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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Kuch Jaldi hi aagayi hoon lagta hai comment karne ke liye😆😆😆...kaan pakadke sry dear for being late.


Woww...that was one wonderful update with emotions depicted were neatly as always. Just luved it too bits. Luved the way they were talking to each other and trying to give their lives a chance...they both r right in their places...and the way u pen down Maneet's pov about the situation is so beautifully written with right amount of emotions in right places with right words...woww..its just a rightfully amazing update for sure.

Me just luved it...I really admire Geet's luv for Maan...its so pure and so lovely..me falling in luv with this characterization too as u know I luv Maan in this FF too as always, but now luving Geet more than I had in d beginning.

I just simple luved every bit of it...the way they tried to sort out their differences by putting their heart out was very emotional.

And now the precap and the teaser r just making me made to read more...so plzzz jaldi se update kardo...me waiting as always



it's ok dear... atl east aayi to sahi comment karne ke liye... that was enough for me...
i am so glad that you loved every bit fo it and the characters too speacially my maan, some hate him and some love him... thank you so much dear for loving every thing about this ff and the way story is proceeding...
love ya
will update it at night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
updating guys...
is anyone here?
will update it till night...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

updating guys...
is anyone here?
will update it till night...


Woww...thats a good news...me waiting a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago



hey guys,,,,congratulations to GC, he has won JDJ... because of his hard work, he deserves it... congratulations to all of you, because of your votes, wishes, and GC's hard work, today he won it... and last but not the least... shampa... without her GC won't be able to reach at this stage... please a huge applauds for her also...

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments'' next part will be a short one, will update that in mid of the week'ok'. Love you all'.

Part-37

he calmly took glass from he hand and gulped the whole glass of milk in one go because he knew that if he will stop in mid that he won't be able to gulp it again'..


"thanks geet'" she nodded'..

He was about to turn but then she called him softly "maan!"

He stopped at once and looked at her, replied'. "huh!!"

"Maan, wo actually'.." she looked at down feeling nervous, doesn't understand how to approach him, playing with her fingers'.. he looked at her finger activities and understood that she is nervous, she wants to ask something but confused'..

"what happen geet? koi baat bolni hai?" he asked softly'. She nodded quietly'.

"then say what it is'??" he told her'. She nodded again'.

"Maan, wo actually, can''can I ' can I shift to your room???" Geet asked to him looking down scared from his answer'.. he thought for a moment'.

"no" maan denied'..

She looked at him at once hearing his reply' she felt hurt when he denied her'.. she cursed herself in her mind for asking'.. she thought what was the need of asking'.. he smiled looking at her facial expressions'. Pouted lips,,, he moved towards her and made her look in his eyes holding her face by her chin with her index finger'. She shivered with his touch and looked in his eyes'' searching the answers, searching the reason why he denied her'..

"geet, that was not my room only, that yours also'. " he eyes beamed a little with happiness'..

"geet, that was our room and you have no need to take a permission from me,,, if you want to shift in our room then you can, , " he assured her'.

"thanks maan" geet replied'..

"geet, don't thank me for anything'. I am not worthy for it'. Ok'. Room mein chalein ya saari raat kitchen mein hi bitaane ka irada hai?" he teased her a little bit'.. she smiled and nodded'' both made their way to their room, , both was feeling a little bit awkward going in one room'. It was 3 months now and they never shared one room'.. as soon as they entered in the room'..

their sight fell on bed, one bed'' maan saw the bed and look at her face'. He can sense the awkwardness between them'.. though she was ready to share with him but he was not'. He wants a little time to understand her before taking their relationship further'.. geet was also thinking about him, , , , if he is ready to share the room & bed also'.

He turned towards her'. And cleared his throat'.. "ahem ahem", , ,she looked at him'.

"wo geet, , you sleep here and I'll sleep in study'. " she nodded'..

"geet, don't feel bad' actually I want little time for understand you, our relationship before taking any step and this time I don't want to do any mistake that will hurt you more'. " maan tried to clear his side to her'.

"no maan, there is no need to feel bad'. I can understand you'. I'll sleep here'.. " she replied him'.

"geet, are you with me in this tough phase?" he asked holding her hand'.

"I am always with you maan in every phase" she assured him with a smile'..

Pyaar ne pucha zindagi kya hai?

humne kaha tere bin kuch nahi.

usne fir pucha dard kya hai?

humne kaha jab tu sang nahi.

