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Posted: 12 years ago
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@RED!!!!

Nhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥺 itnaaa bara julm woh bhi mujh dil ke najuk insaan par n woh bhi bimar... kyun! kyun! kyun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! asa na karo plzzz waise bhi bhttt reality hain life mein atleast ffs n stories mein toh i can atleast hope to get what i really want...sigh! plzzz asi koi kahani na likhna waise hi Neela di kafi hain mere reality dose ke liye ap toh meri MN milap wali Api ho na toh plzzz asa na karna api... pilish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😔
aur maine yeh kab kaha ke woh dono milte hain i mean i said ke mere bechare dil ko lagta hain ke they knew each other so they love each other ismein itna bada saza toh mat dou ap mere dil ko n mujhe bhi 😔


n ohhh-hoo...Shukriya humey pehle i batane ke liye...love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗
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pardon errors..rplyed to u all


Part: 3

Nupur: gunjan…tumhain breakfast table yeah bolna hai k mayank k baghir tum nhi milo gi..thik hai

Gunjan: okay…

Nupur: khuda kery tumahri shadi jaldi ho…warna mein bhag jao gi…

Gunjan: bhai k sath

Nupur: lol…woh khud khushi kerly ga… jao…

……

Gunjan looked at mayank to start the talk, and mayank was like how to do this…

Nupur: mayank tum bol rahy ho k nhi… itna darty kyun ho… apni shadi ki baat nhi ker rahy hoo

Mayank: tum yeah topic hamesha kasay lay atai ho.. I am amused…

Nupur: hain na.. I m so good nah…

Mayank: phone rekho..

Nupur: nhi nah pehly ap….aur suno mein 5 min baad call kero gi check kerny ko

Mayank: fineee…..

He was having her on his Bluetooth.. as she knew he wouldn't be able to do this.. talking in front of his parent is not that much easy for him… so best is to challenge him and make him do

Mayank: dad Saturday aur Friday dono mero meetings hain.. tu hum woh larky walo ki family ko delay nhi ker sakty

Dad: koi baat nhi …ap baad mein milay na…woh usi din aay gay

Gunjan: ji nhi mein un se harghis bhai k bhagir nhi milo gi….agar bhai k absence mein aay tu mein milo gi hi nhi mind it…

Dad: is larki ki zid hai k kahtam hi nhi horahi hai…

Mayank: I think unko next week bola layin …if possible….

MM: han yeah kerna paray ga….mein baat kerti hoon….

……………..

Mayank: ab kya kerna hai… aur mein Saturday ko kya kero ga…

Nupur: sab hi socho…ghar araha hai nah woh..let them talk and have there time… aur kya keray… aur tum Saturday ko mery ghar ajao…

Mayank: nhi … mm.. mein busy hon

Nupur: abhi tu soch rahy ho k kya kero ga…. Ajao na mein bore hongi…

Mayank: mein nhi raha hoon.. koi zaroorat nhi hai

Nupur: ajao nah ..mjhy kasa lagy jab Samrat aur gunjan ek sath hongy… aur mein akeli undono ko dekho gi… sigh… mein bechari

Mayank: nupur tum asay baat kyun kerti hoon…

Nupur: chukled… acha na nhi kero gi promise… I will love to have u

Mayank: mjhy marna nhi hai…

Nupur: paka promise tang nhi kero gi… ya choro maat aaoo…mein ny indono k liyan itny romantic setup kiya hia…tum kahmakha aker kaho gay.yeah thik nhi woh thik nhi…islyn pls donot cum…bye

Mayank kept the phone down, and thought for sometime, nupur romantic setup, she will do sumthing like tht I am dam sure, and I donot Samrat not at all, what if he use the satiation… hmm … no way.. I have to tolerate nupur for a day…he chuckled.. man what kinda a girl she is…

……….

Nupur: gunjan tu thik lag rahi hai..bus ker….uff..

Gunjan: kya bus kero… mein white mein actually Yash raj films ki main lead lago… thts the idea…

Nupur: han phir tum dono walk per jana aur waha barish hojay gi… phir woh tumhain apni jacket offer keray ga…

Gunjan: hay how romantic….

Nupur: lay tera shahrukh khan agaya…..

Gunjan: god aur mein ready bhi nhi hoi…per us ny tu kaha tha aker mjhy batay ga…tera apartment no. mein nhi bataya usko…

Nupur : how mean…. tu yeah kaun hai….

