khud kyun nhi ker rhai ho yeah

Nupur: oye hoay tu tum kya mjhy ghar invite ker rahy hoo.. soch lo..

Does he has to remind her about the SH part… he chuckled in his mind..no bori baat hai..

Mayank: mein kero na kero kya farak parta hai tum ny wasy hi tapak jana hai…

Nupur: ji nhi mein ap k ghar ko yeah izaat nhi day rahi

Mayank: oh really gunjan tumhay bola hi lay gi..

Nupur: per dekho seriously I might not cum … anyways.. handle ker layana… aur meray mayank k bhi kayal rekhna ab tu pata nhi kab tum mjhy se asay baat kero..

Mayank: sigh… kash meri kismet itni achi hoti.. tum ny kaha mera pecha chorna hai… soch raha hoon tumhary liyan larka dhondo woh bhi Alaska mein…

Nupur: KYA… bus mayank bus.. is se zayda mjhy se bardsht nhi hoga.. khuda hafiz.. tum ny tu aj mera dil hi thor diya…

Mayank: byee..good nite…

Nupur: sigh what so good about the night.. 3 3 presentation baani hai… bye bye

Mayank: is waqt.. tum din bahar kya kerti hoo jo raat bahar kam kerti hoo

Nupur: Mr sharma mein sharma emperor ki ekloti waris nhi hoo,..jis k pass paper file mein lagny k liyan bhi employee hai… masoom sa business hai mera… zayda employs nhi hai.. tu kam mein nhi kero gi tu kaun keray ga

Mayank: per yeah sab tumahra apna banaya hoa hai…apna earn kiya hua…

Nupur: so tu hai…. Ek min ek min…. Sharma tum ny meri phir tareef ki

Mayank: haha donot exaggerate… mein ny ek fact bataya hai bus..

Nupur: aur mjhy tu yeah pata hi nhi tha

Mayank: kam kero ,..mera deemgh maat khaoo…. Abhi weekend per bhi tum ko bardsht kerna hai

Nupur: han yaar kam kerna hai…kya kero ur such a distraction.. aur mein weekend per nhi arahi hoon…. U know why..bye..final bye… chahti tu mein bhi pori raat tum se baaatein kero..per kya kero kam hai sweetoo.. so good nite..

He hit his head with hand and placed his cell aside… one in million nah billion pieces she is, a person to be so proud of, a fighter, hard worker and so so lively.. lifes hardship, losses nothing stoped her from living life.. to make it back to track.. she has an amzing persona.. who so ever is around her always felt alive, feels wht life is… if he would have been on her place he donot think he has guts to start a business from zero, when there is no neither moral or financially support for her… but she believes in herself, she is not coward like me to run away from things…she knew how to face them… and that's sumthing that makes her stand apart..

But whos gonna tell his mother about all this, she will not be cuming on weekend knowing very well what his mom is gonna say… she is here to grap the man here for gunjan… cheap mentality… filthy..

Mayank: mayank Sharma agar nupur ko pata chal gaya k tum yeah sab soch rahy thy us k liyan… tu woh sach mein behosh hojay gi.. chukling on his on thought..he went to sleep…… do I have to tell u all I have sumthiing in my mind for tht… evil laugh ..leme sleep

…………

Nupur: gunjan will u try n understand mein nhi asakti..

Gunjan: tum arahi hoo matlab arahi hoo… mjhy se akley handle nhi hoa tu..

Mayank: tum dono awaz kam kero gi apni..office hai mera…

Nupur: tum se ek kam hota hai.. kaha tha gunjan ko maat batana nhi… pait mein koi baat nhi rahti bewaquf..

Mayank: mein ny bataya hai usko.. mein ny.. usko khud pata chal gaya.. tu kya jhoot bolta..

Nupur: bol laity tu yamraj tumhain aj hi utha kern hi layjata… humari sachi k pojari…mandir mein lay bhagwan ki jaga tumhain hi rekh dayti hoon

Mayank: han taky saray nariaal tum mera sir per hi pohoro..

Nupur: she grin.. mayank idea bora nhi hai… actually great hai…

Gunjan: tum dono …. Nupur tum arahi hoo bus..

Nupur: dekho agar meri zaroorat hoi tu ..tum sirf ek text kerday na.. I will be there.. I promise..

Gunjan: fine.. jao kisi ko fikar nhi hai bye…

Mayank: darwaza ahista.. he closed his eyes as door closed with a thud…

Nupur: aur tum..mjhy pori live courage do gay.. samjhy..

Mayank: mein kya ABN news hoon…. Wasy aagr tum mom ko tolerate ker sakti ho in start tu ajao..

Nupur: what do u mean by in start…

Mayank: bad mein tu samrat n gunjan ny haaan kah dayni hai.. aur is breaking news mein unhay mein aur gunjan yaad nhi rahy gay tum kaha se rahoo gi…

Nupur: hmm point hai..chalo dekhnty hain.. tu kalash ready rekhna ….

Mayank: kalash kyun..

She moved near him ..covering her head with dupata… and spread a shy smile on her face.. he frown a bit..whts cuming….

Nupur: meray garh parivish k liyan by god..

Mayank: oh god… he folded his hand in fornt of her… maat ana ..bulkil bhi maat ana…

She laughed out loud…

Nupur: bye see ya soon swami…

Mayank: swami !...swami??...god its so tacky..

