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Hmm finally meri nazar ispe padi!!! Hope ur waiting for it!!!hmm yaad haina ki ye kounsi story hai??? Nahi toh..last chapter padlo :P darne ki koi zaroorat nahi mere paas aise ideas hamesha rahenge hmm waise meri updates bohut slow honge. Plzz adjust. Waise mujhe iski ye nahi after 3 parts wali scene likhne ka man kar raha hai par what to do ji skip kar nahi sakti ..agar kiya toh kuch log hai jo meri jaan lene keliye tayyar hai.so here goes the update a filler types aage ka story is intresting I promise. Hope u like this*fingers crossed*

"rey!!! "he heard a angelic voice as he opened his eyes her face shined more than the sunhe smiled wideshe waved infront of his eyes

"rey utho!!!" she said again

He pulled her by arm and she fell beside him

"good morning!!!" he said lovingly.and was abt to caress her face when she slapped him a bit hard

"ouch"he caressed his cheek and looked up and flinched back

"shar!!!"rey made a "O"shaped mouth

"saale mai tujhe kriya ki msg dene aaya toh kriya samajhke mujhse romance kar raha hai??"Sharon snappedand was getting up when rey pulled her back

"waisemaine tujhe pehle kyun nahi dekha??? U know ur too beautiful. Kaash tumse meri shaadi hoti"rey said dreamily

"nautanki band kar kameeneab utho kriya ki msg nahi chahiye?? Waise agar tu sach mei mujhse shaadi karna chahta hai toh bolde mai shaadi rokh deta hun bas kriya se bol doongi"she was cut

"NAHI!!!!!"rey said scared

"arey tumhi toh keh rahe thekoi baat nahiuse bol deti hun ki tujhe wo pasand nahi hai"Sharon said moving towards the window..

"nahi nahi who toh mujhe bohut pasand hai"rey said lyk a kid

"haha.rey tub hi na"Sharon laughed seeing his pout

"waise kya bola usne??"rey asked slowly trying hard to stop his blush

"bolun??"Sharon raised her eyebrow

"jaldi bolo na shar!!"rey pleaded sitting straight on the bed

"pehle fresh hoke aajaofast only 10 minsuske baad mei chalijaungi"Sharon said

"argghhh!!!! I hate u!!!"rey said rushing into the washroom

"I hate u too.par jaldi aa only 10 mins ek sec late ..mai chalijaungi"Sharon said sitting on the bed

"I will kill u."rey shouted backas Sharon chuckled..

"ab bolo bhi"rey said coming out of his washroom

"oh Mr.sexy mai teri deewaniyon se nahi hun pehle shirt toh pehanle"Sharon said making a face

"chal ab bol bhi de"rey flopped beside her wearing a tee

"aankhein band"Sharon said

"arey."he was cut. "plzz plzz plzz"Sharon pleaded and rey closed his eyes irritated

"ab kholo"Sharon said .as rey opened his eyes Sharon opened a box

"gajar ka halwa???"rey asked excited as its his fav sweet..

"haakal baaton baaton mei usne bola ki sab kehte hai ki wo gajar ki halwa bohut acha banati hai aur maine bola ki rey ka toh fav hai.bas subah 6 baje ko uthake bolti hai ye rey ko dedona aur unse mat kaho ki maine bheja par mujhe toh cupid ki role play karna acha lagta haiso ye le"Sharon chirped excited

"usne banaya???"rey asked impressed..

"nahi..tereliye banaya"Sharon said excited

Rey ate some and was really impressed as it was fab.

"bhai!!!!!!"swayam entered and stopped seeing rey lost and eating attentively and Sharon smiling lyk fool seeing him

"halwa??? Mujhe!!!!"swayam came forward when Sharon stood in front of him.

"wo rey keliye uski honewali pyaari wife ne bhiwaya tereliye nahi jaa ab"Sharon said hands on her hips

"bhai"swayam whinned but rey shrugged saying sorryand continued eating.

"huh!!!!"he hissed and left stamping his foot when sharey had a good laugh

"arey itni subah kiski call hai ??"Sharon asked as rey's mobile rang.

"chotu???"rey checked the mobile and said to Sharon confused..