Gunjan: tera shaahrukh khan… tu kahin dil tu pagal hia ki taraha us k sandwich tu nhi lay

Nupur: god… grow up gunjan….

Cuming…

She opened the door and the flicker her eyes and placed hand on the entrance…

Nupur: tu gunjan sach kah rahi thi… hay mera shahrukh khan….

Mayank: he rolled his eyes… tum khabi khabi tameez se, tareeqay se bat ker sakti hoo

Nupur: kya kero tumhain dekh meray andar ki lovestory ki heroine jag jati hai..control nhi hota kkya kero…

Mayank: I think it was bad idea… bye…

Nupur: aray yaaar..she griped his arm and threw him in.. ajao…kat nhi jao gi tum ko…wasy Samrat nhi aya hai abhi… aur idhara udahar kay dekh rahy hoo…oyee.. tu tum hai shak tha k mein waqi kuch asa wasa kero gi haan… so bad mayank..tum meray baray mein asa sochty ho

Mayank: nhi woh asai baat nhi hai…

Nupur: tum phir kasi baat hai tum mjhy miss ker rahy thy….

Mayank: nupuurrr…

Gunjan: bhai tum yaha kya ker rahy hoo….

Nupur: aray mein ny bolaya tha… kuch kam tha…actually help chaiy thi.. ab tu ny tu humari girls night out karab kerdi tu mein kam hi kerlo….mayank study waha hai … tum files dekho mein ati hoo

He nodded in yes and wonder if she can always act so , kitna acha ho, but than it will not make her what she is.. Unbelievable mad..

Gunjan: nupur tum janti ho na bhai …woh Samrat ko dekhy ga tu

Nupur: yaar relax kero… woh ker raha hai na tumahri help… phir… itna khados bhi nhi hai.. aur I will handle… mein akeli hoti tu samrat ko tery sath time spend kerna acha lagta kya…

Lay agay woh…

Nupur: hey Samrat

Samart: hey nupur…. Thanks for inviting me…

Nupur: ur welcum wasy mein ny nhi tumahin gunjan ny invite kiya hai technically…com in…

Samrat: opps mjhy nhi pata tha I am spoiling ur time…

Nupur: donot worry nobody can spoil our time..

Mayank who was checking the collection of books was amazed to see…. apolocolo and

In her collection…

Mayank: mjhy laga tha millers n boons se abhi bahar nhi nikali hai yeah…nice… just than Samrat voice broke his attention..and he went out…

Mayank: hay Samrat…

Samrat: oh… hay.. I wasn't expecting u here… but acha hai nupur bore nhi hogi…

Mayank: and why was so… he asked quite typically in bro style…

Nupur: I think hum sab pehly dinner kerly..better hai.. gunjan jab tak tum Samrat ko ghar kyun nhi dekhti…

Gunjan: ya sure..

Nupur: aur tum kya hai… tum asay baat kero gay tu woh itna uncomfortable feel kerayga…

Mayank: tu us k meray yaha rehny se kya problem hai… kerna kya chahta hai yeah akhir…

Nupur: us se baat.. mayank aur us ko irdada kuch aur hota tu woh gunjan se yaha milny nhi ata kahin bahar bolata.. bekar mein har insaan per shak maat kiya kero…. Meri help kero..

Mayank: kyun mein tumhara naukar hoon….

Nupur: nhi nah.. tum meray woh…

Mayank: NUPURRR…. Kahna lagao…pata nhi aj kya khana paray ga..

Nupur: aray rehnay do janty ho tum kafi achay se I m a great cook…

Mayank: though I hate to admit it.. yet yes ur…

She actually fainted and he has to grip her not to let her fall

Mayank: NUpurr… kya hoa thik hoo…

Nupur: thik ho… mayank tum pls warn kerdiay kera asa kuch bhi khany se pehly..

Mayank: wht…

Nupur: meri tareef …OMG… mera nazuk sa dil bardsht nhi ker paya…

He left her as it is and she grip the counter not to let herself fall…..

Mayank: uff impossible it is to see u serious…

Nupur: she placed her elbow on his shoulder… tum seriously mjhy serious dekhna chahti hoo…

Mayank: mein tumhain dekhna nhi chahta… he removed her hand from his shoulder…

Nupur: sheeshy toot di awaz tano aandi….way rahy tu ny mera dil tootaya… she was actually singing this like sum bagger …and he just cant hold his laugh….

( u can hear the voice of broken glass…huh… n here u broke my heart)

Mayank: kam kero… ur mad..

