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Posted: 12 years ago

PART- 22

"why geet….why…you are not trusting me….why you are behaving so rood….i am your maan….can't you see my love in my eyes….you are not like this before….what happened geet…tell me…any thing is bothering you…..pls give me one chance…."his eyes were almost pleading….geet stood there it self like she rooted…her eyes also filled…..maan continued…."geet I am telling you truth…from the movement I left you ,I am searching you….really I don't know you met accident…that day I got the call from Delhi….dadima admitted in hospital….still she is in bedridden...she got paralysis's attack……"he is in pain……he is exploding his pain…he is trying to explain his situation to her but geet…….."I have searched you each and every where but I didn't get …trust me geet…I am a fool who didn't recognized the day one when you trapped my heart….but after leaving you …I understood your love….pls geet forgive me….pls give me one chance…."he lifted geet chin from his fore figure…geet lost in his words so much that she didn't realize when he came so near to her….his eyes were too dark too deep… …his eyes filled with pure love. she just forget her self…."geet I am tired in all these days…pls geet….sirf ek bar muje maf karo…."geet leaned back to door…..her eyes suddenly shined looking his love towards her. Even she thirsted for this love and care all these days…..her silence given approve to him continue…her eyes given permit to continue…yes he recognized her secret love in her eyes….he closed the distance between…them…finally he got his geet….he locked her between him and door…his confession made her melt….his hands glued on door….he saw her face once again…his happiness raised….smile appeared in his lips…"geet at end you accept me…"he lean on her…taking her lips in…geet closed her eyes…..her hands moved to hold him…..

Maan just peaked her lips….its felt like soft flower petals….once he saw her face…don't know what is running in her mind…but her submission made him to move forward…."thank you geet…."he touched her forehead with his lips….next her eyes….next her nose….there is no hungriness….there is know any urgency , there is no any desire but only there a pure love blow between them…finally he touched her fore head by his forehead ….he went deep in her eyes….he whispered on her lips…..his breath is fanning on her…his scent covered her nostrils…he is succeed to hold her in his arms. "geet you will not imagine that how I am feeling now…..i feel like heaven….i want to fly….i want to tell everybody that you are belongs to me…only me….geet patha hain sach kya hain…muje aaj tak vishwas nahi huwa….tum mere baaho main hu…lekhin…muje lagtha hain sari duniya ke kushi mere pass..hain….kash….if the earth stop to move…let everything is stop…only me and you in this earth…I feel to cry…I feel to laugh…you know my insane mind wishing to do all mad things…."he is in full zoom…he is lost in her…how much means he didn't know how childish he talking…."geet I promise you….what ever happens ill be with you…i keep you in my heart and not letting any one to harm you…you are my destiny…you are my treasure…."some drops of tears dripped down…."you know geet….you are not with me physically but you are with me in my heart….you have shared when I am in pain…you laughed with me when I am happy….you know just thinking about you its boosted me lot….you were with me in all these days…enough geet enough this distance closed today itself…..i am not even believing but its true you are with me…"he hugged her tightly where geet struggle to even for breath…her face fully buried in his hard chest…..her lips hardly pressed his chest.

geet in dilemma….she never expected so much love from him….her mind is craving to melt in his love…asking her to melt in is arms….its forcing her to mingle him…..when he told her again and again about his love….when he is confess his feelings so strong……even she want to lay on his chest….her mind is craving to be with his arms till the world end……shaidh is duniya abhi ki abhi rukh jahi tho….oh if its happened any magic…..or any angel come and touch with magic stick if it is change everything…..her eyes shined……but without her knowledge she separated from him….maan still lost in his blabbering….when maan realized that she is going far by him…..he extended his hand to hold her…but its late….she is already out of entrance….when maan move in hurry to catch her….she is already in cab….maan smiled thinking there close movement…."maine dekhliya geet…muje patha hain…tum muje pyar karungi hana…tum mujse chupa sakthi hu lekhin tumari anke kabhi joot nahi bol sakthi….maine dekhliya tumari anko may ye pyar…."but he is happy….

At morning maan is waiting for geet….but she is not even once appear in front of maan…she is busy in event arrangement….he know she is perfect in all these…she didn't let a single thing to complain from anybody…its not a part of her work…its her dedication on work…..before she is working only for survive her life…but today she is working for someone….he is her love…..her sole….

Maan waiting….waiting only he become tired….no sigh of geet….where is she….her mobile is continuously not reachable….did I am loosing her again…some unknown fear gather in his mind….

At hotel,

Finally everything is okay…geet uttered her self…she is satisfied checking her self everything….from the entrance decoration till the menu…as this is big business party…to be careful on security system also….its not a easy job to arrange everything In just 24 hours…but she done….that is geet…that's why always yash trust her…closing eyes and handover all the responsibilities to her…. At end she return to house…..

No mood to attend party but maan….she can't escape from her responsibility in this way…she is the main key person who should build up healthy relation between maan and customers , venders….now she is scaring to go in front of him…she is scaring on her self…..she dieing from yesterday about her submission to maan… she lost her confidence on her self….she scared whether she throw all her pains and worries on maan…no its not right…..this pain only bared from me…

She selected dark green heavy work suit to ware….its designed by golden thread embroidery…it is very rich and expensive….when she is about ware she change the mind…yes why I didn't think in this way…in this suit he can find out truth of me…no…she changed her self and chose another simple white sari…its looking simple and sweet …but its designed with costly white stones which is giving sparking look to sari….its borders were most beautiful with white pearls ,stones and embroidery with white pure silk threads.. she tied her long hairs with band……warred single white diamond bangle in her right hand….she want to be as possible simple but her beauty is not letting her to be so simple. she is glowing like a diamond…twinkling like a stars…Her white sari giving is giving her angel look…its making her most beautiful women in this world.

Once again she stood in front of mirror…she pull down her sari fleets as much possible. Once she confirmed its covered her feet….she satisfied about her look. Holding white color purse she went out side giving final touch up to her make up.

When she reach hotel she found maan at hotel entrance speaking with his mobile. Her eyes shined looking at his party suit. Yes even he is wearing white suit where it perfectly matching to geet sari. She try go inside without drawing his attention….but how can she think like a fool…once she neared to entrance he turned her side . he stood rooted…he become numb…he know his geet beautiful but today she is glowing different on out of limit… her beauty made him speech less…her earrings where compitating with her eyes…he felt great having such a beautiful wife…he thanked his faith to giving such a lovely wife in his life. maan met many of beautiful girls in his life…but geet is a gem….her innocence given angel tic beauty to her….he couldn't move his gaze from her….he extended his hand to hold her….yes geet smiling and coming towards him…now he is in heaven….but when she move forwards greeting another person maan face drained as if there is no bit of blood…..he is very much humiliated when she ignore him…

From morning he is waiting her but she is not bother to call him at least once…and now she is with another competitor Mr. Rahul Singhania….his eyes went dark…he closed his fist in frustration….a sudden angry clouded his mind….he couldn't bare when she speaking with rahul.

He convinced him self….geet can not be done this…there will be some reason….any how he is our competitor to keep healthy relation she with his…but his heart is refusing his thoughts….its pushing him to geet….

After a while he him self went to near her….but geet ignored him…at least she didn't greeted him….she introduced all the business co-ordinates him for name sake . her each act driving him insane….he couldn't understand her actual reason of her behavior…her ignorance is killing him inside. Maan trying to close her but geet purposely she going away….finally he went to take some drinks….

Geet sat next to rahul at couch…actually he is back of geet once she joined Asian paints….but geet ignored him…but today all of sudden why don't know she is near to him….rahul is very happy….he had eye on her from long back…..he felt heaven is next to him….

Party is in full swing….all the employs, business associates , agents , venders…geet didn't left a single person for this party…from her end everything is perfect…her eyes were searching maan….once she found him near the bar counter gulping hot drinks and staring at her with burning eyes, she felt chill air crawled in her spine….don't know why her sixth sense is alarming some thing will go worst…..

Rahul pulled her arm to dance floor…..she is not in mood….but still she went with him…he is barely holding her waist with his flirty hands…maan burning him self…he felt burning sensation inside….he felt to cut those dirty fingers…geet moved according to slow music with rahul….at sudden jerk she swing in air…..next she is in maan arms….rahul try to protest…but maan crimson eyes stop him there it self….rahul moved back….

Every one are in shock….but they didn't think much….its all fashion in this modern world.

Her back glued his hard chest…his right hand entangled to her right hand…his left hand wrapped her tummy pressing more close to his body….geet gasped for a while…her breath caught in her heart…she felt its throbbing in higher speed…even before they both close but not this much even they kissed….but this is different experience to her. His hand move to her hair band. He removed at one jerk…her long hairs covered her back….he nuzzled her silky hair. her whole back sensed his body touch nothing is left by untouchable…her cheeks turned dark pink…when every one eyed on them…suddenly he rotated her and pulled her in front now she is facing him clearly…she scared looking at his eyes….they were rage in anger…his hold proved how much he disturbed…..