"phone mei request karega shayad loudspeaker mei rakh"Sharon giggledrey smiled and kept it in loud speaker

"janab ko kya.."Sharon stopped as they heard voices...

"kya mai aa sakta hun??"they heard swayam saying

K: koun hai???

Sw: bhabhi mai swayam

K: arey swayam aaona

R: ye waha kya kar raha hai?? Rey asked gritting teeth as Sharon simply shrugged

K: kya baat hai itni subah ko mai yaad aayi???

Sw: bhabhi wo

K: arey bolo toh koi problem hai??

Sw: haan..

K: kya problem and fikar not! Mai hun na*she winked*

Sw: haha.bhabhi aaj mujhe aapki haath ki khana khane ki man kar raha hai

Swayam said cutely

R: kya??? Tera pet dukhe ga saale mujhe chod ke kha raha hai..wo bhi uski haath kikuch karo na yaar

He looked at Sharon who nodded not knowing what to do

K: acha.toh batayiye humare pyaare dewar ko kya khane ka man hai??

Sw: hmmm..chole bature!!!!

R: uaaannnwo meri fav hai

k: hmm.mai bana deti hun tab tak maine gajar ki halwa khaoge??

Sw: kyun nahi bohut ache se khaunga

R: kyun nahi khayega saale?? Mai waha jaa bhi nahi saktaargghh!!!! Sharon kuch karna

Sh: mai kya karoon mujhe thodi pata kit era bhai aisa hai.

Sw: *thinking* mujhe nahi doge??? Ab dekho mai kaise maze leta hun.

Kriya went away to cook when swayam quickly spoke

Sw: bhai abhi mai busy hun thodi der mei call karta hun k..bye

R: argghhh!!!!! Meri wife ki haaton ki khana mai nahi khasakta. Ye galat hai.uaaannn

Sh: rey bachon ki tarah rona band kar

R: tujhe kya pata meri kya haal hai can u imaginemeri wife khana banarahi hai wo bhi meri favpar mai kha nahi sakta.kitna wo kya kehte haibadbad

Sh: badnaseeb

R: haa wahihuh!!!!!!!!

After sometym rey's mobile rang again..

Sh: utha ..uthaab kya kar raha hoga?

R: pata nahi yaar/

As soon as rey lifted the call

Sw: umm..kitna acha hai..wah bhabhi aapki haaton mei toh jaadu hai...mujhe toh bohut jyada pasand aaye ek aur dijiyena

K: ek kya jitney chahiye utna khalo *smile*

Sw: aap bohut ache ho bhabhi

K: who toh mai hun hi

Kriyam giggled as rey fumed.

R: akela kha raha hai bhai ek baar yaad bhi nahi aaya :'( *pout*

K: waise.umm.swayamwo actually

Sw: kya hai bhabhi boliye na

K: wo rey ko pack karke.

Rey already went into dreamland imagining her blush and nodded as if saying yesbut she was cut

Sw: arey nahi nahi bhabhi bhai toh haath tak nahi lagateunhe bilkul pasand nahi

R: KYA???:O

Sh: mai abhi tikane lagati hun iski dimaag ki rukh

She got up and rushed to kriya's house

K: oh.theek hai.

After 5 mins

Sh: tu yaha kya kar raha hai swayam ghar mei bohut kaam hai na???

Sharon said sweetly.. swayam immediately ended the call

Sw: mai toh bhabhi ki haat khi khana kha raha hun,.

Sh: do din ke baad tumhari bhabhi hamesha keliye tumhare ghar mei aajayegi abhi se takleef kyun dete ho use..?? Sharon said gritting her teeth but giving a fake smile

K: arey koi baat nahi aaona tum bhi breakfast karloI know breakfast keliye ye thoda heavy hai but adjust karlo

Sw: haa haa baito baito bohut acha hai

Sh: arey nahi

K: koi bahana nahi baito

Sw: toh theek hai bhabhi mera khatammujhe jaana hai Sharon ne kaha na mujhe kaam hai ..mai jaake dekhloonga

Kriya smiled as swayam went away and Sharon with a pout started eating breakfast

K: mom dad ko leke aayiye mai breakfast banarahi hun

With this kriya went inside and started preparing

Suddenly as she turned she flinched back on suddenly seeing swayam

K: swayam.tum!!!! *sigh* daradiyaaise chup chap peeche koi khada rehta hai kya??

