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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: love2_soma

wow...maan ne geet ko achhese samjha diya...magar jo tareka tha woh humne toh bahut enjoy kiye...

excellent n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

heyy glad u liked it 😊 thank u 😃

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Originally posted by: prathana94
hey yaar awesome FF...loved in 2 days i read all d parts n plz do pm me ...i love to read dis

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heyyy 😃

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Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 57

Geet came down dressed in the dress selected by maan .. As she was desceneding down the stairs her cheeks were turning red involuntaringly remember the passion they shared in the room and how he explained her the meaning of the phrase that she said and then suddenly she remembered he explained the meaning of Virginity also and that too and she shied .. she looked upto her baba jee and took an oath ..

Baba jee aaj kay baad main kabhi bhi kuch nahi poocho gee unse aur jo picturoon main hota hai na wo main kisi kay samnay nahi boloon gee warna agar wo aisay he matlab samjhatay rahay tou main pagal ho jaoo gee haina baba jee .. aap tou jantay hai na wo kaisay ajeeb tareeqay se samjhatay hai .. pata nahi mujhain tab kya ho jata hai main kuch bool he nahi pati .. aisa kyun hai baba jee ?

Kyun kay main hoon he itna hot and sexy
he added with a wink and geet immidiately turned around to see him staring at her intently ..

aap aap kab aiyee ?
she stammered

jab tum apnay baba jee se meray baray main baat kar rahi thi tab ..

aap .. Aap .. aapne sab sun lia ?
she said a shocked

haan
he replied

Yes it was true .. the elders were soo busy in their gossip that only Maan had seen her coming down and saw her looking up and he smirked knowing she was talking to her baba jee and complaining about him .. he tip toed and reached right on time to hear her cute complaints oh this innocent seductress always turns him on .. then he saw dadi call her but alas she was too busy in her complaining session so he just showed his hand that he will get her others gave him a teasing lok but ignoring all he went near her and was in awe looking at his angel coming down in a red anarkali .. she looked gorgeous and hoe he wish he could kiss her senselessly .. But alas he ehard her complains and smirrked .. when he heard her questionig her baba jee he thought this was the best time to tease her .. His thouts were broken when ranbir called geet and this time she heard him and immidiately ran away to the elders ..

Ye kya geet hum kab se aawaaz dee rahay thay you were not listening said ranbir

Woo .. woo veer jee main ..

Khoyee huwee thi haina ?

haan exactly .. Haan veer jee main khoyee huwee thi
and then she realized and said WHAT ? nahi nahi main khoyee huwee nahi thi

tou soyee huwee thi ? the same voice came again

Haan .. nahi nahi soyee huwee bhi nahi
she turned to glare at the person who was confusing her too much only to find maan staring at her lovingly .. she gulped and turned to her veer jee not before giving him an angry glare for making her confused .

Kis main khoyee huwe geet ? and kidhr soyee huwe ? inquired ranbir , their eye gesture didn't go unnoticed by him .

Ignoring the first part she started balbbering to change the topic.. Soyee uff ho Veer jee aap bhi na you are the owner of Handa construcion yet act so dumb on which she recieved a glare from him nahi nahi i mean ignorant haan ignorant .. dont you know we sleep on the bed .. hayee the bed soo comfy and soft .. pata hai whenever i lie down on the bed i always end up sleeping haan sometimes one can sleep on the sofa too but you do that when bhabhi will be angry and she will kick you out of the room she said and winked at him making everyone chuckle while maan gulped thinking

Betaa maan tiyaar reh aagar tune isse naraz kiya tou shaadi kay baad soofay par he sona parhain ga . Him sleeping on the sofa such scary mages popped up in his brain scaring him and he mentally promising himself not to make her angry after marriage specially at nights .

Geet beta yaahaan aiyee said dadi maa after a hearty laugh on rabir's expense and geet mentally thanked dadi maa and her baba jee for saving her ..

jee Dadi maa she came and sat next to her ..

Dadi took her hand and addressing Mr and Mrs handa she said Hum geet ka hath maan kay liay maangnay aiyee hain .. kya aap donoon ko manzoor hai ye shaadi ?

jee maaji they both replied smiling whole heartedly knowing no one could be better than maan as their son in law . Dadi also smiled seeing her dream coming true while geet blushed and then a confusion spread over her face ..

