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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Morning me kaam hi nahi kar raha tha.Hadd ho gayi.😲

yup like tab is missing guys
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

yup like tab is missing guys


yes like tab is missing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ritzy, Aur kitna time lagega?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you friends for comments. Apologies once again to those who could not understand the song or the situation in last part as they had not watched the movie. I just could not stop myself from using that song as it had made me loose my sleep picturing Maneet in the entire situation.

Also, I am not able to press "like" as it seems to be not working. But I have read all comments and enjoyed them a lot.

Cyberlife – Your wish is coming true. Sorry had to keep mum to avoid ruining your surprise. As to house in hills…you have to wait honey.

-lakshmi- - I was missing you too dear. Was a little disappointed when did not see your comments but then realized you were probably not accessing your net. Thanks a lot for your lovely comments and hope you will enjoy next part as well.

Poongs – Take care of your hand dear

Maaneetkimeet – Thanks dear for explaining it to me

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 50

Dil jhoomne lagta hai ,kabhie gaane lagta hai

Baithe baithe yuhi dil gabhrane lagta hai ,

Kuch sochne lagta hai har pal yeh kehta hai

Jab ho jata hai pyar ,yaaro kuch aisa lagta hai

Sung by Babul Supriyo, contributed by Anu (Hermoso)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XYkIlNpGVIw=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Next Morning, Geet woke up and prayed to her Babaji. As she turned, she realized what happened yesterday night seeing Maan sleeping peacefully on sofa. She smiled softly and walked towards him. His sheet had slipped on the floor and vest had hitched a little up baring some part of his torso. Geet gulped as she saw his exposed abs and then his arm muscles as his one hand rested on his chest and other one underneath his head. She did not know why, how and when but slipped next to him, sitting on the floor.

She felt a sudden urge to touch him…feel him. It was first time, she was seeing him sleeping and he looked so innocent and vulnerable. Something warm stirred in her heart and she knew it was more than just his physical appearance. She softly glided her hand on his forehead, touching his skin gently with her tentative fingers…caressing them lovingly…feeling him.

Maan turned in his sleep and broke her trance. She blushed slightly as even though it was just his forehead, she found the touch intimate as she has never been so close to him before consciously and on her own. She leaned a little placing a soft peck on upper arm, grazing his well built bicep with her rosy lips, surprising even herself with her boldness. She got up with a jerk and ran to washroom before she end up doing anything stupid or worse he woke up finding her so near to him.

Geet came out of washroom ready for her exercise to find him stretching on the sofa. Geet felt goose bumps as he raised his both arms stifling a yawn. His muscled flexed and she just looked down shyly, lost in her personal moment. Calming her thudding heart, she almost squeaked.

"Good Morning Maan"

Maan turned to face her now and gave her a small smile.

"Good Morning Geet…did you sleep well?"

Gee nodded her head and almost ran from the room watching him look at her so ardently.

Maan sighed and got up to freshen up.

Later, Maan shouted for her from the room as he got ready. Thinking she must have forgotten something, Geet entered in hurry and mumbled - "Kya hua…kuch chaiye aap ko?"

[What happened…did you need something?]

For a moment his world stopped as Maan could not remove his from her. His hands itched to touch her wet tresses and feel them under his fingers. He just wanted to loose himself in her arms, melting inside her and feeling her.

"Kya hua…aap aise kya dekh rahe hain?"

[Why are you looking at me like that?]

Maan smiled as he heard her asking him in an impatient voice. He walked slowly towards her, finally touching her hair strands which were stealing his peace, tucking them behind her ear. He some how controlled his urge to drink the water droplets which were still visible on her neck and shoulder.

Geet froze at his touch and stopped breathing as he leaned further in. Her knees almost went weak as he spoke huskily – "Haan…Kuch puchna tha tumse."

[Yes…I wanted to ask you something]

She could just murmur back "Ji" as her voice left her along with her courage but then Maan was so close that he could hear it perfectly.

"Will you go out for a date with me tonight?"