Sw: bhabhi woactually nasorry.wo jab mai aaya tha tab se mai bhai se call pe tha bhai ko chidane keliye maine bola ki bhai ko pasand nahi..actually ye bhai ka fav haitoh thoda pack karke.

Kriya blushed slightly..

K: abhi deti hun.

Sw: hmmm box mujhe dijiye

He took the box and was keeping the baturas when kriya stopped..

K: ruko..wo chodo mai garam wala banake deti hun

Sw: ummm. Bhai keliye specially garmagaram??? Kyun bhabhi

K: chup.shaitan

R: sab mere khushiyon ke peeche pade hai mera apna bhai ne mujhe dhoka diya aur Sharon kaha hai pata nahi. Aur kriya. Usse toh baat hi nahi kar saktakitna acha hota agar usse baat kar paata toh.hmmm. chal beta ab tumhe aise hi pade rehna padega.wapas soja

He layed and pulled the blanket over him

Sw: bhaidekhiye toh mai aapkeliye.ooopppssiiieee!!!!!!! bhai fir se sogayebhabhi aapka garam garam bature firse mere hi peth mei

R: kya???

He sat up straight

Sw: aap soye nahi???

R: nahibore ho raha hun aur tut oh baat hi mat kar mujhse.,

He turned his face to other side

Sw: sach mei nahi karni???

R: nahi!!!!!! He snapped

Sw: kk..ummm.kya smell hai..bhabhi ki haath mei jadoo haihmm

Rey turned back and saw the box

R: kriya ne banaya??

Sw: haan actually unhone aapkeliye banaya par laaya toh mai hiaur aap mujhse baat nahi karenge toh ye bhi nahi milega

Rey pouted

Sw: 2nd tym breakfast karne wala hun aaj

R: par wo toh mereliye tha na?? *babyface*

Sw: mujhse baat???

R: arey mera bhai hai tu tujhse baat na karun aisa kabhi ho sakta hai??

Sw: u know what bhaiaap na bohut drama karne lage ho ye lijiye khana khayiyebhabhi ne specially aapkeliye alag se banake bhijwaya

Rey blushed

Sw: mai balcony mei jaata hun

Rey nodded smiling

Rey was totally impressed with the food and the thing that she specially made for him was overwhelming

Sw: bhai Sharon aapse baat karna chahti hai

R: mujhse???

Swayam nodded

Rey took the mobile and he was abt to speak when she heard her saying

K: swayam??? Tumhe mujhse baat karni hai??? Kya baat hai abhi abhi toh gaye ho.tabhi bata sakte thewaise koi baat nahi abhi boldoaur haa wo tumhara volute tune yahi pe chod diya itni careless koi rehta hai kya??? Kya kar rahe ho?? Rey ko diya kya?? Unhone khaya kya?? Kya bola??? Acha ya

She was cut

R: bohut acha.

She gasped as soon as knowing that it was rey

K: aaap??

R: haan mai kyun. Mujhse baat nahi karni??

K: nahi wo

R: toh karni hai???

K: ummwo actually maine soch..socha ki sw..swayam

R: haan mujhe bhi yahi bataya gaya ki Sharon mujhse baat karna chahti hai

K: hmm

R: firse hmm??

K: wo.mai

R: hmm tum??? *in a romantic way*

K: aapko.

R: mujhe???

K: wo aapko khana kaise laga?*she said in one go*

R: aise hi bataun ya milke???

K: milke???*hyper* Hum kaise mil sakte haihum mil nahi sakte I mean hume milna allowed nahi haina???

R: u don't worry abt it

K: par wo maighar mei

R: shh.trust me..kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega

K: par

R: tum mujhse milna nahi chahti??

K: nahi aisa nahi hai actually

R: toh tum mujhse milna chahti ho??*huskily*

Kriya blushedrey smiled predicting that she is blushing

R: saare details mai shar ko bata dunga

K: hmm.

R: toh

K: hmm

R: toh mai rakhun??

K: jji

R: bye

K: bye

R: bye.

K: bye!!!! *giggle* and cut the call

Rey ranked his hand through his hair and smiled.

