virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57

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sania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Amazing update!!
Loved it!! Continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Awesome update. Cant wait 4 next part. Update soon.

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Syed695

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Amazing update!!! n wow 2 bqck to back updatess...interesting...continue soon n thanks for the pm~!

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Kidrauhl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Hayye great update
Thanks for the pm 😃

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Jaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

WOW nice update of what I could understand, my Hindi is not that good English translations would be a very big help.

Even after 3 years virat still had feelings for maanvi, so sweet, I would guess he needs to work out what he wants from maanvi especially if viren and jeevika get together, I would say try the romance or become friends again then take it to the next level of romance.

Thanks for the pm, please continue

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Hooria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Awesome Update
Thank you Rohan cuz of you 3 years later VirMan meet and will unite hopefully
Aww they are friends again soon lovers lol
Update soon and pm me please
Thanksz x

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Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Awesome update liked to know more about manvis past update soon and do pm me

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Dina98210

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

I absolutely loved it..!!! Amazing concept..!! Please update soon as i am very eager to read on..!! And pleeease pm me whenever u update this story..! Thanks and keep up the greaaat work..!!! X

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Marie_789

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Wow really nice update.

Thanx for PM
Continue Soon.

Do PM me.

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naina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

i think this story will be incomplete without manvi's POV...

so here it goes...

PART 4

manvi's POV

aaj fir achanak zindagi ne rukh modh lia.. jo kabhi socha bhi nai tha wo aaj ho gaya... tum aa gaye virat.. dhoond hi lia tumne mujhe... tumne toh apne pyar ko dhoond lia par kya main tumhe tumhari manvi de paungi... bahut mushkil hai ye sab.. aaj jab un do anjaani nazaron ko dekha tha toh aisa laga tha ke ye ankhein anjaani nahi hai, bahut jaani pehchaani hai.. par dil hi dil mein ek ajeeb si kashmakash chal rahi thi... dil keh raha tha k shayad mera chep aa gaya hai aur dimag hai k maanne ko taiyaar hi nahi tha... par ek aur darr tha dil mein.. darr lag raha tha k how will i face you... jab tum mere saamne aaye toh mere dil ki dhadhkan ruk si gayi thi... my heart literally skipped a beat... i donno why... par the moment i saw you i felt relieved virat... i knew that now i am not lonely.. i have somebody who knows me better than anyone in this whole world... par phir mera darr sahi lagne lag gaya... tumhari aankhon mein maine wo pyaar dekha jo sirf meri liye tha.. tum kyun pyaar karte ho mujhse virat...?? kyun...?? maine tumhe dard ke siva kuch nahi diya hai partner... kyun kaha tumne that you still love me...?? do you...??? why was there was so much of pain in your eyes when u saw me breaking down...??? why do u still love me...??? why do u still want me...??? when i gave u only pain which u didnt even deserved... kismat ka khel toh dekho... maine virat ko chod dia rohan ke liye aur rohan ne mujhe kisi aur k liye... it really hurts... i have hurted you virat... i hurted my best friend who was always there for me whenver i needed somebody... i am soo bad.. i dont deserve u... bhool jao virat mujhe and try to move on... par ab apni bandriya door mat jaana... i dnt want to loose my chep again... but how can you be frnds with a girl u love with everything... ??? i dont know... main pagal ho jaungi... mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha main kya karu...?? ek taraf i want u to move on and on the other hand i want u to be beside me like it used to be...

thinking about all this and weeping helplessly manvi fall asleep... when.. she doesnt even know...

Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago