MG:INTEHAA#6/THREaD 7 OPENED - Page 33

Originally posted by: neha512

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Part 67

Goon felt as he was slapped tightly in front of all and ordered his man to open her ropes… as she was free he pushed her on the floor and covered his body on her… he held her hand tightly while his two men held her legs to keep her in place… maan kept shouting in back to leave her but they didn't…

Geet was struggling to free herself but they were holding her tightly… her legs were trying to push off the goons but she was falling weak in front of them… in back maan was shouting helplessly to free her but his words fell in dead ears… he struggled to break the ropes but the rope was the most thick one could get… comeon they were terrorist and they had ensured to keep maan trapped...

Due to his continuous struggle his hands had a deep cut and blood came out… but he didn't stopped for a second inn order to free himself … here in front of him his jaan laid below the leader trying to free herself… the goon saw her continuously struggling hit on her cheek making her lips to bleed… it was surely the first time in years someone hit her… tears formed in her eyes due to the sting and more than that the humiliation she is gonna face now… she just prayed god to give her death before she is touched by some other man…

Goon saw her been going to faint and eyed his two other man to hold her hands to keep her in place while he decided to get his pleasure… he took out the knife from his shoes and moved it to her top… he gingerly moved the knife in her top to tear it while maan just closed his eyes in defeat…

God how will i face her again… why are you making her pass through this… it was his duty to take care of her and he failed… today he failed the biggest struggle in his life… he thought as he felt tears flowing from his eyes by just imagining what geet has to go through…

Geet immediately opened her eyes as she saw the sharp metal touching her body and got shocked as she saw him ripping her top off from the waist moving over her midriff… she again tried to push him as tears were flowing from her eyes knowing what is coming…

That's when her eyes fell on a sharp blade kept near her… she knew she has no other option and thus closed her eyes tightly stopping all her protests… seeing her not protesting the one holding her hand thought she had fainted and thus loose of his hold on her hold…

You bas***d just leave her or i will kill you… please i beg of you… you came here for me na then why are you all doing that to her… pleaded maan to all… he had never felt so helpless in his life… he had never cried this much in his life… please he begged them but none paid heed to his words…

As soon as she felt their hold being loose on her she with all her strength remaining in her body , she pushed them off her… they stumbled back with the sudden move of hers and before they could hold her she took the blade and cut it through her wrist in a deep cut slitting off her veins…

All got shocked with the sudden move of hers while maan just felt he died the very moment… his face turned pale as he saw the blood oozing out of her wrists… tears clouded his eyes while he felt his body limp… he felt the very reasin for his living died the very moment…

Geet smiled as she felt the liquid flowing out of her hand in fast speed… she could feel blankness covering her eyes as she felt dizzy and just gave the goons a winning smirk and at last saw the person whom she valued the most… she knew he is in pain but she felt light and peace… at last she said him…maan i love you and i wont let anyone else touch me other than you…

Her voice was faint and broken and the next second she lost in oblivion… but not a single word came out from his mouth as he lost the sense of the surrounding… nothing mattered now… he just let go his struggle… he not care about anything when the on for whom he cared the most left her…

He looked at the goon with red eyes causing all of them shudder for once… he spoke with gritted voice… if you all want to live longer then kill me now or i promise i wont live you if you left me alive… his threat gave them a chill down their smile… they knew its nothing that serious as he is under their custody still the power his voice held was something they could neglect…

The leader pointed the gun on him… but maan didn't felt any fear as either he needs to save his geet or he doesn't have to live… the leader felt his hands shivering seeing the fire in his eyes… he moved the trigger to shoot but suddenly they heard a loud shooting sound…

5 commandos with black bullet proof jackets and high tech guns and covered face covered them from all sides… it was such a sudden act that none could react to it and the whole area was covered with them while they tried to take all the goons in their hold… the leader commando moved to catch the leader goon but before he can hold her the goon tried to fire on her…

He dodged the bullet in a swift move and held his hand twisting it behind his back with such a force that his arm broke down and bullet fell off his hand… another commando moved to maan and freed him and then they both ran to geet lying in the pool of blood…

Maan immediately lifted her and they move out from the door in the jungle to some army camp where all doctors were present to treat her… they immediately took her hold and examined her cut which was quite deep leaving very few chances of her survival…

Maan felt the land slipped off his feet and same was the case with the commando…

Here inside the building the leader of the commandos were throwing punches in the stomach of the goon making him spit blood… his whole body was broken in god knows how many small broken bones… his face was covered with blood as well as rest of his body too…

After the commandos got hold of every goon they moved back to their camp which was few meters away… they end all goons to a special cell made for them so that none could run of their hold…

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Maan fell on his knees as he felt god in each of his breath for the safety of his jaan… he was lost and tired… his body too was covered with blood as he got severe wounds too but none were that deep…

Soon he felt a hand on his shoulder… he looked up to see the hand of the officer who accompanied him here… maan geet is alright… doctors here have handled many cases like that here and it was an easy job for them though geet was serious she responded to us fast and now is unconscious… you can meet her after an hour…

Maan felt he got his life back and thanked heaven for that… he lifted himself up with all the force he could manage… he joined his hands in front of him tears still in his eyes… thanks officer you don't even know what you did for me… you gave me my geet back officer… I wont be able to forget your help ever and am indebted to you for rest of my lives…

The officer soon took him in a warm brotherly hug patting him tightly… maan geet is my sister too… how can I let anything happen to her brother… said officer in his warm soothing voice… maan lifted his head hearing about geet and looked at him with questioning eyes….

The officer removed his mask and maan got the shock of him life… raj he whispered as he saw raj standing in front of him in officer suit… yes maan mai raj or shall I say CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAVAT… he said with a proudness while maan's eyes turned wide hearing him…

Maan lost his ability to spoke seeing him smirking… kya hua Mr. khurana got the shock of life… he said with playfulness in his smile… raj you are an army officer he said more than asked…

Raj gave him a smile and said yes am an army officer or say a black commando… but geet never told me that… he said still shocked… because you never asked her about me and being the jhalli she is she never considered it important… he replied with a soft smile…

Maan was still in shock when the head leader came and stood in front of him… he removed his mask and soon he saw long hairs cascading out from it… he got stunned when he saw her standing there in a leader dress and he was just able to whisper… SHYNA…

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