R: aaj kriya se milna??

Sw: kya??

Swayam asked coming in from balcony

R: mera bhai help karna plzzmujhe usse milna hai plzz

Sw: arey aise kaise..

R: plz plz plz

Sw: hmmm..kk.par iske mujhe siren se baat karni hai .

R: toh theek haina majnu karle apni laila se baat..

Sw: laila?????hmmm wo mujhe insaan tak nahi saajhti.*sigh*

r: arey ek na ek din samaj jayegi..

sw: ki???

r: ki tu insaan hi hai...

sw: bhai its not funny...

r: arey mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha...

sw: hmmm...acha meri chodo apni bolo... kya baat hai bhaabhi pe kuch jyaada hi pyaar aaraha hai... dekhe bina nahi reh paa rahe hai kya janaab???

r: *leaning back on the bed...* pata nahi yaar ...i think i started liking her a lot...*smile*

sw: hmmm...mera bhai gaya... *teased*

r: ab jyaada meri keech mat kuch soch...

sw: yup...abhi siren ko siren deta hun...oopss i mean ring deta hun...

r: tu kabhi nahi sudrega...

rey got up and went to wash his hands ...

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k: sharon mujhe dar lag raha hai...

sh: arey itna kyun darti ho?? tum apni hi ghar ki terace pe ho... darna toh rey aur swayam ko chahiye..

k: arey usse nahi yaar

sh: aur kis se??

k: dar iss baat ki hai ki raat ki ek baje ... mai rey se akele baat???

sh: ummm... kya batein hogi??? ya fir romance???* teasing*

k: tu chup reh ab tease mat kar mai bohut tensed hun...kya baat karenge ...kyun karni hai?? mai kya kahun... mujhe kuch samajh ...wo aawaz kya hai???

she asked with wide eyes..

sharon peeped down and saw reyam climbing through pipes...

sh: wo log aa rahe hai... sharon said casually...

k: kya??? 😲 shar rey ko bol dena ki mai nahi aayi plzz plzz plzz...

she said and ran and hid behind the wall on the store room up on the terace...

sharon got confused but having no change she agreed...

after reyam came...

sw: ufff pipe se chadna bohut mushkil kaam hai...

r: yeah...*he said looking everywhere searching for her*

r: wo...shar kriya???

sh: wo...wo nahi aayi...


sharon acted perfectly as if kriya didnt come really...

rey's face fell down when swayam started qsning and sharon just shrugging...

rey just lifted his eyes when he saw her quickly hide and pulling her dupatta to hide ...rey gave a naughty smile...

r: sach mai nahi aayi???


he asked raising eyebrows at sharon...

*kriya can't hear as he spoke slowly*

sh: haan wo actually...

r: store room ke peeche hai

he again said slowly///////sharon [pouted...

sh: sorry... usne bolne keliye bola...

r: no probs...so can i...

sh: yeah for sure...

sharon said jumping slightly already pushing swayam into dreamland...

r: toh...i think...i mean ...can we get some privacy???

sh: ooppss...sorryy... chal swayam uss corner mei chalte hai...


she said walking to the opposite corner...

swayam nodded dreamily and followed her with hands in pockets...and a stupid smile on his face...

rey smiled as the two walked...

r: too cute...

he said smiling looking at them...but soon it striked that actually he has some other imp work than this...

he slowly and stealthily walked to the store room ...

kriya slowly peeked but the next second she was pulled by waist and now she is in between the wall and rey.* remember kriyaansh washroom scene*..she looked at him shocked..


r: toh tum aayi nahi thi..

k: ...


she tried saying something but her voice betrayed her she was just opening mouth to say something and then going silent...rey took a step forward...

r: mujhse baat nahi karogi???

k*thinking*gale se aawaaz nikle tab na baat karoongi...* wo...mai...

r: tum?????


rey asked leaning close...he was abt to lean more to kiss her when they all heard the terace door open ...all froze...kriyaansh peeped out together still in same position to see who it is... its smriti...she came to check as the light on terece in on...swayam hid behind a small pillar while sharon stood frozen to the place...

k: mo...

she was abt to say out loud when rey pulled her back pinning her to wall and closed her mouth with his lri8 palm and thus started their LLHH which was broken by smriti...

