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Posted: 12 years ago



Ana awesome Part Dear

Mast ekdam mast 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
waiting for update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN SHOULD HAVE TOLD HER HE WAS GOING TO MUMBAI
SHE WAS SO WORRIED FOR HIM
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Yash (self talk): Where did she go………..

He went out and screamed

Geeettt………….

Geet was running on the stairs with full force and was about to tremble when Yash came from behind and saw that and screamed….. He ran behind her and hold her…..

Yash: Geet have you gone mad…….. agar ghir jati thi to and what is this madness……and relax………

He takes out the phone and start dialing Maan's number and gives the phone to Geet…..

Yash: Lo baat karo Bro se……

He gives the phone and goes away from there giving her privacy……..

On the other side Maan had just finished his meeting and everything and had come to his room and his phone rang……..

Maan: Ha Yash….. bolo…..

Geet was just hearing his voice and fresh tears came out of her eyes… She was feeling happy to hear his voice…… Maan could hear her sobs…..He realised it that it was Geet…..

Maan: Geet…….. Kya baat hai…….

Geet did not say anything...

Both were holding the phone without talking to each other…. Finally after few minutes Maan broke the silence…..

Maan: You wont even talk to me Geet….. You know how much did I miss you for the whole day….

And this sentence just strikes Geet…..

Geet (with a cute complain): That is the reason you went away without even telling me……..

Maan ( gave a smile to the cute complain): I had an emergency which I came to know early morning and with no option left had to leave…… And you were sleeping so peacefully then how could I disturb you…..

Geet (crying): I am sorry Maan………

Maan: Geet

Geet: No let me talk…….. I misunderstood you Maan and I thought that….

Maan: I was talking to my some ex girlfriend right… But Geet it was my mistake also when you asked me I should have told you………

Geet: You know how I felt for the entire day….. You just went away without even telling me….. And upon that you were very upset on what I said…….

Maan: Yes I was upset but not on you but on myself that I have still not able to develop a trust in you……I think I am not that…..

Geet did not allow him to say further: Sorry Maan…… Please apni Geet ko maaf kar do….. And you don't say that………

Maan: I am sorry Geet………

Geet: Why are you sorry???

Maan(teasingly): Maine tumhe pura din bohot sataya na……..

Geet: Ha aur nahi to kya?? You know how much did I mi

Geet stopped biting her lips and smiled with shy thinking what was she about to say…..

Maan: Why did you left your sentence incomplete…… Bolo na Geet…..

Geet: You are very bad…… I am not going to say anything…….. You have to say sorry to me………

Maan (surprised): But I said sorry to you…… That I should have told you to whom I am talking…….. I was just teasing you but I never knew it will become so serious……… I am sorry love……

Geet became shy by hearing a word love……

Finding no answer from Geet……. Maan again called her…

Maan: Geet….

Geet: I am not angry on you on that…… I am angry on you because you never told me that you are going to Mumbai……

Maan: It happen all of a sudden and I had to come here and I did not want to disturb you………

Geet: who sab mujhe nahi pata…….. I am angry on you……

Maan laughed at the cute fake angry comment of Geet…… which irritated Geet a lot……….

Geet: Don't laugh I am serious………..

It was almost an hour since Maan and Geet were talking on the phone……

Yash almost shouted: Agar aap dono ka ruthna manana ho gaya ho to can I get my phone back….. I need to make some important call…..

Geet still holding the phone: I know your important call…….. I will tell Maan wait if you talk to me like this……….

Maan who was listening to all this: What do you want to tell me……

Geet: You know Yash wants to make some important call to important person……

Yash takes the phone from Geet's hand and says: marvayegi kya???

Maan: Yash what is all this……..

Yash: Nothing bro….. By the way bro tell your wife to have food as she is not eating and is starving others also………

Maan: Means??

Yash: Bro, Geet has not eaten food since……

Geet just took from Yash hand and said whispering: If you say anything to Maan na then mujhse bura koi nahi hoga……

Maan: I heard that Geet…… And why are you avoiding your food……..