Geet beta aapko ?
asked dadi maa ..

Nahi
she replied shocking everyone and hurting maan ..

matlab ? dont you love maan ?
she asked

nahi nahi aisa nahi
she said

then ?
she asked cofused

Mama Baba u r supposed to say NO ..
she said

What why beta ? dont you like him ?

nahi aap ne deekha nahi in movies jab aisa hota hai tout he parents say NO then the hero heroine like Me and maan we will convince you and then you say yes phir we'll get married and buss Happily ever after
she said with a dazzlinging smile while everyone present thier nearly slapped their forhead on her childish and her film world fantasies ... then everyone laughed and she pouted .. Ranbir came forward and said ..

Bacha in some movies their parents agree easily na tou buss here also this is happeneing ..
and kissed her forehead she smiled

Dadi put the khaandani kangan in her wrists and kissed her ofrehead saying aab aap hamari bahu hain

she pouted and said but i was your daughter na

dadi chuckled and said yes the best daughter and if anyone does any mischeif they will be punished geet smiled and showed her tounge to maan and other while they laughed and suddenly tears came out of the handas eyes thinking their princess is no more theirs .. she is now going to be someones bahu and someones wife althought hey were happy they were the khurrans yet she wont be here now forever this thought brought tears .. they tried to hide but geet saw them and understood why were they crying courtesy the movies lol she went to them and wiped their tears telling them not to cry and hugged them .. they all shared a family hug .. evryone was soo happy ..

next part coming in 20 min 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 58

Few days passed like normal for everyone but hell for maan and geet as geets exams started and maan didnt come to meet her although he was dying but all he came was to teach her with the problems she faced which later use to be an excuse .. he knew with him around his jaan wont study so he avoided going there except when she had difficulties or problems maan would come over to help her ... though they would end up sharing some cute cute moments but maan controlled himself not to let his passion over flow .. he would make coffee and snacks for her late night so she could study and concentrate better .. most of the time he would be in handa kitchen cooking something or the other for his jaan while the other adored him and always felt blessed to have him in their princess life .. although the bacha party always teased him he would smile and take everything for his jaan .. before the exams when she would be all tensed and hyped not sleeping a bit he would force her to sleep for sometime in order to to remain fresh in the paper .. in that too she would be soo angry at him and blame him that because of him she couldnt revise he would laugh at her and her nevousness would vanish .. everyday he made sure he along with ranbir and the other two brothers went to drop her off and wish her luck .. for them it was nothing new .. when ever their princess had papers they would do everything what maan was doing they somethimes felt jealous that now their is someone in their princess life who can take care of her as much as them or even more but mostly they were really proud and happy for her .. maan would take her on a drive for some fresh air and a break the others would join and make a have a small party .. going to school each one of them would give her chocolate and juices and order he rto have them during the lecture hall .. while she studied maan or the brothers would feed her breakfast and then the chocolate .. This was how her papers passed in royal treatment .. The elders would look at them in awe and always bless them while poor vicky had no importance but our geet would give him all the importance and share all the things with him .. he himself would pamper her soo much as well .. Many times on during their common papers they did late night combine study both of them together either at handa or khurrana mansion and the rest made sure they study and no gossips .. each one of them would take a round to their room in every 20 minutes to check on them .. One day after the paper they were soo tiered that the slept holding the book in their hand .. Maan and ranbir came to check he saw them and chuckled .. maan picked geet in his arms after recieveing a glare from ranbir which he shrugged off and took her to his rooma nd made he rlie down so she could rest .. well well well and Today was her last day and maan was coming to pick her up . they were told that they had to go somewhere so there was no time for their romace they made a sad face eagerly waiting to be together but faith had something else decided for them ..

They all got dressed up and headed to see a girl .. yes a girl for Ranbir .. Ranbir had told his parents that he would not marry or even get engaged till his bacha is not engaged or so .. so now that the rishta is pakka the parents wanted ranbir to get married and then geet .. so here they were the handas and khurranas to see a girl ..

