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fannism

@fannism

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_07

Hey thand soo much dear...My name is nishi ...may i know ur name?

yes dear

my name is SARA sryy for late rply

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fannism

@fannism

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

buhat dair ho gaye ab to update ker do

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

Back with an Update!😊

Kriyaansh reached the place ..

Nilesh:ye lo agaye dhono!

Swayam:kaha the tum log *smirking and trying to hide his laugh*

Rey glared at swayam..

Kria:wo..wo..

She asked rey for help..

Rey:woh chodo na guys..chalo kuch kehlthe hai..

All:yes!yes!kuch khelthe hai!!!

Rey:how abt volley ball in water??

nicky:Awsome dude!!!

Rey:so sab agree karthe hai kya??

All:Yes!!

Rey:ok cool then chalo khelthe hai!

Girls:nahin!

Boys:ab kya hua?

Kria:hum aise kapde mei..

sharon:haan aise kapde mei kaise khel sakthe..tum boys yahi rukho hum change karke athe hai...

All the girls went to a closed place for dress change..Here boys are jumping like monkeys that they could see their girls in diff attire..they all removed their shirts and started playing with the water and was waiting for girls..Girls entered ,all the boys were just lost!seeing their girls!!

Hey guys sorry am jus showing kria's attire..

All the boys were rooted to their place...

Swayam came to his senses and started hitting boys to bring them back from dreamland..

Swayam:Guys!!!

Boys:haan...haan.

Swayam:guys ye girls hume distract karna chahthe hai...

vicky*confused*:distract karke kya karenge?

Nilesh:Budhu distract karke game jeetenge!

Rey:guys hume ye nahin hone dhenge.aur hum hi jeetenge after all we are

Boys:BOYS!!

Girls talk:

Sharon:guys hume kissi bhi tarah inhe distract karke game jeetna hai got it?

Kria:Wah bhabi kya plan hai?

sharon:thanq:)

Vishaka:guys focus!kissi bhi tarah harna hai boys ko !

Kria:yes after all we are

Girls:GIRLS!!

Both the teams gave smile to each other...all the couples came near each other to wish best of luck

Kria forwaded her hand and wished rey best of luck with a sexy smile..

Rey was melting...

Rey:FOCUS!!FOCUS!!

Kria:kya?

Rey :kuch nahin all the best..

Kria:thanq:)

Rey *coming closer*:well thanq aise nahin bolthe..

Kria pushed him and went to her place ..a smile was plastered on both their faces..

Girls were standing on one side and boys on the opp side..

Rey signalled kria that he is watching her..kria just gave him a whatever look

The game begins in

3

2

1

GO!!

Kria had bounced the ball towards boys...
Rey bounced it with his head...Sharon bounced it again and swayam had bounced it with his chest..They were playin on full verge...
Oh forgot to say points rite😛

Girls:8

Boys:8

Its a 10 points match..

8th point was sone by rey...

Kria saw him with an angry face...He just smirked at her and mouthed her a kiss..She was shocked...HE jus smiled and was back to the game...suddenly something striked kria so she smirked and was back to the game..
Now i think the game is between kria and reeyansh..
KRia bounced the ball towards boys and when rey was about to hit ...she just gave one of her sexy smile..Over !rey was lost and missed the ball...

Girls:9

Boys:8

Rey saw her with an angry expression...shejust chuckled and went. away...To get one more point she used her sexy ways but rey focused on the game and scored a point..Now kria pouted and rey smirked

Girls:9

Boys:9

All were alert now as it is the last point...Now a brilliant idea struck kria's mind,she thought that rey couldnot escape from losing..The ball has been bounced..they were playing now when rey was about to hit she jus slid her top sleeve a bit down ..this was enough for our hero to loose right?he left the ball and was standing with an :O expression..all the girls were jumping as they won the game...

Rey:arey cheating!!!!!cheating!!!

all were confused..

Sharon:kya cheating?humne kya ki??

he saw kria ..she was looking at him with an innocent face ..from inside she was controlling her laugh..

rey:wo...wo...kuch...kuch nahin..

Again the girls started jumping and some of them were stickng their tounges out teasing boys...

Rey*smirked*: baatcutter u have to pay for what u have done!

all of them are at waterfalls and enjoying...someone pulled kria...ah its none other than rey!

When she was about to shout he closed her mouth with his palm..

she saw him with wide eyes...he smirked at her..

he removed his palm...

Rey:toh thum kya kar rahi thi kuch der pehle.??

Kria:woh maine kya kiya?*confused*

Rey:yaad dilaun?*he said slowly sliding her shirt sleeve a bit down*

she instantly pulled it up ...