Geet: I am sure you also must have not eaten your food……

Maan just don't know what to say……..

Geet: aap kana kha lijiya and even I will have it….. But ha that does not mean that I have forgiven you I am still angry on you for not telling me and going and then not giving me a single call since morning abhi bhi maine phone kiya tha aap ne nahi….

Maan: Geet please aise mat karo…….

Geet: Good night

And keeps the phone down…..

Maan (smirk smile) : Geet you will pay for this wait………..

Geet and Yash had their dinner and the dinner was full of masti teasing each other….. Then they called Savitri and talked to her for some time…….

They retired to their bed…….. Geet was relieved that Maan was no longer angry with her…… She made a point that she will see to it that this relation works properly………

Geet took Maan's photo in her hand and started talking to the photo: I know Maan our relation never started with a correct path but now I have started knowing you……… I don't know what is happening to me…… You were away from me and I just could not stay without you…… Aise dar laga jaise someone will take you away from me……. I know I should have understood that you were just teasing but I don't know why I felt that……… No No I will never ever think that way……. Maan please never ever do this to me... and aisi kabhi chod ke mat jana……..

Talking to his photo Geet did not realize when she slept………

She slept peacefully but in the morning she felt something…… With a jerk she got up and got a shock…….. She just kept looking at him with immense love…. She just could not believe that Maan could be here…….

Geet (self talk): Kya Geet khuli aakho se bhi sapne dekhti hai……. Maan is in Mumbai how can he be here….. Jalli kahi ki…….. She looked at the clock it was only 5.00 so she decided to sleep for sometime…… But as soon as she lied on the bed she felt his hand on her waist holding her tightly…….

Geet: Maan…..

Maan (his eyes close): Hmmm……..

Geet was again going to get up Maan pulled her on him….

Geet screamed: Maannn

Maan got scared and woke up: What happen Geet????

Geet touches his cheeks: Are you here in real or Am I dreaming

Maan try to hide his smile and says: Nahi Mai to Bhoot hu…… and I never knew you dream about me…….

Geet: I am not talking to you……. You are teasing me in the morning…….

Maan: No Geet I am not teasing you at all…….. Now you were angry on me then how could I stay in Mumbai when you were missing me…….

Geet with a fake anger: Why would I miss you……

Maan: Oh that is the reason you were sleeping with my photo with you……..

Geet did not know what to say….. She just try to get up but Maan hold her….

Geet: Please let me go……..

Maan: Where??? It is only 5.30??? Are you still angry on me Geet……. Please maaf kar do na………Please…… I promise I will never ever do this again…..

Geet: Promise…….. Kitna bhi gussa kyu na ho aap kabhi bhi bina bataye nahi jayege……

Maan: Promise……….

Geet: I am also sorr………

Maan puts his fingers on her lips: Sshhh bus hogaya ab sorry………

His touch passed shiver on her body……… Maan noticed that and immediately removed his fingers from her lips…….

They were quite for few seconds…..

Maan: Now sleep for sometime……. Even I am feeling sleepy…….

Geet: But aap kab aye….

Maan: Around 3.00

Geet: What??? Why???

Maan: Why???

Geet: I mean why so late….. But Yash told me that you will be coming after 2 days…….

Maan: For me tumhe mana jyada important tha and not staying there……. Almost majority work is done only little is remaining so I woke up the pilot and told him that I need to Delhi now…….

Geet: What??? You woke the pilot at midnight……..

Maan: Ya why not for you anything……. Now can we sleep………

Geet: hmmm…..

Both had a peaceful sleep……….

Precap: Surprise……….. But what????












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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely update.. te way geet talking to my maan and my maan came to delhi to manofly his geet.. wow lovely cute scenes .. i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just love it waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
wht a surprise geet...jhalli kahinki...samne dekh k bhi samajh mein nehi aye...he he he...nw everything is fine...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing and cute update.. Loved maaneet moments..

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