Geet blinked her eyes trying to understand his words. Through the cloud of sensations numbing her brain, she tried to make sense of the words she had just heard. "Did he just ask me for a date?" She blushed as a single word tumbled out of her mouth "Date?"

"Babaji why is he standing so close to me..Waise hi kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai upar se yeh aise sawaal kyon kar rahe hain?"

[Babaji why is he standing so close to me..Anyhow, nothing is entering my brain and on top of it he is asking me such questions]

Maan smiled as he noticed the red hue which was spreading from her cheeks to her neck now. He could almost feel her curling her toes as immense shyness gripped her. Somewhere his heart danced in joy wondering that if his bold Geet could get so mushy just hearing word date, then what will happen when they actually take their relationship forwarded.

Tinkle of her bangles broke his reverie and he realized that he was still holding her hair behind her ear and she was waiting for an answer.

He left her to get his own sanity back and stepped backwards. Tying his tie nonchalantly, he replied with a hint mischief in his voice – "Haan woh…our relationship is a little unique. Waise toh pehle date, then engagement and then marriage hoti hai but ab chalo jaisa hai waisa hi sahi. We missed on the date part so let's make it up now. So will you come with me tonight?"

[You see…our relationship is a little unique. Traditionally first you have a date, then engagement and then marriage but can't change what is past right. We missed on the date part so let's make it up now. So will you come with me tonight?]

Geet was in no position to take his teasing any further and just responded with "Ji" and started running again.

Her steps halted with his words - "Suno…we will be going somewhere casual so wear jeans please."

"Jeans?" –Geet asked as she wondered – "Hey Babaji yeh kahan lejane waale hain mujhe? Aur Jeans? Since when did he start noticing all this aur Daadima kya sochengi is date ke bare mein?"

[Hey Babaji, wher is is taking me? And Jeans? Since when did he start noticing all thisand what will Daadima think about date?]

"Hmmm…haan aur Daadima se mein keh dunga."

[Hmmm…yes one more thing. I will tell Daadima about the evening.]

Geet was surprised how he heard her unsaid words. She just nodded her head and walked downstairs still feeling shy and lost in her thoughts.

Evening

Maan came home and went to room to change quickly but not before staring just few seconds longer from top of the staircase at his smartly dressed wife in denim. But it was Geet's heart which skipped a beat as she saw him walking down in jeans and white shirt. Just saying that he looked dashing would have been understatement, with his killing looks. "Yes he looks killing…ready to take my breath away"

Maan quickly said bye to everyone including Vicky, whom he had to bribe with not one but two chocolates to let go off his Bade Papa and Tayiji.

They walked into the garage and Geet starting walking towards Maan's car but stopped short as she saw Maan going in another direction.

Maan took two helmets and started the bike and rode it to stand in front of her.

"Can I have a pleasure of riding behind you? Have heard a lot about your driving so what say?"

Geet opened her mouth in surprise and then shut it feeling dizzy by just the mere thought of Maan sitting behind her so closely.

"Babaji yeh toh meri jaan leke hi chodenge. How will I manage with him sitting so close and intimately behind me…chi chi…intimately…mein kya soch rahi hoon. Rahul bhi toh baitha tha na…it's ok…breathe in…breathe out"

[Babaji, he will kill me today for sure. How will I manage with him sitting so close and intimately behind me…chi chi…intimately…what am I thinking. Rahul used to also sit na…it's ok… breathe in…breathe out.]

"But Rahul ke alawa kabhi koi nahi baitha mere peeche…so…"

[But no body ever sat behind me except for Rahul so…]

"Thank God"

"Ji"

"Nahi mera matlab hai mein toh aaj tak kabhi kisi ke peeche nahi baitha except for one friend of mine….Never let anyone drive my bike except him."

[No I mean, even I haven't sit behind anyone except for one friend of mine… Never let anyone drive my bike except him.]

"Oh…par mujhe toh allow kia na aapne."

[Oh…but you did allow me.]

"Tumhari baat alag hai Geet."

[You are different Geet]

Geet was lost in his words as he watched her face bemusedly. "Hmmm…toh chalein?"

