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awsem teaser waiting eagerly for update
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Confused 😕 ...bas itna samaj aaya kii maan ko sweet kissy milti hai 😳
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me waiting...
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Nice teaser

Maan and Natasha Kapoor???

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Nice teaser...
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Thanks a lot for the likes and comments…. sorry precap is not here...


Part-40

she turned aside and looked at ved & maan, the sight was mesmerizing, , a complete family, their child is sleeping peacefully in between his parents and looking so calm so maan also, , she can see a calmness, , a satisfaction on his face like he got what he craved for all the while…. Geet niharofying them for a while but then she slept back as it was so early in the morning…..

it was around 7 am in the morning when maan stirred from his sleep, he was hugging his son and his beautiful wife, well not completely hugging but yes holding her by her waist, he smiled at himself when he felt her waist under his palm, , , he held her more tight closed his again doesn't want to get up, it's like a dream for him, a complete family sleeping on a bed, it's definitely a dream for him, how can it real?? He never imagined himself like this.. , ,

there is no reason behind not dreaming like this, , he never have life partner before this, , he never have anyone who can share his bed with him, but then he tried to open his eyes remembering last night events, how Vedanta insist sleeping between his mama and papa, , he smiled at his antics but because of him , me & geet are sleeping so close…..

he opened his eyes and looked at vedanta's face, who is sleeping calmly like feeling any kind of satisfaction that his parents are near him, , to protect him from this mean world, to love him, to pamper him, to save him from any kind of pain, , it was like blind trust he has on his parents but it is not new, , every child has a trust on his/her parents that they will protect and love him/her….

Maan bend down his face a little and pecked vedanta's forehead, , he felt over protective towards Vedanta after what happened with Vedanta….. what was the fault of this little life? Why he suffered but maan promised to himself that he never revealed this truth to him, , he never tell him that he is not their real child, , why to bother this little life when he is getting parentally love, , he bend down again and pecked again on his cheek this time and moved his finger in his hairs, , Vedanta smiled like he can feel his father's touch on him…….

maan also smiled seeing him smiling in his sleep…. He turned towards geet and snuggled in her arms while maan was watching them so closely, , ,


he felt an urge to kiss geet but controlling himself, , she was looking so innocent while sleeping, , well she is really innocent while she is awake, , so serene, , so natural, , and so glowing without any makeup….. and the way she was holding Vedanta so close near her heart like protecting him from this world…..


he smiled watching the scene, , no one can say that Vedanta is not her child, , geet & Vedanta has been involved with each other like this , like salt mixed in water, , no one can say that is salt in the water or not, , the same way Vedanta & geet loved each other the same way, ,

maan forward his hand and settled her flicks behind her ear which were disturbing her calm sleep, teasing her cheek, , she is really an epitome of beauty, ,


maan caressed her face with his fingers, she smiled feeling some kind of touch on her cheek, , he got up a little and move his face towards her face and pecked her forehead like thanking her for supporting him, , he felt contended with the scene and then went towards washroom, ,

geet & Vedanta snuggled more in each other just then her sleep disturbed with the phone call, , her phone is ringing while she stirred in her sleep covering her ears with the cushion , sighed that phone call went off, , she was about to remove the cushion from her ear, phone again buzzed and she threw away the cushion in anger , took the phone in her hand and picked it without seeing the caller ID…..

Geet- hello, ,

What hello? Why didn't you picked my call?

What happened alka? Subah-2 kyo pareshaan kar rahi hai?? Geet complained still trying sleep again…..

Oye jag ja meri maa, , kab tak soyegi kumbhkaran? Alka tried to wake her through her cell…

Don't disturb my sleep, , tujhe kya chahiye subah-2 ? geet complained…..

You know what I really pity on your husband, , tu abhi bhi pehle ki tarah kitna soti hai…. Alka trying wake her up again….

Tuney ye bolne ke liye phone kiya tha? Btw thanks for pitying on my husband… now bye…. Geet was about to cut her call…

Wait!!!! Alka screamed…..

Kya hai? Kitna zor se chillaya, , meri sari neend khraab kar di…. Finally geet woke up and settled herself by the bed's head board….

Finally old trick hi kaam aa gaya… she started laughing….. tu kabhi change nahi hogi…. Tera maan tujhe daily aise hi uthata hai kyat ere kaan par chilla kar jaise hum uthate the?? Alka trying to control her laugh knowing that geet will be now making faces and that's true, geet is making funny faces at alka's comments….

Don't make face, waise bhi I can't see through phone so don't waste energy….alka trying to be calm….

Theek hai, theek hai, , now tell me fast why did you called me at this time?? Geet asked patiently though she love to talk to her but she spoiled her sleep…. She was dreaming about her & maan…..

Achha chal, gussa mat kar…. Come to the point…. Did you read the Maan's article in latest fashion magazine?? Asked alka….

Nahi to, , kya hai usmein?? Asked geet still yawning….

Arey , the upcoming fashion show me he is going to be show stopper , can you imagine Maan on ramp? , the Natasha kapoor , , uske latest winter collection , Maan is the brand ambassador, , Maan & Natasha kapoor ek sath , ek ramp par…. Haaye me thud…. I am going in this fashion show, and you know what it is going to be in Mumbai , , that mean Maan & you are coming to Mumbai…. Yippiee… I am so excited…. Finally take a breath of relief after telling everything to geet ….

On the other hand geet become excite hearing that she will to her house but become sad that maan didn't told such things to her…..