sm: sharon beta tum itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahi ho???

sh: wo ...wo aunty bas aise hi neendh nahi aarahi thi toh socha ki hawa khane chali aaun..

kriyaansh again peeped out when swayam was dying not able to stay bended more...


sm: kriya bhi saath hai???

k: mom ko shaq ho...

r: shhh...rey pinned her again and moved more close as if pressing his body to hers...both are unaware of their closeness until his fingers found her lips and pressed it...both felt the heat raising in them...kriya started breathing fast and rey gulped slighty as his eyes drifted to her shivering lips...


sh: arey wo toh so rahi hai aunty...

sm: acha theek hai...chalo beta ab...

sh: a..aunty aap jayiye na...actually im missing my mom dad a lot...

sharon thought it is the strongest reason she can give to stay...

smriti smiled but soon...

sm: hey bhagwaan...

sh: kya hua aunty...

sm: kriya ki kamre mei paani rakhna bhool gayi...use raat mei paani peene ki aadat hai...

kriyaansh and swaron gasped with shock and shook with horror on imaginng whats gonna happen next...

k: mom ko pata...

kriya went into hyper mode and in return rey pressed himself more into her pressing her lips hard with his finger gtting feared as smriti could hear kriya...

r: chup...warna bohut gadbad hogi...

but someone is already in other world...she was breathing heavily...

sm: mai abhi rakhti hun...

sh: rukiye!!!!!!! *sharon shouted feared*

sm: kya hua beta??? aise chilla kyun rahi ho itni raat ko??

sh: so..so..sorry aunty... m..ma...mai bhi...mai bhi chalti hun aapke saath...

sm: tum theek toh ho???

sh: ha...haan..mu..mu...mujhe kya hua????

sm: *a short smile* chalo...

*beep beep*

swayams mobile beeped..he checked and its a msg from sharon

hum paani lene kitchen jaa rahe hai jaldi kriya ko apni room tak pohunchao...

sw: gosh!!!!!!


he ran to kriyaansh but bet his head as both were busy in their LLHH...

he shook them hard and they flinched meters apart...

sw: hume jaldi bhabhi ko uni room tak le jaani chahiye...chaliye...

kriyaansh nodded and all three quickly sneaked into kriya's room...

heading to kriya's room be quick...

swayam read loud...


r: sab theek hai

rey smiled with relief... and they hid themselves behind the curtains...kriya turned of the main light and switched on the bedlight as usual then it cliced her...

k: hey universe ji...


she said in hyper mode and went here and there in the room...reyam were conused and were getting tensed...and suddenly she went into washroom ...and when she came out they understood that she changed into the night gown and kriya quickly slid into the blanket...

k: sonu!!!!

she whispered as the pigeon came flying and slid into her palm and both closed eyes when the dor click opened and reyam hid totally...

sharon sighed seeing evrything perfect...

sm: donon so gaye???

she looked and the smiled...

" sweet dreams dearies"she said pecking kriya's and sonu's forehead...

sharon smiled...

smriti was abt to leave when she turned back...

sm: sharon beta...

sh: haan aunty...

sm: tumhe low feel karne ki zarorat nahi... jab bhi tumhari mom ki yaad aaye u can come to me...tum meri kriya jaisi hi ho mere liye...

smriti kissed sharons forehead...

sh: thanks aunty...

sharon hugged and bid her bye...as soon as sharon locked the door all sighed hard...reyam came out the the curtaing and leaned on wll sighing and kriya sat sstraight on bed..and sharon leaned to the door sighing...

all: bach gaye...

k: sonu uthja ab...

as soon as she spoke the pigeon flyed up and sat on kriya's head...

k: sonu...*sigh* mere baal...

kriya tried taking the pigeon when her hair got struck in its nails...kriya slowly removed her hair and took sonu into her hands...she forgot the others presence and spoke as usual to her bird...

k: sonu kitni baar bola maine baal kharab hojayenge aur pata hai mai kaise dikhungi...??? bohut jyaada


r: cute...

he said lost in her as swaron raised their eyebrows as oh acha??? and kriya blushed...

sh: sonu..i think hume jaana chahiye...

sonu flew to sharon and swaron left out the two lost in each others world..

r: bohut jyaada cute...

kriya blushed more...

after few mins they came back to senses...kriya movd back indicating him to sit and he sat opposite to her...

k: wo...aapne bola kuch baat karni thi...??


she asked stammering...

r: wo actually mai yeh kehna chahta tha ki...