...pyaar ne pucha mohabbat kaha hai?

humne kaha mere dil me kahi.

usne fir pucha khuda kaha hai?

humne ne kaha tujhme kahi.

pyaar ne pucha humse ishq kyu hai?

humne kaha usko bhi pata nahi

usne fir pucha itni bechaini kyu hai?

humne kaha isme kasoor mera nahi.

pyaar ne pucha aetbaar karoge mera?

humne kaha tumse badkar koi nahi.

usne fir pucha saath doge mera?

humne kaha kyu nahi kyu nahi!!'

"thanks and, good night, have a good sleep" maan wished her'

"good night, and you too" she said with a smile'. Maan retired to his study with had the joint gate with his room'.. geet went back in her room and took her some clothes and came back to their room'.. after placing some clothes in cupboard, she sat bed'. Slowly-2 caressed the bed , the memory of that night regained in her mind, but the sweet memories of their togetherness , their being one, their sharing the bed, , it was her sweet memories of that night' she smiled slowly and placed her head on the pillow caressing his side, , ,


Geet's Monologue''


Today I felt so happy when maan talk to me, it feels like I got what I desired from so long' I know it was not easy for him but it was not easy for me too to forget everything'' only I know that how much I have suffered, how much I have craved for his single glimpse in these 3 months'.. it is not easy to forget everything, but I am trying'' I know maan, you are trying to put your best for this relationship but I know how much uncomfortable you are! , how much repenting you are! , I know how much you have suffered '. But I promise maan, I'll help you to be comfortable in this relationship''.

To you I give the whole me

For I believe that you're my destiny

To you I offer every best of my heart

For I believe that you will value it

I want to share my whole life with you

For me to show that my love is true

I want to hold you in my arms

And sing you songs and lullabies

Loving you is what I want to do

Although I know that it can make me blue

Cause tears in my eyes has nothing to do

If I'm with a man that is you...!!

Geet's Monologue Ends'..

she doesn't know when she slept while caressing the bed sheet'.

On the other side, maan was feeling really light after begging for his mistakes'. It was so hard for him but finally he did it'.. it was really a relief for him, , , still he is repenting , , it is not easy for him for forgetting everything what he had done with everyone'' he changed in his tracks and saw the light of the room was still on''

He slowly-2 opened the door and peeped in the room but the sight was so contended'. She was looking so cute while sleeping, so innocent'.. unknowingly his feet moved towards her, she was lying on bed like a ball feeling a little bit cold, AC's temperature is little bit high''


he slow down the temperature and covered her with duvet,,,,, switch off the light and went on his bed'..



Maan's Monologue


I know geet, how much you have suffered in these 3 months but I promise geet, I'll give you all the happiness, love, care'.. everything what you desired'.. I know it was not easy for her, but it was not easy for me also to forget everything and start a new life with that person whom I don't know much' but I know 1 thing about her that is, she is pure at heart'.. you are with me geet then everything will be fine soon'.. we'll make our life a happy married life'.. I promise'..


Maan's Monologue Ends'..


*******


Next morning, dadi & annie was sitting in hall, , just then Maan came down their without disturbing geet, she was sleeping so calmly like her sleep was waiting for this moment,,,,, after so many days it was looking like a family'.. dadi, annie, , maan, like before they used to sit with each together and had fun'.

chatting and laughing'.. dadi panicked seeing maan's hand bandaged '



dadi-maan, what happen to your hands?? She caressed his hands and her eyes moistened with tears'.

Dadi maa, don't panic,,,, it's nothing' wok al raat gym mein'. It's nothing' see, geet ne bandage kar diya tha'.

Annie-geet ne'.. bhai you hurt her again?? She asked while shocking hearing again geet's name from maan, she knows nothing about this matter'..

Maan-annie, I am really sorry for hurting you all'. Please ho sake to tum bhi mujhe maaf kar do'. And then he explained everything that he begged sorry from geet for his mistakes and misbehaved'.. dadi smiled through tears while annie also had tears in her eyes'' he again asked sorry from her and She happily gave in after knowing that everything is fine now'..

she wants only geet's happiness, , , nothing more'.. when geet is happy then why can't she be happy'. Just then ash came yawning, and wished good morning everyone'..

"hey everyone'. Good morning'" ash wished'.. all wished her back'..

Ashlesha Singhania

and sit beside annie'.. asked for coffee'.. just then rey also come, he too was also yawning'. Everyone was late today, slept late and woke up late'.


"hey bro, annie, dadi and u ash' good morning" rey wished them'.. ash made a face but wished him back'.

Reyhansh Singhania


Ved ran and sat on maan's lap'.

