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Posted: 12 years ago


PART 3


Madhu: geet tujhse ek baat kahu

Geet: tu asa kyun puch rhi hai

Bol na

Madhu: geet

Kbhi apne ehsaaso ko byan krne mein der mt krna

Geet: madhu

Madhu: ha geet

Jo mann me hai ''.usse kh dena

Khi asa na ho'..zindagi dusra mauka na de

Geet: tu ye kya khi ja rhi hai

Madhu: are yaar

Bs yhi

Maan aur teri parso engagement hai

Toh usse apni dil ki baat kh diyo

Usse bhi to pta hona chaiye''. Koi usse kitna pyaar krta hai

Jaane wo kisi ke dil mein kbse hai

Geet: madhuu

Madhu: kya geetu bs mera naam hi li ja rhi hai

Mein jo kh rhi hu usse smjh

Geet: kya khehna jaruri hai kya

Madhu: ha

Kyi baar samne wala hmari chupi ko nhi smjh pata

Wo nhi jaan pata''.. ki samne wale ke dil mein kya hai

Aur mein nhi chahti''..tumhare ehsaas bs dil mein rh jaye

Tum jisse chaho''jisse payo''wo milke bhi na mile

Geet: tu sch bta

Teri kya fight huyi hai rishu se

She hugs her from back and rests her chin on her shoulder.

Madhu: ab ye rishu kha se aa gya bich mein

Geet: wo kya hai na madhu

Tu itni senti

Aur filmy baatein bs tbhi krti hai

Jb teri rishu se fight hoti hai'''.

She lightly slaps her on her cheek.

Geet: oye maar kyun rhi hai''

She (geet) moves and held pillow for next fighting''

Madhu: tujhe bhut masti suj rhi hai na

Abhi btati hu

Both stand on bed''and hit the pillow to each other''

(imagine here geet and madhu)

He: annieee''..

Annie: daadi I tell you one day me totally became deaf'..

Ydi bhai ase hi chilate rhe.

Daadi: maan bte aap yha aaiye

Maan: daadi maa phle aap mujhe ye btaiye''

Aap ab tk kyun jag rhi hai

Annie tumhe pata hai na , daadi maa ke liye itni raat tk jagna thik nhi hai

Annie: dekha daadi''.. apne

Bhai bhi whi kh rhe hai '''jo mein aapse kh rhi thi

Daadi: bs kro tum dono

Both keep silent.

Daadi: aur ye kya hai maan

Aapki parso engagement hai''aur aapko koi fikr nhi hai

He takes her hand and sits below on his knees...

Maan: daadimaa asa nhi hai

Bs wo ek important meeting aa gyi thi, isliye late ho gya

Daadi: hume ab kuch nhi sunana hai

Ab aap tb tk office nhi jayenge

Tb tk shaadi nhi ho jati''.

Maan: daadi''ye aap kya kh rhi ho

Daadi: hum bilkul shi kh rhe hai

Kyun annie bte

Annie: ji daadimaa

Daadi: bte kuch waqt geet ke sath bi bitaiye

Unhe smjhiye'''

Maan: daadimaa'.. hum dono friend hai na

Aur ek dusre ko bhi jante hai

Fir kya jaroorat hai

Daadi: baat jaroorat ki nhi hai'''..

Aap phle bs dost the''par ab humsafar bnana ja rhe hai

Geet bhi to aapse baat krna chahti hongi

Aur aap hai ki aapko waqt hi nhi hai

Maan: daadi please aap tension mt lijiye

Mein geet ko pura waqt dunga

Apni har zeemedari nibhayunga

Daadi: maan aap fresh hoke aaiye hum dinner lagwate hai

Maan: daadi, apne abhi tk dinner nhi kiya

Annie tum

Daadi: humne dinner kr liya hai

Hum aapke liye kh rhe the

Maan: hmm

Daadi: annie bte aap jaiye aura b aaram kijiye

Annie: ji

She left the place.

Maan: daadi aap bhi aaram kijie

Nakul dinner de denga mujhe

Daadi: hmm

He stand up and move for go to room. But daadimaa voice came from behind.

"Bte aapse ek baat puche"

Maan: daadimaa puchiye na

Daadi: aap khush to hai na

He came to near daadimaa and said 'daadimaa aap khush hai na"

Daadi: ha bte

Hum aap dono ke liye bhut khush hai

Maan: to daadi mein bhi bhut khush hu''apno ke liye'.

Daadi: aur khud ke liye

Maan: geet bhut achi hai daadimaa

Daadimaa baatein bhut gyi , ab aap apne room jaiye

Daadi: hmm

Maan: goodnight daadimaa

Daadi maa: goodnight bte

Maan: nakul

Nakul: ji

Maan: dinner room me le aana

He nodded and left the place'..

Ek pal mein kaise zindagi badal jati hai

(How life turns in one moment.)

Koi nhi jaan pata

(Nobody knows)

Few days back, I am so happy, I watch same feeling in her eyes, my heart knows, it's a true, she also love me. I prepared romantic dinner date only for her, for purposing'.. She came '' we do chat on various topics'

She enjoyed with me' finally I said my all feelings to her'.. How I am fall in love with you''with your talk''.with your support'.

Madhu: maan kya hua

Tum kuch khehna chahte ho

Maan: ha madhu

He held her hand''..

Maan: I love you madhu

She became silent. She not says any word'..she stands from seat and tries to go, but he held her wrist.

Maan: madhu say something

Madhu tum mujhse pyaar karti ho na

Madhu: no maan

Mein tumse pyaar nhi karti

He pulls her and held her by waist.

Maan: aur jo maine tumahri aankhon mein dekha

Madhu: mein nhi janti tumne kya dekha

Pr jo bhi dekha

Wo galat dekha

Ok

Mr. Maan Singh Khurana

Madhu ne kbhi bhi maan se pyaar nhi kiya''..

She removed his hand from the waist and go outside.


previous part 2 on page 19

Part 4 on page 35

see below...

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



Madhu really didn't loved Maan or she is sacrificing for her sister Geet...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yar madhu geet ke lie apna pyar kurbaan kar rahi h waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
nice part...
Maan loves Madhu and Madhu too love Maan but Geet loves Maan and is gonna get married to him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

does madhu loves maan???

geet is completely in love wid maan but maan loves madhu...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful update

thanx for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan marrying geet for dadi's sake...hmmm..,..i really hope he falls 4 geet real soon but as madhu is already in his heart,it will take time to happen...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kaun kisko pyar karta hai aur kisse shaadi ho rahi hai...pata nehi geet k naseeb mein maan ka pyar hai bhi ya nehi...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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