Kria:kya kar rahe ho?

rey:mei wahi kar raha hum..jo kuch dher pehle tune kiya..

she had to surreder now .he is not going to leave her..

Kria:rey am sorry chodo na..woh sirf game jeetne keliye...

Rey:ahaan ..yaad aya?

Kria:wo...

He came close to her she was pinned to the rock behind her..his breath was touching her lips "baatcutter tune muje itna seduce kiya ki mei apne apko control nahin kar pa raha tha..aur jab control karke game par focus kar raha toh tune uss last mei jo kiya hai na usse dhek kar mei apne apko aur control nahin kar pa raha hun..bolo isme meri galthi hai kya?" he asked inncoently...she just nodded a no..."toh ab mei kya karun?" he asked .."kiss kardhun ya chod dhun?" he asked so cutely that no one can deny...she lowered her lashes and said.."kiss kar..." soon her lips wer blocked by his..he kissed her so softly...he was sucking her lower lip and was sucking all the water drops on her lips...his hands were making designs on her bare wet waist..he was holding her wait tightly...she was arching her head back..when he swiftly pulled her head and deepend the kiss..his one hand on her left cheek and one hand holding her waist...she was playing with him by not allowing him to explore her mouth..he just squeezed her wait and pushed himself more into her that she had gasped...he took this as a chance and made his way into her mouth and started exploring...they pulled back when they were lack of air..but he did not lose his contact with her skin..he was sucking water drops from her face to her neck and shoulders...they heard someone coming their side..

Forgot to say back of the waterfalls it was forest...😊

They heard swayam's voice...rey got irritated as he did not want to spoil the romance...he was about to move back when kria said "Bhai?"..rey thought swayam heard it so he just pressed his lips against hers by avoiding her from speaking...
while kissing he pulled her towards the jungle ..while on their way they slipped and fell on hay..look look hawa hawa..

Kria:rey uto!

rey:nahin ..*he said looking deep into her eyes*

kria:rey bhai ajayega...

Rey:woh nahin ayega..

Kria:par...

He dint let her speak he pressed his lips against hers and was kissing her passionately...after sometime the kiss turned into a wild one

Wah! wild kiss in jungle!😛

He broke the kiss..she was panting hard he came down and started kissing her navel ..she was arching back...she took hold of his hair and pulled him up and kissed him passiontely...he pulled back and started placing short kisses on her lips..both were smiling

Rey:i love u

Kissing

Rey:i love u

kissing

Rey:i love u

kissing

he was placeing short kisses on her lips ..she was just smiling...aftersometime she pushed him and straightened herself ...

She looked around with feared expression and said

Kria:rey...

Rey:hmmm

Kria:abhi hum kaha hai?

Rey:lagtha hai jungle mei...

soon she heard some noises so instantly she hugged him...he hugged her back tightly in response..

Precap:Sheela ki jawani!😃

Confused??

Lol anywayz how was the update?

Good ?bad?

Plz do give reviews !

Do hit the like button!

sorry for the typo errors!

TTYL!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

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unres

yippie m the first one to comment... I know unresing it late but was busy...

anyways the update was too good...👏

full of KriYaansh romance...

volley ball match was awesome... n their tactics to win... god girls can never change...😆

n then Rey losing his control phir jo hua😳

waterfall ke peeche kissing n jungle mein kho gaye do premi pyaar mein pagal☺️

but the precap is a bit confusing so I request u please update asap😃

Edited by -shenz- - 14 years ago

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

awesome update...loved it very much

and the game was mindblowing and romance in jungle...waooo

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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archu395

@archu395

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#476

finali u updated! it ws simply awsum. loved it! thnx 4 d pm:)

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#477

nyc 1 so hot and romantic dude im loving ur update so cute well cnt wait for the next oneee haha kriya defo knows how to seduce rey lol

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#478

hawt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hehe...loved it...

precap intresting hai ;)

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

Nishi tere updates padh ke to main kriyaanshland me hi doob jati hun
gals vs boys . . . . . Volleyball in water ☺️
besharam boys- gals ko swimwear me soch kar hi khush ho rahe hai 🤣
rey ki to aankhein hi bahar aa gyi hogi 🤪
hahahaha . . . . Kriya used her tactics to seduce him . . . . I'm luving it 😛
aur uchlo swimwear me dekhne ke liye . . . Haar gye na 😈
lolzz . . . Dat was obvious . . . . Ab to kriya ko trap karna banta hai 😆
rey ko apna game lose karne ka revenge bhi to lena hai 😉
swayam bhaiya aa gya . . . . . But rey is so much into her dat he can't let her go at the moment ☺️
lolzz . . . . Jungle me pahuch gaye . . . . Abhi tak koi animals ne attack nhi kiya . . .bach gaye 😆
wah wah tera precap 🥳