They all entered the house and it was quiet spacious and bis not as big as their palace but a normal 3 story house ... they were greeted by the girls mum and dad .. they asked them to sit while her mum went to bring the girl .. Geet had yet not come in .. she , vicky and maan were coming behind in the other car so were outside parking and coming .. they were laughing and giggling on a joke vicky cracked when they heard a voice ..

Chudaill ?

geet instantly knew only two people knew her name vicky and chipkallii ..

Chipkallii
she whispered ..

Chipkallii
the same word was repeated by vicky ..

P.B ?

OMGGG !!!!!!!!

Within no time they heard geet screaam CHIPKAALII and ran to hug the girl while the screamed CHUDAIILL and hugged her tooo leaving each and everyone in the hall except vicky stunned .. vicky knew when ever they met i was like this only .. he smiled seeing his best friend like this ...

suddenly they broke the hug and the girl started to hit geet ..

i hate u

i hate u

i hate u

i hate u

she kept hitting her and saying i hate u leaving everyone even more confused ..

sun naa chipkali ..

nahi shut up ..

dare u speak a word ..

samajhi kya ho haan ?

baas aagaee USA se aur ek baar bhi bataya nahi ?

ye bhi nahi jana kay main hoon kay nahi haan ?

kam se kam mujhain tou bata deetii ..

pata hai kitna dhoonda tumko aur P.B ko magar gayab ho gaee tum donoon kyuuunn ??

ek uss kuttay kameenay ki waja see ..

and she went on and on and on forgetting
where they are and in front of whom ..
aab bolti kyun nahi ??

moun vrat hai kya ?

tumhe ne tou kaha chup rehnay ko
said geet and everyone chuckled inwardly at her antics but yet too confuse to make out anything ..

jaisee tu meri haar baat maanti hai na .. chal tu choor ye P.B .. kidhr gaya ?
she wondered and everyone saw vicky hiding behind geet trying to save himself from the wrath but alas too late ,,

jal tu jaalaal tu aiyee balaa ko taal tu .. jal tu jaalaal tu aiyee balaa ko taal tu .. jal tu jaalaal tu aiyee balaa ko taal tu .. jal tu jaalaal tu aiyee balaa ko taal tu ..

these were the words that vicky was mummering behing geets backing making her and everyone laugh but only one person seethed in anger .. She held his ears and said kya bola tumne ??

balaa ?

what balaa ?

nahi nahi meri chikali .. pyaar chipkalii ..

shut up .. samjhtay kya ho tum donoon haan ? choor aiyee mujhain .. Geet ka tou

chaloo i know but tu P.B how could you ?
geet had a smile thinking she was forgiven but it was short lived when she heard her say ..

tu zyaadaa muskura mat ..

main buhat ghuusaa hoon ..

ghuusaa ho ?
asked geet sweetly

she nodded ..

buhat zyadaa ?
asked viicky

she again nodded

then vicky and geet winke each other piking up a glass of water each they said together ..

Challoo thanda karain
and before she could register the icy cold water came down on her

makig her wet and she screamed but then vicky and geet hugged her saying sorryy again and again ..

sorryy naa anjii ..

noo

please na chipkalii maan jaa naa ..

shut up P.B

anjuu i love u na u know that ..

noo
she said

sorryy
they said and held their ears the girl melted nd they pounced on each other taing them into a bear hug .. i love u anjaliii they said and hugged tighter while the girls cried meeting each other after soo manyy yearss ..

they parted and anjali said waisay chudail tu yaahaan kaisee ? i mean ye ghar ka tou tujhain nahi pata n all ?

are haan geet said .. hum yahaan naa and then she realized everyone was her all 3 turned and saw everyone staring at them with mix emotions .. ooppss they had forgotten all the elders were here while anjalii was shocked they were here for the rishta ?

but vicky being vicky had to intervene and asked .. wo sab chor pehlay ye bata anjali ye emotional dialouges tune jo maray wo tou geet se bhi better thay .. koi new movie jo hum ne nahi deeki haan ?

anjali came forward to hit him but slipped and fell only to be saved by ranbir who held her by her waist ...

geet giggled and went forward to tease them but the water made her slip as well and maan caught her in his embrace ..

Now the senerio was such that both the men were saving their girls while the rest of the family were shocked !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh and anjalii ...

So how was it ????

Hope u all remember anjalii ???

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