||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147

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Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Superb update dear
Mind blowing confession
I think there should be lot of sequence of prem n manvi... I really felt bad for prem
Like update so much
Thanx 4 pm dear and plz update it soon

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shona v p

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

All of it was so real yaar... Virat's words were bitter... Manvi finally confessed bt again problem... Manvi's dialogues was superb... I expected virat also to tell her tat he too luvs her... Lets see how virat moves on wid his plan... Thanx for pm.. Cont soon:)

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marley

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

omg!! she confessed?? ...superb updt.

thnx 4 d pm...

Edited by marley - 13 years ago

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

OMG fab updt...virat spoil everything...pl updt next part soon...pls pls pls n this time write a long part

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love_zain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

fab update, plz do carry on soon

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naina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
AHw, I love you wrote this!
It is so real, I agree, this is so cheap
of Virat to do... WHat did he expect?
He fooling around with some random
girl will make Maanvi confess and she
will hug him and not think that he is
fooling around with her after one left and
will do the same after she leaves, though
I know the truth, Virat loves Maanvi, this
was the wrong way and I love you for not
making everything alright and let Maanvi
run to Virat and hug him without thinking...
I love how the story goes, awesome!

THANK YOU SO MUCH...!!! I REALLY WANTED IT TO BE SOMETHING REAL RATHER THAN BEING SOMETHING FILMY... IT REALLY FEELS GREAT WHEN PEOPLE APPRECIATE UR EFFORTS....

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Lovely confession yaar, made me cry ..
Very touching, now what will virat do ?
Continue soon yaar and thanks for the PM

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IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Wonderful confrontation but I hope everything turns out alright...

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naina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

PART 14

manvi was crying very badly and was running towards her house when she saw vanshika standing in front of her.. she couldnt control herself and she went and hugged vanshika maa... manvi was continuously crying and trying to say something but her throat was choked... vanshika soothed her and took her to her room...

vanshika : manvi... bas mera bacha... shant ho ja... chup ho jaa

manvi : maa.. maa...

vanshika : pehle chup... ek dum chup... kya hua virat ne kuch kaha kya...??

manvi : maa... vi..vi..

vanshika : virat abhi apne hosh mein nahi beta... kal raat se woh ajeeb behave kar raha h...

manvi : maa woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta... woh..

vanshika : main jaanti hoon usse manvi... beta main jaanti hoon ke agar woh puri duniya mein kisise khud bhi jyada pyaar karta hai toh woh tum ho...

manvi : aisa nahi h... sonia se

vanshika : apne dil se pucho manvi... beta apne dil ki suno... aur kisiki nahi...

manvi : maa maine faisla kar liya hai...

vanshika : main hamesha apni beti k saath hoon...

manvi : main prem se hi shaadi karungi... virat mere liye nahi hai maa... par aap toh virat k hi saath...

vanshika : mere liye tum charo bache ek barabar ho manvi... apne kisi bache ko bhi dard mein nahi dekh sakti beta... maa hoon na is liye... bas ab apni aane waali zingadi k baare mein socho prem k saath... woh bahut acha ladka hai...

manvi : sachi...

vanshika : muchi... chalo ab apni new life ka welcome karo aur wo bhi ek smile k saath...

manvi hugs her and leaves for her house with her broken heart which could never ever be mended...

vanshika was sitting numb remembering her talk with virat last night...

-------flashback------

vanshika : virat...

virat : maa... aao na..

vanshika : tu theek hai na...???

virat : haan...

vanshika : apna dard apni maa se bhi chupaega ab...

virat : kaisa dard maa...???

vanshika : virat manvi ki sagai ho gai... aur tu mujhse puch raha hai kaisa dard...??? mujhe lga k tu manvi se pyaar karta hai...

virat : main manvi se pyaar karta hoon maa... i love manvi...

vanshika : tu kehna kya chahta hai k tu usse pyaar karta hai par tujhe koi farak nai padhta agar wo kisi aur ki ho jaae toh...

virat : sagai hone ka matlab ye nahi hota k shaadi bhi hogi...

vanshika : virattt... shut up...!!

virat : maa manvi aur prem ki shaadi nai hogi... i promise... manvi ki shaadi mujhse hogi... aapke bete se hogi...

vanshika : virat ye pagalpan hai...

virat : pagalpan hai toh pagalpan hi sahi...

vanshika : virat suno beta...

virat : goodnight maa...

vanshika : virat...

virat : gdnyt...

------------ end of flashbck------------

scene shifts

in virat's room...

virat was broken thinking about what just happened... yes he heard what he wanted to hear.. manvi loves him but today the tables are turned...

virat sobbing and saying : manvi... manvi main bhi ... i love you manvi... but i know now u will only hate him... tum mere paas kabhi nai aaogi... tum meri jagah prem ko de do gi.. par manvi main toh ye sab humare liye hi kar raha tha na... taaki tumhe realise ho that you also love him... main toh bas ye chahta tha k tum meri ho jao... but i know i have hurted you and have lost you forever... main itna selfish nai hoon manvi jitna tum sochti ho... main tumse pyaar karta hoon... toh kya hua agar main tumhe puri duniya se protect karna chahta hoon.. toh kya hua k main tumhe kisi ke saath share nai karna chahta... toh kya hua k main tumhare saath har pal rehna chahta hoon... main tumhe cheenna nai chahta partner, main tumhe paana chahta hoon... par ab i promise main tumhe hurt nai karunga... agar tum prem k saath shaadi karna chahti ho toh main kuch nai karunga... ab main tumhari khushi mein hi apni khushi dhoond lunga manvi... kyunki pyaar sirf paana nai hota... pyaar toh kuch dena ka naam hai... but i love you and i will always you till my last breath...

viren was listening to virat and now he was proud of his brother...

viren : virat...

virat : bhai... unable to control his emotions he hugged viren...

viren : virat... calm down pls...

virat : woh mujhse pyaar karti thi bhai... par maine usse kho diya... manvi mujhe chod ke chali gai bhai hamesha hamesha k liye... wo kabhi mera chehra nahi dekhna chahti... usne kaha k ... bhai manvi ne kaha ke...

viren : manvi yahan aai thi..??? kya kaha usne...??

virat : ussne kaha k wo mere liye sirf ek khilona hai, mere bachpan ka khilona jise aaj koi aur mujhse cheen raha hai aur main ye bardhast nai kar paa raha hoon... bhai aisa nai hai... manvi toh mera pyaar hai...

viren : virat... dekh tujhe thande dimag se kaam lena hoga is situation mein...

virat : sab khatam ho gaya hai bhai... ab manvi aur virat kabhi ek nahi honge... kabhi nahi...

viren : virat main toh bas yahi kahunga k kismat se bda koi nahi hota... agar manvi teri hai toh wo tujhe zaroor milegi...

virat : mujhe akela chod do bhai... plss

viren : hmmm... i understand..

scene shifts...

manvi exits vadera mansion still in tears... she decided to call prem and tell him all the truth...

manvi : prem...

prem : manvi... tum ro rahi ho kya...??? tum theek toh ho naa...?? bolo na, mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai...

manvi : p..prem.. i want to meet you... plss aa jao...

prem : main aa raha hoon manvi... kahan ho tum...???

manvi : main college mein tumhari wait karungi... jaldi aa jao prem plsss