All of sudden music started….geet try move away…but he adjusted her move as a dance step…again and again he pulled her to his arm . its really difficult to match his dance step…but maan is not leaving her easily….once he buried his face in between her shoulder and jaw. In this process his lips brushed her skin….geet gulped….she can't bare any more…she didn't expected maan will behave so silly….

"maan leave me….every one are looking us…" she whispered feeling disgusting….

"what's wrong…I am not with others wife….i am holding my own wife…"he pulled some more close…geet eyes become teary ….his right hand was glued her bare back….

"maan pls…." she almost begged him….

"no …"he said in same stubborn…protesting him is like asking more….she zipped her mouth let him to do what ever he want…moreover she know he is already drunk….alcohol is smelling hard….she understood she couldn't control him…maan once convinced that she will not leave him again…next he gapped with her and started to move on dance floor…..first it was slow…smooth….once the music changed maan changed his steps…now he confirmed that she will not run away from her….now he moved slowly with her…now his grip soften on her waist… but geet couldn't match his steps….but maan not leaving so easily…..at end when he lifted her on top she felt she is in air….his face buried in her tummy….a current passed at a movement…..his lips directly pressed on her belly button…..she tightened her grip on his shoulder….slowly he is taken her down….while dropping down her whole body blushed to his body ….his lips blushed first her on tummy …next her soft mounts…..when she stood on her own feet he came close cupping her face…once pulled her close….her hairs covered his whole face ….in that small movement his lips captured her lips and left her couple of seconds .the pain rushed on her veins…her eyes filled with tears…..mentally and physically she sinking ….

But maan is in full zoom…..he is didn't understand his geet pain…he is happy that she is with him….when again he try to pull her close…geet pushed him and move to rest room….no onw much notised what happened between maan and geet…only they thought its part of dance..

She closed the rest room and sat on floor holding her legs…the pain is killing her inside….for her faith whom to blame…….she try to control her self biting her lips…

With big bang door opened her backside….maan standing covering entire door……maan entered inside closing the door….

There is no more strength with her to fight with him….

"geet…"he call her smoothly….

But geet patience crossed her limits…."why you were again here…."

Maan shocked looking her state….her tears….her dark red color face….her painful expression made him concern….

"geet are you ok….tum theek hena…."he try to hold her in his arms…sitting next to her on ground….geet buried her face in his chest…her uncontrollable tears were not even stopping……slowly he adjusted her in his arms….slowly he caressed her back….her whole body felt like burning. Its sured him that its crossed her normal temperature.

Pre cap:

"what you want….kya chathi app….yahi na…mere sharer…tum mere piche sirf our sirf sharirik suck keliye hana…theeke….have my body you want to satisfy from my body na….maan iam ready…."she removed her sari pallu from her shoulder with frustration throwing all her anger… next second her cheek swollen with tight slap…..maan gritting his teeth and shivering with anger….

Hi buddies,

How are you all…thank you very much for your response to this FF. pls friends pls give long comments on this FF. I am waiting for your response. Pls don't hesitate to comment and press like button. About me I am little bit ok

Buddies , you all knows that I am not change main story line at any cost but still your long comments can be motivate me to give beautiful twists in my ffs. Pls comment at least 3 to 4 lines.

Again I added first dance of maneet in original in this FF also. you know friends even today i couldn't forget that passionate dance. I am become crazy about this from the day one. I hope my buddies with me.

Ok buddies pls don't forget to press like button and leave long comment .

Byee

Take care

Varsha…

sanu3108 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ...
I hope Maaneet come together soon ...
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
was waiting your update dear
at-last we got it after long wait
fab update update dear
loved it
loved the intense moments of geet and maan dance
you rocked👏
please update soon
pleae...

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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE GEET IGNORING MANEET DANCE hope maneet will soon be together



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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum dear
waiitng for the precap eagerly dear
pls update soon dear
cant wait more at all
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
want to see Maaneet together
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dr,
loved it,
wana more to read,
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 4 maaneet 2gether update plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow simply awesooome...
loved d upd.
superb...
tfd pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely painful update..te way my maan confess his feelings was lovely.. geet is accepted my maan but wat is stopping her to go to my maan..te way my maan holds his geet shows tat his geet, his possession..wat happen to geet.. oh god why my maaneet is suffering like tis?.. precap was lovely me waiting..i love te update so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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