Alka, tell me , when this article come out?? Asked geet…

Arey this Friday…. And today is Monday, wait a min, didn't you read the article? Kaisi wife hai tu, tujhe tere maan ke kaam ke bare mein nahi pata?

Nahi , nothing is like that… I knew it, , I didn't know about that article only…. Maan had told me everything about this fashion show…. Lied geet….

Theek hai, tell me when are you coming here? I am so desperate to meet you , maan and tera cutie sa baby Vedanta, , I really want to see him… though you have sent his picture to me but still I want to see him….. you know what I am very glad to know that you & maan adopted him otherwise none can think like this at this time….. alka told to geet…

Hmmm, , thanks for understanding, , I'll ask to maan and then let you know, okay…. And Vedanta will also accompany with us…. Now happy….. finally geet smiled….

Okay…. Come soon…. Chal abhi tu so ja… and alka laughed at her own comment…

Now I can't sleep, , I have to prepare breakfast for maan though servants can do but still I have to check out….

Okay, chal bye.. I have to go uni. And have to meet with Vicky also

Okay bye..tc… and love you… muah….. geet kissed on phone… at last the call disconnected…. Just then maan come out from the washroom in trouser and vest….. towel was around his neck and he was wiping his hairs, though it was difficult for him in wiping hairs but he is trying…. Maan saw geet , she is awake…

Good morning geet, , maan wished her…. Geet open her eyes hearing his voice…

Good morning maan, greeted geet….. geet saw he is struggling again but didn't bother to call her once for help…. She got up and went towards him and snatched towel from his hand…. Maan startled suddenly but sighed seeing geet near him….

What is this maan? Why didn't you call me for help? Asked geet…. She held his hand dragged him and make him comfortable on bed while she took the position near him and starts wiping his hairs while maan smiled at her….

Wo geet, you were sleeping so I didn't have a heart to disturb your sleep…. Sorry next time it won't be happen…. Maan tried to assure her….

It's ok maan but promise me, next time you'll call me…. Asked geet..

Promise geet…. Told maan….

Now you hairs are dried, let me take a shirt for you…. Maan nodded and geet went to take his shirt , , took the navy blue shirt for him and matching tie , , hanky and his other needed things…

Maan stood up and wore his shirt while geet come in front of him and starts buttoning his shirt and tied the tie also….. then geet remove the old bandage from his hands and bandaged his hands again and kissed them like her mom used to do , her mom used to kiss on her bandage whenever she injured, , and told her that the pain will fly away if we'll kiss at injury….

Geet used to believe her mom and believe at this fact also, that's why she kissed on maan's hands , maan smiled at her knowing the reason behind her act because his mom also used to treat him like this…

Maan, aap ready ho jayiye , mai breakfast lagwati hu…. Maan nodded and geet went away downstairs…. After a while maan come down when geet was arranging breakfast at table… dadi was also present there….

Good morning dadi… maan wished her…

Good morning beta… dadi wished him back….

How come you are early dadi? And where is everyone? Asked maan….

Maan, you forgot, it's only 7:30…. They will come after half an hour, , , replied dadi…..

Okay…. Replied maan…. Geet come and have breakfast….. told maan……

I'll have with everyone but I'll accompany you…. Geet replied him back, maan smiled , geet served to maan and dadi while she took a glass of juice for herself…..



she sat beside maan , he was having difficulty in holding the glass…. Geet saw it and took the glass from his hand and took it near his lips and gestured him to take a sip.. maan nodded and starts drinking juice, , after having breakfast, he bid bye to dadi while geet went behind him because he forgot his cell….

Maan, , geet called him…. maan stopped on his way and turned behind found panting geet…..

What happen geet? Asked maan…

Wo you forgot your cell…. Told geet….

Thanks geet… he came forward , cupped her face and pecked her forehead again, ,



bye geet….

Geet smiled shyly while maan was also expecting a good bye kiss….. geet knew that why he is waiting….. she went to tip toe and kissed hesitatingly on his cheek, smiled shyly again , ,



bye maan… have a good day…. He wished him….. maan also smile at her sweet yet innocent gestures… she is so adorable.. he was a fool who didn't recognize her inner beauty…. He slapped himself mentally and smiled at her waved at her bye and went away while dadi felt happy seeing the little communication between both of them…. Like she found everything…..

Precap

Kash main ek baar maan se mil paati, , usey touch kar pati, , hey wo dekho kaun aya yaha, Maan Singh Khurana himself, , , , ,




gals, next writer has been announced... so pls check the thread... next writer is tellyme aka anu...


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Posted: 12 years ago
simply awesome
the way maan was nirofying his sweet little family was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED THE UPDATE
BOTHR HAPPY WID EACH OTHER
GREAT
THINKING KI GEET WILL GO WID MAAN TO MUMBAI
JALDI UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
oye teri Geet ne Maan se mumbai ki toh baat ki hi nahi...woh next update me
good one neha...awww mornign was so sweeta nd cute till Alka started shouting
and who is Natasha Kapoor...khair ki farak painda hai...Maan is totally into his biwi now...nahi...
even me loved thier communication...so like hubby wifey...
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wow lovely update dear.. wow lovely cute family.. why my maan didt say abt te show to his geet stil?.. te way my maaneet living they life was lovely.. maan kissed his geet in her forehead and geet in his cheeks, wow lovely, me too want to kiss him in his cheeks.. wow dreamy...i love te update so much dear.. will geet too go with my maan to mumbai?..

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