||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg virat's love saved her from death. Hope now that prem and naina will understand the depth of their love. Really superd part. Continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Uff ye scared me wen da doc said she is no more... It was quite dramatic... Virat's luv bought her back... Manvi ne sab suna i hope... Now prem shud also back off... Yay! I see virman luv winning here... Nice nice... Thanx for pm 😃 cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx 4 d pm dear
Amazing update
Poor prem and virat
But how it would be happened
Update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god she is safe now...
And please yaar make her realize his love for her..
Nice update.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow that was awesome...
Waiting for the next part eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear ,loved it .continue soon .thanks for the pm dear !
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww loved virats emotional speech...nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww i realy loved it thks 4 the Pm
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HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...

CHAP 16

virat was going out of the OT when he turned around to have a last look at the girl he loves like hell... in his mind there was only one thing going on and that was even though he had saved manvi, even though he had brought her back to life but still she will not forgive him for whatever he did or probably will never ever see his face again and hate him.. this mere thought of manvi hating him brought tears in his eyes which were accompanied by the pain of losing love... he know had no reason for living and felt like killing himself... he was thanking god for saving his manvi as he would have never been able to live even a second if anything happened to her...

virat came out and saw prem who was standing with preet with tears in his eyes and talking about something...
prem : mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai...??? aaj jab laga saari khushiyan mil jaegi toh ek hawa jhoka aaya aur sab bikhar gya yr...
preet : sambhal apne aap ko bhai... ab toh bhabhi bhi theek hai yaar...
prem : preet... aaj hi.. aaj pehli baar manvi ne mujhse woh kaha tha jo main sunna chahta tha yaar... usne phone pe kaha tha that she loves me... i wanted to make this day very special for both of us but dekh kya ho gya...
preet : par ye accident hua kaisa...????
prem : manvi ne aaj mujhe milne bulaya tha... wo college hi jaa rahi thi jab uski car ka accident ho gya yaar... maine jab college pahunch kar usko call kia tab kisi ne phone uthaya aur btaya k manvi ka accident... woh toh bhala ho uska jisne manvi ko hospital mein admit karwaya... main yahan aaya toh dekha k o bahut serious thi yaar... phir maine sabko inform kar dia aur...
preet : bas yaar... bas... ab kuch galat nahi hoga...
virat was listening to their conversation and was feeling guilty for whatever has happened... he felt that only because of his stupid plan manvi was fighting for her life and so were the others who were helpless, unable to do anything for manvi...

just then the doctor came out of the OT
dr. : congratulations... the patient is out of danger and has regained consciousness but she is again and again calling one name... and we have shifted her to her room as well...
prem was very happy listening to what the doctor said and took a step ahead when the doctor again continued...
dr. : who is virat...??? she is calling him...
virat : main...
dr. : oh so you are virat... your lady love wants to meet you...
prem : dr. can i go and see manvi plss...???
dr. : m sorry... but only one person at a time and now i think its virat who should go first as the patient wants to meet him...
virat was not in the state of facing manvi but somewhere in his heart he was happy that manvi wants to meet him first... so he went into manvi's room...
virat entered her room and stood there frozen thinking of how manvi will react on seeing him...



manvi : partner...
virat : manvi... main...
manvi : itni door kyun khade ho chep...??? mere paas aao na...
virat went to her bed and looked at her
manvi signalled him to sit on the bed and he did the same...
manvi : partner... can u give me a hug, pls...???
virat didnt even think for a second and hugged her as if there was no tomorrow...



manvi started weeping while hugging him and tightly onto his shirt...
manvi : thank god tum aa gaye... batameez mujhe chod kar london chale gaye... i will kill u bandar... and i am sorry... mujhe tumhe naraaz nahi karna chahiye tha... aur agar tum chahte ho na toh main bhi london chalungi tumhare saath... virat i really missed... i cant live without you...

virat was shocked listening to manvi... he was confused why was manvi talking as if nothing had happened in the last few months...
virat : manvi main...
manvi : aaj ded futiya nahi kahoge... oh god virat i missed you like hell... promise me one thing... promise me...
virat : what...???
manvi : promise that now you will not leave me alone... tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaoge... promise me mere sirphire chep...
virat was now crying and while carressing her hair said " i promise ded futiya... i promise...!!"
virat : ab tum rest karo aur...
manvi : kya hua mujhe...??? kuch nai na... toh rest kyun karun aur main ye hospital mein kyun hoon...???
virat : manvi... tumhe kuch yaad nahi hai kya...???
manvi : kya yaad nahi hai...??? sab toh yaad hai... tum , main, di, viren bhaiya, vanshika maa, varun papa, inder chachu, kadambari chachi, shlok, buaji, dadaji, maa papa, beeji, badi b, dabbu, mere chachu chachi... dekho mujhe toh sab yaad hai... tum bhi na partner...
virat ; aur prem...???
manvi : prem... kaun prem...??? maine pyar kia wala... usse kaise bhool sakti hoon... salman khan toh mera favourite hai... tum bhool gaye virat tum kitna jalte the aur gussa hote the whenever i used to call salman khan hot...
virat : mainvi main abhi aata hoon...
manvi : tum fir jealous ho gae na...
virat came out with a worried expression on his face...
virat : dr.. dr... nurse pls call the dr. immediately...
nurse : i will just go and call him...
dr comes and aks if there is any problem..
virat : dr. wo manvi ko pta nahi kya ho gya hai... wo pta nai kaisi baatein kar rahi hai... jaise usse kuch yaad hi naa ho...
dr. goes in and comes out after examining manvi...
dr. : come with me in my cabin...
rikesh : dr. what is wrong with her...?? i am her father...
dr. : mr ad mr. chaudhary u two also pls come along... i want to talk to u all...
prem : dr... pls tell me what has happened to my manvi... i am her fiance, i too have that right...

