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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

i was laughing hard imaging RV singing yaariyan n kd stopping him🤣🤣🤣
loved dis part..n d last line..

"Lost your shades?"
🤣🤣🤣dis one my fav line🤣🤣
ur an awsum writer..keep updating gal...👍🏼


Thank you so much!
Am glad I could make you --> 🤣 8 times! 🤣

Keep reading! I will keep updating :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iloveASR

I love how u hav totally twisted KD and RV's relationship. They are fighting but its all in a light hearted sense like how friends fight. I absolutely love it :) waiting for the next part. Update soon :)


Mujhse yeh khoon bhari dushmani dekhi nahi jaati! 😆 I want them to be bestfriends and want KiSha to fight! But TBP mein toh everything went upside down! So well, here is my part of desire :D

Thank you so much! Am glad you like it! Keep commenting <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyya!
Another update! Though not funny like last one.
WARNING : It has a little violence.
Okay, that warning wasn't needed but oh well. Just read the update and PLEASE leave me a comment! And dont forget to LIKE!
Even if you hate it, atleast comment and let me know WHY you hate it. Okay?

Now you can go on and read :D

Wait. Not proofread as always. Ignore the minor mistakes. :)


Chapter 4
Save Me, Scare Me

"Why, would you have like to borrow them?" KD replied, a smug smile on his lips. Kiya rolled her eyes and looked away.

"Sure, not even in hell!" She muttered. KD leaned down on her.

"You booked for hell? I thought heaven needed a devil once in a while." He whispered. She turned to glare at him.

"I thought you would fit the category better!" She snapped, with a sarcastic smile forming. KD was about to replly when another voice interrupted him.

"Didn't count you for the flirt type bro!" Ranveer said in a low tone. He was sitting right behind KD.

"Didn't count you for the one to dare asking me such question either," KD paused, "bro!"

"But really, she is hot man!" Ranveer said, looking at Kiya.

"Thank you!" They both turned towards Kiya who had unfortunately caught their conversation. Ranveer sat back and started fiddling with his phone, while KD made a straight face and watched the teacher blabber something about Akbar's policies. He finally understood why teenagers called school - hell!

***
"She still hasn't replied." Ranveer sighed as he sat beside KD in the canteen. They were done with four classes of the day, four to go. As soon as the lunch bell rang, the kids sprang out into the hall ways as if there was a fire alarm gone off. KD and Ranveer, however stood out for the very little reason. They were apparently the last ones to step out of the class.

"She is probably busy coding." KD said, opening the lunch Panchi had packed for both of them. He was about to offer it to Ranveer but had a better idea. "You know..."
Ranveer didn't looked up from his cellphone to listen to KD. He simply nodded.

"I would have died without Panchi." KD completed. Ranveer looked up at him and frowned. "I mean, who would have packed me lunch without her? I would have died of hunger." He said. Taking a bite of the vegetable sandwich. Ranveer's frown deepened as he stared at the lunch packet.

"Didn't she pack for me?" He asked unsure. KD looked up with innocent eyes and frowned.

"Packed what?" He asked.

"Lu-lunch." Ranveer replied, an adorable frown still holding his face. His voice stammered in anticipation.

"Erm, no? She didn't give me anything for you, was she suppose to?" KD asked with the innocence to fool the FBI. Acting is in the genes of spies. Ranveer didn't reply but the frown was replaced by hurt. His eyes dulled and his face looked sad. If there was anything that had ever made KD laugh, was Ranveer's expressions in response to Panchi's ignorance. He has never enjoyed anything more than that. Ranveer looked up at him again to see him with a smug look, constraining his laughter. KD pulled out another sandwich bag and pushed it towards him, now smirking. Ranveer frowned momentarily before he caught on what KD just did. He got up to tackle KD, but KD was already out of the canteen with Ranveer trailing behind.

KD pushed through the crowd in the corridor that had formed outside the canteen and ran past the abandoned hallways. He could hear Ranveer's feet against the floor in distance. He stopped, too a deep breath and turned to open the nearest door to hide. As his hand reached out to open the door, the door flung itself towards him. He hissed in pain as the door hit right on the left side of his face.

"Holy shit! Oww!" He hissed. He flung open the door to see who was the culprit behind. Looking at the person he didn't know whether to be angry, laugh or scream in pain. He couldn't help but stare at how beautiful she looked as she stood there with her hands in Karate pose and her eyes closed tightly. She looked like she was ready to take down anyone who would dare stand against her, and at the same time her expressions told him she could barely kill a mosquito. A moment later she opened one eye, and looked at him starting at her with a red left cheek. Then she opened her another eye and accused him.

"You? What are you doing here?" She asked and let her hand fall to her sides.

"Not playing Karate for sure!" He replied haughtily.

"This is my lunch room! Why were you trying to get in here?" She asked, folding her arms over her chest. He looked at her in absolute confusion. Her lunchroom? He was about to ask her that when something made its way around his feet and made KD topple forwards over Kiya.

"What the?" He growled.

"What the hell are you doing? Get off me?"

"Payback is a bitch man!" Ranveer muttered from the doorway.