*chori chori chup ke se*

his mobile started ringing...kriyaansh looked each other wide eyed...rey clumsily took the mobile out of his pocket and was trying to catch it when kriya pulled it and cut the call...both sighed...

r: sorry...

rey said cutely...kriya was abt to hand back his mobile when it beeped...

it read.

message

from

SHILPA

kriya frowned seeing that...rey gave a confused look seeing her expressions...kriya opened the msg and was shocked...

rey..my sweetie... humare paas tym bohut kam hai... i love u a lot sweetie and yeah i know that u love me too... hume jaldi kuch karna padega... if u want i can come over there and talk to ur parents...we have to do some thing dear...we are made for each other..

kriya frooze reading that...

r: kya hua??? tumhari chehre ki rang kyun ud gayi???

kriya looked up after fews secs composing herself...

k: rey ab aapko jaana chahiye...

r: arey...mujhe tumse baat toh khatam karne do...

k: rey...plzz aapko jaana chahiye..

r: arey tension mat lo bas 10 min mei hum mere room kisak jayenge...

k: waha nahi rey i meant aapko mumbai wapas jaana chahiye ...

r: what??? 😕

k: mai aapki love life ke beech nahi aaungi rey...never ever again...i promise...

she said loking down

r: what??? ur joking ri8???

rey laughed in mind thinking love??? and him????till now he didn't love anyone...

k: no rey mai seriously bol rahi hun...

she said seriously...

r: mai bhi seriously hi pooch raha hun kya bole jaa rahi ho???

he too sounded serious... WTH is this girl talking abt???

k: rey plzz mai bura nahi maanungi haa dukh hoga but its okay...aapke love life ke beech aake naahi mai khush reh sakti hun aur na aap...

rey looked pissed off...

r: kya hua hai tume kriya kuch bhi bole jaa rahi ho??

k: mai kuch nahi bol rahi hun rey... sab kuch aapka msg bata raha hai...

she showed him the msg...

r: SHILPA???? not again...

k: aap use jaante ho??

r: haa wo meri insti ki main instructor hai... jab mai nahi hota toh wahi samhalti hai insti ko...

k: toh aapne aisa kyun kiya rey???

r: kaisa??

k: aap shilpa se pyaar karte ho na toh fir mujhse shaadi kelye haan kyun kaha??? jab mai pasand hi nahi hun toh mujhse shaadi kyun kar rahe ho???

kriya asked her voice breaking down already... she herself doesn't get why she is feeling that hurt...

rey tried to talk in between but she is SHE...finally after getting totally pissed rey held her by shoulders tights and shouted...

r: SH...*he controlled himself and spoke gritting teeth with anger.* shut up kriya... ye kya bole jaa rahi ho... and FYI... shilpa mujhe pyaar karti hai...she even proposed me...par mind u i dnt even like her in that sense ...GOT IT??? maine aaj tak kisi ladki se pyaar nahi kiya...got it??? wo har din mujhe sirf isiliye msg karti hai aur call karke disturb karti hai kyun ki uski ek hope hai ki i will accept her... and what did u say??? i dnt like marrying u??? i dnt like u??? haan...i dnt like u ri8??? isiliye tumhare baare mei sochte hi khush hojata hun... humari shaadi ko leke itna jyaada excited hun...subah tumhari haath ki banaya hua khana khane keliye taras raha tha... and ab bas do char baatein karne keliye inti risk leke pipe se chad ke aaya hun...ri8?? i dnt like u...really...tumhe mujhpe itna bhi trust nahi ...kuch bhi soch liya??? *pause* u know what??? i pity myself... shaadi ke itne khaareeb aake bhi i failed to gain ur min trust... DAMN!!!!!!!

he stood up and was abt to walk when kriya caugth his hand...she is noe feeling guilty for what she did but he shoved off...

r: mujhe jaana chahiye... for now guesthouse... agar tum sach mei chahti ho toh to mumbai...


