||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 - Page 28

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friends no no way..
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Interesting, now maanvi forget prem..
and the promo is a teaser yaar..
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love the promo

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I am loving the way the story is going but I am finding the Hindi very hard to read and understand, sorry for not commenting sooner.

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hey when r u updating dis.. plz update soon... im eagerly waiting.. thanks... :)
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Originally posted by: oriyana

hey when r u updating dis.. plz update soon... im eagerly waiting.. thanks... :)



will update soon guys and that will be a very longgg update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Arreh I was already eagerly waiting for your update and now i am waiting even more eagerly please continue soon
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CHAP 17

outside the room
virat : prem...
prem : now what do u want to say...???
virat : listen i know...
prem : what do u know...??? you dont know what am i going through... i have lost my love whom i just found...
virat : and i lost my childhood love... my friend, my love everything... you really cannot wonder what am i going through prem
prem : listen i know you love her but
virat : but she is all yours...
prem : what...??
virat : its true i love her but i am not going to snatch her away.. prem manvi loves you... i just cannot come between you guys... i am just with manvi till the time she gets recovered... she is your fiancee and she will only marry you...
prem : so u r saying that despite the fact you love her, you will not distance manvi from me rather you will help me get bck manvi...
virat : yeah... the only thing that matters to me prem is manvi's happiness and her happiness lies in you...
prem : i am sorry i got u wrong virat... i thought...
virat : you can trust me on that...
prem : i trust you... 😊
virat : friends...
prem : friends...

scene shifts
manvi : mom i think i have seen this friend of virat somewhere but i dont know where...
naina : baby dont stress yourself... it just happens sometime...
manvi : mom... di dont u think so...??
jeevika : nahi mannu... tu zyada mat soch... (mannu.. dont think so much)
manvi : kyun...??? kyunki mere sar pe choti si chot lag gayi hai... di aap bhi na.. main virat se hi puch lungi... (why...?? just bcos i got an injury on my head... di u are just impossible.. forget i'll ask virat only)
virat : partner... (comes with manvi's food with prem on his side)
manvi : partner toh tum ye bimaaro waala khane le hi aaye... aur apne frnd ko bhi le aaye...
virat : haan manvi... main apne ko bhi le aaya (smiling to prem) manvi meet my friend prem and prem this is my bestest friend manvi...
manvi shakes her hand with prem and suddenly feels something familiar on his touch...
manvi : hi prem... i am manvi... manvi chaudhary.. virat's bestest frnd and his partner...
prem : hey manvi... i am prem.. nyc meeting you.. hope you are fi ne now...
manvi : same here and yes i am fine... so friends...??
prem : no... friends forever... what say...??
manvi : friends forever...
virat who was standing quietly was looking at this and felt as if his world has shattered again... his happiness has been once again snatched from him... he felt as if his whole world was slipping from his hands like sand.. but still he tried controlling himself and his heartfelt emotions.. but when unable to, he gave the food to jeevika and went outside...
viren knew why his brother has left the room, so he followed virat...
viren : virat...
virat (in a heavy voice) : ji bhai...
viren : tu theek hai na...??
virat : nahi...
viren : kyun kar rha hai aisa...??? (why are you doing this...??)
virat : so what i should i do...???
viren : but why the hell are you bringing prem into all this bhai...
virat : bcoz my manvi loves him... and he is her fiance...
viren : but your love saved her ... you brought her back to life...
virat : and i am the one who broke her heart and brought her into this position... sab meri wajah se ho rha hai... i am responsible for all this...
viren : virat dekh maine kaha tha na sab kismat par chod de... dekh kismat hi tujhe manvi ke kareeb la rahi hai dobara... dont leave this chance... may be u both are just made up for ending up together...
virat : but she hates me bhai... manvi hates him and i cannot bear this... i dont want to come between these two who just found their love... yes it is hurting me... the only thing i want right now is manvi... bhai i am craving for manvi... bhai what can i do...?? when i myself have given all my happiness to somebody else...
viren : bhai i dont want to sound selfish... but i really think you should go with the flow and let time heal all the wounds let be physical, mental or emotional... this is the time for u to rectify your mistakes and give oyur relationship a fresh start...
virat : hmmm... bhai par ek darr hai...
viren : kaisa darr...??
virat : agar main manvi ke kareeb ja kar usse door nahi ho paya toh... bhai i dont wnt to go through all this once again... i will not be able to...
viren : sab theek ho jaega just have faith in manvi's bhagwanji...
virat : i think i can do only this for now...

inside manvi's room...
manvi was really loving prem's company but still it was impossible to forget virat or not miss him for that matter...
manvi : dii wo virat kahan hai...??? pta nahi baar baar kahan gum ho jata hai...
jeevika : main dekhke aati hoon... tu yahi rukk...
manvi : di main kahan jaungi... 😛
jeevika : oh yeah... 😳
jeevika went out and saw virat and viren standing at the end of the corridor...
jeevika : viren ji... virat ap dono yahan kya kar rahe ho...???
viren : kuch nahi jeevika... bas aise hi...
jeevika : woh manvi...
virat : bhabhi manvi theek toh hai na...
jeevika : haan woh theek hai... mannu aap dono ko bulaya rahi hai... virat she is missing you... lets go...
viren n virat : hmmm...

I KNOW THIS PART WAS A LITTLE BORING BUT I PROMISE NEXT PART WILL BE BANG ON... THERE WILL BE MORE OF VIRMAN 😊 ❤️

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