Geet did not know how to refuse him and took the helmet reluctantly as she was still not sure if she will be handle their closeness. He slid behind, leaving the front for her. She felt heat surround her as she sat on the leather seat already warmed by Maan. Poor girl had not even got a chance to even her breathing when she got a jolt as she started the bike. As soon as she put it gear and moved ahead, Maan slid his one hand keeping it lightly on her thigh to balance himself and jerked ahead with his chest almost touching her back.

Geet lost all her senses feeling his breath on her neck, his toned hard chest pressing her back and finally his hand on her thigh making her acutely aware of his every inch glued to her. She thanked her Babaji that she was an ace driver and was able to handle the bike otherwise she was sure they would have had an accident. Also, she thanked Maan for the helmet which saved exposure to her highly flushed face. But unknown to her, Maan could feel the heat coming out of her body with their close proximity. No helmet could hide the shiver he felt in her leg as he placed her hand or the raised temperature of her neck as his chin brushed it.

He himself could feel the shock running thru his spine. Though he was mentally prepared and desired to be close to her he still was finding it difficult to control all the emotions churning inside him.

He had wanted to go on a drive with her from a long time now as he knew bike racing was an important part of her life and he wanted to be part of everything which had any meaning for her. Although their closeness was making him feel warm and aroused, he checked his desires and erotic thoughts swirling in his mind as more than that, he just wanted to feel the romance of sharing her important moments with him.

Chain Aap Ko Mila Mujhe Deewangee Mili
Hosh Aap Ko Mila Mujhe To Bekhudi Mili

Phir Bhi Pyaar Aapse Hi Karat Hai Dil
Chain Aap Ko Mila Mujhe Deewangee Mili
O Ho Hosh Aap Ko Mila Mujhe To Bekhudi Mili
Phir Bhi Pyaar Aapse Hi Karat Hai Dil
Chain Aap Ko Mila Mujhe Deewangee Mili

Manao To Ise Main Kaise Yeh Dil Deewana Hai Na Mane
Batao To Main Kaise Yeh Ishq Kya Hai Yeh Na Jane

Shedayi Main Tera Hua Tujhko Nahi Hai Yeh Pata

Jaam Aapko Mila Mujhe To Berukhi Mili
O Ho Hosh Aap Ko Mila Mujhe To Bekhudi Mili

Phir Bhi Pyaar Aapse Hi Karat Hai Dil
Chain Aap Ko Mila Mujhe Deewangee Mili

Koi Kisi Pe Jaan De De Koi Kare Hai Bewafai
Yeh Faaslo Ka Dard Kya Hai Yeh Jaanti Hai Bas Judai

Tujhse Mili Jabse Nazar Deewani Main Ho Gayi
Neend Aap Ko Mili Mujhe To Bebasi Mili


Ha Ha Ha Hosh Aap Ko Mila Mujhe To Bekhudi Mili
Phir Bhi Pyaar Aapse Hi Karat Hai Dil
Chain Aap Ko Mila Mujhe Deewangee Mili
Ha Ha Ha Hosh Aap Ko Mila Mujhe To Bekhudi Mili

(highlighted fav lines by Ash (Kawaii) herself...thank you darling and of course Anu too for such a fab song. I love this song though never liked the original video but this attached version is beautiful)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvyuNh4j7qw=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Precap – Date has just started…

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Posted: 12 years ago
me first

awesome

date n bike wow


Edited by happydays30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congratulation for 50th part
waiting for 100,150 ,200,250 and any more
awesome, beautiful, brilliant part
loved it
loved each and every part of this part
loved maaneet moments
their conversation
well mostly maan's teasing
naughty naughty geet
poor geet uski halat toh he he
proposing for date
bike riding
loving it
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
a bit late
but 3rd
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww.. ye to khatam ho gaya..!!
vese it was too lovely.

LOVE
KJ
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply awesome dear...
loved the idea of date...
geet riding the bike and maan sitting behind..
poor wifey.. husband tho jaan hi leke rahega,...
i wonder wats else is there in their first date.. tat to after marriage..oopss kya love story hain na

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