"arey, my baby woke up this early" maan asked ruffling his hairs,,,

"good morning dad" told Vedanta'.

"good morning beta" replied maan'.

"papa" told Vedanta.. when Vedanta wants something then he addressed maan as papa otherwise dad'.

"yes beta" replied maan kissing his cheeks while everyone engrossed in their chatting in pulling teasing Vedanta without no reason''

"what you brought from Europe for me??" he asked hoping so many toys'.

"papa brought so many toys for you, everything , now happy baby" maan asked to him'.

"very happy' love you papa" and kissed him on his cheek and maan again kissed him back'.

Dadi-today I am very happy'. Itne dino baad sab ek sath hai'

Annie-haan dadi, aaj bahut achha lag raha hai sab ek sath aura b to ash & rey bhi sath hai'.. kyu na masti ho jaaye'

Ash- bilkul'. Kya plan hai annie?

Rey-lo , yeh dono ho gaye start'. Inhe bas mauka milna chahiye , waise plan kya hai? And everyone laughed at once'' just then nakul came with the glass of milk and handed to dadi maa because he knew he won't listen him''

Vedanta saw the milk and hid his face in maan's chest'. "kya hua baby?" he asked him taping his back'.

"I don't want drink" and made yucky face'' dadi shook her head and annie took the glass from dadi's hand'. This is his daily routine'. Daily he ran away seeing milk'. Somehow geet convince him for the milk'..


On the other hand geet woke up after taking a sweet sleep'. She has a beautiful smile on her face like it was her best sleep as ever'.. she yawned and hugged herself pulling duvet near her chest feeling contended, closed her eyes and smiled beautiful'.. she stood up and made her way to downstairs , she knew it's Sunday and everyone will be in hall'. And today there is no problem with maan that she won't show her face to maan'.. it's like a new day for her'.. after all it's new beginning of her life, no,,,, no their married life''

"but beta, milk gives you energy" maan tried to explain him'..

"no, I don't want energy and again hid his face'. He hates milk'" ved again spoke'.

"if I'll mix chocolate powder in it then you'll drink it na'. " ask annie'.

"no.. " and he ran away jumping from maan's lap'.


Maan took the glass from annie's hand and ran behind ved telling him to take milk otherwise papa will be gussa from him'. but ved being stubborn shaking his head in denial and running around in whole hall while all were laughing seeing the sight'' it was so new for them even geet was shocked seeing this'. She never imagined maan like this''.

She came down and watched them'.. a sweet smile crept on her face just then ved hid behind her escaping from maan, , , maan stopped from his pace seeing geet there'.. but then gave a liitle smile to her''

"good morning maan" she wished him with her usual big smile'.

"good morning geet'.. " maan replied back while ash, rey also wished good morning to her''

"see geet, he is not having milk" he complained to geet about Vedanta'.. ved peeped behind geet and looked at maan , pouting lips and looked down'..

"maan, he is like this'. Always throw tantrums" geet replied him back' dadi had tears seeing the scene'. It was like a complete family'.. she was praying to god that everything will fine soon between maan and geet'..

Geet held vedanta's hand and pulled him in front of her'..

'.sorry , 2nd part of teaser is neither in this part nor will in next part'.. please co-operate with me'.

Pls like and do comments'.

Love ya

neha


hey guys, next writer's name has been announced and that is none another than our cruela tich.1990mg, , i know you all know about her but may be some of you doesn't know about her & her work... one thing i wanted to tell you about her work and that is- she is an awesome FF writer... you can find most dangerous maan, in her every story, you can find passionate, possessive, obsessive, powerful , dangerous maan... and geet as always naive but too strong also... whether it will be k2, k3, k2hy, sml, ddp or nb... who doesn't know about her, pls get 1 thing, she is the queen of twists, no one can predict the upcoming twists n turning points... i loved her every work... mostly k2hy & k3... pls send your questions to me or nandy or post in fb group...

Tich's work-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2896225/my-little-paradise-with-maaneet

and kindly visit the thread.... mg ff writer's interview

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3165188/mg-ff-writers-interview-interview-pg-77










Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeyyy, me first for d first time😃😃😃
awesome update👏
so der relation needs time nd i'm sure ved will help in building d gap
Edited by harshia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

love the happy family update...wonderful..pls cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
very sweet update
happy family
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice part
liked maan and ved part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Neha...what a beautiful update...u absolutely nailed it...
I loved thier talking out their emotions and monologues...and Ved is a cute mix truly...
so waitign to see how Geet amkes him drink milk...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maneet fresh life start ved cute



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