virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww thats was super cute and adorable
lovely update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have read this 10 times and i still can't stop laughing update your killing me. heading change karo abhi bhi part 6 likha hoa hai.
Edited by sapphhire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphhire

i have read this 10 times and i still can't stop laughing update your killing me. heading change karo abhi bhi part 6 likha hoa hai.


i also wonder how i came up with such a dhamaka... hehe... 😆 n heading is changed... part 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...
cont soon n plz do pm me wen ya update!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

lovely update...

cont soon n plz do pm me wen ya update!!!😊


THANX AND WILL SURELY PM U NEXT TIME...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
SORRY GUYS FOR UPDATING THIS STORY AFTER SUCHA LONG TIME BUT I KNOW YOU ALL WILL LOVE IT... 😊

PART 8

after some time in virman's room...
manvi : virat...
virat : hmmm...
manvi : mujhe na bahut bura feel ho raha hai...
virat : hmm...
manvi : virat aur tumhe...???
virat : hmm...
manvi goes near him and once again says " virat..."
virat : hmm...
manvi : ye green colour mujhpe bahut suit kar raha hai na...?? (although she was wearing a red anarkali suit)
virat : hmm...
manvi had enough of him not listening to what she was saying so she smashed his head with a cushion...
virat : kya hai yr manvi...???
manvi : main yahan tumse baat kar rahi hoon aur tum phone pe game khel rahe ho... i will kill u mr. ignorant vadera... 😡
virat : did u just called me that mrs. ignorant vadera...???
manvi : dont call me that virat... i am vry angry right now so dnt mess with me...
virat : haan... waise bhi tumhari muscles dekh ke na mera tel nikal jaata hai...
manvi : main na rishikesh jaa rahi hoon... mujhe nai rehna tumhare saath...
virat : hehe... jab tak main apni compensation poori pay nai kar deta u just cannot go anywhere... u see 29 nights more to go... (smirking)
manvi was now blushing thinking of the first installment of the compensation that she got last night...
virat took it as an opportunity and pulled her towards him and traced her face with his fingers...
but as soon as manvi came back into her senses she pushed him back and went to the closet...
virat : manvi...
manvi : hmm...
virat : tum kya kar rahi ho...??
manvi : hmm...
virat : kya ye hmm hmm lagake rakha hai...??? talk to me properly...
manvi : hoti hai na irritation...!!! ab samajh aaya...???
virat : haan aa gya... wo bhi bahut acche se...
manvi opened the closet and said " very good virat ji..."
virat couldnt take it and went close to her and pinned her to the door of the closet...
virat : ye kya kar rahi ho...???
manvi : packing kar rahi hoon...
virat : packing...???
manvi : haan mujhe rishikesh jaana hai... sabki bahut yaad aa rahi hai..
virat : no ways... tum kahin nai jaa rahi hoo...
manvi : virat...
virat : no means no... abhi toh humne ek nayi shuruwat ki hai aur tum ho ki...
manvi : haaww mera baby sadd gaya... hehe...
virat : pagal ho kya jo ainwai hassi ja rahi ho...???
manvi : main tumhara desperation level dekh rai thi... i am not going anywhere..okk
virat : oh hello... desperation nahi hai... pyaar hai mera aur woh bhi masoom sa...
manvi : yeah... i know kitna masoom hai...
virat : accha toh tum pehle kya keh rahi thi...???
manvi : kab...??
virat : jab main phone pe game khel raha tha, tab...
manvi : ohh woh... i was saying that i was really feeling bad for all...
virat : bad for all... but why..???
manvi : bcos they thought that i am expecting and they all were looking very happy thinking of it...
virat : toh unko chutku chahie tha na... thats no big deal sweetheart...
manvi : virat thats not funny... 😡
virat : thats what i am saying mannu...!!!
manvi : kya bake jaa rahe ho...???
virat : yahi k hum chutku ko plan kar lete hai... jitni jaldi planning hogi, utni hi jaldi sab dobara khush ho jaege... 😛
manvi : hmm... (busy thinking about the sad faces of maa, di and especially dadaji)
virat picks her up and goes to the bed...
manvi : ab ye kya kar rahe ho...???
virat : chutku ki planning...!!! sabko khush nahi karna kya...?? saying this throws her on the bed and goes on top of her...
manvi : virat utho yaar...
just then piyali, virika's 3 years daughter was about to enter their room saying " manvi machi..."
manvi : virat.. piyali..
virat immediately gets up and sits in the bed
virat : oye meri beti...
piyali : manvi... meli doll toot gayi... 😭
manvi : alley mela baby... bolo na apne useless chachu ko to bring a new one...
piyali : vilat chachu... tootu ho gai...
virat ; arrey meri princess when virat is here not to fear... chalo nayi doll lene chale...
piyali : pink colour wali... 😊
virat : haan haan... pink bhi lenge, blue bhi aur green bhi...
piyali : ini saari dolls...??? 😃
virat : hmm... abhi dolls lenge aur thode time k baad balls aur guns lenge... 😉(winks at manvi)
manvi : virat... besharam kahin ke tum bache ke saamne bhi shuru ho jate ho... ☺️
virat : piyali meri jaana... aapko house mein small baby chahie...??
piyali : small baby...??? 😕
virat : haan... small baby.. wo jo tv pe dekha tha...
piyali : tv wala baby... haan.. haan..
virat : toh fir iss manvi se maango na...
piyali : manvi... small baby...
virat : chachi bolo... manvi chachi (and kissed her cheek)
piyali : manvi chachi... tv wala small baby do...
manvi : baby... chachu ka dimag kharab ho gya hai... dekho kahin hai small baby... nai hai na...
piyali : nahi hai baby... 😔
manvi : hmm... nahi hai
virat : toh le ayege...
piyali : chachu mall mein milega small baby...???
virat : no sweetheart... mall mein nahi milta small baby...
piyali : fir hum small baby kahan se laee..??
virat : aahh... hmm...
manvi : piya baby... pehle mall se doll le aao warna shop band ho jaegi... fir hum kya kalenge mela baby...
piyali : uffo... chalo na fir mall chalte hai...
virat : chalo fir... main bhabhi ki bta deta hoon k
piyali : alley vilat... muma ko nai btana... sulprize hai...!!
virat : ohh... that means secret hai..
manvi : samajh mein aaya virat chachu...??? dekha meri neice kitni smart hai...!!!
virat : haha.. chalo jaldi ready ho jao... we are waiting outside...
manvi : tu chal main aai... 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
yay!! First to comment!!😃
Wow that was really sweet!!
Especially the conversation of virman with piyali!!!
Loved it to the core!!!
Continue soon
And thnx for the pm
Edited by gsrocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cuty cuty virman with Piyali...Thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilasha143

Cuty cuty virman with Piyali...Thank u for the pm.


UR WELCOME ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gsrocks

yay!! First to comment!!😃
Wow that was really sweet!!
Especially the conversation of virman with piyali!!!
Loved it to the core!!!
Continue soon
And thnx for the pm


THANK YOU SOO MUCH... 😊 😊

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