Nupur: I accept tht….let me see yeah loog hain khidar…

Mayank: balcony mein shayad…mein dekhta hoon

Nupur: nhi rukho… mein dekhti hoon… pata chala tumahin koi shock lagaya .. tu mera kya hoga….

She can see from a little away they were actually chatting on sumthing and Samrat said sumthing to her, and gunjan literally moved her face away to hide her shy smile… that actually made nupur smiled.. gunjan shying away is an achievement.. sigh she certainly donot want to break there moment..somone tap on her shoulder

Mayank: tum yaha bolany aai tu yaha kayalo mein khony…

Nupur: mjhy inka moment nhi break kerna… she looked at him with a pout..

Mayank: let me do the honors… samrat gunjan dinner is ready… see kitna simple tha

Nupur: how mean ..kitnay unromantic ho na tum….

Mayank: sara romance tum mein jo agay hai..

Nupur: haan… mayank aj tu mein paka gone …. Tum yahni hum balance kertay hain….

Mayank: nupur ek baat batao..yeah tumahin mein hi milta hoon asi harktein kerny ko…she nooded in yes… aur kyun…kya bighara hai mein ny tumhara…

Nupur: dekho kya hai k koi larka in sab batao per yeah reaction nhi dayta… two..ur a safe person.. I know mein masti ker rahi hoo aur tum us k faida nhi uthao gay…. Three.. how many friends do u thing I have jin k sath mein asa kuch bhi kero.. fourth tumahin dekh ker hi mjhy kcuh kuch hota hai k ..pakarlo bakara agay…

Mayank: in short tum meri sharafaat k faida utha rahi hoon..

She moved abit closed…

Nupur: han mein tumhara faida uthny ki try mar rahi hoon… she said secutively.. making him glare at her .

Samrat coughed looked at them, who were standing quite close and talking ..nupur and mayank both looked at him in what..

Nupur: kya hoo..pani chaiy…

Samrat: nhi mein socha yaad dila do k dinner ready hai

Nupur: aray really.. wasy balcony se is room k safar hum kuch seconds mein bora ker laytay hain… ap dono ko kuch 5 min 44 second lag gay ..kya baat hai rasaty mein itna traffic jam tha..

Mayank turned to leave hiding his smile.. realize actually what samrat was pointing to.. there closeness yet it did make back on earth..but…Samrat trying to tease whom he didn't knew…. Haha bad idea…u cant trap nupur…

Samrat: Italian..thats great….

Gunjan: tumahin bhi Italian pasand hai aray wah…

Samrat: mjhy bhi matlab…

Nupur: mjhy chor ker tum sab ko italian kafi zayda pasnsd hai … I just eat it donot love it…

Samrat: oh.. wasy aplog sab ek dosray ko kafi pehly se janty hain

Nupur: yes…skool life se..

Samart: oh really… jab hi ap log hamehsa sath hi hotay hain… as in mayank se mjhy kisi k sath itna interactive nhi dekha…aur nah hi Nupur ko… he is quite a reserve person..but has always found him with u…

Mayank who was sipping water felt it choked and Nupur hided her smile…

Nupur: itna daar kyun rahy hoo…seedha seedha bol..khadoos sadu hai..

Mayank: alteast tum se better hoon nah… n to u Samrat… I donot feel like interacting with people who are just meant to be there for business…

Gunjan: nupur its yumi yaar … she needs to make them on good terms..

Nupur: wasy samrat tumhain bhi mein ny zayda partying and all nhi dkeha..

Samrat: yaar tum ko pata tu hai k business party mein friends tu mil nhi saktay ..plus mein aboard parha hoon tu most of my friends are there… tu yaha koi hai nhi…. But glad I have found u all…

Nupur: wasy buhat sary loog roz duwa magtay hain k hay asa kyun hua… she looked at mayank and he galred back….

Finishing there dinner, gunjan and samrat was chatting in living room on sumthing when Nupur deliberately asked mayank to come in, leaving them alone…

Nupur: yeah lo coffee piyo…

Mayank: yeah coffe hi hai nah

Nupur: nhi mein ny is mein brandy mila di hai..

He who was about to take a sip…stoped and smelled it..she chukled

Nupur: kya mayank tumhain pata hai asa kuch nhi hai

Mayank: mjhy tum per bulkily behroosa nhi hai

Nupur: ya ya jab hi tu …apni behan ki life pori meray uper chor rekhi hai…. Wasy u donot drink seriously not at once in life u have…

Mayank: he smiled

Nupur: is k matlab ki hai..kab.. bolo nah… bolo naah..she turned to him….