scene shifts...
in doctor's cabin...
four different people were standing there with one common reason and that was their love and concern for manvi
naina : dr... what has happened to my manvi...??? is she alright..??? dr. pls tell me... dr. plss (sobbing)
dr. : mrs chaudhary... i was afraid that i might happen and it had happened... manvi is suffering from partial memory loss...
rikesh : dr.. please say it clearly...??? what are you trying to say...??
dr. : mr chaidhary... apki beti ke sar pe chot lagne ki wajah se uski yaadhash chali gayi hai... wo sab kuch nai bhooli hai par ek hissa bhuli hai... usse sab yaad hai but a part of her memory is washed away...
virat : matlab ke use ek specific time period yaad nahi hai... uski yaadon ka ek important hissa kahin chup gya hai...
dr. : exactly mr virat... but thank god wo sab nahi bhuli kyunki iss tarah ke cases mein patient aksar apni pehchaan bhi bhul baithta hai...
prem : dr... meri manvi theek toh ho jaegi na...???
dr. : yes but i dnt know when ...???
prem : what do u mean by when doctor...???
dr. : i mean it can take some hours, some days or even months... or in some cases whole of the life...
prem : no... this cannot happen...??? main aisa nai hone dunga... main manvi ko sab yaad dilaunga...
dr. : plsss... mr & mrs. chaudhary... i request you not to try and make manvi remember anything that she has forgotten... agar humne usse kuch yaad dilane ki koshish ki toh uski jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai... i would advise k jo aisa chal raha hai pls usse waise hi chalne de...
saying this the doctors leaves his room and goes on his rounds...

now all the members went to see manvi...
naina : kaisa hai mera bacha...???
rikesh carresed manvi's forehead and kissed ker and said " kya hoga meri princess ko... she is alright..."
manvi : haan mom main theek hoon... and know i am very as well... because chep jo wapas aa gya hai...
jeevika : mannu...
manvi : arrey meri melo drama di... main theek hoon... aur viren bhaiya aur vanshika aunty kahan hai...???
viren : yahan hai hum... tumne toh humari jaan hi nikal di sa... i mean madam
manvi : le... main toh ek dum first class hoon... waise apka sirphira bhai kahan hai...??? kehke gya tha abhi aa raha hoon par pta nai mr. india jaise kahan gayab ho gaya hai... dekho na vanshika maa...???
vanshika : pehle tum btao... tumhe dard toh nahi ho raha..??
manvi : hmm... thoda sa sar mein dard hai... par theek ho jaega...
by this time virat was standing with his dad at the door...
manvi : varun papa... aap ni puchoge main kaisi hoon...???
varun : tumhe kya hoga...?? tum toh jhansi ki rani ho...???
manvi : pap aap hi mujhe samajhte hai bas... aur ye apka beta toh...???
varun : fir mere bete ke piche haan...??
manvi: haaww... bete k wapas aate hi uski side pe ho gaye aap toh... par koi nai main aur virat toh ek hi side pe hai...hai na mere nakli salmaan khan...??
virat : haan bandariyan... (looking at manvi with a pain in his heart)
manvi : partner...???
virat didnt react and was standing still as he was worried about manvi and her health...
manvi : parttnerrr...
virat : kya hai chila kyun rahi ho...???
manvi : tum mujhe ignore karoge toh main kya karungi...???
virat : main abhi aata hoon partner...
manvi : virat... mat jao na.. main tumhe bilkul tang nahi karungi... pakka vaada... mere paas baitho na... plss
virat was just looking at others for their consent... then he saw that naina signalled him to go ahead and he felt very happy.. virat went to manvi and sat on the stool...

manvi : idhar aao...
virat : hmmm...
manvi : mujhe na bahut bhookh lag rahi hai...
virat : main abhi dr. se ...
manvi : mujhe pizza khana hai... humara favourite wala... onion, capsicum, tomato, baby corn, mushroom and olives with extra cheese...
virat : shut up ded futiya... u cannot have that junk food right now... abhi u should eat something light and healthy...
naina : virat is right mannu... uski baat maan lo sweetie...??
manvi : okk... le aao fir wo bimaaro wala khana par koi mujhe btaega k main hospital mein kya kar rahi hoon... aur mujhe ye chot kaise lagi...??? 😕
virat : ded futiya... kabhi toh chup raha karo... main abhi kuch lekar aata hoon...
manvi : on one condition only... and that is u will have to share my ganda bimaaro khaana... okk..?? 😛
virat : anything for you partner... 😃
virat was going out when he saw that prem was standing their with longiness for manvi in his eyes...
manvi : viren bhaiya... woh kaun hai...?? pehle toh kabhi nai dekha...??? 😲
viren : woh... woh...
virat : woh mera dost hai bandariyan... prem..
manvi : partner... ruko... ruko... kya ye wohi prem hai...???
virat : kya...???
manvi : wohi jiske baare mein tum mujhe abhi puch rahe the...???
virat : haan... ye wo hi prem hai manvi...
manvi : idiot... main kaise jaanugi tumhare dost ke baare mein... chep tum na dhakhan ho...
virat : haan... main dhakhan hi toh hoon... saying this he goes out of manvi's room...




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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb naina
What a twist
Just superb only u can think this way
Poor prem i feel really bad for him
Thanx 4 d pm dear
Upate Soon ❤️

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