he said and left a numb kriya...what did just happen... it was supposed to a romantic meet ri8??? and for gods sake after just a F**king day they are gonna get married and will become each others for ever...and now... in this sec... their relation was at a stake on breaking...a thin thread which was ready to break ...she was the one to make damage and now she has nothing in her hands...except pleading... but ri8 now she froze...will her dreams she she imagined living a happy life with rey shatter this simply ??? she shivered at the thought of that...she cluthched the sheets tight

chal kriya maafi maangle sab theek hojayega

but her body didnt help it just FROZE


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r: chal swayam..

rey said really hurt thinking how can she misunderstand him that easily...

sw: kyun bhai mujhe toh laga mujhe aake aaapko kheech ke lejana padega...

swayam asked teasing...

r: kabhi toh serious raha kar chote...chal ab...we have to go back...

rey said always looking into the dar thinking how could she???

sh: kya baat hai rey??

sharon asked sternly... she knew him well ...his change of tone ...she can easily figure it out...

r: kuch nahi shar..talk to u tomorrow,...

he was abt to leave when she pulled back...

sh: rey speak up...

she said seriously...

r: kya bolun yaar???

he narrated whole thing irritated...

sw: bhai...ye kaisi baatein kar rahe ho??? for god sake parso aapki shaadi hai...

r: swayam ...trust realtion ship mei sabse main hai agar wo h nahi toh wo relationship kaise strong rahega??

sh: stop it rey...saale tujhe samajh mei aa bhi rahi hai ki tu kya bhak raha hai??? din raaat uski sapne dekhta tha tu... ab kya hogaya be aisa??? itni choti si baat pe??? haan mai maanti hun she should have trusted u... par ...tum logon ki dimaag kharab hai??? man karta hai donon ko ek kheech ke doon...


r: sharon... ye choti baat nahi hai...

sh: whatever rey...i dnt care...and really i dnt know...wo galat hai ya nahi...mujhe bas itna pata hai ki tumhari naam lene pe wo blush karne lagti hai... tumahre baare mei jyaada se jyaada jaan ne ki koshish karti hai... u do matter for her ... and u do effect her a lot...i think u have to think abt it once..


r: par...

sh: apni short temper ko gooli maar nalayak warna jhoota padegi tujhe...

sw: *thinking* meri siren fir se gussa hogayi??? gaali dete hue bhi kitni cute lagti hai...aww...what?? swayam abhi dremlad mei jaana ka tym nahi hai... situation serious hai...behave*


sw: bhai i think aapko ek baar baat karni chahiye wapas bhabhi se...


rey thought for sometym...

r: u r ri8...lagta hai mai kuch jyaada over react kar raha hun...

sh: toh ab jaa na meri mooh kya dekh raha hai??

r: mujhe jaana hai kya?? i mean wo bhi toh aasakti hai...

sh: abey ek aur baar apni ego ko peech mei laaya toh mujhse buri koi nahi hogi...chal...

r: par mai kya baat karoonga usse???

sw: bhai...i swear...gaali de dunga aapko...

swaron tugged rey arms each one and dragged him in...there she sat on the bed her back towards them...they dragged him till the bed...sharon signalled him to call her...rey was abt to call when his mobile rang again...kriya lifted the mobile and saw the caller...it flashed shilpa ..

shareyam bet their heads...

rey was abt to snatch when kriya lifted the call

shlp: hello??? rey..

k: hello???

sp: hello??? koun ho tum??

k: mai mai hun...

sp: what???? whatever...rey ki mobile terepas kyun hai.??? rey .

she was cut

k: reyaansh...

ps: kriya dnt know that shareyam were present

sp: excuse me??

k: never...its reyaansh for u dnt dare u call rey again...

sp: kyun???

k: as far as i know...tum rey ke paas kaam karti ho...he is ur boss so call him reyaansh or sir...dobara rey bulaya to dekhna...

sp: wh the hell are u to say that...

k: unki wife...mrs.reyaansh singhania...

shareyam looked at her shocked ...rey smiled wide as swaron gave *oh...is it???* teasing wala look

sp: what??? uski wife???par shaadi toh parso haina..

