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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update dear and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome emotional beautifully written update yar loved it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved it
geet's feelings are expressed fabulously
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't understand why would Raj send Shyana there at Maan's house I'm with Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 70


The operation was a long one. It took them more than 5 hour as this time the veins had reopened again and they needed to restitch them. Maan was restlessly pacing the corridor in worry. Though doctors told him it was not much case of worry but still his heart was racing fast in anticipation.

Raj and shyna were noticing him from far. They didn't had the courage to face him again as now they actually realized what they had ended into. They never thought that they are causing them so much pain and now the guilt was consuming them more.

After few hours, geet was shifted into another room for rest. Maan entered their and saw her unconscious still under the effect of anesthesia injected to her to keep her calm and in control. Doctors confirmed she is all right and can be taken back but needed adequate rest and control on use of mouth to heal the stitches.

Raj and shyna after confirming geet's condition left them alone. They knew that facing her now would just raise her anger and they were in no mood to do that.

After an hour geet opened her eyes with a loud scream. She looked at the strange surrounding and empty room and fear engulfed her. She started sweating furiously as tears started flowing from her eyes. All the incidents in the jungle started flashing in front of her eyes.

Hearing her screams maan ran out of the washroom and was shocked to see her state. She was crying bitterly while her body was shivering. He immediately took her in a hug but she started wriggling in his arms and shouting to free her. Please leave me please don't touch me, maan felt needles piercing his heart seeing her condition.

He immediately cupped her face firmly and made her look in his eyes, mishty its me your maan, calm down jaan. Its me mishty. Geet immediately calmed down as she realized it was him. She immediately crushed him in her arms sobbing on his chest. Maan held her tightly patting her head to calm down and whispered soft noting in her ears.

After her sobs subsided maan parted her a little so that he can see her face. Geet was still sobbing a little but was more better than before. Kya hua jaan, why were you crying so much, hmm. She didn't said anything just hugged him back tightly trying to hide herself from the whole world.

Maan didn't forced her more as her speaking is also not much good now and her crying would just make the matter worse. So he let the matter go for a while and asked doctors to discharge her.

He brought her back to their farmhouse where all were already shaken up. They were already informed about the matter through raj and the most shaken up was meera as she knew what is gonna come up now.

They escorted them to their room and made them rest. They keep asking them whether they were ok or they needed anything. They even tried to make the environment more cheerful, even maan too joined them but geet remained aloof. She didn't spoke much or smiled, just replied in monosyllables that too when was more pestered.

They left them alone after a while to rest. Geet laid down and was lost in her thoughts. All the while maan's eyes were fixed on her face noticing her changing expressions. It was quite clear she is tensed or in particular is scared of something. Neither she asked about raj nor did she express her anger again. Thus it was quite clear that she was not thinking about them then what was revolving in her mind was still a mystery.

Maan spread his arm and took her in his embrace which she needed more than anything. He kept caressing her back and hairs in circular soothing motion making her fall in a deep slumber. Geet snuggled close to him and fell asleep.

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Boss did you see her, she is worth millions. I had talked to them, they are ready to pay as much we want for her, but they need her raw and soon, Said a man to his brother who was trying to force some teenager in his bed.

Please leave me, my mumma papa would be worried, please leave me. Said a 11 year old girl who was tied up roughly and thrown on some corner of the room. She looked pale and weak. Her body had shed weight and she looked nothing more than a skeleton yet had a beautiful natural glow on her face which could even make a saint lose his control.

What let you think we will let go of a golden chick like you from our hand. So just shut up and let us enjoy you. We cant tore you apart but can atleast taste you. He spat shamelessly on her face while the little girl just kept crying not even able to understand what those words even meant.

She sat in the corner of the room trying to gather her torn skirt in place. Her hands were already tied while her top was in bits. The little bit of modesty was saved because of her frock which was torn in many places too.

She could feel herself being dizzy and could hear the faint voice of the people who were just laughing aloud and speaking some rubbish words. Soon she felt dark consuming her and with all her consciousness just prayed god for some mercy, some relief, some strength. Even death seemed appealing to her than this hell.


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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful update
so now time for geet's past to open
seems like she was molested at 11 i hope nothing has happened at that time
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg ..geet must hv gone through bad past...wonderfull update.pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful and emotional...

pls open her past soon...
cont soon...


thanks for the pm...
Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
is it tat she was Molested at the age of 11
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Posted: 12 years ago
painfull update..geets past revealing...will b waitng for it

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