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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hey rashmi.gud strt ,nu title sounds better,update 2day pls ,😊 we pray 2 god 4 ur exams make us hapy wid update😃


Yeah, I really need prayers fr Monday ka exam

Thik hai will update tomm, last part baki hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelygeet24x7


Yeah, I really need prayers fr Monday ka exam

Thik hai will update tomm, last part baki hai😆
go nd revise nd we wil pray4 u,den complte prt nd update u do ur prt we wil do our prt,den both hapy😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is really funny and hilarious..

Did Maan really came to see Geet?? I think Geet might be just assuming it😉
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Narration by Geet


Next morning I was in the kitchen cutting onions which automatically brought water in my eyes. I had decided, come what may I would clarify to all that I don't want to marry Maan! Perhaps the artificial water dripping from my eyes would help me to convey to them! I don't know but when he came near to me yesterday'umm..kuch kuch hota hai'don't know'I am so confused!


And nonetheless, as his thoughts just swayed by my mind, next my eyes saw him leaning against the kitchen door. I immediately looked away from pretending to not acknowledge his presence.

"Hmm'So? I think you are gonna use emotional blackmail for your second trial! Good!" he said mischievously as he saw water coming from my eyes

I did not say anything. Instead I wiped my eyes & continued cutting the onions. He lingered around the kitchen some more time as I concentrated on the onions but his presence was making me really uncomfortable. I had this feeling that he was all the while staring at me though I didn't know whether it was true or not! Ultimately with the fear of cutting my fingers due to my growing consciousness of him, I spoke up

"What do you want? Please go from here!!" I whined & looked at him but to my utter dismay, he was not at all looking at me but he seemed to search something.


"But he told I was beautiful right?" I coaxed myself. My voice made him turn his head towards me. Did I tell that he looked irresistible in that black shirt which he had worn & the gel applied perfectly on his hair was doing wonders to me!. The next second I saw him proceed towards me roguishly & yet again I watched him dreamily caring a damn about what he would do next! And then when he was way to closer to me, I felt it was high time to speak some words,

"W-What are you doing..."

His smirk became all the more bright hearing me ,"I am just..."


I watched him with a blank face as he started leaning over me! I felt the kitchen slab behind me which restricted my leg movement & I began to lean backwards as he inched closer... "What is he up to?" my mind popped this question out. But by the time I could think of something, my eyes closed as the collar of his shirt gently touched my neck, it was velvety & it gave me a ticklish feeling...& then...& then his fingers crossed mine..& then he...then he...


"The apples are quiet red but not as bright as your cheeks ! Good luck for your next try!"


His words broke my chain of fantasies & I stared at him with a startled look as he gave me a quirky smile standing at a safe distance from me biting an apple. He left me in a state of confusion as to what really happened.


Fine!!!I was imagining things!!! His collar really did touch my neck but the latter part was my own imaginary input! He was searching for the tray of apples which unluckily (or luckily!) was just behind me on the slab & he wanted to get those!!!! & I thought...That's why I don't like him'.mujhe really kuch kuch hota hai'!

It was breakfast time. I patiently waited for some faces to arrive'particularly my mother so that I can talk to her. Soon after someone did arrive but it was Maan. He gave me the smile which I really wish he stops giving me as it make me more weak! He was about to take his seat but I stopped him abruptly,

"You can't sit over here."

He ignored me. He was again about to take his seat but yet again I stopped him.

"Oh God!!Is this chair a lucky charm for you to announce your rejection??"

I glanced sideways & replied,

"I-I mean..you can't sit over here..else I won't be able to say what I am supposed to say like yesterday. I will send your breakfast to your room!"

Man!!!The height of innocent confession!!But I am like that way! I can't help it!. He stared at me, amused. He shook his head smirking & then left from there!

Then Annie turned up. I hadn't got to converse with her but I knew that Rajji disliked her!

"Where is Bhai?" she asked, taking her seat half acknowledging my presence

"He will have breakfast in his room..."

"Why?" she asked sharply.

"I told him to."

"What nonsense!!!!!!" she got up, "Then better send my breakfast too in his room!!!! Bhabhiji!!!!" she snorted & headed upstairs with her nose in the air. Even I dislike her!!

Then finally the expected faces began to usher in, my parents being one of the firsts. I wanted to just say to them right way but I stammered & by the time I could start with my statement, Daarji, Maan's parents & his dadima came & took their seats. I sighed but I would definitely say,I resolved!

"Wah! These aaloo ka parathas are so relishing!!" exclaimed Maan's dadi & everyone followed her.

"Woh ji Geet ne banaya hai!" added my mom praising me.

Ignoring her, I managed to start my pending speech

"Who'mein aap sabse yeh kehna chahati thi ki'ki..woh mein.." Everyone was patiently waiting for me to complete my say. I tried to take a deep breath & start all over again...but..."I wanted to say that aaloo ke parathes are made from aaloo i.e potatoes!"

Damn!!!I messed up everything again!!!I wanted to bang my head somewhere & yet again there was a blank line drawn on all the faces looking at me, trying to make sense!. Just then I heard a squeal of laughter from upstairs. I looked up to see Maan & Annie watching my sheepish act with Annie laughing out loud

"Oh Thank you so much Bhab--..I mean Geet!!!I really thought that aaloo ka paratha are made from cabbages!!Thanks for clarifying!!" she laughed sarcastically.

Maan motioned her to stay quiet. She obeyed him. He then smirked at me & I could only give him the whining look. The breakfast subsided soon.

I was prancing through the corridors yet again cursing myself for my sheepishness when I dashed with Maan at a turn.I closed my eyes startled & when I opened them, I saw myself pinned to a secluded corner by him. His utter closeness, the glint in his enchanting eyes easily raised my heart beats again & I was at a loss for words

"Not fair!!" he sounded as if complaining, "Two golden chances & still you couldn't clarify? I can't be generous anymore!Now what do I make of that?"

He was enjoying my shocked eyes staring at him.

"I-I told you to remain in your room.."

"Phir se shikayat?? I did not come in front of you at all, phir bhi.."

He moved his palm sensually up the bare wall slightly brushing through my arms..,, I shivered at his touch. He leaned more close to me & whispered,

"Kaho toh..Shall I write the 'correct' words for you which you are supposed to say in your final try tomorrow?"

"Zarurat nahi!" I said, my voice as stiff as possible.

He released me & so did his hot breath that was surrounding me.

"Toh thik hai!Jaise tum chaho! I advise you to eat an apple!"


I looked at him inquiringly. He chose to explain himself


"An apple a day helps the right words to say!"

He walked away bearing a mischievous grin. I am really supposed to be angry with him!! he leaves no chance to taunt me..Argg!! but kya karu, words refuse to grace my lips whenever he is around'.




Precap: Final Try🤔😉


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Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes me first for the first time!!! 😆

Wow beautiful update yaar!

Poor geet is not able to say anything and Maan is being mischievous. I like it 😉

Haha loved that quote in the end 😛
Edited by TheDarkKnight - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippeee ...loved it to d core...awesoome...
tfd pm...
cont.soon...
Edited by -Priti11- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Geet she is messing up everything and making herself a fool 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update 😊
bechaari geet 😆,maan to good😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hopefully in the final try she spills out!! loved the naughty Maan..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!that was just hilarious...
poor geet..!!she s really tongue tied in front of all...
i wonder Y annie s behaving like that?
Loved the last quotes of maan..
Nw wat will happen to final trial!!!hey babaji!!

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