k: nice memory...and shaadi ho ya na ho usse tumhe koi farak nahi padna chahiye...tum mujhe ye batao ki itni raat ko tumne rey ko call ko kiya????

sp: tumhe batane ki jaroorat nahi hai...

k: nor i care...par bas itna yaad rakho...aaj ke baad raat ke 9 baje se leke subah 7 baje ke andar galti se bhi tumhari call aayi rey ko toh i swear bohut bura hoga ...

sp: what??? warning de rahi ho??

k: tumhe jo samajh na hai samjho...par yaad rakho...

kriya said seriously and cut the call...by this tym rey was grinning lyk stupid...he totally forgot the tiff they had few mins back...swaron slowly slid outside as rey proceeded towards kriya...

k: samajhti kya hai apne aapko... rey...badi aayi rey se baat karne...how dare she/...uski wajah se maine mere rey ko galat samjha...arghhh...i wanna kill her...

r: par tum khoon karo ye acha nahi hoga..

rey said slowly smiling...she turned back alamred and slightly jumping

k: a...app kab aaye??

r: jab tum shilpa ki fry bana rahi thi...

kriya blushed looking down as he sat beside her and face her towards him

r: so...ab yakeen hogaya???

k: sorry rey...mai jhalli hun...wo mai toh...

r: shhh...leave it...i think hume achi baatein karni chahiye...

she nodded silently looking down...

they sat silent for nearly 5 mins ...rey finally after getting that she wont speak up he decided to speak ...he lifted her face by chin and was abt to say something but stopped seeing her teary eyes...

r: kya hua??? y are u crying??

next thing made him blank...she just hugged him tight...

k: rey im really sorry...mat jao please...i didnt mean it...i ...i really do trust u...

she said gripping him tight...finally he came to earth

r": shh...kriya ...its okay...par mujhe mumbai wapas jaana hi padega...im sorry for that...

kriya instantly pulled back and looked at him in horror...a single tear rolled down...rey immediately caught the tears in his fist and said...

r: do din ke baad...tumhare saath...

as soon as he said these her tears were replaced by th shyness and her cheeks turned red...

r: u look very beautiful when u blush...

he was abt to touch her cheek

*ahem*ahem*

both flinched back and looked at swaron..

sh: rey ab tum logon ko jaana chahiye...leave...

r: par ...

sh: no excuses leave...

r: just 2 mins??

sh: ummm...kk,...par mai kahi nahi jaane wali... turn around swayam...

both turned back...

ps: swaron are at the entrace of room from balcony...far away from kriyaaansh

rey smiled at her and said slowly ...


r: mai tumse ek baat batane aaya tha...

kriya looked at him asking what???

he slowly caressed her ri8 cheek and leaned in ...she shut her eyes tight...he kissed her on her cheek and spoke in her ear...

r: tumne jo khana banaya wo bohut acha hai... and the thing that u made it specially for me...i loved it...

he came back after giving another peck on the deep red cheeks...

sh: hogay tym...chalo abhi...waha gadbad hosakti hai rey...

she said and turned followed by swayam...

r: one min...

he looked at kriya and asked...

r: kriya mom ne bola ki jab tum hume pehli baar kuch apne haaton se banake khilati ho then u can ask for something and take it...toh tumhe kya chahiye???

k: rey wo...ghar mei pehli baar karne se lete hai abhi nahi...

r: but i wanted to... kuch bhi ...which u wanted...poochlo...

k: kuch nahi hai...

sh: arey pagli mauke pe chauka maar...poochle wo...

r: kya???

k: ku...kuch nahi...sharon chup reh

r: wait kriya...kya hai sharon

sh: chalo mai hi bata deti hun...rey actually kriya ka ye wish hai ki uski lifepartner...joki ab tum ban ne wale ho...use ek heart shaped pendent gift kare...coz ise lagta haiki gar aisa hua toh she will acccept ki he loves her to be his lifepartner...


kriya blushed...

sh: toh kab de raha hai...


rey checked th watch..

r: ab hume jaana chahiye...chal chote...

sw: par bhai wo locket...

r: chote bohut der hogayi chalo jaldi...


sh: rey batake toh jaa ki tu dega ya nahi

r: good ni8 sharon...

he said and gave a smile to kriya and left...


thats it...

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