Mayank: states mein..friends ny pilai thi…

Nupur: aur us k baad.. hm hm..ahem..

Mayank: itni nhi pee thi mein ny….samjhi…pata nhi kaha kaha chali jati hoo tum..

Nupur: pee bhi lit u kya… kal anty ny itni pee lit hi ka.. she stoped in mid way realize what she said..sorry

Mayank: why r u sorry…woh kersakti hai…hypocrisy at best… sab k liyan alag rule hai…hum tu ksis se baat bhi na keray.. aur woh dono…choro.. tumhain kya lagata hai mjhy pata nhi hota sab…

Nupur: pori dunya mein sab k sab k liyan alag hi rules hotay hain mayank…islyn life ko apny rules per jeena chahiy.. what u want to do ..do it.. cause end mein u face circumstance.. life mein regret tu nah ho ..k mein ny yeah khud kiya hota tu zayda acha hota… apni decisions per sukoon tu hota hai …

Life k yeah years chaly jay gay tu u will regret.. u didn't had ur share of fun…

Mayank: tumahri aur meri definition of fun is different..

Nupur: do u really have any definition for that… last time tum ny kab woh kiya tha jo tum kerna chahty ho.. carefree hoker…

Mayank: meri choro..yeah kiya hai..he forward a book… putting the mug aside

Nupur: oye this cheating tum meri study mein meri inspection ker rahy thy….idhar do..

Mayank: no..

He moved the book away.. and she tried to catach it..move forward..

Nupur: mayank… meri hai…she moved more forward..

Mayank: jhot… tumhari nhi hai… he moved back almost lying at the recliner they were both siting… NUPUR…

Nupur: ahh…

She was about to fall of the recliner as she was losing her balance as more n more getting close and mayank' leg get tangled with her..making her fall… he holded her from the waist making her cum back to him…. His face was completely covered with her hirs…n she was lying on him…. she tried to get up..yet again fall on him… he moved his hand inside her hairs and made them back form her n his face…. Her eyes were lowered flickering with nervousness.. and she was holding his color in her fist… no matter how bindas n flirting she do with him.. she is so scared when any moment he is so close to him.. and sumwhere it always warmth him.. he loves the feeling of her so close… she has them in her.. making him believe at the things that he thought he can never have….. she struggled and he came back..holding her he moved abit up..to be in sitting position n making her sit too..

Silence awkwardness…. N what not… feels like someone can make the either one disappear in air…pls.. or erase the memory of the other… its hell embarrassing… God…he stole glance from corner of his eyes.. its getting stretch… break the ice mayank..comon u can do it.. relax..it was an accident.. phew.. chill… be a man make the lady comfortable.. this lady… who always makes me so dam uncomfortable…

Mayank: tu book tu meri hoi….

He said and she looked at him..who was looking at the book… trying to make her normal

Nupur: kis khushi mein…

Mayank: as per is k front page yeah meri honi chay thi…

To mayank,

Happy birthday J…

Nupur…

Nupur: hm.. honi tu chaiy thi .. per tum ny khud hi layli thi so no use…

Mayank: yeah kiya baat hoi…

Nupur: ek hi book k do do copy k kya achar dalo gay…

Mayank: wasy woh copy tu pata nhi kaha gai… n I kinda missing reading this book… wasy tumhain meri birthday k kasay pata chala…

She smiled.. and turned to him.. the look on her face made him know..ladies n gentleman Nupur is back ….she is back.. u did it…great

Nupur: tumahra birthday mein kasay bhool sakti hoo… her jaga mark ker ker k rekhti hoon.. 200 reminders lagti hoon.k kahin agar meir yaadshat ny dhoka day diya tu mjhy se yeah ginha nah ho jao k

Mayank: bus…. Sorry I asked.

Nupur: yaar tumahri behan kafi nhi hai k kya.. pori duniya ko yaad dilny ko..k us k bhai k birthday hai.. wasy tu woh rekhi bhi yaad dilti hai per us per tumhain gift nhi miln sakta u know why…

Mayank: mera naseeb.. he said with rolling eyes..

Nupur: tumhari khsuh naseebi yeah bhi kah sakty thy wasy tum…

Mayank: ya ya…

Nupur: mjhy lagta hai humain samrat ko sab bata dayna chaiy

Mayank: kyun..matlab…

Nupur: samrat kya sochta hai is relationship k baray mein humain pata tu chaly.. hum tu bulkily is baray mein kuch nhi janty…asa gunjan buhat inolve hogai aur samrat was just pasiing time tu.. ya woh bora mangaya k hum us ko use ker rahy thy tu…

Mayank: hmm… yeah tu hai..

