Arhi FF:Childhood Marriage - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start,...
I really love the concept behind this... There are many thoughts buzzing in my mind about what would happen next...


There are certain typos but that's ok... The plot is really good...
Give a little spacing... It would make reading easier...
Write dialogues in individual ( i mean separate ) lines...
Just a positive suggestion... I'm not criticizing ... No offense


Love it!
I've already added you as buddy... Please accept and send PMs ... I looking forward to read this FF
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Interesting start!

Looking forward to know how they meet?
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that was really nice
I loved the concept add me to you're PM LIST
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Aw short but nice. Waiting to see how the story progresses...
Thank you for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will try to update tomorrow and thankyou all for ur wonderful comments.
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Both Arnav and khushi are excited to go to the college. Though the fact that they both were grown in the same environment, they both were very different from each other. The distance from the family and loneliness of first one or two years had a different effect on both of them, Arnav grew bold, stubborn, aggressive and cold hearted on the other hand khushi grew sweet, bubbly and kind hearted, she was not the same chamkeli girl who she was ten yrs ago but very modern and fashionable. She loves to make friends and be around as she had no family here but on the other side Arnav who was very happy to come to london 10 yrs ago was heart broken and does not like make many friends as he thinks his family lied to him by telling him that he is going on a vacation. Both Arnav and Khushi have not talked to their parents from past 2-3 yrs.

Coming back to present it is first day of college, and Khushi is very excited she wore peach tank top and white skinnies with matching accessorises.

Khushi entered college, she was looking beautiful in her attire. Shyam manohar jha the bad boy of college blocked her way.
Khushi:Excuse me!
Shyam:I think u r new in the college.
Khushi:yeah so what?
Shyam:is college ka rule hai jo bhi naya ata hai use ek dare di jati hai or use wo karni bhi hoti hai
Khushi:so tell me what I have to do?

Shyam was very impressed with khushi on the other hand Arnav also reached college and all the girls were drooling over him. Suddenly shyam saw arnav and told khushi that she has to slap that boy pointing towards arnav. Khushi said," ok" and she went towards Arnav and slapped him. Arnav became very angry and said,"what the!". Khushi made a puppy face and said,"sorry sorry I am really very sorry actually I...I...I"
Arnav:Just shut up what I,I. How dare u slap me?
Khushi spoke quickly: wo unhone kaha isiliye meine apko mardia.
Arnav: what are u saying?
Khushi:I mean to say that I am a new student they (pointing towards shyam and group) the bad guys were ragging me they said to slap u so I did.
Armav: ok! Be careful next time. Now go!

Khushi quickly ran away and Arnav turned towards shyam.
Shyam:chalo wo idhar hi araha hai.
But shyam was too late, Arnav came and said.
Arnav: I will never forgive u for what u did today and never forget it.

Then Arnav went to his class where khushi waves to him but he ignores her as he was not in a very good mood. A girl and a boy sat at the back seat of Arnav. They asked, "what happened tumhara gaal itna laal kyun horaha hai"
Arnav: nothing Nk and lavanya.
Nk: phir kisi se larai hogai kya?
Arnav: shut up!

After some time class got over,as soons it gets over khushi calls arnav, "Hey plz listen listen" arnav does not listen. Khushi stops following Arnav and there were two taps on her shoulder. She turns around and sees nk and lavanya.
Khushi: who r u both?
Nk: I am nk and she is lavanya.tum arnav ko lyun bola rahi thi?
Khushi: so his name is arnav.
Nk:yes!
Khushi: Oh my name is khushi actually, I was given a dare to slap him and I did so thats why I want to ask if he has forgiven me or not.
Nk:Oh thats why he is in such bad mood, Ok dont worry khushi me and lavanya are his only childhood friends or u can say only friends and we know how to cheer him up. We will help u.
Khushi: Thank u very much, so what is the first thing we should do?
Lavanya:We should send him flower and a sorry card.
Khushi: ok i will do it.

Khushi ordered a rose bouquet and a sorry card. After some timesArnav recieves the flower and the trio was seeing from behind. After few mins arnav started sneezing badly.
Lavanya:khushi what flowers you gave him?
Khushi: roses!
Nk:oh no he is allergic to roses.
Lavanya:Nk go and snatch the flowers from him, he should not see the card.
Nk quickly runs and say:Nanav give these to me u r allergic to them.
Arnav:Ya Nk I know but I want to See who has sent them.
Nk:No need nanav!

He snatches it runs away to lavanya.
Nk:That was close.
Arnav:What the!!!!
Khushi:Aab planB
La n Nk: whats planB
Khushi: Dont tell me u dont have plan B.
Lavanya:we always gives him a sorry card and he forgives us.
Khushi:No way!now what?
Nk:let think.
Khushi:IDEA
Edited by happygirl30 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwh poor arnav he got slapped by khushi loving the concept
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept superb updates!
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