"Do I look like I am enjoying this?" KD asked her arrogantly before getting up. He turned around and before anyone could say anything, he punched Ranveer in the face. Kiya just stared at them stunned. She moved away a little as she saw Ranveer pushing KD back until he hit a desk. Kiya hissed.

"You started it!" Ranveer grunted. KD held onto Ranveer's caller and pushed him to the wall.

"It was a joke!" He grunted in reply and was about to punch Ranveer in the stomach when Ranveer blocked him. When KD Ranveer tried to punch KD, he was pushed back into the desks. He hissed as the desk cut through his flesh a little.
"Time out! I am scrapped." Ranveer shouted and then cringed. KD pulled back all of a sudden, letting Ranveer go. He frowned at him.

"You okay?" KD asked. Ranveer hissed as he tried to touch his back.


"Hurts like bitch!" He muttered. KD nodded and then looked at Ranveer's phone vibrating that had fallen on the floor between desks. Ranveer ran towards the phone, forgetting the pain for an instance.

"Panchi!" He said smiling. He opened the message and then frowned. Then pronounced a very inappropriate word that made KD frown. He walked over to Ranveer and looked at the neon text in his spy-fied cellphone.

Hey! how was your day? I will be home late today. Going on a site check. Order a Pizza. :D - #265

Ranveer glared at the phone and then threw it in a no certain direction. The metal piece collided with the wall and fell, but didn't break. A voiced cringed in the room, making both the boys turn. And as soon as they did, their own curses left their mouth.

"Gentlemen much?" She said. Then looked over at something over their shoulders and pouted. "My Pizza!"

Ranveer and KD stared at her as if she was an alien as they fixed their collars and adjusted their tie. Scratching the back of their head they simply walked out as if nothing happened.

Welcome to my life! KD thought as he looked at the girl turning to glare at him before he finally made his exit. He wondered if he really was there to protect her. It seemed more like he was here to scare her away to some far off land.

One thing was sure. Panchi was going to make a legit Pizza put of their flesh tonight.


NOTE : NO UPDATE FOR A MONTH.
Edited by *Prachi* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My god seriusly? No update for a month? Nooo. ...please update whenever you get time. I simply love this ff. And I shall wait patiently until you update :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Violence much update.
But i still loved it!
cant wait till next month for the update!
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...awesome tha...but no update 4 a month ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello shello Prachi🤗 Pehli baat...I had really wanted to comment on Chapter 3, but something or the other came up and I couldn't make time.Isliye I'm going to type my comments on
both chapters here😊
Chapter 3-KD was thinking of her.Aww!!!RV-KD's tu tu main main made me 🤣🤣🤣.
If I hear another word out of you burning mouth, I will forget you live in the same house!"

"What the hell? Unlike you, people care about friendship!" Ranveer glared.

"Unlike you, people care about sleep too!" KD grunted.
They are so adorable!!!
Ranveer was singing Yaariyan!!!Can I pls enter your story and give him a hug(not KD...because as far as he is concerned...well I don't wanna just HUG him😉😉)I loved the banter with Panchi.KD-RV were fighting and Panchi was raising their push ups ka count😆350!!!!Uff...what I would give to see that☺️I really like this trio.Waiting for Kiya to join in too so that we get the awesome foursome😳
"Lost your shades?"
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🤣🤣🤣🤣
HAYYYEEE KiSha<3<3<3They will so kill me one day.As it is kal ke scene ka jo asar pada hai mujh par...Mujhe unse aur bhi zyada Ishq Wala Love ho ga ya hai❤️
Chapter 4-Eeep...It STARTED off Chicklet-Stoneface style.How could I NOT love the update.
"You booked for hell? I thought heaven needed a devil once in a while." He whispered. She turned to glare at him.

"I thought you would fit the category better!" She snapped
I miss this yaar.The Kiya-KD-RV part...😆.Ranveer is eternally a casanova.
Do I even need to repeat myself regarding KD-Ranveer.KD tries to jelo him by saying that Panchi didnt pack up lunch for him and RV was hurt.Awwie!!!The fight was quite violent.Uff...these hormone infested hot headed hawties(☺️).I was a little confused on the end though.Was that Kiya speaking?How did she come to know about Pizza?😕
NOTE : NO UPDATE FOR A MONTH.
Haila...yeh kaisa bomb phod diya PrachiBut you gave us three practically back to back updates in a row so I guess you can take some off time.I'll be waiting😊
PS...Sorry for the onverdose of Awws😳I'm usually so NOT a mushy person.I'm blaming it all on you😆
Edited by DamonCrazy_D3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona_Mayur

My god seriusly? No update for a month? Nooo. ...please update whenever you get time. I simply love this ff. And I shall wait patiently until you update :-)


Thank you for liking my FF :) Updating soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DaMiniii

Violence much update.
But i still loved it!
cant wait till next month for the update!
thanks for the pm!


Lol! Thank you chhoti! Glad you liked it! Updating :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrydrops2

OMG...awesome tha...but no update 4 a month ???


Thank you :) Updating soon!

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