||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!!
Awesome update, but shocking precap!!
Can't w8 4 the next part!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt... bt precap is scary, wat happened 2 maanvi?
contd. soon
thnx 4 d pm
Edited by marley - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update, precap was shocking wanna know Wat hppnd to manvi
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAP 15

later that evening...
virat was still sitting at the floor with his head burried in his hands and tears continuously flowing from his eyes...
sonia came running into his room...
sonia : virat... virat woh.. woh manvi...
virat : manvi kya... wo theek hai na...???
sonia : virat wo manvi na... manvi hospital mein hai... she is very serious...
virat : kehdo ye jhooth hai sonia...
sonia nodds her head saying a no as she is in tears unable to say anything...

virat lost all his sense and shaked sonia very hard " kahan hai meri manvi... kaunse hospital mein hai ...???"
sonia : life care hospital...
virat didnt even waste a single second and rushed towards the hospital...
as he reached the hospital, he saw that all the family members (including his maa and viren) were present outside the operation threatre... then his eyes were fixed on the people who were the last thing he wanted to see in the world... they were prem, his family and preet...
virat hurriedly went towards vanshika and with pleading eyes looked at her...
virat : manvi kahan hai maa...??? aapko pta tha na...???
vanshika : virat manvi ka accident... andar operation... and she bursted out crying... 😭
virat : bhai plss mujhe btao ka ye kaise hua...?? manvi ka accident... bhai mujhe kuch samajh nai aa raha...
naina : plss apne drama kahin aur jaa kar karo... yahan meri beti ki jaan khatre mein hai virat...
virat : aunty main drama...?? manvi se mera bhi ek rishta hai.. jitna aapko dard ho rha hai utna hi mujhe bhi ho raha hai...
viren : pls virat... chup ho jaa.. ye waqt ni h iss sabka...

whereas prem was standing numbly near the door of the OT with his fixed on the red bulb... it seemed af if he had lost his everything... it felt as if he was struggling for life rather than manvi...
he came to his senses when the bulb was switched off...
prem : dr... manvi... manvi kaisi hai...???
dr. : we tried our level best but i am afraid...
prem : afraid about what dr...??
dr. : i am sorry... she is no more...
prem : aisa nai ho sakta... dr aisa nahi ho sakta...
naina was speechless and stood like a corpse...
rikesh was trying to control himself for the sake of his family...
jeevika was broken... it felt as if she had lost her baby... her manvi...
viren was trying to fight back the tears in his eyes as he has to tahe care of vanshika and virat... he lookes around to find virat but he was not there...
viren : virat... maa virat kahan gaya...???
vanshika : virattt... manvi nai jaa sakti viren...
everybody present there was so drowned in their remorse that nobody noticed that virat had entered the OT as soon as the doctor came out...
just then a nurse came out of the ot...
nurse : sir wo ek admi andar ghus gya hai... he is not ready to come out...
dr. : give them some time sister...
hearing this all the others went inside... they saw virat standing near manvi's bed and holding her hand..
in the OT


virat : manvi... manvi utho... get up partner... manvi plss uth jaoo... i am sorry... plss uth jao...
while all the others were crying unable to accept the bitter reality... jevika came and holded manvi's other hand...
jeevika : mannu... u cannot leave me... manvi utho...
virat : shh... jeevika manvi so rahi hai... tum ro mat... usse kuch nai hua hai... aap sab please chup ho jao... plsss... itna shor hoga toh manvi meri baat kaise sun paegi... shhh... manvi meri baat suno... manvi plss ankheIn kholo partner... inhe bta do that u are only sleeping... ye sab soch rahe k tumhe kuch ho gya hai... tumhe kuch kaise ho sakta hai jab meri saanse chal rahi hai toh... manvi plss ek aakhri baar apne chep ki baat maan lo... i promise fir main kabhi tum hurt nai karunga... tumhe bilkul tang nahi karunga... tumhe bandariyan bhi nahi bulaunga... par plss open your manvi... u have to fight... u have to god damnit... u have to... tum toh meri jhansi ki rani ho na... toh bas u have to fight and open your eyes...
manvi tum jaag kyun nai rahi ho... tum nai jaa sakti mujhe chodh kar... manvi i love you... i really love... tum meri ho manvi... plss come back partner... agar aaj tumhari dhadkan rukk gai na, toh main bhi maar jaunga... main tumhare bina ek pal bhi nai ji sakta manvi... main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon... sabse zyada... and he brokes down into tears...

suddenly the machine started beeping showing weak heartbeats...
dr : its a miracle... she is responding... sister gimme the oxygen mask...
nurse : plss aap log bahar wait kariye... sir aap bhi...
virat : main kahin jaunga apni manvi ko chod kar...
dr : the patient is now fine... she has survived... congrats...
virat : thank u dr...
dr : i would request you to wait outside as it will be beneficial for the patient...
virat ; sure doctor... thank you once again... u have saved my life...
dr : young man your love has saved her... despite the fact science doesnt believe in miracles like this but now i surely believe that love has more power than medicines or even science...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg loved it, virats love has saved her so romantic :P

but please i hope she calls virat when she is awake and not prem!!!
Edited by kajenvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
manvi died n became alive... so dramatical dear.. bt loved it hw his his love wok her... thnx fr ua pm n plz pm me wen u update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenvirman

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omg loved it, virats love has saved her so romantic :P

but please i hope she calls virat when she is awake and not prem!!!


so a treat for you is that manvi will call virat's name as soon as she will wake up... 😉
now u keep thinking why even though she has decide to marry prem...!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi ...i couldnt stop myself from praising ur writing talent...i seldom post on IF ...u know wht i regulary read all ur FFs and m a big fan of ur stories on virman...i loved all uur stories...ILU manvi,Pyaar tha...,woh pal ,pyaar dosti and the recent on which u compelted recently.My favourties are pyaar tha kuch aur ...and i love u manvi...coz i love to see possessive virat ...u have so nicely shown virats possessiveness and love for manvi

all ur stories are amamzing...i eagerly wait 4 ur updates...despite of being so busy cant stop myself from reading ur stories...

N this update i luvd it truly luvd it.. amazaing...d way u show virat and manvi love,the way u show virat's possessiveness...this just makes me fall for VIRMAN more and more Now a days i seldom watch the show but i regulary read ur updates I Just love all ur stories on virman...must say u r great in writing love stories on VIRMAN.
Edited by KAJENluvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lafiza

manvi died n became alive... so dramatical dear.. bt loved it hw his his love wok her... thnx fr ua pm n plz pm me wen u update..


thanks for liking it... n bina drama k maja nahi aata na u see... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
really good that she will say virat's name. .thnks 4 d pm. .update soon

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