Nupur: plus tumahry ghar per ksis ko itna sa bhi pata chala gaya tu..

Mayank: tsunami ajay ga..

Nupur: exactly…. Tu u take gunjan with u…and I will tell samrat..

Mayank: tum yaha us se akelay baat kero gi.. deemgh karab hogaya hai..hum us ko janty hi kitna hai…

Nupur: ek tu tum dekho itna possessive maat hoa kero.. kcuh kuch hony lagta hai… mayankkk…

Mayank: chalo mein yeahi kaho k itni dair se yeah insaaan ki tarha baat kyun ker rhai hti…shoro hoagie wapas…. Khabi khabi jab tu itni seriously baat kerti hoon na..tu ajeeb lagta hai

Nupur: abay hatho seriousness ko.. life already buhat serious hai…

Mayank: samrat agar gunjan k baray mein serious nhi hua tu .. mein gunjan ko kis kam se yaha bola lo tum us se baat kerlo

Nupur: I will call u and tell u what samrat said… tum log jao..

Mayank: sure..

Nupur: mayankkk. .. is se boray boray logo ko I handle…asay daar gai tu mera kya hoga… jo daar gaya so maar gaya… daar k agay jeet hai… she said dramticlly… chalo…

Gunjan ur brother wants to go home… us k sabar k imtehan maat lo..

Gunjan: tum dono phir lar rahy hoo…

Samrat: chalo mein bhi chalta hoo

Nupur: samrat mjhy tumhari company ki offer k baray mein kuch baat kerni thi..so if u think right can we talk on tht…..if u feel safe to stay here..

Samrat: chukled.. had hai nupur… sure we can…

Mayank: chalo we take ur leave..bye samrat..

Gunjan: bye… she hug nupur and wave samrat..who smiled and the look told sumthing has spark between them…

Nupur: bye guys….

He still looked her as if asking is she will be oky… and she glared him to ask him leave at once…

……………

Nupur: samrat mjhy tum se kuch baat kerni hai… I hope u listen first and than conclude it…

Samrat: mein samjha nhi… asa ki kya baat hai..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Awesome update API
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
By God!!! Pehli dafa i m liking Nupur more than Mayank here...hayeee
she is the JAAN i mean soul of this story...
loved d way she is always pushing him towards life...😳
n OMG!!! the YashRaj part was hilarious!!! 🤣🤣🤣
i mean God!!!! woh white n then Rain wala thing waise i love those moments alwaysss in n love to see spcly! on YR's movies n of course KJO's too n then hayeee Dil toh Pagal hain wala part was just FAV
n hayeee...mera Shahrukh Khan...
i know...i know hamara FAV...😉 bt ya for sure for me he is like SRK...😳
n Gosh!!! i m dying to see when Mayank too will open up...Sigh!
i mean Nupur in a way always shows what is in her heart bt Mayank...Sigh!!!!!!
n god!! i hate his Parents...:P
n hayeee...he is BIG time BRO pura ka pura 😆 Bechara Samrat...
n Hayeee...again My caring Mayank Sarma n possessive too...😉😆 Sigh!!!
loved it lodsss
i hope Samrat will understand n want to know Mayank''s side of love story i mean atleast kuch toh nazar aye i mean Iskq wala LOVE toh nazar ana chahiye ki nhi...😉
waiting eagerly!!!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nupur is very funny. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yye MAYUR K chakkar samajh nahi aya yar .

y cant nupur TIE RAKHI on mayank n ye maank k reply MERE NASIB ...

confusion hai .


Edited by kheya-mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb...ese mayur kbi nahi dkhne ko mile :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Superb update. This is surely a unique mayUr. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
lovely updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
loved it
nupur is so cute
beautiful part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Januuu

Fabulous update re
BY GOD meri nups was in full nautanki mood
poor Mayank- ye tou nups ki nautanki ki biz faas gaye...lol lol
i think he was acting that he is getting irritate- but he dint.he enjoyed it a lot..:D


yaar nups ki faint hone ka drama was too good.. hehehehehee.. i alwloved this drama queen

yaar kab tak they will make weeding plan for other
uska no kab ayega??
and who will take the innitiatve -i want mayank to confess first..:D

janu rocking update
keep i tup

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