She came back and stod on the dorr..

Nupur: tu kya bolay… stud.. ya janu…

Mayank: out.. jao… foran…

She left and he went back to his work.. swami.. was leaving him with smile god…

………..

MM( mayank'mom): tum yaha kya ker rahi hoo..

Nupur who was trying to hide her self beside mayank n he groan to be caught…

Nupur: hello anty.. woh anty gunjan ny bolaya tha..tu

Mayank: gunjannn.. he called her .. to make her move from here as soon as possible

MM: gunjan ko tu pata nhi kab aqal aay gi.. per tum tu suna hai kafi aqalmand ho.. pata nhi k jab ksis larki ko dekhny koi ata hai tu waha tum jasi kis k bhi hona galat hosakta hai….

Mayank: GUNJANN…

Gunjan: agai nah bhai ..itna kyun shout ker rahy hoo… nupur.. aja chalo uper chal…

Nupur: han chalo.. bhagoo bulkay…

Yeah nhi kuch acha se pehno

Gunjan: min us idiot k liyan taiyar kyun hoo… nupur mjhy bulkil acha nhi lag raha

Nupur: dekho gunjan we will not make it cum to u… agar tum taiyar nhi hogi asa pretend nhi kero gi k ur ready.. tu problem tum per aay gi.. humain tu us k uper dalna hai sara blame tht he isn't worth u…

Gunjan: fine…

Nupur: mein ati hoon..tu ready ho jab tak….

She knocked the door..

Mayank: a jao…

Nupur: aay bhagwan tumhara laptop tum se bore nhi hota…

Mayank: nhi…

Nupur: kis k wallpaper hai is per jo tum din raat lagtatar sirf is ko hi dekhy ho..

She sneak into it above his shoulder and he turned to her..

Mayank: kya hai

She droped her jaw

Mayank: what…

Nupur: tu abhi se honeymoon k destination decide ker rahy ho… kya baat hai..

Hitting his shoulder with hers she settle down on his bed… opposite him

Mayank: u know ur sick..

Nupur: wht so sick about the honeymoon yaar.. ek min … ek min…. she smiled widely.. and placed her hand on her mouth…..

Hooo… mayank…. Tum kya kya soch rahy hoo… ho ho ho… tu waha tak pochach gay…

He threw his pillow on her face

Mayank: shut up… mein is waqt mazak mein k mood mein nhi hoon

Nupur: mein ny kya kaha.. tum hi kah rahy ho… tell me than whats so sick.. batao nah…

He holded his head in his hand..

Nupur: batao nah mayank..sharam kyun rahy hoo

The smile he was trying to hide..turned into laughter…

Mayank: what r u…

Nupur: larki hoon gurantee hai..

Mayank: pagal hoo..he laugh out loud…

Nupur: yeah mein kya dekh rahi hoon… jo insaan meri baato per ek bekar sa sadu se shakl banata tha..woh enjoy ker raha hai.. aur abhi tu tum mazk k mood mein nhi thy..

Mayank: god.. tum yaha aai kyun thi..

Nupur: lay back to sadu… life ko enjoy kerna itna muskil nhi hai… agar tum apany agr aur magar…asa aur wasa se nikal jao… mein yaha aai islyn thi..k koi lights hai decore kerny k liyan tumhray pass

Mayank: tum actually mein yeah kerny wali hoo

Nupur: hoesntly speaking majbori hai samrat wants it…

Mayank: do filmi ek sath… pata nhi life long mera kya hoga…shayd store room mein hoon..dekh lo

Nupur: funny mein…

Mayank: oky mein dekhta hoon…. Per yeah kero gi kaha …

Nupur: tumharay room k terrace mein…

Mayank: WHAT.. no way..

Nupur: gunjan k room mein tu nhi ker sakti nah… pls jadli se hony do yeah sab..aur mein script writer k post se resign kero foran… back to my business woman avatar….

Mayank: mera room kyun…common lounge k terrace lay lo nah…

Nupur: mayank Sharma..tumahri ma any dekh liya na..tu meri maa tak poch jay gi woh… aur samrat aur gunjan k lovestory k the end hojay ga….

Mayank: unhony samrat ko khud pasand kiya hai tu agar woh unki beti ki bhi pasand hai tu problem kya hai

Nupur: mjhy koi problem nhi hia.. maata ji ko hai… khud bolo nah

Mayank: jis din mein bolo nah… aur mera sabar khatam hua.. buhat bora hoga… he said n shut his lappy to go to store room….. n than came back… tum kyun apny liyan musbiat ko awaz day rahi hoo… gunjan k pass jao…. Buhat shoq hai aur bhi kuch sun ny k… abhi jo suna woh kam tha kya

Nupur: aray haan..relax…bhagoo… meri izzat k faluda tumhari maat ji nikal day gi…

She actually run away from there.. and he giggled… unbelievable

Originally posted by: Faria.

Januuu

Fabulous update re
BY GOD meri nups was in full nautanki mood
poor Mayank- ye tou nups ki nautanki ki biz faas gaye...lol lol
i think he was acting that he is getting irritate- but he dint.he enjoyed it a lot..:D


yaar nups ki faint hone ka drama was too good.. hehehehehee.. i alwloved this drama queen

yaar kab tak they will make weeding plan for other
uska no kab ayega??
and who will take the innitiatve -i want mayank to confess first..:D

janu rocking update
keep i tup